critiques needed

[dusty blade]

I like how its turning out so far but I'm wondering what others think

[arctic zodiac]

too me, the legs are a bit too small, and also, the pelvis/hips are facing forwards while the legs and the rest of the body are facing diagonally which makes it kinda unnatural

and also the head and arms faces completely to the side having the same problem as that

to fix it, next time take some more time to plan where the whole body wants to face all the time while doing whatever under or sketchline process you like doing

[tough coyote]

first off i think the foot placement and the hair is AMAZING. so great job. however the body seems to be kinda unpropionate. i’m not a big fan of how the neck is drawn because the hair kinda makes it look like a super skinny neck to me. other than that i think it’s great

[dusty blade]

Ohhhh i see, so I should turn the legs forward more