late crane
I can't access WattPad, but from the quick description above, I have a concern about the names of the characters...both lead characters have names starting with the same letter.
It has been said (jokingly, of course) that you cannot have more than 26 characters in a book because every character has to have a name that starts with a different letter (to avoid confusing the reader).
shell lance
tbh if someone is confused by two characters having a name that starts with the same letter they prob shouldnt be reading as a hobby
anyways i'll check it out when i have time i like royalty stories
proud sable
The Dukes Deception (The Whittington Chronicles Book: 1) - Historical Fiction
shell lance
i aint readin allat
late crane
Let me extract the important part:
Avoid naming characters with the same alphabetic letter. If you have characters named Amy, Arthur, Allen and Annie, readers could become confused. Vary the first letter or pronunciation so your readers will be more apt to remember each person.
That was just the first site I found when I did a quickie search.
shell lance
too late
i have many same letter characters
Yo wait the guy deleted the story link i wanted to check it out 😭
late crane
Yo wait the guy deleted the story link i wanted to check it out 😭
You may be able to access it on WattPad.
Check out the link in his profile.
