#Umbra

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It's not always easy to have much to say about such a short piece but at least this starts with action which makes it more engaging than it would be if nothing happened.

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analog raven
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Put it in Google Docs. That way people who want to leave comments on specific sentences can put them in the document

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# analog raven It's not always easy to have much to say about such a short piece but at least t...

umbra

I woke up to a typical morning, knowing I had to head to school. However, as I stepped outside, the ground suddenly began to tremble. To my astonishment, a colossal monster emerged, its sheer size striking fear into me. Despite my initial shock, a surge of determination coursed through my body, and I mustered the confidence to dash up its massive arm.

And then delivered a final blow, I woke up again

Samurai: “I wish my life was more like that”

And then he looked outside, to see the bright sun. As I got up to walk to school to find legacy the sky started to turn purple, my clothes started to change I had a long black coat with black boots with a bit of red on my chest area and black pants there where three items on the ground a katana,hat and a mask I picked them up

Samurai: “what’s happening what with this get up”

As I stepped outside, I was greeted by the warm rays of the sun. The day seemed ordinary as I prepared to head to school. But suddenly, the sky began to change, shifting to a surreal shade of purple. To my surprise, my clothing transformed into a long black coat with matching boots and red accents on my chest, complemented by black pants. On the ground before me lay three intriguing items: a katana, a hat, and a mysterious mask. I picked them up, feeling a sense of destiny.

As I donned the attire, I couldn’t help but wonder aloud, “What’s happening? What’s with this get-up?”

With a sense of urgency, I made my way to school, desperately hoping to find my friend Legacy. In the distance, the school loomed, but it was far from a typical morning. The air was filled with screams and cries for help. Then, I spotted Legacy, wearing a bandanna and a completely different outfit from his usual school attire. I shouted to get his attention.

“Legacy! Over here!”

Legacy turned his head, visibly surprised that I was still alive.

“You’re alive?” he exclaimed.

“Yeah, I’m okay. What’s going on?” I inquired.

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“I really don’t know,” Legacy replied, his voice filled with uncertainty. “The sky turned purple, and now there are monsters everywhere.”

“Monsters!?” I echoed, alarmed.

“Yeah, monsters,” Legacy confirmed, his gaze fixed on a menacing creature in the distance.

“What should we do, Samurai?” he asked.

With determination in my eyes, I responded, “We have to fight back.”

In a swift motion, I charged toward the enemy, my katana in hand, donning my hat and mask, fully embracing the legacy of my warrior ancestors. Legacy, my trusty companion, flanked the monster, providing the perfect distraction. With precision, I slashed my katana across the monster’s chest, bringing an end to its menacing presence.

Legacy: “We’ve done it.”

Samurai: “Yes, we have.”

With a sense of accomplishment, we shared a victorious high-five.

Out of nowhere, I was hit with an intense headache, my mind felt distorted, and I briefly glimpsed into an alternate universe where everyone seemed to be in agony. In that strange world, I spotted a figure resembling me, but with glowing red eyes and long dreadlocks. Just as suddenly as it began, I snapped back to reality, left questioning whether it was real or if I had somehow caused it.

Legacy: “wake up”

Samurai: ”am awake am awake”

Legacy: “what happened to u man”

Samurai: “i don’t really know man”

Samurai: “I just blacked out and a person who looked just like me was in my head”

Legacy: “ok let just find a place to lay low”

Samurai: ok let’s go

End of chapter one a twist

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…Confusion