Hello! Can you guys give me advices on this piece?

[rare hearth]

I was motivated in finishing this from the start and taking most of the time on the lineart, then I rushed halfway through

[wheat dew]

Lighting of the bg doesnt match the figure. Also you can blur the bg a bit. Its fighting for attention from the main figure

[whole breach]

His hand and The way he holds the bottle looks a bit off and the bottle also looks a bit weird, too chubby and the perspective doesn't help. But aside from that i really liked it, especially the hair

[rare hearth]

I'll apply this, thank you!

[rare hearth]

I should've made more time in drawing the hands 😭 thank you!