#LIFE OF DEPRAVITY REVISED VERSION

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silver wigeon
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ignore gramatical mistakes

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https://www.webnovel.com/book/32289781000674505

Webnovel.com
LIFE OF DEPRAVITY

"Life of Depravity" is a dark fantasy tale centered around Nayra, a reincarnated soul in a cycle of rebirth. Originally from Earth, Nayra finds himself reborn in a world where power is measured by chakras, spiritual gates that grant supernatural abilities.Key Elements:Reincarnation Cycle: Nayra possesses the Sudarshana Chakra, a forged...

tropic narwhal
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☹️

silver wigeon
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@tropic narwhal what happen?

tropic narwhal
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I don't have access to WebNovel from here at work.
A Google Doc would work...if you want.

silver wigeon
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Ohh okk

tropic narwhal
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No problem, but I can't get there from here.

silver wigeon
silver wigeon
tropic narwhal
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Wow...

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I wasn't expecting much, especially with the way the into started off with just a bunch of facts, no action, no dialogue, not even any characters. I assumed it was going to be a list of notes to the author but no real story...

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Then I kept reading.
Yes, there were a few places where edits need to be made (it's obvious that English isn't your native language), but it only needs a little bit of clean up.

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I'm in the middle of a couple things right now, but when I get a free moment, I'm going to give it a better read...with edits.
I'd like to work with you on this. 🙋‍♂️

silver wigeon
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now u can read it....

tropic narwhal
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The PDF looks to have the same content as the TXT.
There are some formatting issues...I'm not certain where there should be breaks with titles for each new section.

silver wigeon
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ohh i think its not fully given thats why i give u this...

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well then... other then english and tense mistakes did THE STORY is bad or not?