its acc a gift for my friend,,, i want it to look good before moving on to the rendering
please dont mind the silly goofy doodle its just a silly goofy yipyip
#anything i should add or change about this?
gritty beacon
cursive meadow
the arm thats going behind her back i dont think that is possible anatomically
open folio
the arm thats going behind her back i dont think that is possible anatomically
its defo possible but unless u arch ur back hella it wont go that far
i feel like her midsection is too slim compared to where her boobs end and thats why the hand looks so far out for that position
gritty beacon
tiny small boost,,,
fickle lagoon
is this good?
Hand would be turned to be more flat in this pos
Horns also look uneven
gritty beacon
okik
okok
will fix
how about this?
the finger looks weird yuck will fix that
YEEEEAHHHHHHH WE GOOD 🔥🔥🔥🔥
mayb make the head tilt a bit less of a tilt coz i feel like it hurts the nerve in the neck
glass crown
Move the eye just a bit closer, just a bit
gritty beacon
Move the eye just a bit closer, just a bit
i feel like its fine, what makes you think that?
fickle lagoon
Move the eye just a bit closer, just a bit
It’s very stylized, I think the anatomy is fine like this
gritty beacon
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its mainly for anime style stuff like that happens
like this, the eyes seem far but they're fine
i hope they're fine
idk if they are lmao
glass crown
i feel like its fine, what makes you think that?
It feels like it isn't in the head for some reason, ig it's just stylized tho
gritty beacon
mayb make the head tilt a bit less of a tilt coz i feel like it hurts the nerve...
i can actually tilt the head like that, i think you mean the other side of the neck because its harder to pull that way
fickle lagoon
Heheheh stylized
gritty beacon
It feels like it isn't in the head for some reason, ig it's just stylized tho
thats every anime style ever lmao
gritty beacon
i can actually tilt the head like that, i think you mean the other side of the n...
it just looked unnatural but yes the neck would stretch
fickle lagoon
i can actually tilt the head like that, i think you mean the other side of the n...
I can’t tell other people what positions are off because I’m flexible enough to do every single one 🥲
gritty beacon
okaok so the drawinf is good ?
fickle lagoon
Upper arms look like slightly diff sizes
And perspective isn’t pushed enough to make it look correct
glass crown
The left pony tail would be a bit smaller because of perspective,
gritty beacon
okaok so the drawinf is good ?
yea to me its great
time to fix again
give me a few minutes
gritty beacon
And perspective isn’t pushed enough to make it look correct
i'd argue its fine
fickle lagoon
The left pony tail would be a bit smaller because of perspective,
It could be uneven ponytails
gritty beacon
you can draw a straight line and it'd connect the shoulders
which seems fine to me
glass crown
It could be uneven ponytails
But most likely isn't, I think
fickle lagoon
you can draw a straight line and it'd connect the shoulders
Not what I mean
gritty beacon
The left pony tail would be a bit smaller because of perspective,
no because the face is towards us
the camera
gritty beacon
Not what I mean
idk maybe its cause im a beginner too lol
glass crown
no because the face is towards us
Disagree, it's in a slight angle
gritty beacon
Disagree, it's in a slight angle
i dont really see the angle
its tilted
but i feel like its towards the camera
if its at an angle maybe it can be slightly smaller the ponytail
fickle lagoon
Disagree, it's in a slight angle
Yeah I agree with you on that
gritty beacon
maybe the neck also seems unnatural to me and well she doesnt have a belly button
gwah
gritty beacon
maybe the neck also seems unnatural to me and well she doesnt have a belly butto...
OH MY GOD I COMPLTELEY FORGOT
ok give me a few more seconds
fickle lagoon
The hands are the same size; no enhanced perspective. The left arm (to us) looks pressed against the body, so it doesn’t look like it’s being pushed forwards, and it’s at a much different length than the other
fickle lagoon
maybe the neck also seems unnatural to me and well she doesnt have a belly butto...
Neck form not shown, would be part of style
gritty beacon
ok now now
gritty beacon
Neck form not shown, would be part of style
it should be slightly visible in my opinion at the very top but okay maybe the face fat causes it to bend
gritty beacon
The hands are the same size; no enhanced perspective. The left arm (to us) looks...
lets not push her that far
might stress them
no im actually fine
wow well thats cool
learning to take criticism while im at it because i reallt suck
lmao
fickle lagoon
learning to take criticism while im at it because i reallt suck
Nuh uh
gritty beacon
well go ahead give her more
fickle lagoon
well go ahead give her more
Don’t they have he/him in their pronouns?
gritty beacon
i stopped becuz i thought thr guy learning to draw for 21 days would be stressed
gritty beacon
Don’t they have he/him in their pronouns?
i didnt check
i thought he was a girl
pretty sure he doesnt care
fickle lagoon
Lol
gritty beacon
why do i make people plural
fickle lagoon
🤷
gritty beacon
ok now now
am i good to go now ?!?????!!!!!!!
i love this emoji idk why
its just so silly
fickle lagoon
ok now now
Since this is a sketch, you could just improve most of the things in the lining
fickle lagoon
Muahahhaha
gritty beacon
thank you everyone,,,,, for helping me,,,,
ur cool
i will now play stardew valley
i will now skateboard
again
fickle lagoon
I will now eat soup