#help looks off idk whyy??

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meager kite
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Some Side profiles for practice and one digital of Tori from Victoria's

analog jetty
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I'm not an expert or anything and we have diff styles (I draw anime style), but even anime style requires anatomically correct placed features, as for the features themselves they are stylized, so u can take this with a grain of salt. hope this helps 👍

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Something I didn't mention in this drawin is that even if you trace my suggestion, it prob wouldn't look that good cuz, well, I'm not an expert, but second also becuz the face of a female is not that long, so rn it would look pretty masculine

unkempt root
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the corrected ear dav drew is a bit too low (should be between top of eye and bottom of nose), and the jawline doesn't need to be fixed, it's fine

unkempt root
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i would just move the nose down a little

analog jetty
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Ah ha

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thx

unkempt root
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sorry if it was a bit harsh haha

analog jetty
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No prob, I love criticism

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ig you could say it helps me speed run my art progress

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haha

hushed remnant
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She looks like my grandma

sage raptor
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I'm also not sure in the original I drew her eyelid could be seen across the nose bridge but I think I hot the angle wrong

Thank you for your help\(^-^)/

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BTW I am the original poster just acidently went on other account

analog jetty
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It's much better❤️. The foundation is pretty good now, so you just gotta draw more and make drawing faces natural~ you might also wnna check out some artists you want to draw like and see how they draw faces differently from yours- it'll help alot to refine the rough edges of the drawing

silver ruin
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I think the face is still a tad flat and the nose and mouth are way too low

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Additionally the back of the head is missing and no eyebrows

sage raptor
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The eyebrows were supose to be covered by the fringe but I agree

full osprey
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maybe let some strands of hair out??

trim bone
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i think for that style ur putting the eyes a lil too far to the right

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also top lip should jut out a lil i think