#LEAGUE OF LEGENDS
native oriole
outer void
it seems like a lot of these are overly wordy. i would suggest looking through official characters for some more concise wording. also, every character should be written in 2nd person, not 3rd person
outer void
both are just general rules. they make it easier for people to understand
for example, ashe could be written as, Each night*, choose two players (not yourself). Learn how many are evil.
native oriole
for example, ashe could be written as, Each night*, choose two players (not your...
i dont like that
brisk gust
why must in 2nd person and not 3rd person?
You are not required to word it a specific way.
The commentor was trying to recommend reqording abilities to make them closer to expected wording and use short hands so that they conformed to existing characters.
I think Homebrew is opportunity to allow script makers to have freedom to explore the space and write how you want to.
My only criticism of roles is not the number of word but how roles do not really explain the terms used and if they have any mechanics other than being a reminder token.
- Mushrooms, Burrows, Paralyze, Infected, Trap(ped), Touched, Transfer, Neutralize, Defense, Immortal, Detects, Blade
- Clarification that characters do not usually execute, the town executes; players nominate. (Gragas)
- Clarification that Hang the Demon, means execute the Demon; despite death meaning Even if you are Dead (Singed)
- Clarification that alive eaten means that if all known characters are killed by Cho'gath evil wins. (Cho'gath)
Night order is not completed yet. Obviously an oversight.
Warwick: You start by guessing which minions are in play, You learn how many are correct.
Teemo: You start by choosing two players: Each night you learn if either are marked: Poisoned or Burrowed.
Here are two ways some roles could be reworded, but otherwise I liked reading the script. You put some great thoughts into it.
native oriole
oh no night orders ty