#Corruption: General Toxic dead

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desert skiff
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Very toxic

azure pike
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This idea sucks, I don’t think I need to explain why

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And also you said yes to your own post, downvote him boys

vestal glen
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New No farm

safe trail
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Hell yea!

azure pike
desert skiff
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Why are you doing this?

azure pike
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Because it sucks

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And you upvoted your own post

vestal glen
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This is just unexplainable bad

azure pike
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Usually I give constructive criticism but

vestal glen
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Like, it's not "this is bad because ---", it's just bad

azure pike
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This is so bad to levels I can’t even explain

vestal glen
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I've been trying to find a reason to downvote this because it's bad but I can't find a reason or explain why it's bad

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It just is

safe trail
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"brainss, go to the frontline and kick their asses-"

desert skiff
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Tell me what's bad and I'll fix it

vestal glen
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It's just bad

azure pike
safe trail
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fixing this post is harder than terraforming Jupiter

vestal glen
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Even rinas and vibrah voted No

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And I'mma be honest, I have never seen those 2 on this channel

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That's just how bad this is

azure pike
vestal glen
median garnet
azure pike
median garnet
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I usually go to General about miscellaneous stuff

azure pike
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Like if you didn’t see this post you’d think I was being salty for him upvoting his own post

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But when you take a look at it

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You understand what I mean

desert skiff
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You don't deserve respect

median garnet
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Poison Rocks

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Explain

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It has Uptime

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Less than 1/3 but still a lor

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lot

azure pike
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I’m being honest here

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This is so bad

median garnet
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And 950 Health

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Wow

azure pike
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That I could find the meaning of life before I could figure out how to fix this post

desert skiff
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Just say it's bad, nothing more, nothing less

median garnet
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Even My Jevil Idea Last Year that was horrendous

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Was actually Too Weak for the price

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(It was op)

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This however

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Is Cost Efficient

azure pike
median garnet
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desert skiff
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I want to know exactly what's bad

azure pike
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I just said

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The entire post

misty swallow
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give the guy a break

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hes probably new to balance changes

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and just wants to share raw ideas

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just like i did back then

desert skiff
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I don't have experience like you

misty swallow
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see?

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let him improve

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let him cook

vestal glen
desert skiff
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Tell me what's bad so I can improve it and benefit from your experience

misty swallow
vestal glen
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Like, we can't even explain what's bad, that's just how bad this is

desert skiff
vestal glen
desert skiff
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This doesn't make sense

vestal glen
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This is unexplainable bad

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Honestly, now that I look at this more clearly, I can tell what's wrong

desert skiff
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Looking at the basis of the idea, leave aside the side things, as the side things are subject to change

vestal glen
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Too much late game potential for an early-mid game ranged unit

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It's like making a spearton general, but making the spearton general be like griffon

misty swallow
vestal glen
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Doesn't fit the unit in any way, barely an investment when generals are pretty much supposed to be like investment, and too much late game power

vestal glen
misty swallow
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no

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im too drained to make ideas

vestal glen
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Okay

misty swallow
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im just reviewing for now

acoustic phoenix
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Nah Im kidding

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I like it

river stump
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Time for a criticism:

vestal glen
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Grand caster is summoning an essay

river stump
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first, the concept itself is very basic, its strategy is too dumbly direct, its not like the Marrowkai who has abilities for specific purposes, its not like Zarek who has interesting traits like high hp as light, multi-unit training bonus, or standing at the back as a pure melee unit, its not like Spearos who’s skills require combos, its not like royal siblings who’s skills affects their respective unit. this general is a direct merge of Egiant and Tdead, throws boulder, poison, and two simple AOE skills, not only that but Egiants and Tdeads is such a weird choice as they are too unrelated and serve different purpoee, their only similarity is being a high HP heavy ranged unit, which is not enough reason, then the idea itself having no unique strategy to prove itself. then theres not even a lore for this unit.

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second of all, the post itself.
yeah he liked his own post, not a formal thing to do.
next is questionable things, why 55s training time when every other general is at 50s? it has a giant tag, you must double down the confirmation if it will be affected by monstrosity because thats a big info. it is a ranged unit, you should say what is the range. its two abilities are AOE poison whats the AOE limit of both abilities? whats the AOE size? how much poison does toxic gas apply? what is the unit’s size? literally same as Giants?

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Lastly, Balancing.
its literally an Egiant but slightly better stats. plus instead of the broken catapult it has 2 abilities. its both a giant and a dead, so it benefits from 45% HP increase of monstrosity and 20% Health bonus of Rune of Reanimation, thats between 1500k to 2000k Hp. That is too much for someone that respawn. pair this unit with Monstro, TT, RoR and GG a one man army, you can bring other supportive cards like Marrow, Acid rain, HHW and its even harder to fight against. and BTW marrowkai when defeated walks slower compared to other generals, this being a slow chaos, giant, dead you didn’t confirm how fast it walks when defeated.

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This unit is not unique, not creative, I won’t bring this card because of a unique strategy, not because I like the concept, but because Its easy strong, which is not a good thing,

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I am pretty sure this wall text can be simplified a lot, but im too sleepy to think

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basically its concept is too simple, balancing wise its too easy strong, presentation is low because of missing information and worded badly.

and also I see the solutions to balancing it are too simple/lazy that its just questionable and bad

cerulean crow
river stump
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im definetely unable to use some terms that will simplify my essay

acoustic phoenix
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God damn mans going overkill

flat urchin
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Marrowkai is better

misty swallow
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revivebomber_troll

brisk garnet
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Booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

vestal glen
brisk garnet
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Verry bad fan idea

coral zodiac
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What even was it

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What are the stats

river stump
# coral zodiac What even was it

its an Egiant, with nearly identical Egiant stats, with the catapult mode replaced by two abilities, first one makes the next shot apply poison, and the second one is F.I.G’s acid rain rework, with both abilities having around 20s cd. its tags are general, chaos, giant AND dead

sacred sedge
# desert skiff <:xiphoshuh:1095503533324894248>

Don't worry
My posts were worse at the beginning
My unique faction tower idea is the worst

Basically I faced a juggarcher that day and was a bit salty at that and that effected my idea effectively making mixed pretty bad while order and chaos were super strong

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You will learn how to balance things as time goes on
One important thing is imagine yourself fighting the unit,upgrade, spell, general

open violet
desert skiff
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Stone Giant: Dead
Corruption: Toxic dead

sacred sedge
desert skiff
sacred sedge
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Now you can go and create ideas
I will guide you through the journey don't worry

desert skiff
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I am not good at drawing. If I were good at drawing, I would have drawn the shape that was in my imagination

sacred sedge
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If you need help with something you can invite me to the post

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I will try to help as much as I can

desert skiff
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Thanks

river stump
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many people accepts request in making arts

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ive seen many posts with the art they asked to be done by someone else

sacred sedge
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Some people are kinda shy
Remember the ripsmash?yeah I drew it myself and it was horrible
Both the idea and the drawing

acoustic phoenix
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casually fades into post

uh_oh Can I draw this idea for fun guys?

sacred sedge
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You can
It's not like it's gonna get
Copywrite striked or something

acoustic phoenix
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Tomorrow

acoustic phoenix
sacred sedge
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Basically I created a better riprider for chaos
And made it an idea
Obviously it wasn't very good and now I have reworked it to being a bit more unique

acoustic phoenix
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Nice

sacred sedge
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Yeah I've basically abandoned that post
It's kinda like a middle child now

acoustic phoenix
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Rip

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Pun intended

sacred sedge
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Rip in pepperonis

coral zodiac
acoustic phoenix
sacred sedge
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Oh nooooo