#need criticism

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sterile mulch
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  1. HAVE YOU TRIED FLIPPING THE CANVAS 🗣️ 🗣️ 🗣️
  2. you forgot a line for the neck, judging by the size of the neck of the left girl, the sides of the neck would be visible and not covered by hair
  3. the hand is too big for being just infront of the head
  4. the lines for the wrinkles of clothes on the sides is too hard opacity wise, stiff and does not match the shape of the other side

im speakin largely out thin air rn fr this is much better than what i could make, just hope anythin i said could be of any use 😩

native silo
copper patio
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i think the wrinkles for the tshirt girl would come from the shoulder not the armpit

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like this

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sterile mulch
# native silo i’ve flipped it many times and i ended up erasing the neck line ty for reminding...

yeah i just said most of what i said because idk what you think is wrong and im just pointing out anything possible lo

for wrinkles:
first of all very very good trick i use all the time, make wrinkles shapes instead of lines, its very very nice
secondly, put wrinkles next to edges like edges of clothes or joints, places that are commonly edges yeah
also to note: tighter clothes like what i think is in your drawing will have more smaller wrinkles are less at the centers

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Like that

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thats just how i do it

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also since the same line thickness was used for the wrinkles it makes them stand out more than what they should

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when doing digital, i do quick strokes fro wrinkles and slowdown and run over many times for main lines like the clothing edges and skin

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if you get me

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guh

native silo
sterile mulch
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yehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

sterile mulch
native silo
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yahay

sterile mulch
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btw the sides of the torso match in shape

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so thats what make this better

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yup

native silo
# sterile mulch yup

i’m tryna fix the right girls arm on the hip cause it looks stiff someone said ☝️