#Are you my teamate? v6

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brazen pumice
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Simply looking for feedbacks/suggestions and ideas like usual for the next script I'm about to storytell. Thanks for your time and attention along with any contribution you helped for me 😄 ❤️

In short, the main theme of the script is about trust and faith toward other people. At the beginning, you are unsure about which team you are actually on or whethere if someone is on your side or not. The main purpose is to connect people together and have some fun 🥳 . This is a good place if you're looking for a chill game and enjoy working with your friends toward the victory 🤗 🫡

quasi geode
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ooooh

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looks good from first glance

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lleech is so interesting

solemn flare
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Why boffin? just curious

brazen pumice
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To put some shenangians 👀

solemn flare
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Fair enough

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Shenanigans are great

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Leech gets slayer and slays themself 🤔

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Literally so smart

quasi geode
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i don't really get Grandmother tbh

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alchemist is fantastic

solemn flare
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Grandmother I get

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It’s team related

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You know someone’s good

quasi geode
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village idiot probably would benefit from not having 16 other tf

quasi geode
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so if the demon happens to kill their grandkid and it's 2 deaths

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that pair is now mechanically confirmed

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i guess except for amne

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but like

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but yeah idk imo this is a little too much claim space (19 possible tf with no double claims assuming no amne shenanigans) so

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im just suggesting some TF to trim

solemn flare
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That’s fair

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But I see why it’s there

quasi geode
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yeah

solemn flare
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I agree it’s bad in the script tho

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Or at least not great

quasi geode
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magician/poppygrower/atheist seems very strong tbh

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like that's the core of the script

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with drunk and lunatic and marionette

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hmmmm

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evil twin is pretty weak for a minion here imo, not a lot of ways of countering info on you

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and fortune teller isn't necessary but it doesn't hurt either

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huntsman isn't necessary either

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i like everything else!

brazen pumice
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The thing with boffin is that they can simulated some mechanical characters so that doesn't mean they are confirmed automatically 😄

solemn flare
quasi geode
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they just don't get help from their evil team

brazen pumice
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I agree but still, there's actually a lot you can work with eviltwin to make it interesting, it's just our creative the limit (also depends if I rolled it or not 🤔)

shut haven
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Personally, I would not have so many townsfolk. It can make it really hard solve what caused what

brazen pumice
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Hm, usually I added a couple of townsfolks since in case I rolled atheist , I can have more tokens to stimulate claims, but I can take off huntsman and damsel if you think it's tough to have on script 🤔

shut haven
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It's just that the sheer number of possibilites is difficult to work with

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I wouldn't reccomend deviating from the base 13 unless you think the script really needs it

ripe crystal
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Yep, and opens too much free bluff space for evils.

ripe crystal
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One other thing to keep in mind that there are 3 potential extra evils on script.

brazen pumice
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Let me see what I can work with 🤔

ripe crystal
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Well, I've heard before that it's relatively fine to have Atheist as 14th TF.

shut haven
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I can see that

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Since Atheist worlds are entirely seperate from all other worlds, so not as much to deal with

ripe crystal
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Btw, Grandmother can get hardconfirmed here as only extra death.

brazen pumice
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Hm, I intent to remove bounty_hunter , huntsman and village_idiot , the rest I'll keep if that's fine? 🤔

brazen pumice
ripe crystal
ripe crystal
brazen pumice
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No doubt but like the odds of that happening is not really often, though I understand what you're implying at 🤔

shut haven
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Still, any confirmation should never be 100% certain

brazen pumice
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reworked 🫡

shut haven
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If you're going to keep the grandma, maybe add a Yaggababble

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Or some other evil role that causes extra night deaths

brazen pumice
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Yaggababble is still demon kill tho

shut haven
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Yes, but a multi-death night doesn't confirm the grandmother and grandchild

brazen pumice
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washerwoman could work?

shut haven
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Maybe

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Steward also could

brazen pumice
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i think washerwoman is better to have some credibility since evil can easily bluff steward without needing the boffin in that case

shut haven
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Clock is pretty powerful with psycho, goblin, and ET, and it doesn't really mesh well with the other TF

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Maybe chef or noble, for YSK evil pings

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I like the outsiders, but ogre and poli is potentially +2 evils

brazen pumice
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right, but I don't think the amount of evils players can exceed half of the total numbers of players in any case though

shut haven
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One last thought before I go to bed: the minions feel very incongruent with each other and the overall script, especially ET and psycho. Maybe some quieter ones would work better? Boffin works, though, and mario

brazen pumice
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well there are 4 quiet minions and 2 loud ones, I think it should work fine

shut haven
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Three loud ones

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Pyscho, goblin, and ET

brazen pumice
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goblin can be bluffed by anyone though

shut haven
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Still loud

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It could work

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It's mainly ET that feel incongruent

brazen pumice
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I don't have any other ideas to replace tbh

shut haven
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I mean, maybe just remove it

brazen pumice
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anyways grandmother -> washerwoman , clockmaker -> noble

shut haven
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These are really just suggestions, do whatever feels right to you

brazen pumice
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let's just put it there, since remove or not it don't affect much imo

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Alright this should it for now 🤔

smoky moat
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im lovin that savant

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no not lleech psycopath again 😂

solemn flare
brazen pumice
solemn flare
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Yeah….

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I don’t have a great replacement option

smoky moat
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next time u should give heretic a go/j

plain salmon
shut haven
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For them to use their ability at all, they have to outright say that they are the Goblin. I'd call that loud

plain salmon
# shut haven For them to use their ability at all, they have to outright say that they are th...

I'm gonna write out what I define as loud and what I define as quiet personally.
Quiet Minions: Minions where their effects and ability are difficult to trace.
Poisoner
Scarlet Woman
Goblin
Baron
Spy
Mez
Boffin?
Marionette
Are all examples of this for me

Loud Minions are Minions where their effects are not easily replicated or are impossible to replicate:
Organ Grinder
Fearmonger
Witch
Harpy
Cere
Psychopath (when they kill)
Boomdandy (when they explode)
Vizier

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Does that make sense?

brazen pumice
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what do you think about devils_advocate ?

plain salmon
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(You will note how assassin/DA/GF/MM/PH etc aren't noted and thats bc it's script dependant. It's based on how the script is written as to their category)

brazen pumice
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ah true

smoky moat
civic quartz
civic quartz
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so it being an actual goblin is quiet

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but being evil is a bit less so

smoky moat
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Depends on uh what u define "loud" to be

civic quartz
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which is the same as i think of it to be

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and i believe its the one that needs to be taken into consideration when building scripts

smoky moat
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So uh

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what replicates ending the game after someone is voted out (to be fair this doesn' tmatter)

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saint?

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fearmonger?

civic quartz
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or exing the demon 🤷

smoky moat
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(also um most of the stuff I'm saying is more joke over anything else)

civic quartz
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me is quite bad with tone

smoky moat
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nh fa ir 😂

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online is a pain

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I'm starting to archive my games in a spreadsheet so that's also fun