Short Story | Sci Fi | The Lone Starwatcher

[glacial drift]

Critique welcome.

[coarse crescent]

Just read through all of this and it sounds awesome but i might not be intellectual enough to grasp alot of the concepts inside the story. (im not good with fancy words basically)

i was browsing the server when i saw this and thought "huh short story might be a good one to read before sleeping" before i got hit with the monster of a story this is. some other guy said it in another post but " Be careful of spending so much time worldbuilding that you never get the story down on paper. " i think that applies here since like every line is 5 different factions and 3.14 new spaceships and a million words that dont even make sence to me

I also have a one question:

• Is clara a robot or an AI or a Spaceship?

Also would be amazing to have full lore to all the factions / nations mentioned + the multi-dimentional being Elysiux

overall sounds like a cool fiction concept ✅

[glacial drift]

Clara is an AI (Ship mind)
This is actually a pretty big world so i do understand how its confusing to fit all the fictional factions + contents into the story, good point tho

Eurelia (Typo there) would be the faction Clara belongs to

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Noticed a text issue. Ill fix the things and post em here.

[coarse crescent]

thank you for clarifying, would love to read more of this world in the future

[coarse crescent]

oh i see it makes more sence now

[glacial drift]

Maybe I should write some more short stories on the same world

Thanks for the encouragement too

[coarse crescent]

yeah it seems like a cool concept and expanding on it -even a little bit- would be interesting for you to write and fun for us to read