I am working on creating more original works such as this, but I am curious what the community's thoughts are.
#The Hero and the Ancient Tree
lyric latch
Would say try to make the voices more distinct. I can tell who's who but really the tree doesn't sound all too different from the hero. If you can try to go deeper or in some manner make your voice more intense, and maybe speak in a slower pace, it would be more impactful.
limber marsh
Would say try to make the voices more distinct. I can tell who's who but really ...
That’s a great critique!
How did you listen? In my headphones, the depth felt discernible.
I should have tested it on a phone speaker, too, though.