dark ocean
Title : To the light
Genre : non fiction self help
I am looking for critiques and reviewers
Reviewers can comment here i will be happy if you will review it
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_CDN6z8pbgb9neimRVk5mBY5AS0cnw9k6Vj9DK5CNoI/edit?usp=drivesdk
It will be continued this is just the chapter 1 and starting of ch 2 i have written till now
This is the manuscript
dark ocean
If someone reads it pls tell me
amber sky
I love it when the sky makes me feel important and insignificant.
Oh my god Agnus Smith, look at how much you have grown now
My eyes filled up with tears as all the memories of my childhood, my teenage years came rushing to my brain.
terrified to even stand in sight of him.
Why does it feel so slow yet at the same time I feel like my heart is racing out of my chest?
I just went to bed to sleep for now.
am 15乁| ･ 〰 ･ |ㄏ
and, bro, mind it, you're compassionate. evenings truly give limerence mere.
as a teen, I gotta say that my dad's sight too is terrifying. young teens would probably like it, as I did. I've 'pasted' all of writings that I just loved...they're like the things I always feel; o was just unable to word em all. you, undisputedly, helped me (yea, cz tis anything but of self-help genre)
(i don't think it was a review, nvm)
dark ocean
I love it when the sky makes me feel important and insignificant.
Oh my god Agn...
Hey, thanks that you liked it i did not know that these lines are so impactful.
The only fear i had was that teens won't like it but now that you told me its better now