something seems wrong

[pliant trench]

Kinda feel like something is off and I’d like feedback before I start to color 😩

[neon isle]

Might be just me, but her forehead seems a tad bit too large idk

[naive citrus]

staff too thick + feel like frierens face can be bigger

^ that too

[vital bloom]

I love the art style, but the guy's face is too on the bottom (if that makes sense) and the girl's head is a little too big. I guess what could be changed would be the guy and girl's face to be a tiny bit higher and for the girl's head to be a little smaller.

[pliant trench]

Thank y’all so much 😭
I fixed some proportions including the faces and the staff (I usually fix proportions more once some rendering has been laid down)
Currently still figuring out the colors tho so advice is always welcome 🙏

[vital bloom]

I LOVE THE SOFT COLORS

[pliant trench]

AAAAHH THANK YOU

[rich otter]

Do you already have a Background Idea?

[pliant trench]

Not really, I thought about a flower fields with flying petals but I have no idea how to execute that idea

Ive honestly no idea of what’s going on and everything seems wrong

[severe hawk]

Work big shapes to small for the flower field, make sure the perspective is making the further one smaller. For your actual drawing I would recommend making the eyes pupil have a outline. You can draw flying petals quite easily just get a reference

[pliant trench]

Ok ill try thanks 🙏

[pliant trench]

Ok so quick update

I modified the noses as they were really unsettling for some reason, if anyone has any better idea for the guy’s eyes (I can’t draw eyelashes to save my life)

Also any idea on how to make the scepter reflective without being too much is more than welcome because I have literally no idea what I’m doing

If anything looks off don’t hesitate to point it out !! 🙏

Here’s what it looks like in grayscale

[severe hawk]

You can search up some refrences of gems and crystals, I'm not sure how to either but I think a ref would help you