#artist-alley

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urban summit
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After all, the tag is unused.

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lmao

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Be careful what you wish for

mint root
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Why is there like nothing there for me?

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fiery oxide
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ships

fiery oxide
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Ships ??? ;w;

remote vortex
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fiery oxide
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better for you not to know...

fiery oxide
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Alright ;w;

urban summit
fiery oxide
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That's literally break my brain cells twice

mint root
fiery oxide
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;w;

tidal grove
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Imagine looking for cute anime girls and seeing them unborn.. 💀

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alright... lets move on...

urban summit
fiery oxide
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Let's just change topic please ;w;

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Its breaking my mind

tidal grove
tidal grove
mint root
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I do not get it

fiery oxide
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;w;

urban summit
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It's better that way

austere pilot
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WHY DID I HAVE TO LOOK IN HERE ATM

urban summit
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How do you spell curius?

austere pilot
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curious

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?

tidal grove
urban summit
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wtf

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Curiosity can be really bad for you. That's what happened to me with Twitter a week ago.
I stare at the abyss, Twitter arguments in this case, for too long and too deep that I had to sign out and uninstall it because I kept coming back to look at it.

austere pilot
urban summit
wide river
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Oh

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i came back and then found lore

urban summit
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Arts in there are really good tho. I wish that it was built for artist. I know that it's not the intent for the app, it's not design that way.

wide river
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what app

urban summit
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Twitter

wide river
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Oh, that hellhole that has an AI to steal my craft, and they will do so even when most of the users outright opt out to not share their info to feed and train their little machine!

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yeahhhhh, nope

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nononononope

urban summit
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If you saw Tri is typing that was me cleaning the keyboard.

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no essay sadge

wide river
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he cannot compete with my overlore

tidal grove
tidal grove
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Although, fighting your craving for drama may be not efficient. If you really can't control it, just change the environment

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I couldn't control myself watching shorts on youtube, so i removed them entirely from my youtube

mint root
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Just have an account for art and a second one for whatever

urban summit
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tidal grove
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it's evil

urban summit
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It's very insidious

waxen shell
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@night flame

night flame
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Better than anything I can make.

waxen shell
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I'm not great, just starting still

stable swift
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ah

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pretty neat

waxen shell
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Ty

fiery oxide
waxen shell
fiery oxide
# waxen shell Ty ty

Just a advice ya, From the journey of practicing my art skill despite I have talent to draw realistic human and animal, You could try to search for some tips like how to draw faces, heads and any parts!

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You may also ask me for some advice, But I may not always active this year since I have to put all the time on my studies for my futures

terse bear
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It's kinda human right

fiery oxide
# terse bear

Uhmm, Yeah! It still have the human organ still -w-

wide river
rapid wraith
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Artists normally seek constructive criticism. Twitter user base is physically unable to provide that

tidal grove
rapid wraith
rapid wraith
tidal grove
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there's zero drama

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suprisingly

rapid wraith
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Yeah as expected it’s unsurprising

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You’re both good at art and humoring the Twitter userbase

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They do not attack your kind

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The victims are less skilled artists and very skilled artists who only draw serious pieces usually

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The former gets harassed for skill issue and the latter gets accused of AI, tracing, stealing, all sort of things

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I’ve been on that trash platform for long enough

tidal grove
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I mean, i wasn't skilled just a year ago

rapid wraith
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I’d go as far as saying that literal DA is better

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That’s how messed up Twitter is

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I really see it as the soft core version of that one anon website

tidal grove
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april 1 will be soon. Would be funny if every artist posts drawings with terrible AI-like mistakes at that day. Imagine that neurOMEGALUL

rapid wraith
tidal grove
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would be a funny posion strategy

rapid wraith
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Hold on just now.

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Are you by chance planning to do just that?

tidal grove
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Idk, it's effort

wide river
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hello

oak cedar
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Is it possible to ask a mod to look at an artwork to see if it's fine to post in the server? I'd like to double check.

crisp portal
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hi

wide river
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a

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burble name

remote vortex
oak cedar
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Thanks!

remote vortex
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wait no I think I'm turning color blind

wide river
candid island
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so like...
im stil living that one thing...
id to be mine debut...
this one at thursday 21:45...
im too greedy?

wide river
candid island
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sorry chat, i love you all and so

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too much wine

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really, i had never been in such an amazing community, thank you all

wide river
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thank god i lived this long to witness a wined up artist thanking everyone in this back alley (you're welcome fren 😊)

candid island
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is there a way to remove my comments, right?

wide river
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fuck that, keep it lmao xd

candid island
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XD

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love you Tuna, love so much of youb right there, persons who helped me

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i shoulda shut myself rn, thank you all

rapid wraith
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Bro is literally me when I get drunk

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Damn you’re the guy who drew freaky Evil 😭

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You should draw NOW and see what happens

candid island
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i even got her on my pfp

rapid wraith
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Yea I can see her 😭

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If Evil sees that

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We’re gonna have problems

candid island
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she seen that

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but didnt show it

rapid wraith
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Evil wants to keep that to herself I see

candid island
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it may be

candid island
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XDXD

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im over, good sleep

wide river
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if yuore firefighter

am unemployable

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🤣😭💀😔

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Alexa, play Coldplay - No Surprises.

candid island
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radiohead maybe?

wide river
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Radiohead - No Surprises*

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fuck

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thanks, god fucking damn it

urban summit
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Did someone say Radiohead?

wide river
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No, that's Radio Gaga by Queen.

urban summit
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Did someone say Radio Gaga by Queen?

wide river
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Yes.

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oh man

urban summit
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we're more popular than #gaming yippee

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if we compare it with the old artists general, then its active af

mint badge
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yea

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the old one being inactive is probably because it's deep hiden under forum

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wait is forum gone

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why can't I find it

urban summit
urban summit
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Also the old artist general was made when Neuro is still not that known. So less people were in this server. let alone the OG-AG

urban summit
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yep

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wide river
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this is me walking the thin ice 🔥👄🔥

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THE SECOND REPOPULATION EFFORT
An effort by the Doves to repopulate and reeducate outsiders with the knowledge to grow, nurture, and raise intellectually blessed families and civilizations as a penance for Yonah's actions in the Yonaheimian shores.

The records of this effort is lost to time.

urban summit
wide river
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what the fuck

urban summit
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I know the instrument, I didn't know the song name and the band that made this.

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urban summit
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Wait

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What

wide river
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anyways check out beabadoobee - Thick of It after that

urban summit
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what is going on?

wide river
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Uh... bud.

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Internet gaslighting you

wide river
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Nirvana definitely sang The Ghost of You

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And MCR sang Teen Spirit

urban summit
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I'm not music savvy, help :(

wide river
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bro

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anyways

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beabadoobee - Thick of It is a banger song

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Duran Duran - Invisible which playing in Metal Gear Solid is also a banger

urban summit
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-._.-

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I h8 y'all /j

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urban summit
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I forgot the tone indicator.

wide river
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I liked Midge Ure's The Man Who Sold The World in Entropy Zero 2, very bangers if you're into the genre

candid island
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just listened to rhcp californication

candid island
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candid island
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film is a thin layer of oil or what, thats what i remember from studies

oak pond
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need ideas on how the fuck do i do the lighting

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please

potent basalt
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I sometimes use massive brush to make big circles

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then it's like lighting comes from outside drawing area

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it's also way to make things look less flat... they just make it look like artist put a lot of effort to something while it's just few clicks really or strokes

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oak pond
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ill do it tomorrow

candid island
oak pond
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how would i improve it

candid island
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but, im just an drawing amator

candid island
# oak pond how would i improve it

maybe draw a little sun in the corner and try to trace its ray?
sorry, im not an experienced artist,
honestly, im struggling with colouring my works at all

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your light work, as for me, is quite good

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maybe, just maybe
if there is a monitor in front of a chara on the right side of the painting
just make left side little darker?
if the monitor screen is the main light source on this pic it make sense

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idk honestly

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wide river
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GOD / THE GREATER MEMORIA
Everything and nothing.

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oak pond
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maybe i need to at rgb lights

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between the posters

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Since you got cold light

oak pond
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yea

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candid island
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blue is not warm, i get it

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oak pond
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aight

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will do those when i wake up

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its almost 2am lol

candid island
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sorry, shouldnt been interrupting

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# candid island sorry, shouldnt been interrupting

Nah, you're partially right. The light from the monitor is cold, as you said, so the shadow will be warm on the contrary. in most cases, warm light is used (for example, from the sun), so the shadows will more towards blue

candid island
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so the first chara in front of monitor should be more blue, rest in more orange light

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?

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candid island
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And this is all that colour theory magic rn?

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buoyant gorge
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hello 👋

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woah color theory. that’s my favorite topic.

candid island
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we have like an hour to talk about colour theory

wide river
candid island
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then stream

sacred sage
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uh oh not colour theory

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I call it colourblind theory

wide river
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Wait, I think I get the theory a bit.

buoyant gorge
# wide river woah color! i hate it

i obsess over it. out of proportions, anatomy, perspective, etc, color is probably the one topic i struggled with the longest so i made it a mission to know every detail and facet of color until i could apply it properly. Conclusion: I’m still not applying it properly 😅, but I definitely learned a lot.

wide river
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I kind of applied it on one of my arts.

wide river
buoyant gorge
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Color is hard because it goes hand in hand with values, saturation, lighting, etc, all of which could be long-winded topics of their own.

sacred sage
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I literally se less red and green so it’s cursed to choose colours while drawing

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just draw in black and gray we ball

buoyant gorge
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value alone has so many aspects about it to keep track of

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you have highlights, light, halftones, terminator shadows/core shadows, bounce lighting, form shadows, contact shadows

sacred sage
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hmm I can still probably learn how to use colours well

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sacred sage
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But it’s cursed knowing people will see it differently

buoyant gorge
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not even accounting for shadows caused by the material, whether its matte or specular

wide river
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wait

sacred sage
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Or like if I’m analyzing a character then I just get the colour wrong and use the wrong colour

wide river
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id like to be judged on this one art i made

buoyant gorge
wide river
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Based on the lighting, the shadows and the colors, how well did I apply them? (I haven't tried applying properly first until I followed my intuition about the foundations)

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oh, feel free to judge my line art as well xd

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rapid wraith
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In class with WindSketchy and Reyforn

buoyant gorge
rapid wraith
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I have to take a seat

wide river
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OH WELL, CHAT, SEE YA NEVER THEN

sacred sage
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I think he’s swole

wide river
sacred sage
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sacred sage
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What’s the thing behind the drawing

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Triangle like shape

wide river
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messy line art

sacred sage
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The text at the bottom makes it look like some poster or movie poster

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Some bounty

wide river
buoyant gorge
# wide river Based on the lighting, the shadows and the colors, how well did I apply them? (I...

so i don’t usually judge another’s art as ultimately every judgment is subjective even if backed by theory, but if I were to ask you what type of light source and atmosphere you were intending with this piece, what were you intending? A sunny light against a blue sky? A glowing floor against a midday sunset caused by glowing magical plants or something? Context matters because it gives us direction on how we want those colors to be applied.

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oh, i was about to ask same questions lmao

buoyant gorge
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If you’re going for what appears to be sun against the sky, with the lightsource pointing down for example, then there are a few things I wanted to note.

sacred sage
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how long did that take? cuz we’ve had several wips here I think

buoyant gorge
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One, all shadows are determined by the ambient color of the environment itself. A blue sky would make cool objects look cooler in the shadow, and warm objects look more muted within its shadows.

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Second, since the character is facing downwards, there should be less light catching onto the front plane of the face, which is facing away from the light source up top

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additionally you’re missing a cast shadow from that face, cast upon the chest area

wide river
buoyant gorge
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the neck, clavicle, trapezius, should be mostly cast in darker shadow in this case

wide river
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I am still weak with backgrounds too xd

buoyant gorge
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which some light hitting from the ambient light of the blue sky around

wide river
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But I suppose I liked it simpler on this one and focused majorly on the character than anything else

buoyant gorge
wide river
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im messy on my art like that

buoyant gorge
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its fine, as long as you feel happy with how it looks, ultimately that’s all that matters

sacred sage
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Ye

wide river
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About to be 6.

buoyant gorge
# wide river Based on the lighting, the shadows and the colors, how well did I apply them? (I...

if there’s any takeaway tho, its that we have to always imagine the 2d image as a 3d object the best we can. If we were to turn your character to its side for example, and watch how the light hits from below (bounce lighting), which areas would it actually hit, and which would it not hit? I don’t think the light would reach as far up as the deltoids, nor would it hit the area between the bottom of the chest and the top of the stomach for example.

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bounce light also seems brighter than the shadows here

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which by rules of lighting in general, cannot be possible

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because despite its name, bounce lighting is always part of the shadow region

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therefore it can never be brighter than the darkest lights

wide river
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interesting

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😳

wide river
buoyant gorge
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for example if you have a white room

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the shadows are pure neutral gray

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50% as dark as white

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If you have a 50% dark blue sky, the shadows will be even darker aroudn 75% in darkness on the value scale

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and the colors of the shadow will be influenced by the blue

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If you have a blue character under a blue sky, the shadows of that character will be even more blue (cool + cool colors)

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if you have a red character under a blue sky, the shadows of that character will cancel out (cool + warm light = grayish red shadows)

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and that’s just ambient lighting

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not accounting for bounce lighting, which could have a different color temperature that comes from the direct lightsource + the temperature of the ground which the light hits + the color of the character itself

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its a lot of annoying stuff to think about which ultimately just ends up with me balling my colors most of the time 😅

wide river
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chat.

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my hatred for colors has become more justified.

buoyant gorge
wide river
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I'm screenshoting this just in case I would like to try different techniques

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I still dont get most of the shadows but the lighting I get them easy

buoyant gorge
lyric pike
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shadow is dark light is light, under sky light shadow is slightly blue, under con light shadow is slightly tinted toward con light color

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thats all u should remember

wide river
buoyant gorge
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yeah, what kan said lol. easier than the essays i tend to give.

wide river
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but yeah, thank you a lot

lyric pike
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conditioned

wide river
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Oh okay thanks

lyric pike
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and also drawing with reference on the side always help, dont try to read too much

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you will realize the unspoken rules on the journey

wide river
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oh wait, hold on

buoyant gorge
wide river
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i think i have one art i used reference but the oc in question is...

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kinda

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hold on

lyric pike
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i say that because i hate school dont quote me on that, we always have our own methods on learning of course xD

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the most important thing tho is make sure you find it fun

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keep it a hobby

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lyric pike
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a lot of my friend lost their passion for art becus they overdid it

buoyant gorge
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aww that’s unfortunate

lyric pike
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ikr

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keeping it as a hobby is best way to get into it

wide river
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ez, switching from nerdy artist to your nerdy loremaster is always faster than reloading

buoyant gorge
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indeed

wide river
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idk if i can share this art here

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it is borderline nsfw 😈

buoyant gorge
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uh i wouldn’t risk it. i remember the rules being pretty strict on that if i recall?

wide river
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😈😈😈😈

lyric pike
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u can try making a mod mail to see

wide river
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nah i wouldn't yeah

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I sent one

lyric pike
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cant wait to see

wide river
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fuck it, have a blood mage

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Or specifically, a sanguinomancer.

lyric pike
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oh this is fine

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not nsfw at all

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nice art tho thonkHug

wide river
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no that's not THE art

lyric pike
wide river
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xd

cloud sky
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you can always ask staff if you want to know if something is allowed

lyric pike
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run

cloud sky
lyric pike
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heir is here

hollow hawk
tardy frost
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did a draw

iron halo
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i gotta put my current thing on hold again so i can make elivs birthday

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i dont particularly like doing this but i must

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wide river
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DOVES
Hermaphrodite beings that closely resemble humans, but inherit angelic qualities, virtues, commitments and judgments. Thought by the humana to be godsent creatures that deliver the first society to coexistence, they are considerably honest with their expressions and opinions, and going so far as to see themselves as imperfect people walking among mortals—never wanting to lie if not to protect their comrades from the uncomfortable truths. Their voices are akin to a soothing melody, but not wanting to deceive their lesser kindred because it opposes their kindhearted nature.

Initially thought to be a pacifist race, avoiding conflict at all costs with their clairvoyance. But once there are no peaceful resolutions and solutions, the Doves will not hesitate to fight with the most ruthless magics available.

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wip btw

gentle spire
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nice

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6 more days everyone

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look alive

sacred sage
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6 more days?

wide river
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6 days?

sacred sage
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Until my midterm??

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Thanks for reminding neuroHypers

wide river
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yes asa

sacred sage
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omg asa

wide river
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ablahblah sblahblah acid

sacred sage
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wip?

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Acetyl

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Salicylic

wide river
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Alcoholic Shithead Adolescent

sacred sage
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I learned it from my drugs101 course

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best course title ever

wide river
sacred sage
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Oh you said wip 💀 💀 💀

wide river
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what about it

sacred sage
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oops

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reading skill -5 stats

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nothing really i already answered my question by actually reading the text

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Do you guys have any experience with png compression? Maybe know some methods or good services

mint root
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What is png compression?

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I am actually learning what the difference between a png and jpg is now

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preferably with the least loss in quality

uncut plaza
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Still work in progress

nocturne bronze
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Omg I just got that manga and it's so good!

uncut plaza
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Yeah i finished it a couple months ago

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It's probably the best manga i read

jaunty quiver
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it just loads a bit slower in more compressed file sizes

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rapid wraith
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The tinnitus after destroying my ears with music is crazy

faint valley
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Need to figure out what to do about the boot soles, the leotard, and probably some other things too. Also decide on whether I want to have a differently colored tongue… that would be cyberpunk af

rapid wraith
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Is it just me or her face changed

faint valley
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I did redraw the face

buoyant gorge
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finished coloring my friend’s OC

lyric pike
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soo good

buoyant gorge
white arrow
chrome stirrup
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I need to learn coloring, china

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on twitter

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it's so good

wide river
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Coloring, China is my favorite province.

rotund temple
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Gets boring during class..

mint root
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Colors colors colors aaaaahhhhhh
There's so much I can do but actually so little

wide river
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"God existed, its light brighter among the stars, ever bright but ever far from the planets.

But He died, and His corpse rapidly withered, as pieces of vermilion, megabeige, and imperium.

The three celestial components that make the souls, spirits, and the body are drifting apart—away from each other.

Some groups stay together and created celestial trees, verisimilitude to the nervous system of humanity, and generated prototypal streams of consciousness, and conscience.

The trees themselves became brooding ground for the first creations in space, veiling the emptiness and swarming the ever black star oceans with a multitude of colors. The astrologers of Paradise would later give the veilbrood trees a fitting name—Sephirots."

—Professor Yashivoth Kiss's journal, pg. 1-4

oak pond
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# oak pond thoughts

Looks fine to me. One of the characters is pretty grayed out in the back. Is that intentional?

oak pond
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prob just the lighting

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and she's so far back

buoyant gorge
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so that’s what confused me

buoyant gorge
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yeah

oak pond
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her color scheme is intentionally greyscale

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👍

buoyant gorge
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ohh ok

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neat

oak pond
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what else do i add

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or is it good enough

buoyant gorge
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maybe a little more colored screen lighting on the front of the person playing on the PC, since she’s the focus of the piece, you want to use lights to draw more attention to her.

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If you’re using layers, a glow dodge, add, screen, or overlay layer could be used to make this lighting

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i like the angle

oak pond
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moreover the middle portion will mostly be blocked

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oak pond
buoyant gorge
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It’s part of the general 80/20 rule that most photographers and artists use to draw a viewer’s attention to the 20% of a piece through contrast.

oak pond
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removed some lighting behind the monitor

buoyant gorge
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ooh yeah i think that works out better

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oak pond
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i think that should be it

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i want this shit to end

rapid wraith
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Lighting seems fine to me. It isn’t overly complex but it’s directionally accurate

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And that is plenty imo

oak pond
buoyant gorge
oak pond
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I DONT KNOW WHY IT TAKES SO LONG

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ITS NOT EVEN THAT COMPLICATED

rapid wraith
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And this is why I hardly ever draw multiple characters

buoyant gorge
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my longest was 40 hours during a time when my average was 35 hours a few years back

rapid wraith
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There’s like what

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5 characters in there

buoyant gorge
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never want to go back to that pain

oak pond
buoyant gorge
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thats a lot of ppl to render

oak pond
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they're chibis so it doesnt take that long

rapid wraith
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Every character is rendered with the same or almost same level of quality. Account for the lighting on all surfaces, draw the environment, the bg, it gets long

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Really long

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Really fucking long

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Even if they’re chibis

oak pond
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it doesnt feel that long tho

rapid wraith
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Well 15 hours is like

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Over twice as long than I’ve took on my longest drawing

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Then again it was ONE character

oak pond
rapid wraith
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Multiply that by 5 I’d have a 30 hours drawing on my hands

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HELL no

buoyant gorge
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15 hours is actually not too bad for how many characters you have

rapid wraith
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I’d take triple the time

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Quadruple

oak pond
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ill render out the timelapse

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once im done

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i dont think theres anything else to do

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except the placement of my signature

rapid wraith
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Gonna wait for Nyu and then it’s my turn to post

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Cuz I’ve finally finished drawing

oak pond
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someone pointed out the girl's eye look demented

rapid wraith
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close enough

rapid wraith
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Still no

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Like, just because they’re wide, focused and nerdy doesnt make them down

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That is a rather mean remark

oak pond
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bro

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i forgor her eyebrows

rapid wraith
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If even the artists didn’t notice it means it’s mostly irrelevant but damn now that you make me notice

mint root
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Done that alot of times

oak pond
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the eyelid do look like eyebrows most of the time

chrome stirrup
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man, evil birthday is just a week away!

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my normal art guy has comms full docnotL

oak pond
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that should do it

oak pond
buoyant gorge
chrome stirrup
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I hope I can make a new piece in just a week

mint root
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I started mine 5 days ago

buoyant gorge
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i have the line art. i just don’t want to color like 8 characters

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the idea of it makes me NeuroPossessed

mint root
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Yeeaah thats alot

buoyant gorge
mint root
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I usually focus on a part if its a big piece and try to complete that

buoyant gorge
rapid wraith
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Yes you should finish it because it’s got so much potential like I said when you first posted the wip

buoyant gorge
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since u know, evil’s last b-day

rapid wraith
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It will take very long but it’s worth it imo

buoyant gorge
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by next week

mint root
rapid wraith
mint root
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But I dunno the most I've drawn is three in one canvas

buoyant gorge
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I had a crane machine piece once that took forever to finish

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had to draw so many plushies

mint root
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Yeah I was practically dead by the end of it

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The background is quite painful for me since I'm new to drawing them

wide river
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a

mint root
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b

wide river
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c

candid island
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d

mint root
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d

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Noooo

buoyant gorge
mint root
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I am on cooldown
I Keep looking at my art but can't do anything

buoyant gorge
wide river
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i must write more lore

wide river
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C E L E S T I O - A S T R A L L O R E

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SICK NAME I MADE UP

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HAHAAHHHAHAH IM GOING INSANE

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ALEXA, PLAY DANCING MAD

oak pond
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done

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shit i forgot about the caption

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timelapse goes crazy

mint root
buoyant gorge
buoyant gorge
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literally how i feel atm

grave lichen
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architecture

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(this is just concept art for a roblox game i made )

icy vale
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im so artblocked and lazy Dead (original art by paccha) i just tried copy

wide river
# wide river C E L E S T I O - A S T R A L L O R E

welp, im suffering

i. Celestio-astral Lore
ii. Astral-sephirot Lore
iii. Sephirot Lore
iv. Draconomarchy Lore
v. Empyrean Lore
vi. First Yonaheim Era
vii. Second Yonaheim Era
viii. The Age of Coexistence and Apocalypse

wide river
potent briar
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I've hardly ever seen someone in discord come up with such good fantasy names

wide river
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i can't wait to get sick and suffer and rot and vanish into the vermilion

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💀😭

potent briar
potent briar
wide river
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conlang?

potent briar
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Fictional language

wide river
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ahhhhh

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nice, i once tried that (failed miserably)

potent briar
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Since it's a language of ascended authority I wanna give it a charm of mystery

wide river
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what words and terminologies of weird madeup shit i slapped myself with during that time

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and imperium, what 💀💀💀

potent briar
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I see

wide river
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Actually, imperium and vermilion are acceptable celestial components I feel like sticking and committing to name

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it seemed and sounded fitting

potent briar
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Yea they are majestic words after all

wide river
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but not fking megabeige 😭😭😭

potent briar
potent briar
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Its a bit too ordinary

wide river
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hmmm

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God still lives ethereally as the three-personed deaths though

potent briar
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Maybe slapped in a few poetic stuff in before ending it with something like "but the lights the celestial All Father is now naught but that of a rotting corpse"

wide river
wide river
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jk that name is take

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taken*

potent briar
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Let's see

wide river
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the OG

potent briar
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Heh

wide river
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the original gangsta of the vastness of star oceans

potent briar
wide river
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the godfather of the considerate and the ungrateful

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The creator that got spawnkilled by an unknown hacker outside the video game he/she played

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bruh

potent briar
wide river
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heh

potent briar
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Beneath the cobwebs

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Down the marrow shade

wide river
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AHA

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The Almagest

potent briar
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Huh

wide river
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I always adopted God in another name as the Greater Memoria though, the Almagest is arabic for the Greatest

potent briar
wide river
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i need rest from that and take some time to think of the names

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😭

potent briar
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Maybe don't give a name to the supreme being of your story

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I think it's more approachable if you give them many names

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Different cultures will have different values

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And each will probably come up with different names which coincides with the value their culture takes pride in

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So maybe

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You don't really have to bother much on the name of a supreme being

wide river
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yep, way ahead of ya there

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In the second versions of society, mankind and the surviving demimankind has already figured out almost everything, and established a lot of religions and faiths and made bibles of each, with different names for Gos

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God*

potent briar
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Yep

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The title "The first to be and be not" kinda slaps hard to me if the "God" in your story dies early

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First to be there and first to not be there

wide river
wide river
potent briar
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Cool

wide river
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OH YEAHHHH

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HEHEHEEHHEHHEEH

potent briar
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As for me I don't think I have any plans to keep a canon creation story of my fantasy world

wide river
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And I don't plan them; the ideas and wacky, wicked stuff on mind comes on a whim and I put it, mostly 💀

potent briar
wide river
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basically tells the readers to go figure that shit out yourself if i cant think of shit lmao

potent briar
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Yea but the drawbacks is that i really gotta add a lot of extra stuff like folks and songs and poetries and more source materials in the story

wide river
potent briar
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Also Im having a hard time not making couples

potent briar
potent briar
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Everytime I write a single character

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Another character of the opposite gender just comes to mind

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And it's such a shame if I don't add em to the stories

wide river
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More if there aren't any inner and outer struggles and traumas that makes them a character the develops on the course of the story

potent briar
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I'm soo fking good at my job when there's romance involved

potent briar
wide river
# potent briar Hahaha that's the point

which, kind of a shame and a missed opportunity

when i do miss the potential, there can be times when i make separate small stories and make a closure, and hopefully end their journey there as the paradise of their battles ended

wide river
potent briar
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Besides I've been thinking for the past 4 or 5 years about this story

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So I'm actually quite slow

wide river
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Mine is...

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since 2017...

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what the fuck.

potent briar
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I also got side tracked on other major stories

wide river
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how the hell did i

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...

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bro...

potent briar
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One is a modern shounen settings with 4 main characters 2 boys and 2 girls, you know the drill

wide river
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And that's before I was Tuna Eater and I haven't got Discord at the time

potent briar
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Anyway it's about a what if event that during the crusades a new supernatural threats merged that started a new worldwide threat which brought together the crusaders and many other kingdoms

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Along with some magic or power system ofc

potent briar
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So since a major event in history got changed i now have to make a new history of 900 years

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I have to fill in gaps and gaps

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I made a few major people during those 900 years be not born

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While some are born

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Since the flow of time from our history and the history of that world became different a lot of variation in the people that were to be born and not be born came to be

wide river
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mine took place after the era of coexistence and apocalypse, after the great paradise war, and at the sixth era where two major powers are fighting a once hot, now a cold war now devoid of reason and true origin 💀💀💀

potent briar
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That's cool

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Nice parallelism

wide river
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and it's more politics and adventures 💀💀💀💀

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and i made that because i hate my own government 💀💀💀💀💀💀

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and i played and finished and blamed final fantasy tactics for it 💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀

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and now i still haven't finished tactics ogre reborn 💀💀💀💀💀

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bruh

potent briar
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For me it's fast forward into the current era the world is now more advanced than it was supposed to be since the world is quite in a united state along with the advancement made thanks to a lot of variable i added

potent briar
wide river
# potent briar So it's a story with a message?

Nobody wins in wars.
We only lose lives and values that made coexistence possible.
And no matter how noble our causes, we will have to spiral back to battle.

Because a threat is something we as a species will eventually face forward and raise our swords high, hoping that we fight for our individual liberties, and freedoms.

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Together, no matter how different we are, our paradise is the battle.

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And the battle is our paradise, absolute and true.

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what the fuck is this wh40k speech bullshit dog 😭😭

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so yeah, that's the message (it's fucking shit)

potent briar
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Well I managed to play a number of chess matches while your we're typing

potent briar
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As for me I don't really have any plans to show my ideals nor principles in my story

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When it comes to idealogical writing

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I simple just write it out raw

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I usually just do like

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"so what will you guys choose if you were here?"

wide river
wide river
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because hehe gun funny

potent briar
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Oh yeaa

wide river
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But yeah, I do raw as well

potent briar
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I'm also kinda being a bit too ambitious

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I might consider myself the most ambitious world builder ever

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Though it does sound narcissistic

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I've been currently doing some studying on different swords and their techniques and core principles along with studying just how horrendous and trash reverse grip is in a sword fight

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Because well my fantasy world is gonna be set in the timeline of what is considered a "golden age" for us

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Also I just really like badass armour with full fave

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So I studied around just how useful armour really was and how rare it was

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So just to make badass armour a common sight in my fantasy world I expanded the world a lot

wide river
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meanwhile: i do worldbuilding because i love women knights 😳

potent briar
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Based

wide river
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and i love the sisters of battle, and the claymore

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😭😭😭🙏

potent briar
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So I added one major female swordsman

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She maybe the only one I've added yet

wide river
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i like muscle mommies 😭

potent briar
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But she's actually a powerhouse

wide river
potent briar
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She's an ascended

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Ascended are the current name I've added for what people would consider gods

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I don't wanna put something as boring as the typical word "gods"

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So I'm calling em ascended

wide river
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A muscle mommy, a powerhouse, and somebody's lover

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i fucking love how I DREW HER AAAAAA

potent briar
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Crotch feels like there's a penis

wide river
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Rest assured, she's a woman

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I have a lot of art I've drawn about her too

potent briar
wide river
potent briar
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Well thats good

potent briar
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I drew her feminine but in a maiden sort of way

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I'm not into drawing women in an unnecessary sort of fan service

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Way

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I'm of the belief that there is also as much fan service in seeing a cute girl dress nicely as much as there is fan service in drawing a sexy one

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So I wanna focus in a sort of beauty that is respectable

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To women

wide river
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this is her

potent briar
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Her name should be Ginormica

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Huh

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The word mica sure is good for a feminine name hun

wide river
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Yeah, it's the same to me especially when my main story involves men and women with the same clothes and armor, no cleavage and what not (maybe except for mages), because of course they're fighting battles on wars, skirmishes and campaigns

potent briar
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If I were to show the entire thing instant to simps

wide river
potent briar
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Then they wouldn't be deaperate

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I wanna make them desperate by providing snippets little by little

wide river
potent briar
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So boob cleavage only if the clothing seems it

wide river
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And the women also wear what men wears in the current era in my worldbuilding too, not just in dresses and skirts (like in the 1940-1980s kind of fashion thingy, i think?)

wide river
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accuracy???? I suck at counterstrike!!!!

potent briar
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Anyway gtg I got stuff to do

wide river
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aight

potent briar
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It was fun

wide river
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good worldbuilding talk fellow worldbuilder 🤝

potent briar
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Also I made her a readhead

wide river
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BASED

potent briar
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Also her future love interest is gonna be the ascended lord of what is China in my fantasy world

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You may call him the Lord of Distortion

wide river
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Noted

rapid wraith
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I too finished drawing woman today. She’s also with muscles, but definitely far less roughened up and more laid back than your momm- ahem war machine girlie

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More of an experiment than anything

fiery oxide
rapid wraith
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The hairs are a dead giveaway anyway

real beacon
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Any ideas what I should add? I noticed some mistakes and thought I better improve it before reposting

rapid wraith
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I have no idea, shit is peak

sacred sage
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this is so terrible the sun is out and I haven’t even slept yet, best sleep schedule

rapid wraith
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If I were you I’d make the lighting more dramatic but I’m not you

real beacon
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Left and right sides feel kinda empty

rapid wraith
real beacon
rapid wraith
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Common ibis paint X user W

rapid wraith
sacred sage
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The ads at the top

real beacon
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yeah, so I thought before reposting it I might as well add something or improve it

potent briar
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Lol

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Like blastoise

real beacon
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lol mecha tutels

mint root
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The dual swords on neuro is interesting

real beacon
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throw back to the smuffy collab

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snuffy*

rapid wraith
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Neuro and Evil are obviously holding back but Vedal is clearly serious

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Neuro stated her maximum power is Giga Neuro 4

real beacon
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he's just mad someone broke his bottle of rum before he could he finish it

mint root
real beacon
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was honestly considering giving it a sheath like the witcher or have one of the drones carry it for her

wide river
wide river
real beacon
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nope honestly I just designed them to be as generic looking androids, for easy upgrades

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if anything my biggest inspiration were the total recall bots

real beacon
real beacon
potent briar
wide river
potent briar
wide river
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stop

potent briar
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And apparently it's a premise of introducing a major character of the respective region

wide river
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Before you do

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commit to it, rest halfway, and rest after you're done writing

potent briar
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Here's a quick thing I wrote for 30 minutes

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Also the art is something I found from pinterest to be a placeholder

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Can you be a critic for me and point out the flaws in my writing please

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It's a premise

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I'm still gonna improve the dialogue since it doesn't feel natural

wide river
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you're good

potent briar
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wide river
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maybe a bit more commas

potent briar
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I did though about that

wide river
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would make writing feel more natural

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anyways

potent briar
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But if I added too much of them it could look a bit unrefined

wide river
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I gotta do shit

potent briar
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So I try tweaking around dialogues

wide river
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😉

potent briar
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Anyway what do you think of their dialogues?

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And the way I introduced the characters

wide river
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Smooth.

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👍

real beacon
potent briar
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You wanna know why I named him arthur?

wide river
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aight see ya chat, i gotta suffer

potent briar
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K

wide river
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pray tell a tuna eater, dear

potent briar
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Have a good time suffering

wide river
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😭

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tell me why though

wide river
potent briar
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I just realised

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It seems like I accidentally deleted a portion of what i wrote

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Miss [] dialogue on the late mid section

potent briar
wide river
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Ah, typical cliche stuff then

potent briar
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Well here's a difference

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He's not the main character

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It is quite cliche

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But I think I'm confident in him

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Afterall i find him quite likeable

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He's inspired from the Legend of King Arthur

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But I don't think I have any intention of making his supposed future greatness the main focus of his story

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I wanna keep it as an extra stuff he'll naturally gain

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But for now I'm focusing on who he is

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And what his desires are

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potent briar
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on the floor, I mean

real beacon
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thanks

olive tinsel
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Vrchat art

wide river
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I'm done with my first celestio-astral entry for my worldbuilding, one more to finish it off and I'll proceed into the next lore.

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potent briar
potent briar
# wide river

Also is there a deeper meaning to the word "tree-like organism"?

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It seemed as if you were pointing to something

wide river
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They become the Sephirot upon their merging, as the first intelligent organisms in space in my worldbuilding

potent briar
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Or are their appearance meant to be ambiguous beyond mortal comprehension?

wide river
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like a transparent tree with two square-shaped arms, and exposed glowing nervous systems, and a foliage, ofc

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gotta get back to my writing now

potent briar
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I see

wide river
potent basalt
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reminds me how tolkien famously did such insane amount of worldbuilding even before starting to write a work it was used for as context and it wasn't even intended as something published originally

potent briar
wide river
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im done with one lore

potent briar
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You in a hurry of somethin?

wide river
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no

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yay

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finished

potent basalt
# wide river i liked tolkien :>

wouldn't be surprised a lot of writers see his method as template and then find it takes tons of work to go really in detail just what is essentially a design document for one's fictional world... it depends how one wants to write if they feel it's worth to them

potent basalt
iron flame
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drew the clothes in the layer as the body

potent basalt
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fun times cleaning it

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I prefer to generously use layers... but it's valid to do it like that too

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some feel it's just way more natural to them

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my sensible take is that artists should use methods they prefer

green pike
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We are taking over the world with this one 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥 🔥

thick crane
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this is what i make when i'm bored

green pike
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should i keep eyebrows?

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green pike
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no

sacred sage
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yes

oblique badge
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then i think without better

oblique badge
cerulean nacelle
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Evil upset

potent basalt
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hmm... if she's upset she looks very slightly so

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exaggeration is very common with art to make it clear at glance what image is tring to depict

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just something I thought about

mint root
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I have been thinking for a while now what weapon to give neuro and even have a list of them

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Evil obviously has her harpoon, I just give vedal a longsword because he seems like the type of guy who would wield one and its basically a big knife

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And I have been thinking so long for such a simple answer

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Im giving her a knife she can wield a knife

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Maybe even two knives

candid island
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*her emotion of course

potent basalt
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I think there are bunch of different weapons that fit for each neuroverse character

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if thinking in terms of what they could be in "canon" sense

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evil I imagine with stuff like... various pipes, bricks, and harpoons

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lol

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neuro-sama I imagine being someone who throws cats (cartoonish way)

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vedal I imagine more of type with something like turtle shield in one hand paired with a sword... classic

mint root
mint root
candid island
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if weapons need to be stabby two knives seems reasonable
Evils harpoon has range
Vedal has a shield
Two daggers are short, but rapid
seems balanced

candid island
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Evil is portrayed as an arsonist too, so maybe giving Neuro a firemans axe with pointy spike on the back

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i find that comedic, idk

mint root
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They are kind of balanced if you have vedal with a shield and maybe a sword as a tank to take aggro, neuro sneaks behind to slit their throat, evil in the backline throwing harpoons and we can just give anny a supporting role

icy zenith
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Morning exercise 🐸🙌

candid island
icy zenith
thick gale
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why did i even do this

frozen spade
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CSM 1B was fun to play around with but ultimately not really fit for real world use, this is heads and shoulders better

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mhm

frozen spade
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Wait wrong channel lmao

icy zenith
soft nebula
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Just finished a quick sketch

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She looks weird though

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Maybe it's my style idk

mint root
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Made more of them

oak shuttle
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I found someone on reddit who made an animation of last years birthday incident. Do I post the link here or another channel. I mainly keep to general, nn and livestream chat. So this is new territory for me.

slender swan
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@oblique badge @lofty sage thank you so much for hair advice, I think it looks much better now neuroHeart
@sacred sonnet I tried adding some asymetry by giving her a bag, and some pins, but I just couldnt do it in a way I'd like so i gave up on that. But still thank you for advice, I will definitely be more aware of it in the future drawings neuroHeart

cerulean nacelle
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Neuro being confessed to

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slender swan
icy zenith
oblique badge
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bro is unstoppable

icy zenith
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Only 23 minutes this took me 😂

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Just realised

icy zenith
sacred sonnet
icy zenith