#Astroforce concept

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The name 'Astroforce' is too cool to leave as a one-off joke about remote control trains for Astrotrain. So, I'm gonna try and turn it into actual transformers.

To give Astrotrain something of an actual character (arc), he gets put in charge of a group of smaller transformers. Ones that he initally just sort of bosses around for a while, until a cataclysmic blunder causes half of them to lose their lives, and the other half to lose their respect for him.

These being 'cons that were to be tough enough to withstand atmospheric re-entry being...almost impressive how he lost half so quickly. Leaving him humiliated, but also shaken. Having never had actual control over others, and not realizing he was responsible for them, nor what it actually felt like to lose/fail them. He becomes much more protective over them, and undergoes a sort of maturation to leadership arc, but for a Decepticon.

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The deceased:
Quasar: The weapons expert and orbital sniper/bombardier. Something of a prankster.
Cometcatcher: The space gunner and defense officer. A bit of an edgy tryhard.
Turntable: Docking & stabilization expert. Somewhat optimistic, and had hope for Astrotrain to grow.
Tektite: The engineer, repairman, and material refiner. Treated being a Decepticon as just a blue-collar job.

The survivors:
Starsail: The lazy, spacey, near stoner-like solar power gatherer and energon synthesizer. He prefers to drift through the cosmos or orbit, and just soak in the views & rays. Transforms into a solar array module, and coal tender.

Junction: The weary, nervous navigator and orbital controller. Deeply traumatized by losing half the squad, and secretly clingy of his remaining brothers, though he covers it with snark and backhanded remarks. Belittled sometimes, called 'Junk-tion.' Transforms into a low-gravity landing module, and freight car.

Collider: The bookish, uptight, and slightly snobby sensor & surveillance expert, who frequently gets into arguments with Junction about where they should go, or how to get there. Has aspirations to become a scientist, but frequently just gets stuck as engineer and repair technician. Transforms into a scanner/telescope module, and an observation car.

Shortwave: The grumpy but quick-witted communication expert, who acts as the 'adult' among the astroforce, and the defacto sub-leader. Sometimes enjoys messing with enemy communication systems to relax. Wishes he could switch around to work for Soundwave, but refuses to abandon his remaining brothers. Transforms into a communications module, and kaboose.

gray bridge
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This would likely be very difficult to implement as an actual toy, so best left to non-physical media and comic books

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@deep smelt

deep smelt
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;n; aaaa

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An idea for how the disaster could go, is that working with Turbolance, to build up a solar array on Mercury--which gets attacked by the Autobots. In the chaos of the fight, the Astroforce gets wounded, and their shielding gets deeply cracked. A stray energon shot misses, and hits the sun, causing a mini-solar flare that breaks through the cracked shielding, and causes them to burn to death.

As they burned, Turntable simply gave a hopeful smile to Astrotrain as he perished. The triple-changer suffers nightmares of it.

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@icy narwhal Care to share notes? I stumbled upon your pic of Hotbox, and like it!

icy narwhal
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Well...

Hotbox is one of the many Transporters on Cybertron, she is very quick to anger and quite the sadistic bot. After being convinced by Astrotrain (no design yet), she, Electra, Thrash (wip), and her brother Smokebox (no design yet), joined the Astroforce to scout out the many pieces of Megatron that was scattered to many far off places. With the final pieces supposedly on our planet.

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My au is a little more simple... Closely relating to G1 (mostly because I can't really write anything cohesive lmao)

deep smelt
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owo

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@open moth

open moth
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Hello

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Thought you'd like this.

open moth
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🔥

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Very nice

gray bridge
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And I just remembered something I was going to add..

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While they don't combine in the typical sense, they can empower Astrotrain in unique ways, by linking up with him--much like Minicons in Armada

open moth
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Absolute cinema

raven plumeBOT
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quarot has been warned

Reason: Duplicated text

gray bridge
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wtf

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Huuurgh.

open moth
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Ii also had an astrotrain idea but with a tender

raven plumeBOT
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quarot has been warned

Reason: Duplicated text

open moth
gray bridge
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steering, growing, energon, and comm jamming

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okay that went through

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The discord won't let me post, reddit won't let me post. What am i doing wrong?

open moth
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Duplication of text apparently

gray bridge
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of text I made in a DM with someone else??

open moth
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It wad in a dm

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You are getting snipped by the nemesis bot

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And reddit,

Idk

gray bridge
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Will a picture work?

open moth
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Yes

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It's picking up "enables him" being used repeatedly

gray bridge
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It could have been more specific, than just saying "don't send the same messaege over and over again!"

open moth
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True

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Also wanna hear my astrotrain hot take

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It's kinda short really

gray bridge
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sure

open moth
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Ok so astrotrains train mode is based off of a jnr d51 which has a tender

Astrotrain does not have on however

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My idea is he gets it and basically it's used similarly to optimus prime trailer

gray bridge
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I think that's an awesome idea

open moth
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A weapons holder and also other gadgets

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in the astroforce concept, Starsail transforms into a tender

open moth
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Yes

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I like the idea the whole force turns into a train

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But what about the deceased ones

What did they turn into

gray bridge
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I hadn't really decided. I guess Quasar would have turned into a cannon car

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Turntable would be a passenger car

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Cometcatcher would turn into an armored/gun placement car

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Turntable would be an Airlock/EVA hatch module

open moth
gray bridge
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Thinking on it...

open moth
gray bridge
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go ahead

open moth
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Crane car

gray bridge
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Yes, I agreed that would be a good car mode.

open moth
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🔥

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For module ideas you're on your own tho sorry

gray bridge
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Ah, and for space modules, Tektite would turn into an arm/Mobile Servicing System Module

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Quasar would be some kind of (ideally fictional) orbital bombardment module
Cometchatcher would be a form of gun/missile turret

open moth
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Peak

gray bridge
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And for atmospheric re-entry, they all link up in a train line, with AT at the front, looking like some kind of segmented missile. ...Or they just ride inside him.

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One last idea: While Collider (I'm undecided on male or female, but very Hermione coded) is stuffy and uptight, they have a secret passion for Karaoke and Nightcore

gray bridge
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And another change: Starsail is initially a bit spacey and inattentive, but after losing half, he becomes a depressed energon drunk.

open moth
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Astrotrain the drunk depressed father

gray bridge
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initially a bully, then becoming a protective papa

open moth
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Real

gray bridge
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His redemption is him willingly sacrificing himself to save them from Arcee

open moth
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Does astro die?

gray bridge
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I'm not sure. If not, he would be captured.

open moth
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oh yeah

open moth
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Dies... they avenge him by killing arcee

gray bridge
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The other cons would probably be part of it, seeing Astrotrain as an important...bus.

gray bridge
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Octane would be talking shid about him, the whole way, until Turbolance gets a free moment to kneecap him.

open moth
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LOL

gray bridge
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There are plenty of projects that Turbolance is put on, that require fuel from Octane--who is a stingy ass. Necessitating Astrotrain to help by shaking him down.

open moth
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Gotta get the fuel somehow

gray bridge
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And formal requisition forms from Starscream, Shockwave, or MEGATRON aren't good enough.

open moth
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Wait who's turbolance

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an OC of mine. Basically an engineer, technician, weaponsmith, and comedic straight man to the Decepticons

open moth
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Oh

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At the risk of going on a tangent, here's my design for him.

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And oh, right.

open moth
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Love you gave shortwave a conducer hat

gray bridge
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It's something I love in transformer designs, where their bot mode evokes what the vehicle mode is about (like hot shot resembling a race car driver)

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Turbolance would be in the project that reconfigures the 8 new recruits into the Astroforce

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Junction also has an LED screen for his eyes

gray bridge
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And Starsail... I'm not entirely decided on the design, as it looks a bit more fitting for Tektite

open moth
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True

gray bridge
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Welp, i need to call it a night.

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Later!

open moth
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Gn!

gray bridge
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I drew the rest of em