#📝project-feedback

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drowsy sorrel
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Anyone got any tips to improve this, mainly on typography side, i hate current typography
-# ik its not even just took a screenshot of project

glacial grove
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weren't

drowsy sorrel
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true that might help

glacial grove
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make the top left text bigger

drowsy sorrel
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yeah

glacial grove
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since there's nothing going on on that side

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find your purpose seems good but idk

drowsy sorrel
unique lance
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pen tool and the little bézier curves are my worst enemy

glacial grove
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i'm good with the pen tool

unique lance
# drowsy sorrel ??

looks better . but the text on the bottom is pretty small and hard to read. the hard to read part might be because of discord compression

glacial grove
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Here's a demo I made

glacial grove
drowsy sorrel
unique lance
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what i’ve been trying to focus on when i design is not rely on words to always translate your message.

maybe play with the size and placement of “boats weren’t made for land” and find your purpose as i am assuming the “find your purpose” is the message you’re trying to send with this.

i like the “not everything belongs everywhere” text too

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @unique lance (current: #1041 - 1)

unique lance
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or one more opinion then im done

ur photo already has the boat on land, so maybe completely omit the “boats don’t belong on water” since your photo is already saying that and replace it with “not everything belongs everywhere.” followed by “find ur purpose.”

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also how are your guys demoing so fasttt

glacial grove
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Another stupid thing I made

drowsy sorrel
glacial grove
glacial grove
drowsy sorrel
glacial grove
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yeah

unique lance
glacial grove
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Good! I can help out!

glacial grove
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I just took the text and stretched it

unique lance
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yay!! do you mind if i add you as a friend and we can talk design stuff? i think having someone i feel comfortable to share my stuff with will help me use it more

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actually nevermind i see you already requested let me accept lol

glacial grove
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I did

drowsy sorrel
glacial grove
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Should look like this

drowsy sorrel
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yeah

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when i use it it just makes it like smoky

glacial grove
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Turn the intensity down

drowsy sorrel
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i put it to 1% and i just makes it smoky

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i think i made it better but have some blank space now

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and does anyone know where i can find good high quality overlays

glacial grove
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Adobe has some

glacial grove
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Maybe make the boat a little bigger

drowsy sorrel
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why when i export it some of the colours change??

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from this:

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to this:

bleak echo
wraith epoch
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Trying something new with a collage style

bleak echo
# wraith epoch Trying something new with a collage style

Love the overall style and vibe...Tape cassette and Vinyl scales look a bit off (unless you intended to use them as background patterns)
I'd try placing the cassette above the Polaroids and enlarging both it and the record to show them at their actual size.
The object doesn't have to be fully visible, but the scale is important.

wraith epoch
novel comet
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Because the beackground and foreground are the same colour, I'm not sure what I should be focusing my attention on?

pulsar bison
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how about my design ?

novel comet
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Nice. - was it done all on photoshop?

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Additionally is it "on going" or "ongoing"?

pulsar bison
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ooh 😅😅

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im in learning an english language 😅

novel comet
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You're doing a great job! - I know plenty of people who can ONLY speak english and they would never have spotted that.

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My trick, if I'm having a dumb moment is to pretend I don't know the english word for something, even though I can only speak one language.

"Oh and also.... [forgets what I'm about to say]..... "Ah I don't remember the english term for this"

pulsar bison
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🤣

warm crater
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made logo design for food delivery

slate ermine
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nice job

warm crater
mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @slate ermine (current: #245 - 7)

slate ermine
glacial grove
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Top right

warm crater
mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #55 - 39)

glacial grove
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You’re welcome!

gaunt ruin
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Solid work both of you ❤️

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🔥

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Okay .. so these are all of my headers from before 2019

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I took like a 3 year break

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then came back quietly ... to make art in the dark

glacial grove
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that's a good layout

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i think $70 should be a little larger

gaunt ruin
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AI Adapted from photoshop artworks I made in the last 5 years

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Then, these are also recents, which ones are AI and which ones are done by hand .. ? At a certain point it begins to blur ... but .. I think that's the statement

gaunt ruin
calm helm
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how do you want feedback on ai works?

gaunt ruin
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Didn't think so

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I've been doing this for ~14 years, aint no way some skidmark is going to come in here and insult me, put your money where your mouth is, where's your work ?

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Pasificm is not a virtue, make no peace with evil, destroy it.

mossy heath
mossy heath
calm helm
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i’m just not really sure what he expects

mossy heath
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If the work looks good or no generally not necessarily the AI part

calm helm
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that’s not feedback. i believe jack corrected me on this. i believe i got warned for telling someone their stuff looked really bad.

mossy heath
calm helm
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thats what im saying. its not really their work. i have no idea where it stopped being theirs and where it started being ai's. feedback on "ai" work is thus worthless. plus - they can't even action the feedback. they either have to first recreate the ai changes in photoshop or carry on prompting the chatbot.

wooden oak
mossy heath
wooden oak
calm helm
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im not really antagonising anything. i think you just do not like any conversations at all that are not submitting to kissing the poster's ass. which is a shame because that does make it hard to improve - when people are restricted from telling you your work is in fact not very good

wooden oak
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And while we're at it... "footjobenjoyer" ? - Change your display name or you can leave the server.

wooden oak
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Keep running your mouth.

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I saw your comment and I think we're done here.

warped pond
# mossy heath

I love the gradient mapping you used here, both colors speak well for themselves. the one thing i did notice, which is not a huge deal, but will help with consistency is on the red one you have a textured background, but I noticed on the blue one its is just a gradient, I think if you added that texture on the blue it will add a little more depth that the blue one sort feels like it's missing. Otherwise this is a very cool set! I love the owls and I love the edgier aesthetic it takes on. it feels way more grungy, and gives the owl an allusive feel!

mossy heath
mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @warped pond (current: #1041 - 1)

warped pond
rain sluice
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A concept cover and fan art for All Tomorrow

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I turned Qu's and New machine's artworks to line art and made a mash

glacial grove
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could you add a soft inner glow to the bugs?

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otherwise nice job

rain sluice
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Bugs?

glacial grove
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I just edited this.

glacial grove
rain sluice
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Okk

rain sluice
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@wooden oak I made a project that doesnt incolve any political messages but its heavily inspired bu early soviet propaganda posters. Can i post it?

wooden oak
rain sluice
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There it goes

glacial grove
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it's pretty good

scarlet bough
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Idk if any1 here has seen the show but I made this poster for Call of the night lmk what u think

rain sluice
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That one was peak

glacial grove
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I've heard of it.

glacial grove
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Maybe make the background darker?

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A glow around the text?

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Nice job tho

scarlet bough
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Thanks appreciate it ❤️

scarlet bough
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I love you pfp btw DOOM is a great rapper

warped pond
# scarlet bough Idk if any1 here has seen the show but I made this poster for Call of the night ...

I really like it! Make sure to watch out for the margins tho, you are getting pretty close to the edges there with the text, also maybe make the girls face a little smaller? her chin is sitting off the page creating a odd composition, and it's a little disproportionate to the guys face. sorry i havent watched this one yet so idk the names, but I really like the style! Cool way to set the vibe with the split colors!

scarlet bough
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Ah i see yeah so just generally more central and work on the perspective

warped pond
# rain sluice There it goes

Great start! Try making the text the same hue of red as the image, and make sure to watch your margins, the text is too close to the edge especially on the top right side. For readability you want to make sure that you have enough space for all of your text to breathe. kittypeak You could also try playing around with expanding the red to the top and making some of the text black to create more of that strong contrast that those old propaganda posters used to have. Definitely something to play around with, but try it out and see how you feel about that! Also I know it's kinda hard to deal with but the image is really low resolution. I think you could rebuild that image as a vector really easily with image trace or the pen tool in Illustrator!

warped pond
jolly flame
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i feel like somethings missing but idk

scarlet bough
rain sluice
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That's 3 times upscaled btw 💀

glacial grove
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Maybe a glow/gradient fill on the text

jolly flame
warped pond
# scarlet bough Yeah ig even the professionals miss stuff like that lol

oh yea for sure, good design is invisible, bad design screams for attention! but its harder then it looks, I guarantee if you look around at all of the different pieces of graphic design you see in the world on a daily basis, you'll realize there is a lot more bad design then most realize ahahaha ive been cursed since one of my professors pointed that out to me lol

wraith epoch
novel comet
rain sluice
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Nope i js cant upscale it :/

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I tried like 3 methods already

novel comet
warped pond
# rain sluice How's it now?

yes, that its much more readable then it was before! One thing I am curious about is how you could work with the empty space around the text up top to create a pathway for your eyes to lead down your design. Maybe you could play around with layering the text with " Put Him" on a line above "On A"?
mmmmm now that I think of it, that might feel unbalanced. (worth a try to see how you feel about it tho)

You could use that space to create Repetition, and have "Put Him On A" stacked on top of itself 2-3 times. if you go that route play with the sizing.
Also, try filling more of the space on the bottom with "Leash" and see how that feels, you could make it larger to fill a little more of the black space on the sides + top and bottom, but remember to keep your margins in, alignment is key for a strong composition.

Inevitably whichever direction you go, there are lots of cool options to play around with! have fun with it!

novel comet
glacial grove
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Hi James!

novel comet
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Hello 👋

novel comet
# rain sluice Nope i js cant upscale it :/

Where you place that 'curve' determines how much goes red vs black... - too far on one side and the black overtakes the image! - Like a child who over enthusiastically 'coloured over the lines'.... - too far the other, and the dog turns smaller and skeletal!

warped pond
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Damn @novel comet , breaking out the videos too! That's awesome!!!
@rain sluice try those out fs

Ima go draw a bunch of sea animals for my final lmaooooo

novel comet
# jolly flame i feel like somethings missing but idk

What's the goal? - I mean I really dislike almost everything. (Sorry! - please read on though!) - The font is hard to read, I don't know what which is the most important heading. The bevelled text looks out of place. - The combination of black and white, plus colour is offputting, the text is the same colour as the background, and the paragraph column spacing is pretty wild too...

But I suspect that I'm not your 'target audience' for this particular piece of art.

rain sluice
glacial grove
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This looks good

mossy heath
jolly flame
glacial grove
mossy heath
# glacial grove

I like it I just think you should add a bit of motion blur to the text

glacial grove
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here's the og

mossy heath
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Yes just slightly to blend it in

glacial grove
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<@&548221840750018590> spam

mossy heath
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I got used to them telling us Mr beast is giving out money I actually thought this one was real😭😭

glacial grove
mossy heath
# glacial grove

Looks great I like how the text looks like it’s blending with the background more than before

glacial grove
glacial grove
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an alt version

mossy heath
glacial grove
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Thank you

warped pond
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Yessssss that last one is my favorite

warm crater
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Hey guys

abstract oxide
glacial grove
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Thank you

bleak echo
# glacial grove an alt version

Great alternative! Love the circle halftone effect... You might try to move the center of the circle pattern to a daker place
(in between the wrists or forearms)... I find its placement too obvious and distracting. Other than that, it's a great job!

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @bleak echo (current: #6 - 1179)

glacial grove
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The blue/green gradient map did a lot of heavy lifting 😅

bleak echo
glacial grove
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Very useful for coloring

glacial grove
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I like this.

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Here's the .PSD file if anyone wants to make some changes.

glacial grove
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Right is mine

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The goal was to make t look more dramatic.

warped pond
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long story short it's a homework assignment that i got a little distracted with lmaooo PlanetDownvote

glacial grove
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I like how selective the pink is

abstract oxide
# warped pond

Really cool design.
Are the pink elements supposed to be hit by light or glowing? If so, perhaps a little glow around them in places where they are illuminating the blue parts.

warm crater
warm crater
glacial grove
mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @warm crater (current: #199 - 9)

blazing night
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any suggestions?

glacial grove
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It looks good

warped pond
glacial grove
warped pond
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For the most part, I drew it in fire alpaca, and then moved it into illustrator and photoshop for lighting, color, and texture

glacial grove
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It’s very impressive

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How long did it take?

gaunt gyro
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Used lightroom and photoshop for these, would love to hear some thoughts on it and would appreciate any constructive feedback on how can i improve 🙏

lavish flame
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A project i did called
“Between Bloom and Blood”
And here is a little description
Between bloom and blood, destiny doesn’t hesitate.
It grows in silence, then speaks in red.
A field can look peaceful—
until you remember what it has witnessed.
This is not just fate.
This is the cost of it.
کپشن (فارسی):
میان شکوفه و خون، سرنوشت تردید نمی‌کند.
در سکوت رشد می‌کند، اما به رنگ سرخ سخن می‌گوید.
یک دشت می‌تواند آرام به نظر برسد—
تا وقتی به یاد بیاوری چه چیزهایی دیده است.
این فقط سرنوشت نیست،
بهای آن است.

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Let me know your thoughts

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And questions 🙏

glacial grove
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I like it

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Good contrast

abstract oxide
abstract oxide
loud lynx
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yo mandem. Any suggestions? and rate out of 10

glacial grove
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It’s a good start

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I like the torn paper effect you did

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But I have a lot of criticism

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Maybe crop them both more so you can see the player more

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And put the crying logo up

loud lynx
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I was also half confusde making it

glacial grove
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Just did

warped pond
glacial grove
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Figures 😂

warped pond
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lmaoooooo

bleak echo
# loud lynx yo mandem. Any suggestions? and rate out of 10

Who is the guy on the right? IShowSpeed? Is it really necessary for it to be so big and take up so much space?
Messi is in the middle but very tiny, Ronaldo image is cut on all sides...
I'd try to highlight the two players more (maybe we should choose different images)...
The torn-paper effect is a good idea, but I'm not sure it's easy to apply effectively to these images in a vertical format... Any reason for this format? Instagram post/story?

abstract oxide
abstract oxide
mossy heath
abstract oxide
# mossy heath

I like your design. I'm not saying my alteration is an improvement. I thought it could be interesting to add some variety to the lighting.

mossy heath
jolly flame
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WIP but its supposed to be ralph lauren, with the different styles i need ideas to bring this all together

gentle horizon
glacial grove
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Great job

jolly flame
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This is what it looks like harmonized and with a brownish grain (added text and might add a paper cut affect)

glacial grove
tardy orbit
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hows this yall

glacial grove
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Otherwise I like it

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It’s really good!

oak bloom
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I am working through the designs for a new artisanal page I am designing focused on invoking more understanding and empathy in the viewers every day life through pieces of literature, poems, scenes from movies & music, that show the brightest colours humanity offers. If you see any errors in these or ways to improve please let me know

oak bloom
glacial grove
abstract oxide
mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @mossy heath (current: #1041 - 1)

loud lynx
loud lynx
mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #14 - 292)

loud lynx
loud lynx
glacial grove
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The one in the middle

abstract oxide
marsh furnace
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Thoughts on this?? Purely new to photoshop and this is the 2nd thumbnail I've ever made. any changes or additions??!

glacial grove
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Great job btw

marsh furnace
marsh furnace
mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #48 - 45)

glacial grove
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:)

bleak echo
marsh furnace
terse bluff
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Hey yall what do you think

oak bloom
# terse bluff Hey yall what do you think

Great Job on the definition and lighting overall thats a 10/10 and one of the most important features. As far as the background, make it more Michael possibly pop it out with flare. Go look through his art style, theres so much gold and dramatic black and clean edges

terse bluff
mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @oak bloom (current: #1041 - 1)

oak bloom
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PFP and banner for something I am starting across social media

slate ermine
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nicee

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great job

oak bloom
mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @slate ermine (current: #199 - 9)

warm crater
bleak echo
warm crater
wooden oak
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The background is very 'busy' and the characters are getting lost in it. If the characters are the point of the design, they don't really stand out at all. Also, it screams AI generated. It looks like a GPT Image 2 generation. Then you put the YouTube logo and text on it.

wooden oak
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OK. Well, the wallpaper looks like a GPT 2 image. It has that "look" to it.

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And as I said, the characters are getting lost in all of that background detail.

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Also, if the point of it is promoting this person, their name is tiny in the middle compared to the rest of it.

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And its just plain white text. I would perhaps spend a bit more time on that.

rose monolith
bleak echo
# warm crater Any feedback?

I love the colour contrast between the vibrant red strawberry and the green background.
The subtle shadow beneath the strawberry adds a nice sense of depth, preventing the design from looking too flat.
I love the font choice, and the overlapping leaves add a nice touch.

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To match the subtle texture of the background, I would try giving the text a "stamped" or subtle distressed look.

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Overall, it’s a very clean, professional-looking piece. 💯

wooden oak
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I would attempt to brighten the characters and darken the background so they stand out more. Also, make the person's name, larger and more prominent in the image. Again, so that it stands out against the background. I'm not saying this is end solution; these are just suggestions.

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This looks decent. I would get rid of this "Authentic M&M's logo inside every bag" because that has no meaning and the company wouldn't include that.

rose monolith
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How y'all think of this

brazen quartz
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I like how the hair looks

glacial grove
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Cool

mossy heath
wooden oak
# mossy heath

This is a cool design. It has a somewhat interesting layout. However, I think it lacks tension and drama. I would perhaps consider making the dragon attacking the castle. Maybe breathing fire / raining down fire on it.

mossy heath
wooden oak
mossy heath
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Can you send me that dragon?

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Thank you

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak (current: #2 - 3338)

wooden oak
mossy heath
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yes thank you

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Did you use a brush for the fire?

wooden oak
jolly flame
oak bloom
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It doesn’t look like something they’d use so not really

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I believe I finally have finished my graphics for a media company I am starting focused on expressing humanities heart at a G and PG 13 rated level.

oak bloom
# jolly flame

Honestly could use more natural placements. I like the style all together though, maybe try shaping up the font a little tighter in clarity of subject too, but all in all it’s pretty original I like how expressive and intentional everything feels

warm crater
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which one is better?

gaunt ruin
unique lance
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international nurses week graphic i made for the non profit i work for :)) simple work but always fun

rose monolith
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How's the poster? I'm making it for my client

abstract oxide
abstract oxide
# rose monolith How's the poster? I'm making it for my client

For me this is a pretty solid design. Nice work.
It does feel a little busy. Both the image and the graphics are quite colourful and competing for attention. Personally I would simplify the colour scheme within the graphics by possibly...

  • Have solid lines of colour as opposed to blocks of two or three colours
  • Have the icons as a single colour.
  • etc...
unique lance
mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #14 - 293)

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #14 - 294)

abstract oxide
abstract oxide
rose monolith
mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #14 - 295)

abstract oxide
abstract oxide
ashen mica
rose monolith
abstract oxide
mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @rose monolith (current: #1041 - 1)

rose monolith
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alright it's good

bleak echo
# ashen mica

Strong starting point for a premium automotive advertisement
The car is quite dark and blends into the background. Dark cars often pop more against brighter backgrounds or during the "golden hour"...

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And it looks so small, even though it should be the star of the show.

bleak echo
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@ashen mica : Example of @rose monolith shows you some improvements (Car size and positionning (Rule of third), Background brightness (Contrasting with the Black car), Use of Caps letters and hierarchy for Headline and tag line, Call toaction button not using the past tense (should be Explore Now), Negative space between elements offering Breathing room on the left...

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Your design is a great starting point, but it could really stand out with a few tweaks. Good luck

rose monolith
mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @bleak echo (current: #6 - 1191)

ashen mica
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@rose monolith I MADE THIS FROM THE GAME FROM ROBLOX AND TURN IT INTO THE REALISTIC USED BY GOOGLE GEMINI AI.

ashen mica
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@rose monolith BEFORE AND AFTER

wooden oak
mossy heath
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I ended up keeping the old concept cuz I didn’t find a way to add the fire but I’ll use the dragon for another concept I have in mind

gaunt ruin
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~250 layers

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Just going to start attaching layer count now .. so people don't misinterpret my AI workflows

glacial grove
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This looks nice

glacial grove
gaunt ruin
mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #47 - 46)

glacial grove
normal spoke
# gaunt ruin

The Art itself looks very nice. maybe look that some parts are consistent. e.g. the rose has a sharp bloom, but blurred leaves and stem.
Also you have the Text "Commissions now: open" but for what? THEN there is the little line that says Custom Photoshop art. When people look for Custom Photoshop Art that they want to pay for often they look for a Name that sticks out or the Art itself. maybe try some other Headline.
There is some rectangular "Play" Button on the Top left, some skull-art and then Text. What exxactly is the Log, beause right now the "Play Button" is the dominant piece ... a bit confusing
The Art itself is very nice, but also it looks after a while like its always the same. Always skull, allways in the middle, always lots of color, etc. so yes, its your Art, but when looking for commission people are also looking for more variations what you can do. E.g. if I would like your style, but I want my dog in that style I would not know how THAT would look like. Also would you ONLY do that kind of style or is there also other styles? The Line "Pricing Guidelines" looks a bit lost. The "Buttons" under the Artworks suggest something with Games, not very consistant. Maybe try if your Name with the addition of "Rareghost-Artwork" or so would work.
Hope that helps.

visual urchin
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This is my first creation with Photoshop. Yes, I love MMA, LOL.

Anyways. I would appreciate all criticism on how I can improve.

gaunt ruin
mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke (current: #20 - 120)

gaunt ruin
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trying something new with the typography because I genuinely didn't like the text before ...

normal spoke
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In Essence you made nothing better IMHO 😉

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Now you have on top 5 blocks with no main-info and no guidance. Logo, Name of the Company and/or User Name, Slogan. NOTHING MORE.

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Also never cover text with anything. Doing so renders it unreadable and worthless. (e.g. green marked area)

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All the light-greenish area is empty space —senseless and worthless.

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Better: On Top = Who are you (Logo, Name, Slogan), Then = WHAT do you make (Portfolio 3-5 Images, not more), Then Contact = Social Media Handles, Website, QR-Code. Nothing more. Enjoy.

gaunt ruin
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ohhhh, I see what you mean now. This gives me much clearer direction.

stable bay
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Hey everyone, I'm doing a Youtube thumbnail for a vblog that I had previously made during a course in motion design but something seems off, particularly in the vlog's title. Can you take a look and give me some feedback and ideas on how can I improve it?

abstract oxide
stable bay
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Thank you for the feedback @abstract oxide, I made some further editing to it and at least to me it looks much better now 🙂 I thought it would be good to add what's the focus of this video as well, so here is the new version

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #14 - 296)

abstract oxide
stable bay
livid sinew
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Any feedback? 🙂

bleak echo
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If you are using your thumbnail for YouTube, be aware that 'Arms Exercises' is in the wrong position. You should usually avoid placing important information in the bottom right area. This is where the time stamp appears, and the text will certainly be partially covered.

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A little gif to show you what I meant...

bleak echo
# livid sinew

That's pretty cool! Love the composition... You might try to add a bit of grain to enhance the gritty style and make "Protect" tag looks more like a real painted word...
For now It's looking a bit flat=> try to make the red more like WilliamChurchill at the top and/or play with opacity and/ortexture...
But I'm really nitpicking... That's a solid work!👍

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Imma say make their names bigger

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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #47 - 47)

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Heyyy, I'm excited to share my latest project! I created three mechanical keyboard designs in collaboration with KOWA, one for each type of gamer (casual gaming, ranked, and sports). It was so much fun designing real objects. I'd love to hear your thoughts and find out which one you prefer! Thanks!

https://www.behance.net/gallery/247283379/MelcGraphic-x-KOWA-Keyboard-Illustration

A fusion of MelcGraphic's colorful universe and KOWA Gaming Studio's superb custom keyboards and keycaps.This project explores the integration of a cartoon graphic style into mechanical keyboards and custom keycaps. This cartoon approach allows for the ...

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1st one is the best

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It’s closest to a regular keyboard

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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @stable bay (current: #92 - 22)

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Little background: In 2006 was I at Clingman Dome in Smoky Mountain National Park USA, I shot 3 photos of a sign Image 2 to 4, my project is to combine this 3 image to one hole sign and in the same time show that the sign is stand at Clingman Dome.
I have try to do that for 20 year and now have I succeeded. I will chare the 3 original image image 2 to 4 and the result image 1 and the psd file with all layers. I used Photoshop 27.6.0 and Gemni 3.1.
I removed the background on the 3 original the merged the 3 image to one, then I prompted Gemni 3,1 to fill in the missing parts of the sign after I had combine the layers after that I prompted Gemni 3.1 to change the background to Clingman Dome.
Now we all know that Gemni or I not can Cherokee so I had to copy the text and color match the background.
As you how had been at Clingman Dome this sign does not stand in the dome it self but on the path up to the dome, but I like how the result that Gemni made and yes the background is Clingman Dome.

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Graphic designers try to follow rules, but the best artists, designers, geniuses, creatives of all stripes, they all burn the rule book.

gaunt ruin
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Rules are for beginners, not masters

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Still need balance even as an expert

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disagree, those who make it the furthest are always the risk takers, entrepreneurs, philosophers, artists .. everyone notable eventually realizes that their own way is the only way .

mossy heath
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Risk is always important but risk without balance usually leads to chaos

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You can risk everything and lose

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Or risk everything and win

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But non calculated risk leads to a wall

gaunt ruin
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some of us are aiming to hit that wall

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uhh, photoshop .. currently on layer 314

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That’s impressive

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thank you ! 🙂

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I remember a few weeks ago you mentioned something about using your art as a reference for ai and I thought it’s the same ones

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ahh, here I'll show you what I mean .. I usually build the base on photoshop and then I adapt it using krea realtime, it only really works for the more simplistic artworks for now tho .. uhh here

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That’s actually impressive even the ai ones don’t look like ai

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Actually your hand work looks more like AI than the actual ai work you’re putting the software out of business bro😭😭😭

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hahaha here's hoping !! 🤞 thanks friend 🙂

mossy heath
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I finally got my first proper client

warm crater
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any feedback on the design?

loud lynx
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Title: Eternal Maestro

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bleak echo
# warm crater any feedback on the design?

Nice natural flow for the eye to move from the name of the dish to the image and then down to the price/Call to action.
Positioning Rolls image off-center creates a modern and less static feel.
There is a clear Typography visual hierarchy ( even if the descriptive text underneath KATTI ROLL is a bit small and "clunky" to read due to line breaks.)
I would make ORDER NOW bigger and try to place the delivery mascott elsewhere (It looks a little lonely and out of place in the upper right corner)...
Why not try linking it to the Phone Numbers/CTA section?

bleak echo
# loud lynx Title: Eternal Maestro

Great design! Love the "out of bounds" effect...
I would try to:
1- left align "LUKA" with the blue box,
2- right align "MODRIC" with the background and connect the bottom to the box,
3- Center align the bottom part ... The coat of arms and text block seem offset to the right.

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Here is a quick Draft to illustrate what I meant...

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@loud lynx - Note: I didn't recreate the light effect on Modric name but it's a good idea to keep it.
This Spot Light effect adds a nice touch!

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explain did a great job

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# slate ermine explain did a great job

The point of my message wasn't to take credit, but simply to highlight the areas I felt needed to be corrected to make the design even better.
So Yes I 100% agree with you! @loud lynx did a great job!

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for fun

unique lance
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i like it :))

glacial grove
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thanks gigi

unique lance
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gots to teach me ur gradient method

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awww thank you

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🥹

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gradient fill layer

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overlay 50%

unique lance
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so funny we’re on here at the same time i was just about to send my work lol

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Is that good or any improvements?

loud lynx
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @bleak echo (current: #6 - 1196)

loud lynx
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# subtle horizon

@wooden oak is it good or any improvements before I send it to my client

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@bleak echo Teach, do you think starting a social media right now is okay? I really want my first payment as soon as possible.

bleak echo
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If you’re creating an account to advance your career by using it as a portfolio, I recommend having some solid work to share or post before you set up your account... After that, you’ll need to share high-quality content on a regular basis... Keep in mind that this can be time-consuming and may take a while before it starts bringing you clients and generating income...Not sure that social media is the best way to get payment "as soon as possible"...

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Have you figured out which specific design niche you want to work in?

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You should also consider using Behance (it 's free) to create a portfolio featuring some of your very best work in your design niche (the things you want to work on).

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I would recommend that you identify the type of work you’d like to use to generate income and create a few case studies that demonstrate:
1- Process Breakdown (Show your sketches, mood boards, and final concepts)
2- Before & Afters (Showcase client transformations to prove your impact)
3- Design Tips (each non-designers how visuals improve business revenue)
If you're starting that's OK you can simply use fictive client/product to create your project.

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The purpose of the portfolio is to convince your potential clients that you are the right person for the job!
Good Luck!

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I think Before & AFters and Design tips are great because they are topics that have great impact while being time efficient.

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About niche again, I am trying to be fluid within the constraint of football. I've made matchday posters (example below), editorial designs (like the Luka Modric I showed you and the Camp Nou below) and vintage poster (like the Neymar, Zidane and R9 below).

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I think these images summarized all I've done till now

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bleak echo
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Wow! A great way to build long-term relationships

wooden oak
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I'm all for using AI but I mean, have some skin in the game. It's difficult to know what to critique when the image is so obviously generated.

bleak echo
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In addition, you'll need to deal with issues related to image rights if you plan to make money using someone else's image... (Even more whith professional athletes)...

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If you're just starting out, it might be a better idea to work with clubs closer to home... These days, with social media, even amateur clubs use this kind of imagery to promote themselves... You’d have a better chance of generating revenue ethically than by trying to break into an already saturated market (even if the amounts will certainly be lower than if you were working with FC Barcelona)

loud lynx
bleak echo
# loud lynx So what type of niche do you recommned?

Sorry but I can't choose for you and/or recommand any particular area...
This choice is yours; you must therefore select a field in which you are willing to work and accept the terms and conditions associated with it...
You seem really motivated to work in the sports industry. That's great! I just wanted to let you know about some of the challenges you might face.

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I don't need you to choose for me but can you please name some profitable or in-demand niche?

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bleak echo
# loud lynx Rather please answer my question. After research I decided with print marketing(...

Yes... I think it could be good... But you know graphic design is highly competitive so be prepare to compete!
I don't know if you have a background or a degree in graphic design, but if you're self-taught and want to get started, the Behance link below could be very helpful... It's full of interesting content/guides to help you launch your career...Good Luck!
https://www.behance.net/resources/guides?tracking_source=nav20

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bought a new computer monitor bc i was tired of designing on a crusty 13 inch macbook air screen so naturally i had to make something random.

made the imessage UI from scratch bewcuse i wanted to play around. the text is eh but

loud lynx
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @bleak echo (current: #6 - 1197)

mossy heath
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Turned it into an album cover

warm crater
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how is the page of the menu?"

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i feel like the page in the menu is looking quite weird.The orange text is feeling out of place.How can i make it work?

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What do u guys think?

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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @mossy heath (current: #665 - 2)

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# mossy heath

Poster was fun to make had to turn it to an album cover

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@bleak echo Teach, do you know how to do or have any idea book formatting?

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I do have some questions

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any CC0 fonts anyone would recommend to use here? also any critiques are welcome, I'm still experimenting with the text and maybe colour scheme

bleak echo
# warped oak What do u guys think?

Love that! Shadows turned out really well... I find weird the brighter grid lines doesn't match the lighter grid like on a real blue print paper... Otherwise it looks great...

bleak echo
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You could try to change orange of titles for the same than "Menu" or turn it black. Prices alignements are weird and unconsistent (sometime align on the text line, sometimes above sometimes below...).

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Also you might add some subtle shadows under the visual elements.

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Hello I started learning photoshop. Its been 15 days. Since past 3 days I started making posters. I just want someone to guide me.. please help me. I need to know a kot about color combinations. And different type of posters. Please do help me. Please do share a little bit of your valuable knowledge with me. Just guide me.. I have done this now like 10 mins ago.. is this how we do posters? Please help me

wooden oak
# modest coral Hello I started learning photoshop. Its been 15 days. Since past 3 days I start...

Nice. It's a good start. A few suggestions. I would be careful to not put elements like text too close to the edges of the layout. There needs to equal margins around the edges. Especially if this is being printed and trimmed. Also, I would not use multiple different fonts and style for the brand name. Use the actual logo. Place it once and make sure its legible. Next, you shouldn't ever cover the product or product packaging with things like Sale prices or 50% off. Marketing managers won't like that. Products should not be obscured by marketing elements like that. Give it some breathing room.

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If it were me, I would probably simplify this a lot. Just my opinion but something like this...

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If its an elegant lifestyle brand, you're probably going to want more simple, less cluttered.

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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak (current: #2 - 3343)

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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak (current: #2 - 3344)

loud lynx
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First logo. I know it's goofy but we can always improve.

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I did copy off a youtube tutorial

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bleak echo
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loud lynx
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mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #44 - 51)

loud lynx
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bleak echo
# loud lynx You think the black to red gradient didnt fit?

I don't think that's what he meant... Usually, it's a good idea to check that the logo works well without visual effects like gradients and reflections...
We should recognize the logo even when it's flat and black on white...That's why I think he shared a silhouette of your logo...

glacial grove
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Second one

bleak echo
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@deft bane 👆 👆

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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #43 - 52)

blazing night
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i feel like there something wrong with the skin contrast

abstract oxide
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blazing night
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Does it look fine?

abstract oxide
errant niche
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What is lacking?

glacial grove
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Hmmmmm.

abstract oxide
# errant niche What is lacking?

You have lots of great elements but to me they all feel like background. Personally I would choose one or two elements and make them larger or more obvious through lighting.

blazing night
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I have a feeling that’s not what would happen if someone contacts you on tg

abstract oxide
# mossy heath

Perhaps a little drop shadow under elements like the wings and swords to make the overlap feel more 3D.
This is a rough example.

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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #14 - 297)

mossy heath
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I didn’t think of adding anything since it was just something I thought of while playing cs2 😭

abstract oxide
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @mossy heath (current: #503 - 3)

marble wave
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I dont have any ideas for this 2 but for the void its feel very empty

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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #14 - 298)

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shrewd depot
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Whats missing :3

slate ermine
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i made an mj poster for spotify cause i was bored a few days ago, can i get feedback??

slate ermine
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this was on a 2000 x 2000 canvas

shrewd depot
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if you want realistic shadows

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oh yea good idea

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the reflection or the shadows on the clothign

shrewd depot
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the reflection

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ahh the reflection i made it blurred a bit

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i didnt want it to be very reflective

shrewd depot
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try upscaling the main image to obtain the best quality of reflection

slate ermine
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sure i can try

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on a grid?

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slate ermine
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ohh

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becuase of the blur

slate ermine
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yea i alligned it correctly but after the gaussian blur it made it a bit spaced

shrewd depot
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try bluring the space of the text it self so the blur doesnt go out of the text frame that will be better for more realistic relfection

slate ermine
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wdym

shrewd depot
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the idea is great

shrewd depot
# slate ermine wdym

if you selected the whole text the blur will space out of the text frame ( the text it self will have a blurred glow ) you dont need the blurred glow thing

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oh yea true

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i did want the glow tho it gives it more of a reflection and feels more natural

shrewd depot
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its good i can't lie

pastel knot
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Guys how does this look, I want to put it in my portfolio

vagrant wyvern
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I'd say that is a masterpiece!

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100/100

pastel knot
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Thank

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All Ai btw 😂

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glacial grove
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loud lynx
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Long time no see

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Greetings to all the mandem

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How does one make logos like these?

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I tried all I can with my beginner knowledge and nothing worked. And Claude and ChatGPT just straight bullshitting me,

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Hi guys, any tips? meant to be a YouTube promo video thumbnail

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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke (current: #20 - 122)

loud lynx
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^

abstract oxide
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glacial grove
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Good job.

obtuse cave
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Airbrushing Techniques (Mole/Acne Removal, and oily skin removal) does it look unnatural?

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Photo shot in studio w/ Nikon Z50

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stiff needle
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Can I share some photos I took with Olympus extra zoom ? Using Kodak Tri-X 400 ? So I can get some feedback am not a photographer I only have fin camera point shoot

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mossy heath
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But good pics I see the vibe

stiff needle
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I have a point shoot camera can’t edit anything

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livid sinew
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Any suggestions on how to improve? I'm a bit stuck because something is definitely wrong with this, but I can't identify the issue. :/

thorny jetty
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yo guys i want some help, im building a Portuguese party poster but i need some help with the logo and other elements to combine

the party schedule im going to due in the final

abstract oxide
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I had just made this youtube thumbnail but I don't know if I should leave the background color as is do one of these

wooden oak
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@nova dome - Please don't repost the same things multiple times. That includes forwarding. You'll just have to wait until someone has time to give you feedback.

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In all of the images you posted, I'm not noticing a lot of difference. Since the elements on top are very brightly colored, I would probably make the background darker so that the text/graphics stand out more

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abstract oxide
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A concept cover for our new garage rock band (Name translates to Desolition Syndrome)

warped oak
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Hi! What do u guys think about my latest piece? Which one should I go with?

wooden oak
stiff needle
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hello am re doing my portfolio i have only done desktop and not all contents i would love a mini feedback before doing the mobile onehttps://readymag.website/u260326309/6312276/ also low quality staff are cuase i have 6mb limit

nessdesignhub

Built with Readymag—a tool to design anything on the web.

glacial grove
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I like how you can see more art when you click on them

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Good design choice

stiff needle
mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #42 - 53)

glacial grove
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You’re welcome!

abstract oxide
raw wadi
# warped oak Hi! What do u guys think about my latest piece? Which one should I go with?

I'd make the lighting on the B&W image more dramatic and contrasty to fit "film noir"
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ops ?

glacial grove
normal spoke
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I think we saw those a while back. Same crowded poster, similar images.

shy sparrow
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I'm still not very good at ps I made these a while ago looking for feedback

sour ridge
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These are my recently works I did for Portfolio, and I am still in conflict w Swiss Design Poster, and feedback would be great, cheers!

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Good job with both

glacial grove
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cause it it is some variant of grey

glacial grove
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Try grey then

terse bluff
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Hey Photoshop people what do you think about this one I made it’s a little doodle of Gerard way the lead singer of my chemical romance

raw wadi
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mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @raw wadi (current: #26 - 98)

warm crater
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Modular grid and hieracrchy in text.Feedback is appreciated.

glacial grove
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Maybe increase the spacing in “Plastic World”

raw wadi
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Hi, I have recreated the new Spotify disco logo inside Photoshop with no extra software or plugins
It was just for fun PsLove

warped oak
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Another Disco ball 😅 PsLove

deep orbit
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also, if u add some feather to the mask of the knife, it will look more natural

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also, the extra text at the top and the bottom right is too packed together, maybe spacing it a little more, especially between words, is gonna make it look better

cyan edge
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I’m a graphic designer specializing in clean promo designs for brands and businesses.

I’d love to help improve your social media visuals. dm me if you need help the price will be low + fast delivery

pallid zealot
cyan edge
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Ok

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I’ll send a link of my Instagram page

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Here is an image scan it

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Kindly

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carmine fox
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Hey guys! I’ve done photoshop for a while, but on this project Im stepping into a side of compositing, lighting, and styling that feels pretty new to me 😨
I figured I’d see if anything stands out as glaringly wrong and/or a quick adjustment to a more experienced eye, like maybe my shadows are too high or something and it’s throwing off the whole styling, idk lol 😭 I’m relatively happy with where it’s at and could be happy with calling it finished, but just thought I’d gauge people’s thoughts too. If nothing else, hopefully I just learn a little extra from that 😼

carmine fox
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Would be more than happy to give my thoughts to anyone’s work in return too to help pay it back haha, just let me know!

terse bluff
# carmine fox Hey guys! I’ve done photoshop for a while, but on this project Im stepping into ...

Hey dude so 2 things maybe 3 actually first is this image right here I would try to make it even on everything so it looks like real encapsulated in the bag either by removing via eraser or marquee second with the hands at the bottom I get the idea but for me personally I would make them as normal hands rather then a green tint especially on the left and last I would say to burn or increase the contrast of the leafs a little bit because it kind of blends in with the background and it’s hard to tell the difference but other than that solid dude

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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @terse bluff (current: #1043 - 1)

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# warm crater

Looks great, I think all the tips from earlier seem well-implemented! Only thing I’d say is I liked the yellow more than the blue but that’s kinda subjective lol

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I do think the yellow wasnt readable

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warm crater
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I will have to work on the background if i was to go with the yellow one.

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Ok so as in terms of that I mean that in that part specifically I would get rid of the little bit of a overflow so it looks like the perfect amount in there rather than too much cause say for example you were to draw a line before the point I drew over in the outline/structure of the bag content would still be out of that line so it’s a matter of alignment

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@carmine fox

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Ok I think I understand

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Sorry I’m a slow reader lol

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An ok now that I look at that part of the pic with fresh eyes it does look overflowy

carmine fox
# terse bluff Hey dude so 2 things maybe 3 actually first is this image right here I would try...

I think I’m kinda stuck with the color of the hands and the overall color matching / grading of the photo tbh ☹️ I feel like I want the grass much more green and the subject much less green (more “magenta”). But if I adjust either of them I have to adjust the other one equally too or else they don’t match, and the coloring looks fake

If my options were everything green vs everything magenta here’s what it’d look like though, just done in the photo app bc I’m in bed lol 😭 and iirc it looked super weird if I only made the hands / entire subject less green, unless I also adjusted the grass equally

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I don’t hate the less green one, skin looks much more correct in tone, but it’s kinda a completely different vibe unfortunately

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Maybe there’s a better way of making the subject match the environment’s color + lighting without turning everything + everyone green 😂

gentle horizon
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@sly jasper
Please don't keep spamming the same post all over the server!

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@glacial grove @raw wadi @terse bluff thank you all for responding!! Sorry, I slept in and only just woke up 😂 I appreciate all the thoughts and support a ton though, thanks!!

-I do have photoshop haha, I was just being lazy before sleeping and used the Photos app lol

-Euan: I agree for the most part! I think some way of adding contrast between subject and background would be needed. I think I’m just new to this approach to photoshop and trying to make things look photorealistic; usually I’d just make the subject brighter and warmer and more contrast and sharpness, and then the opposite on the background, and call it a day 😂 now, I’m hesitating on all of those things as I just can’t tell what makes something look “photoshopped” if that makes sense. But yours looks promising, I could experiment with it some!

-I can also send the different source components and adjustments I’ve done in photoshop if that’d make things easier to understand. Don’t want to overshare or spam or anything though, just whatever’s easiest!

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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @raw wadi (current: #26 - 99)

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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @terse bluff (current: #667 - 2)

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Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial grove (current: #37 - 59)

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Ok, so I turned off any adjustments I had that were attempts at “stylizing”, I think this is my foundational color corrected image. Does this look like a color-correct starting point?

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And the different components are the grass 3d render, a photo containing the hands + bag + some of the plant, and a 3d render of some of the flowers

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Which I think has resolved a lot of the issues from the green color cast!

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Now I might just put a texture + slight blur over everything and call it a day tbh

desert edge
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finalized branding of a garry's Mod scp-rp server that my friends and i are working on.

carmine fox
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Was able to overcome a lot of the issues i was having, was just a matter of being patient and watching enough youtube videos lol

livid sinew
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First time doing image manipulation

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I think the clouds are horrendous. Anybody spot any other errors?

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otherwise good job

glacial grove
normal spoke
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Very nice. Nie Background and good omposition overall. Maybe try to make the album title and the band-name a bit more pop in the way that it now is a bit flat. Maybe add some shadow, outline or a bit motion blur or something like that. But overall I like it.

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analog ermine
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Thoughts?

copper forge
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a fast first thought was: Wow. If you see it for a short moment it looks very mysterious.. But when I want to make the picture a bit bigger, it's quite dark what is logic because of the theme. But I like it! 👍

analog ermine
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@copper forge thanks 😊

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to AK

sudden cliff
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Is this channel is for past challenge purpose?

toxic dome
sleek tiger
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slate badger
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torpid thicket
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your work looks very good

slate badger
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thanks @torpid thicket

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Gave +1 Creative Carma to ofir_bre

torpid thicket
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yes! my first carma! halleluiah!

wraith yew
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@slate badger I really like the graphic in the steam of the coffee.

cobalt garnet
torpid thicket
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whelp... that was my first half attempt of recreating the sketch effect challenge.... not very successful... any idea how to change pattern density based on brightness?

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oh shoot was that the wrong chat?

slate badger
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@wraith yew thank u so much for comments.

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to pfordie

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noble plinth
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@sonic gate
The very 1st Youtube video of yours I watched and I was able to make it rain! I'm so looking forward to the daily challenges!

That's Anton the ant, by the way... from Antwerp. 😀

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last goblet
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hi all. I haven't been using this thread for any personal work just the challenges. So here I am. I have been working on this and i feel like it's missing something. Some last finishing touch and I feel like it's a color thing but i'm a little stuck. Any suggestions or critiques? I'm totally open.

toxic dome
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Hi there, I'm working on a task to make a poster for an event. The company concept is about buying online from local shops around the world. I'm suppose to prepare something fast and not put too much time on it. I created this one. What do you think? Would be great , if you can give me some feedback.

last goblet
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@analog ermine That is really cool. I like that all the skeletons in the seats give you a sense of direction or orientation. And how you have the glowing effects are perfect. Really dig this

analog ermine
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@last goblet thanks a lot 😊😛

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to SamZilla

toxic dome
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@toxic dome I really like the cities within the words - very nice effect and overall the poster is pleasing. I am not as much of a fan of the zig-zag effect as I feel it takes away from the cities and I find the white a bit strong against the dark of the poster body. Maybe an off white or another light color picked from one of the cityscapes would help. But really a good job! 😁

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@toxic dome I think this design is really strong overall! The only thing I'd change is that the dark values in the cityscapes start to make the letters kind of difficult to read. Perhaps you could lighten up those darks and you should be good to go

toxic dome
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@toxic dome @stark saddle thank you so much for your feedback. I will try to change it based on your feedbacks 😊❤️

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to Kathleen

analog ermine
unkempt bay
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@toxic dome I like the posteer a lot, but until I read the concept, I had no idea that it was online. Maybe add some text explaining, or change the title to "Online Local Market Event, or eMarket Event?" Just a suggestion. 😃

toxic dome
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@unkempt bay thank you for feedback. Event name is actually just a placeholder now. They will decide it later. 😊👍

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to UrsaMajora

lyric bolt
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I used to be really big into photoshop back in high school

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here's a few of the things I made

weak tree
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@fair lance well i got sucked into watching your tutorial on making Captain America's shield... struggled on the red paint effect, I couldn't find the same brush but I didn't look too hard 😂

rose wing
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Much needed channel thanks!

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lyric bolt
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I've been playing around with photoshop for now

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making funny meme images

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Probably going to branch out to more serious stuff once I get more comfortable with using the program

analog ermine
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@sleek haven you can make the greens a tad bit darker. It isn't too warm

dapper radish
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@sleek haven I'd say definitely too warm. Push the greens a bit greener and the rock a bit more to the red to get some better separation. Some of the moss seems a bit overexposed, and the leaves could benefit from a bit of sharpening/clarity. Good luck!

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lyric bolt
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did you actually make that?

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it looks pretty good!

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I think its beyond my skill level to give any meaningful feedback on, though

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unborn oak
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Hi Guys,
I designed this logo for a pet shop selling pet food, clothing and accessories...as part of an online challenge to improve my skills...do let me know your thoughts about it...

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dapper radish
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@unborn oak I like the black/red scheme better. The font might be a bit too heavy and could be kerned a bit tighter. Love the idea of incorporating the heart in the paw. Might be nice to make that one continuous stroke? Because you have your paw outlined, it might be nice for consistency to do the same for the 'toes'?

unborn oak
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@rustic plank Thank you for the feedback 😃 will try out the version you suggested.

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to afonsofidjones

unborn oak
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@dapper radish Thank you :)
I used this font to give a friendly and happy vibe...when you say it needs to be kerned a bit tighter...is it for the space between letters O,V and E? because optically there seems to be a wider gap around V. Still learning about Kerning...
And I shall try to outline the heart and see how it goes with the overall design.

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to paulvansommeren

dapper radish
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Hmm maybe I just like tighter tracking, but I think it could be slightly improved around the OVE as you said. It's a bit of a tricky V shape because it's quite wide which generates a kind of large space at the bottom. It's a good choice for a font though, very friendly!

unborn oak
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@dapper radish Agreed. Quite tricky to handle some alphabets...Il make changes and repost.

last talon
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@lunar heath Wow that looks awesome! Did you composite it from ind images or adjust lighting and blur etc on an image already made? I think the chicken in bottom left is cool but a bit distracting maybe. But it could be just the combo of@the chicken and the large wheat piece being so sharply in focus together. Something about the immediate foreground isn’t working for me. Maybe the chicken needs to be vertical and not coming in from the side. Not sure. But point is I think it distracts a bit too much from the main elements. I get the idea the chicken helps lead our eyes into the composition but I dunnno. Very awesome looking though. Great job. Love the goggles on the cow and everything.

weak tree
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@hushed cairn I'll admit I'm at a loss... imo i think the "Welsey" part needs more angle LOL

lyric bolt
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@unborn oak its not half bad

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its minimalist

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so its not my personal cup of tea

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but I can see a pet store using that design

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can I have your opinion on something?

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I made this mock up for a friend's fictional setting a while ago, and it's the one time I tried to make a logo for something

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and this is what I came up with

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<@&548221569533476888> could I have any feedback on this, please?

wraith yew
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@sleek haven not too warm for certain times of the year. I have actual pictures with this coloring from hikes I've been on. Where is this?

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@slate badger I like the the way you have scratched the image. For my taste there is a little too much off on the left side of the face. I son't mind some but not as much as you did. I like the ink or paint splotches also.

worthy cobalt
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personally, I would try making the polaroid bigger to fill more of the background, and perspective warp the image inside it to match the bend.

weak tree
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@lyric bolt wow I just had to make a logo i designed 1 color for printing job vs the full color one i originally did they look similar crests and leaves

wraith yew
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@worthy cobalt I will work on that. I am trying my hand at Out of Bounds and any suggestions are helpful.

lyric bolt
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@weak tree yeah, I can see the laurel wreath and shields kind of give it a similar look

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yours looks much more put together, though

weak tree
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@lyric bolt thank you... mine was done in illustrator using vectors...

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Gave +1 Creative Carma to Some Fucking Leaf

weak tree
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@lyric bolt if you have an adobe stock subscription they have the crest and laurel leaves all done... its really just different vectors composited because I am not drawer

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drawerer?

worthy cobalt
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drawist

lyric bolt
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I just spliced a bunch of different images to get my finished project

weak tree
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@lyric bolt basically all I did as well just used illustrator and vectors vs photoshop

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@worthy cobalt thank you

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to MildMisanthropy

lyric bolt
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@weak tree hey could I ask for your opinion on something I'm trying to create?

weak tree
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@lyric bolt sure but i'll warn you i'm probably not all that skilled but i'll give you honest opinion

lyric bolt
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Its still very not fininshed, but composition wise, how would you put this together

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Like where would you put the name, what colour would you make the text, is there anything I could add to make the card more interesting? etc

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@weak tree

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Gave +1 Creative Carma to MildMisanthropy

hushed cairn
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@weak tree "Hometown Diner" is flat and "Wesley" has a shadow which makes it look like it was just plopped on top. It should be flat as well. The real name, apparently is "Hometown Diner" but it was a movie with a boy named "Wesley" whose mom owned the restaurant so the goal was to connect them. Maybe it had another name before "Hometown" since there is a lot of space between "coffee" and "hometown" but they deleted that and added "Wesley," but they didn't keep the same look.

worthy cobalt
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@wraith yew I like the color swap as well, good idea!

weak tree
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@hushed cairn I see it now LOL Hometown Diner's got a drop shadow but its going the opposite direction and white.... i saw the distance between coffee and wesley and at the other end but thought it was just the angle of the sign.... and i thought it might be cleared up if you angled wesley more

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@lyric bolt obviously do a better job than this... I liked the border in the left upper corner with that pink dot, I would duplicate that dot may be thin it out though (the border not dot).... I am more of a traditionalist when it comes to cards so I like the split image... The image i found of the character had butterflies around her may be add them to break up where the two meet and that will help give you a spot to add the text... also may be try to play with a reflection on the bottom half to change it up some.... sorry this is all mumbled... may be others will have better insight and direction than me

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and by this I mean my quick mock up not the original

lyric bolt
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@weak tree huh, well I appreciate your honesty, lol

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I just got back into photoshop so my skills arent as good as they could be

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I like your idea, but theres one issue, I am planning on having all 52 cards have a different character and it'd take some skill to make a divider like that consistently with different thematic elements specific to each character

weak tree
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@lyric bolt i'm sorry I didn't mean to offend you at all i was just letting you know the direction i would go... i meant do a better job with the cutting out then I did with my sample layout... i fumble thru....

gawd i could never do 52 cards LOL I would get 10 done and redo my entire theme every 10 cards starting over and over and over

lyric bolt
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lol no worries, you'd have to try way harder than that to offend me 😛

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I'll try to make a divider and see how that looks!

weak tree
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@lyric bolt The background and divider were all the same for each one, I just played with the blend modes and coloring and saturation for each one... but since it was based on a specific series not characters it make it a little easier to use the same divider

lyric bolt
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I think I'm going to take the logo from each series the character is from and use that as a divider

lyric bolt
weak tree
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@lyric bolt yes! perhaps tone down the background, so Lain Iwakura stands out better

lyric bolt
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sweet!

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any other improvements you can think of?

weak tree
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@lyric bolt just the corners LOL you have pink in 1 and the others don't have any

lunar heath
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@last talon Thank you for your comment, Really i appreciate your feedback. i wanted to show a shock in chicken eyes. it wants to say something to us, i don't know why its here. if course it helps me in composition but why chicken, really i don't know :D. This Visual was manipulated from many images and hundreds of layers, you can watch making from here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jhNeXcYhEHo

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Gave +1 Creative Carma to Jon Leo

last talon
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@lunar heath Ya, I really like the shocked chicken. I think it does look like it wants to say somthing to us. I'm just not sold on the location or something about how the bottom of the image looks seems unresolved. I do like the chicken. And super impressive that you put it together. Very creative!

lunar heath
last talon
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thanks @lunar heath Dude! that's awesome too! lol. Also keep in mind, it' just my take on it. The rest of the world could disagree... You gotta do what you think makes sense to you at the end of the day or else you'll be making things for other people, which isn't horrible I guess 😃

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to Tarek

unborn oak
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@lyric bolt Thank you for the feedback, appreciate it.
As far as your logo design is concerned...I am no expert but the font definitely needs to be bigger. Also what do the three figures behind the globe signify? Is it a dragon?If yes, does it really fit in well with the airline ?

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to Some Fucking Leaf

last talon
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@dapper radish very interesting donut man! Awesome lol. You said this wasn’t photoshop , what did you use? Or is it real life sculpture!

dapper radish
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@last talon That thumbnail's actually from my site, click the link for the actual piece 😃 But since you ask, both the linked project and the donut man (which uses a 3d scan of my face) are made in Cinema 4D. More on the head can be found here: https://paulvansommeren.design/ego

tidal bolt
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@azure brook hi tim, i have found your guide for displacement on here somewhere and finally tried it out, thanks so much for this! what do you think, i tried to get a printed look onto felt ...

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to evil

unborn oak
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last talon
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@dapper radish Wow! That stuff is killer. I’ve always been interested in 3d stuff but that makes me want to do it lol. How do you get a scan of your head? Is that pretty serious hardware or is it just like stitching photos together ? They all look awesome. I love the mats just conform perfectly to the surface. Awesome.

toxic dome
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@unborn oak I like the outline variations better. What's the difference between the two outlined variations in the second presentation?

dapper radish
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@last talon I was at a business fair where a company showed off their tech, that's how I got it... If you wanna get into 3D, Cinema4D is suuuper user friendly and easy to learn. Blender's free tho and I've heard they've really increase usability too.

azure brook
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@last talon @dapper radish Cinema 4D lite ships with After Effects 😃

dapper radish
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But it's very limited. However, EJ Hassenfratz has some good tutorials for learning just C4D Lite.

unborn oak
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@toxic dome The second one has smaller toes. Just wanted to see if it looks better.

noble plinth
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@unborn oak
Loving the one on the right (the one with the smaller toes). Very nice work!
All I would suggest is to bring the words a teeny weeny bit closer.

rugged lantern
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hello 😃

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if anybody is free, i need some advice on this logo :

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it's the second version

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the first one being :

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thanks

unborn oak
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@noble plinth Thank you :)
Do you think the kerning needs to be tighter?

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to Ess

unborn oak
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@rugged lantern I really like the first one ✌🏽

rugged lantern
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thanks @unborn oak 😃

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to Malini

rugged lantern
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i made a 3rd version

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and i think it will be my finals

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anyone, don't hesitate to give any feedback. i stay open to all 😉

dapper radish
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Is that grey the background or did you upload a png?

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Either way, the top red one is my favorite

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the logo can be used independently of the text when needed, and the size difference between FIRE and DESIGN STUDIO is more balanced

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but the color seems a bit too stiff

rugged lantern
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yes 😃

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and also yes, it's a png. it should be on a white background

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thanks a lot @dapper radish

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to paulvansommeren

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last talon
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Thanks @azure brook for the cinema 4d idea! Now I just need to find some time to do more stuff lol.

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to evil

rugged lantern
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Evil got Carma. that's funny 😃

last talon
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@rugged lantern that looks so much better now. Looks great!

rugged lantern
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thanks @last talon

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to Jon Leo

rugged lantern
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yes, it took me some time but i worked on it based on the feedbacks

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now when i look at the first version, i can't even imagine i was seeing it "great" ^^

uncut pelican
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@rugged lantern be careful with the lighter font weight of "Design Studio" it may be not legible when used in tiny spaces.

rugged lantern
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ok thanks @uncut pelican i'm starting the whole design system shortly. will make adjustments then. mostly, it will be used on the website, some branding elements like letterheads and business cards

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to Tropical Delirio

noble plinth
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@unborn oak
No, I think the kerning is fine... and I really meant a teeeeeeny weeeeeeeny bit when I suggested bringing the words closer together. At least, that's what I see.

rugged lantern
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beautiful rendering @floral karma

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how long it takes to do that piece ?

floral karma
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@rugged lantern it takes one week i think it s 3d 3d stuff take s long to finish

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😇

rugged lantern
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nice one. makes me think of the terminator ^^

floral karma
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haha thanks man happy to hear from you

solar yacht
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Hi everyone!!!

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I've just joined the community!

rugged lantern
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hi @solar yacht welcome!

solar yacht
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@rugged lantern hi!!

rugged lantern
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later today there will be live shows on behance 😉

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or maybe later "tomorrow" for you, depending on your location lol. i'm in the indian ocean

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nevertheless, enjoy!

unborn oak
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@unborn oak
Noice! Very noice!
I wish you the best of everything with your project, Malini.

unborn oak
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@noble plinth Thank you so much for all the help and feedback 😃

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to Ess

noble plinth
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@unborn oak
You're more than welcome!

toxic dome
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Not sure where to post this, but I am currently rebuilding the classic map "Sub" from the "Worms" game to look and play well in the newer worms.
Posting this for feedback, I am now done with the Island 😃

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well not completely done (the leaves need a comic style adaptation... but yeah I think these are 6 or 7 different stock images 😄

last stump
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Wanted to make a kinda sci-fi image, so what do y'all think.

azure brook
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also try adding a glow around the shapes 😃

last stump
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Thank you so much @azure brook this really helps 😀

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to evil

warm agate
analog ermine
toxic dome
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very first photo shop

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stuck with something easy

last ginkgo
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This was taken while a storm was starting to form and it was already raining somewhat heavily to the left of the frame.

toxic dome
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My ultimate masterpiece

nimble thorn
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Bruh

toxic dome
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Moment

toxic dome
toxic dome
stable harbor
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If you're sharing work, try asking for guided feedback or providing context. 😃

toxic dome
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I just want a place to share my cursed creations lol

lethal juniper
toxic dome
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toxic dome
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I make simple images like so.

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It's always free so feel free to dm me and ask me for one.

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civic hull
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Hello everyone, I'm giving away this beauty original file for printing:

https://www.behance.net/gallery/54103349/Octozombie

you just need to ask me for the file on my instagram: https://www.instagram.com/j.f.florencio/

This don't grant comercial rigths is just for personal use like decor your mancave or office, bedroom etc...But if you really want to use it on your project I can sell you the rights fot it.

In case you print it, send me a photo ;)

I hope you enjoy this work that took me around 60 hours our more witth 7000pc size at 300 dpi

Behance

Digital painting done in photoshop in 50h.

light thorn
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Insta@_twc_daily Never give Up. 🙌🏻 #doNotBreakTheChain⛓ 😎

toxic dome
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@azure brook

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is this the right channel?

azure brook
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yes 😄

toxic dome
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okay lol

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i made this today and im proud of it i would like to get tips of how i can improve my gfx I DONT WATCH NARUTO SO IF AURA IS WRONG DONT JUDGE ME

sleek tiger
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Looks awesome @light thorn. Great job in these 500 days ❤️

light thorn
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@sleek tiger Thanks 🙌

mighty dragonBOT
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Gave +1 Creative Carma to Valdair Leonardo

copper hare
stone jetty