Applying to 2024 internships. Any feedback would be helpful 😄🙏🙏

[tough yarrow]

you can roast me

[opaque juniper]

• the spacing between the headers and the text underneath is inconsistent
• the date placements are inconsistent (some are more indented than others)
• you have a space before “Developed 5+…” making it inconsistent
• you have a space before “Developed a mock Twitter…” making it inconsistent
• you capitalize “Developer Tools” but not “Programming languages” (inconsistent)

[tough yarrow]

kk sounds good

thanks

ill do that

[true haven]

Utilizing the 1st person is unusual, some sourcers might find it cute though

[tough yarrow]

ok where do i use first person

[true haven]

Me, my