#Help!! my art project is due **tomorrow** and i need feedback asap!!

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regal plaza
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hi my project is making a creature out of different animals and shading them or wtv and i need feedback involving lighting and shading!! help would be greatly appreciated as this is due TOMORROW!!

cunning geode
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Where do you want your lightsource to be coming from? From above?

inland moat
regal plaza
cunning geode
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The red areas could be darker

heavy river
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Your darks should be a lot darker. Theres not much value range. Good luck 👍

regal plaza
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thank u all i got a 100% on it!

heavy river
formal scroll
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restart

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The tree and background is good

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everything else

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restart

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trace if u want at this point

heavy river
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Let’s not be rude here…

formal scroll
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?

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its the truth though i mean

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i dont wanna be rude

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sorry

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please forgive me

heavy river
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Do you even know how to give constructive criticism? Thank god my classes taught us how.

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It’s fine but you gotta be careful how you word things

snow linden
regal plaza
cunning geode
# formal scroll its the truth though i mean

hey. guess its mostly ur age but the truth doesnt have to be so brutal. we dont condone tracing and passing off as one's own thats bad artist etiquette. you dont just tell someone to restart unless its completely necessary. you can always rework things

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try the 2 stars and 1 wish method dude. ik they teach that in school

inland moat
cunning geode
# grim marlin what is that method?

2 things u like about the work and 1 think they can improve on. Its a method used in elementary school but it works well for adults too lmao

grim marlin
inland moat
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i think they also call it the critique sandwich

bold summit
cunning geode
formal scroll
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I already apologized it was supposed to be for shits n giggles

bold summit
formal scroll
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Also I tried to offer help from my point of view the animal definitely needed a rework

bold summit
formal scroll
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Didn’t his project end like days ago

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What I said doesn’t even matter

cunning geode
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The axe doesnt remember but the tree does

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Think before u type

bold summit
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oh chat this shit deep

formal scroll
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I said restart and then said sorry

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It was a joke

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Obviously

bold summit
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idk man show your own art and maybe you'd make people give a shit LMAO

formal scroll
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Your refusing to understand the point

cunning geode
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Just becuz u apoligize doesnt excuse u from criticism. Do better. Even if it was a joke it wasnt funny

bold summit
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telling someone to restart is unrealistic. maybe if you did art you'd understand that? apparently you're just a viewer.

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joke this, joke that. you're 14 and edgy, we get it.