anything i should fix?

[acoustic shore]

First time doing a pose like this, i kinda worry about how i draw the sword

the is the reference of the sword btw

also this is the referenced pose

anything wrong with the perspective? please let me know.

[bleak quarry]

it looks like the reference pose has the front leg pretty straight and from this angle you may not see the arms at the back as much besides part of the forearm and hand holding the sword. depends ofcourse how much you want the back arm extended

[acoustic shore]

is this better?

[bleak quarry]

ye and if the sword is long you might see it extend towards the back of the character

[acoustic shore]

i see, thanks