sage salmon
Title: The Spirit in the Treehouse
Genre: Fiction Drama
Word count: 3524
So basically, I wrote this story and am still editing the ending but was looking for some opinions to improve or just general reviews on what you enjoyed or disliked. Would appreciate and be thankful for any help whatsoever!!!
Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-aR7r6kvsZHcMF372nGYSxO3ENKoXE1vPKbmnNowb0A/edit?usp=sharing
tame patrol
Title: The Spirit in the Treehouse
Genre: Fiction Drama
Word count: 3524
So bas...
Looks a bit play by play
sage salmon
Looks a bit play by play
oh.. like in what sense?
fluid urchin
Wait- is this based on the story I wrote? It's incredibly similar to one I finished some time ago (if you're confused, find "A Special Short Story", one of my posts on here)
Just to clarify, I'm not upset; I'd just like to know
sage salmon
Wait- is this based on the story I wrote? It's incredibly similar to one I finis...
I don't remember exactly, but I kinda read a story here and got inspired to write one myself. I think it might be yours cuz I don't remember who posted it
I hope it's not too similar or it has offended you, I just liked the premise and took it as inspiration
fluid urchin
Ah, alright. It doesn't offend me, dw
tame patrol
oh.. like in what sense?
Me slept off sorry, but each scene feels direct and monotonous somewhat
Not completely but kinda