#My attempt at a script

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lyric magnet
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First things first

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Put it in SAO please, that improves readability a lot

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Second of all

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Why is the Pacifist on this script

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It has no identity here

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It's niche as a role used to confirm good players via execution testing isn't neccesary and shares redundency with the Virgin

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And its not interesting as a pacing mitigator either

livid cosmos
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is that better

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an okay

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what woul be a good townsfolk to add instead of a pacifist

soft sage
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if you hit the little up and down arrows on the side you can autosort them

lyric magnet
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Yeah

livid cosmos
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ohh

soft sage
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it’s hard to give advice when i can’t easily read the script sorry

livid cosmos
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thats what you meant!

lyric magnet
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What are you trying to do with this script

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What's the theme

livid cosmos
lyric magnet
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Or core

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Of the script

livid cosmos
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there isnt really a theme

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but

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I really want a theme revolving around yagababble

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but im 100% new to this

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so I kinda put somethings i liked in the script

lyric magnet
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So you're making a Ketchup Cake

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mk

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I'd advise trying to build a foundation first before you work through the intricacies of things

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Are there any specific interactions you would like to explore

livid cosmos
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I'd like there to be interactions with characters that aren't in any of the base 3

soft sage
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moonchild being one of the only sources of extra death turns it into a townsfolk

gossip is also crazy strong here for the same reason as it’s basically an each day artist

professor is way too strong here

lleech is sad with so many roles here, primarily virgin and knight

tinker feels random here

livid cosmos
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i see

lyric magnet
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I agree with Kenoboi's objections

soft sage
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Also yagga with gossip is really unfortunate for gossip since it’s impossible to tell what’s causing kills

lyric magnet
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DA seems like it really lacks an identity

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Overall

soft sage
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so gossip is either insanely OP or useless depending on what the demon is

lyric magnet
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Execution survival on a script where pacing is this consistent

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Could work if you shift things around a bit

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But as it is, that aspect of the script looks too half-baked to produce interesting results

livid cosmos
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okay fair

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I think one thing Id like to make it be similar to is the lack of execution kills

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which is why I like pacifist and DA

lyric magnet
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Theres a lot of frontloaded confirmation on this script

livid cosmos
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but then if leech was also there its hard

lyric magnet
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Washerwoman Empath Nightwatchman Professor Virgin

lyric magnet
livid cosmos
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if it would be hard to be ran i should probably redo it

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theres a few roles id really really wanna keep

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which would be all demons beside imp, all minions beside DA, and nightwatchman and knight,

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I was thinking to add a widow in the game

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to fix day 1 roles

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but then there is a poisoner already

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so id probably have to take poisoner out for widow

lyric magnet
livid cosmos
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yeah sorry

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With pacifist its just a role I like as I enjoy when players don't know why people weren't executed which is why id wanna keep the pacifist

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and also have the DA in it too

soft sage
livid cosmos
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but this script isn't that good

lyric magnet
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The Pacifist's job isnt to cover for executions in such a way that all it does is create ambiguity

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That would make it an Outsider

livid cosmos
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honestly none have issues with bmr when its ran

lyric magnet
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Have they seen an alternative yet

livid cosmos
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you are correct though

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this would be the first script id be making for the group

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that would be new

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like out of the first 3

lyric magnet
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Imma just leave my flowchart here and move on because I really dont want to get too deep into this discussion

lyric magnet
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Any particular reason for keeping Nightwatchman and Knight?

summer scaffoldBOT
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Gave +1 Thanks to @lyric magnet (current: #456 - 50)

livid cosmos
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I wouldn't have to have both if its too overpowered

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its just two townsfolk roles ive enjoyed and would like them in a script

lyric magnet
lyric magnet
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Can't blame you for that one

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If you want to construct a script specifically surrounding those

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You can try augmenting their interactions

livid cosmos
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okay

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I think making a script atleast right now might be a bit too far out of my wheelhouse so i might check some customs online and see if they work

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but I do appreciate the help

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i think theres a lot more thought into creating them

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than i realised

lyric magnet
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yeah

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Scriptwriting is like most things