MOTH WITH A KNIFE | GB Studio | Page 1

hardy widget Apr 4, 2024, 4:55 PM

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For the catakiller stage.

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its a 1-bit gamejam so can only use 2 colors ❤️

autumn garden Apr 4, 2024, 5:33 PM

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looks rad!

hardy widget Apr 4, 2024, 5:34 PM

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im putting far too much effort into this XD

midnight bobcat Apr 4, 2024, 6:01 PM

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My mind has clearly spent too much time in the gutter, but I'd consider reworking what I'm assuming is meant to be that creature's tail?

hardy widget Apr 4, 2024, 6:01 PM

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what part? XD

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its a catapillar ❤️

midnight bobcat Apr 4, 2024, 6:03 PM

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um, the very phallic part in the front

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the title image has a similar issue that is drawing the eye somewhat...

hardy widget Apr 4, 2024, 6:06 PM

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midnight bobcat um, the very phallic part in the front

the knife? 😅

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OMG UR RIGHT XDD

midnight bobcat Apr 4, 2024, 6:06 PM

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where is the knife?

hardy widget Apr 4, 2024, 6:06 PM

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LET ME FIX THAT OMG

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help at all? 😅

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make it more obvious its a knife/sword XD

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also box art if ur curious :p

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this is way too high effort for a gamejam but whatever :p

midnight bobcat Apr 4, 2024, 6:08 PM

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an eggplant, for, um, scale

hardy widget Apr 4, 2024, 6:09 PM

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is it still not clear enough its a bended sword? XD

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how can i make it more clear its a um...sword XDD

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is this at all better? XD

midnight bobcat Apr 4, 2024, 6:10 PM

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i think its the , ahem, vein-iness to the right side. I'd straighten it and maybe adding a hilt above the hand to make it clear its not a separate object in the foreground. I thought it was meant to be like a huge snake tail originally

hardy widget Apr 4, 2024, 6:14 PM

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This better? xD

midnight bobcat Apr 4, 2024, 6:20 PM

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I'd rethink the pose to something like this maybe? Really hope I'm not coming off as rude modifying your art, feel free to ignore me!

hardy widget Apr 4, 2024, 6:21 PM

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honestly no! i appriciate it! can i actually use that? ❤️

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id love help! ill happily credit u!

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could u make it more knife shaped if thats okay? as u can probs tell i suck at drawing weapons ;w;

midnight bobcat Apr 4, 2024, 6:22 PM

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where did you get the art originally if you dont mind me asking?

hardy widget Apr 4, 2024, 6:22 PM

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heres the file ❤️ and i drew it ☺️ im good at body proportions, but..thats it 😅 my fault for only studying anatomy for like 2 years XD

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@midnight bobcat would that be okay? i get if not ☺️ i just cant draw weapons for crap ;-;

midnight bobcat Apr 4, 2024, 6:31 PM

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yeah no problem, here you go

hardy widget Apr 4, 2024, 6:32 PM

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awesome! ill credit u in the credits dw!!!!

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sorry i just really suck at drawing weapons XD

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Spoiler warning the final bosses name is Majestyk Monarch: The Shadowed Sovereign the Ultimate Butterfly Queen :p

midnight bobcat Apr 4, 2024, 6:36 PM

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no worries! and good luck with the project!

hardy widget Apr 4, 2024, 6:41 PM

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ty!! ill try to post as much as i can in here till i have fiinshed the project!

hardy widget Apr 5, 2024, 7:52 PM

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world map

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tried to add more detail

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think this is the finished version now!

#MOTH WITH A KNIFE