Looking for mild or major criticism / critiques! Opening paragraph, i have the whole first chapter down, just wanna see how the first paragraph vibes before i continue on and get commited!
#Dystopian story!
weak dirge
twilit prawn
I had a bit of confusion at the beginning, but I figure it out.
I did a re-write...do you want me to post it here or in DM?
weak dirge
I did a re-write...do you want me to post it here or in DM?
dm would be good!