Long and confusing

[vital marsh]

Long and confusing

But good lore nonetheless

[umbral spade]

Yeah needs some work first draft for sure

[vital marsh]

Still bread tho

[weary siren]

your a pretty good writer dude

[umbral spade]

Thanks man... im pretty dumb, but was like man theres a lot of cool factions

I should add a bunch more factions and i want to tie hexian industries to the great war

[weary siren]

dude there are more then you even know

[umbral spade]

Yeah ?

[vital marsh]

A dime a dozen

[umbral spade]

Any ones that are up there. First day here

[vital marsh]

Ah a second year

[umbral spade]

I will try to post a better second draft haha

This weekend

Getting some ideas from Eridian

[placid folio]

Lol, I'll be happy to read it.

[umbral spade]

Thank you!

[velvet knoll]

Uh we dont do war maybe imply us but the merchandise of weapons and ect?

I dont think a blacksmither or a miner would be fighting lol