#some general advice please

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lethal cliff
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I’m trying for a bit of a moody scene where dio (dude on the left) is just standing in that dim light but the world is ominously hiding in the shadow behind. This is just a first sketch for proportions and layout and such but I feel like dio is a bit uncanny? I’m not sure what’s wrong so if a fresh pair of eyes could give some advice then that would be super please

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Ah ignore the pointing shadow

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I’ve been going back and forth between having him arms crossed and pointing towards us

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I think maybe there should be more weight on his left hip

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So would be poking out to our right

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A bit statue of david like yknow

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A bit curvier

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But again I can't tell

calm ember
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the arms are tapering in as they go down. Maybe make the elbows farther apart?

calm ember
lethal cliff
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Ah perfect

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Thanks

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I'll have a play around

lethal cliff
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Okay so I had a play around with bringing those arms out but because they were low and flat against his torso it looked more like he was having a tummy ache

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Like that lin Manuel meme

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So I ended up turning his whole torso to an angle so his groin sticks out a bit

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A bit more theatrical and proud

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What do you think?

earnest jetty
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Much better. This pose is so much more interesting, and the warm light illuminating his right side is creating an interesting contrast

lethal cliff
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Awesome

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Thanks

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If I paint this it’ll be a doomy midnight scene

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So the midnight blues mixing with the light on the people and stone walls should play well I think

calm ember
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yeah that is a much better solution overall. Good job