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tepid wraith Sep 11, 2025, 3:17 PM

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Woah So cool! 👏
I'm also writting a super hero séries

wicked drum Sep 11, 2025, 8:44 PM

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The Google Doc is locked. You need to set permissions, so we can see it.

wicked drum Sep 14, 2025, 8:32 PM

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It's still locked. 🙁

wind stag Sep 15, 2025, 9:42 PM

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I’m intrigued by your series intro! The Evolved concept and a society shaped over centuries, with a Incredibles/Marvel vibe, really grab me. The genre mix Action, Sci-Fi, Comedy, Superhero, YA, Crime, Thriller is ambitious, and I’m curious how it blends. Knowing it’s a work in progress and not a comic book sets clear expectations. I’d love to read it and give feedback as a real person count me in! I’ll check the Google Doc and share my thoughts.

eternal vault Sep 15, 2025, 11:38 PM

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wicked drum It's still locked. 🙁

I have unlocked it

eternal vault Sep 15, 2025, 11:38 PM

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tepid wraith Woah So cool! 👏 I'm also writting a super hero séries

Feel free to message me and you should be able to view it now

wicked drum Sep 16, 2025, 12:39 AM

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Nice prologue. Good pictures in my head. A few tense and flow issues, but easy enough to fix.
Question: Do you prefer AE or BE? I see the spellings seems to be AE but the spellchecker is set to BE.
I will continue to read when I get back into the office tomorrow.

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