First comment: It's formatted as if it were non-fiction. Indent the pgphs with no space between for fiction.
#Fanboy Flames
sudden jay
tall laurel
Um, no.
tall laurel
First comment: It's formatted as if it were non-fiction. Indent the pgphs with n...
You might consider a different tack, my man. Just saying.
sudden jay
As the author, you have the final say in anything you create...
BUT if everyone else in the world is doing it one way, and you're doing it a different way, you'll certainly stand out. Hopefully for the good!
You can either keep with tradition or blaze your own path.
tall laurel
BUT if everyone else in the world is doing it one way, and you're doing it a dif...
That has absolutely nothing to do with what I mentioned. The way something is said is just as vital as its format.
sudden jay
I'm confused. You took issue with HOW I gave my feedback?