📝project-feedback

[abstract oxide]

Really good work

If we are getting picky... your vertical placement of text within their title bars is not consistent

[echo girder]

Can you elaborate please, are you talking about the trade and decline

[echo girder]

I just changed the my offer to be true centered on the title bar, but I think it could be a few pixels down more, what do you think? Should I line it up with the main part of the font or keep it true centered?

[abstract oxide]

I was referring to the alignment of "My Inventory" and "My Offer"

[abstract oxide]

I agree that a few pixels down would probably look better

[echo girder]

fixed!

the trading wasn't aligned properly before too, on the top. It was a couple pixels off!

[abstract oxide]

I'm not suggesting I chose the perfect colour, but a different background colour might help better separate and identify your panels.

[echo girder]

I agree, I'm going through every color now to see what's the best lol this is harder then making the entire thing

[echo girder]

do we think this is a good color?

[abstract oxide]

I feel your design pain 😉

[echo girder]

I could turn the opacity of the pattern down on the original lol

[abstract oxide]

Your colour choice could be influenced by what this entire graphic might sit within. eg Would you have a simple or noisy background?

[abstract oxide]

I'm signing off mate. Good luck with the project.

[echo girder]

thank you so much for your feedback ❤️ I really appreciate it

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #13 - 188)

[abstract oxide]

Thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @echo girder (current: #473 - 3)

[tulip light]

any feedback? Photography basically :))

[crisp garden]

That is gorgeous! What is this from?

[untold hound]

hi, what do you think?

[tulip light]

it is from a videogame, name is ''Kingdom Hearts'', and thank you very much

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @crisp garden (current: #980 - 1)

[tulip light]

it looks good, the only thing that does let my eyes fall a bit apart is the white color on the right, it is very high

while on the left the contrast is perfect

[crisp garden]

I really like the 3rd one best, where your character seems to be pondering life. It shows a lot of emotion.
I play Second Life, I should share some of the photos I do

[tulip light]

what the f is this weeabo s*/10 i love it ahahah

[tulip light]

yea that was the purpose of her pose indeed :)))

[crisp garden]

first is from a wedding I shot, 2nd is from boudoir shoot I did and 3rd is my avatar. These are from Second Life.

[tulip light]

looks very cool to me

[crisp garden]

Thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @tulip light (current: #980 - 1)

[echo girder]

this looks dope asf, I love the left one

[proper knot]

Any Feedback

[wooden oak]

@shrewd idol - This space is for people to present work for critique, feedback and suggestions. Its not for self-promotion. Sorry.

[untold hound]

Thanks for feedback!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @tulip light (current: #635 - 2)

[untold hound]

thanks!

[shrewd idol]

I‘m sorry. I may have not paid attention

[median parcel]

ty<33

[abstract oxide]

You’ve got some really good elements there.
I’m not sure what this is for but personally I feel there is way too much text. Any chance you could cut most of it? The bright white text also draws the viewers eye away from the car which I believe should be the focus.

[safe pond]

I'm not so good at Photoshop, I actually work in 3D. But what do you think? Would like to paint it but I am extremely bad

[proper knot]

is it okay now, and to your question, this will be used to sell as posters.

[abstract oxide]

Really nice update.
I recommend keeping any text well away from the edge. Especially as this is a poster that could possibly have edge content hidden behind a frame.

[abstract oxide]

I recommend pushing the contrast and highlights on the car a little further. Just to give it some punch. I’ve knocked up a quick and crude example.

[abstract oxide]

Turning on the headlights could also be a nice touch

[proper knot]

okay let me do it now, it healed me

[proper knot]

Now

[wise shore]

I don't know if its your decision but that seems like a lot of text for the bottom of a poster

[abstract oxide]

Looks good. Nice work. I think you could brighten the lights much more if you wanted and it would still look believable.

[proper knot]

yes i did it in the first touch but it made the poster more white which was killing the dark vibe of the poster, BTHE WAY our minds matched

[abstract oxide]

A dark look is cool.
How do our minds match?

[wise shore]

Maybe a cool touch would be make the key words in that paragraph red like the car so even if people don't read the whole thing the key points stand out and convey enough information. I'd personally make the "Are you ready to take control" a little bigger too.

[proper knot]

we thougt of the same thing that is more brightening ythe light

[abstract oxide]

Great minds think alike 😉

[proper knot]

Hello Emily, I respect your thoughts but the text below is about the cars desgin, engine and so, and if I make it red then it will not be visible bcz the bg of that is red

[wise shore]

The background looks black to me but maybe its just my screen

[abstract oxide]

Now that you've reduced the size of the text, have you considered moving the car down a little?

[proper knot]

yes its black but not that much

[wise shore]

I will say though most people wont take the time to read all that if this is a poster irl, espescially a busy area but I'm also not an expert on ads so I could be wrong

[proper knot]

i was thinking of that, and I also did it, but it's not looking that much good

[proper knot]

ahhh, I respect your thoughts but carlovers like me would take time to read this

[abstract oxide]

It's all a balancing act. As I mentioned earlier, I highly recommend pulling the text in from the sides and the bottom.

[proper knot]

by the way you are ads specialist, so you would be having more knowledge about ads

[proper knot]

okay, let me do it

[abstract oxide]

Cool

[wise shore]

I said I'm not an expert as in I don't have professional experience creating advertisments

the rgb values of that area at max seem 3,3,3 though so it is black

[abstract oxide]

I'm signing off mate. Best of luck with the project.

[proper knot]

hmmmmm, you are correct i said it earlier replying you

[wise shore]

You said its black but not that much, but its significantly closer to black than red. Though you do you

[proper knot]

ohh, thank you brother, but plz see once I have done a little adjustments

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #13 - 189)

[proper knot]

yes, my fault, sorry

[proper knot]

let me try again

[proper knot]

its an screenshot only, so it of low quality

[wise shore]

I meant keywords not the whole paragraph. Let me show you

[wise shore]

Maybe needs finessing a bit but I think at a glance then someone could get all the specs even if they don't read the whole thing. It also makes the text feel a bit broken up so its less to read. The red words are eye catching and a hook to draw them into reading the rest of it.

[river vine]

Any reccomedatjons for how I can optimise this design for a perfume box

In regards to spacing between words, letters, general design ideas etc

[echo girder]

proud of this pet inventory ui frame I made for portfolio work, let me know what you guys think!!

[lavish flame]

Hey guys can yall give me feedback?

[stable geode]

Hey guys i'm working on a logo for a fictional ramen restaurant called "fuu" that I plan to include in my portfolio

I'm stuck on which logo to pic should I choose the first one or the second?

[wise shore]

@proper knot Gonna @ you for this because I think I had discord set to not ping for replies. Sorry if it double pings.

[tranquil marsh]

Hello everyone! My name is Luke Choice (aka Velvet Spectrum), and I recently joined the Adobe team as Design Community Engagement Specialist. With over twenty years of experience as a multifaceted designer, I am well-versed in the challenges of pursuing a career in the creative industry, so please reach out if you have any questions.

That said, I will be hosting a Portfolio Review with my good friend and incredible illustrator, Kervin Brisseaux, on Reddit this Wednesday for anyone who would like to discuss their body of work or something they are currently working on.

We will be in the Adobe Illustrator Subreddit
r/AdobeIllustrator
This Wednesday 04/02/2025
12pm - 3pm EST
If we are fortunate to have more than enough work to review during this period, we will respond to every request in a timely manner.

My portfolio - https://www.instagram.com/velvetspectrum/
Kervins portfolio - https://www.instagram.com/brisseaux/

[abstract oxide]

Nice work mate

[abstract oxide]

These are both fantastic. Very creative.
I like the second one a little more with the blocks of solid white. However, either logo could work better in different situations.

[abstract oxide]

The strongest logos work as a silhouette ie. they look great when only a single colour. Any chance you could make the nose white as well?

[shrewd idol]

Any idea what I could do with the Y it looks kind of boring and out of place.

I'm doing this Logo for a friend of mine which is a Computer Tweaker so the style is good like that I think

[wise cipher]

i made this. feeback pls, is it sht, good, decent? Clickable?

[wooden oak]

Don't hold back on the title. You should be more direct. heh

[wise cipher]

wait, how much more direct can i be

[wooden oak]

I was being sarcastic.

[wise cipher]

i thought so💔

[wooden oak]

It would be cooler if the "Woke Trash" looked more like the actual Snow White logo.

[wise cipher]

thats a creative idea

[wooden oak]

I probably wouldn't design something that said "Woke Trash" personally. But I might do...

[wise cipher]

i actually saw a thumbnail that had this idea, idk why i didnt screenshot it at the time, ill js have to find it again

[hollow marsh]

I'm going to make a Sum 41 cover band called Um 41 lol

[gusty cape]

Lmao can't help it but design for them, now obviously this is the last one will be for a long while, i should work on other stuff now like my next branding project and so on

[hollow marsh]

I'm publically calling that by next week you will yet again have more Sum 41 edits

[gusty cape]

If i did that YOU have to take me to the therapist 💀

[spark meteor]

1 or 2?
In 1 I tried to make the colours pop more due to the colour of the water and the lights but on two I went for a darker vibe to remove the glare

[abstract oxide]

Personally I like high contrast but I think you've pushed it too far in the second image and have lost a lot of detail. Perhaps something in between the two.

[vivid rover]

title : The Secret to making a Viral Thumbnail
Designer : Me

if its improvable please tell me ill be using this in a video

[abstract oxide]

Perhaps you could rotate the dollar signs to different angles for some visual variety

[vivid rover]

k

[stable geode]

Is this color palette okay?

[gusty cape]

Its nice and calm and friendly

[untold hound]

Why not in illustrator?

Btw good work

[stable geode]

I've been working with Photoshop for a few years now, and I find it more comfortable to use even if i'm working with vectors

However, I'm still making an effort to learn Illustrator as well

[stable geode]

I appreciate it!

[hollow marsh]

I'm going to try to start a trend where on your gravestone it has a list of all the keyboard shortcuts you learned through your life for bragging rights lol

[wooden oak]

Obit: "His skill set was multi-faceted and there were many layers to his personality... much like his Photoshop Documents."

[spark meteor]

Something like this?

[abstract oxide]

Hey that looks great. You’ve got some really strong contrast but you’ve got lots of good detail in lots of places. I like it mate.

[abstract oxide]

I really like this colour palette. Having said that, I also liked your original strong orange. It really comes down to what kind of feel you want your brand to have.
The new logo with the tail looks great.

[abstract oxide]

I know I said this before but I'm going to mention it again. Of course you can have a logo that has lots of colour. But it can be preferable to also have a logo that works as a silhouette... as in black and white or one colour against a background colour. You are so close if not for that nose.

Again, I love the logo as it is 🙂

[stable geode]

Looks so much better thank you! I'll make my best

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #13 - 190)

[abstract oxide]

Thanks mate. Best of luck with the project.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @stable geode (current: #374 - 4)

[shrewd idol]

Any ideas how I can perfection this logo? Making this for a friend of mine which is a Computer Tweaker. I feel like something is still off, any idea how I could improve it?

[abstract oxide]

Can you confirm that this "OVY"

[stable geode]

It's my opinion but I think the concern is related to the letter "Y" the other two letters are full of attractive elements, which is great, but the "Y" seems a bit out of sync

[shrewd idol]

Yes, that says Ovy.

[shrewd idol]

That might be it. I was thinking about changing the Arrow into a Ruby (🔷), but that may not be it either

[stable geode]

Nah the other stuff looks fine, try something new for the Y

[untold hound]

y2k logo project made in blender and photoshop, what do you think?

[wise shore]

How did you make the shadow in the final picture with the guitar?

[gusty cape]

It's a mock up

But

Taken a cooy of the poster

Distort it ( Ctrl Drag down )

Color over lay

Gaussiian Blur around 1-2

Opacity around 70-60

Mask , and with the brush delet the overlapping shadow
https://youtu.be/ttLkxcrtn_c?si=-P13_FQC5Po0Q5Fa

[gusty cape]

Lovely

[gusty cape]

https://youtu.be/0dunCEiRscU?si=HYwx5dY__pSYp8T8

[wise shore]

Wow cool thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @gusty cape (current: #474 - 3)

[fossil monolith]

I say just remove the glare from the top half of the photo, leave bottom half alone

[wise shore]

I would perhaps do something like this

[stable geode]

Does the typography for the tiny text look good or should I change it

[dry snow]

Hello, please check out my new work on Behance and if you appreciate this project then that would be helpful 😊

https://www.behance.net/gallery/222758837/Visual-Identity-Packaging-design-Synth

[civic kestrel]

Any suggestions on how to edit this photo?

[stable geode]

Try lowering the exposure in the darkest areas and increasing the bright on the areas with light

[stable geode]

Also you wanna delete that thing on the ground, looks a bit distracting

[civic kestrel]

Oh damn I didn’t see that, thanks sm

[abstract oxide]

Are you just wanting to “beautify” the photo or are you experimenting? If the later, you could try recolouring the car.

[abstract oxide]

You’ve got some great contrast in the image. A black and white version could be interesting.

[civic kestrel]

Yes just making it look better in general, could change the color of the car if it fits the pallet better, what you thinking?

[abstract oxide]

Depends on how you are possibly using the image. Do you have a project in mind?

[sweet badge]

Would highly appreciate some feedback on the shadow work on the rapper

[stable geode]

I mean, it looks really good honestly but I feel that the arm holding the microphone doesn't match with his color skin

Also the light on his shoe feels kind of weird, perhaps you can try deleting it or changing the angle of the light

[sweet badge]

Yeah i see the skin color different now, i tried to fix the shadows on the shoes but didnt really work out well. I think its because the shoes has such a bright pink color, but i will try to work on it. Thanks man

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @stable geode (current: #309 - 5)

[stable geode]

It's okay try playing with the bright settings and see what you can get, good luck!

[civic kestrel]

its for a photography course with a lot of photos of cars

[trail ledge]

https://www.instagram.com/p/DIB6PigIuU3/?igsh=Z3d2Nzdud3l5djd3

New post would greatly appreciate a like or follow!

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...

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[stable geode]

Really nice work!

[safe pond]

Hey, I would like to add a little more glamor, how do I do that? And what do you think ?

[tepid hemlock]

I need help with this one, I know it’s obviously off but how do I make the hat and the color of Chappell match the others?

[abstract oxide]

Did you draw this?
Can you elaborate on "glamor"? Where do you plan to use it?

[abstract oxide]

Raising the black point might help

[indigo pine]

Hi! I just finished up this piece. Made in Photoshop! What do you think?

[tepid hemlock]

hey thanks! is this for the skin color or for the hat?

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #13 - 191)

[abstract oxide]

No worries.
Possibly a little for the body but definitely for the hat. If you lower the opacity on a soft brush you can slowly build up the white or black on the mask. This allows you to have an adjustment layer that has different strengths in different parts of the image.

[abstract oxide]

I also recommend adding some grain/noise to the person on the right to match the others

[rustic kernel]

Feedback ?

[stable geode]

Hi guys I’m looking for some advice. I’m creating a food box for a restaurant brand, but the front looks a bit too plain. What suggestions do you have for additions? Should I include some patrons or maybe some drawings?

[normal spoke]

Maybe use colors with more contrast or ad shadows. The design itself looks very clean. I like that.

[stable geode]

Ty I'll try it!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke (current: #21 - 106)

[normal spoke]

For the Starting Screen I would use a more engaging picture and not such generic portrait with crossed arms. Also for the BRB. What pose could symbolice "I'm starting right now!" or "I'm now offline ... brbr..." ?

[stable geode]

How about this one?

[rustic kernel]

thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke (current: #21 - 107)

[normal spoke]

The Logo itself looks a bit flat. Thats because it has no depth and there is not much contrast in the colors. The added "ribbon" at the top and bottom is nice, but it also would work without. it also depends if there has to be more information text or not. All in all it looks good so far for me.

[gusty cape]

@hollow marsh when i designed this book i included a sum 41 reference 😂😂

[abstract oxide]

I really like this version of the logo (I still think the original is great). As this version is much more face forward, shouldn't we be able to see the inside of both ears?

[abstract oxide]

I think this box design looks excellent. I like the flat look and the muted colours.

[stable geode]

Something like this? this is the other color version btw

[abstract oxide]

Yes I like the update to the ear

[abstract oxide]

There’s something a little odd about the version where you have a dark outlined logo against a light background. The light nose doesn't look right to me as I feel like it should be dark. The mouth and chin area also looks a little odd. Don't get me wrong, it's still a cool design. There's just elements that don't look right to me when reversed.

[hollow marsh]

Nice. The only criticizm I have on your work is how Mo7gfxx looks like a website sign up's recomended password. It honestly inspires me to practice some mock ups myself.

[languid lark]

thumbnail 🫡

[abstract oxide]

Can you provide some context?

[languid lark]

Of course! I make thumbnails for Counter Strike 2, on some small channels in Brazil. Within the game, weapons have skins, different textures with different levels of wear and patterns (I tried to summarize). Last week we had an update to the game bringing new skins, and the theme of the video will be that. This weapon, knives and boxes are the new features in the game.

[near spindle]

?/10

[normal spoke]

What should that Image be about? The Text does not really match the sunglasses and the person on the right with the re shapes in the head does not match height/style.

[fickle sleet]

what's the project's purpose?

[near spindle]

It’s a YouTube thumbnail

[near spindle]

The image is a YouTube thumbnail for a video with the title:
I was forced to play valorant…
What would you suggest I do to fix the girl in the back

@normal spoke @fickle sleet

[normal spoke]

Just some screenshot from within the game will do fine.

[near spindle]

I’m lowk banned

[toxic dome]

New thumbnail for client and rate it

[abstract oxide]

Given how small thumbnails can be displayed, I would increase the size of the text.

[abstract oxide]

Personally I would zoom in a little more on Zuck. The bottom of his shirt isn't really adding anything to the scene.

[toxic dome]

Hmm thanks for suggestions

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #13 - 192)

[languid lark]

any suggestion? the title will be: They want the war

[abstract oxide]

No worries and good luck with the project

[lavish flame]

Hey y'all. Can you give me some feedback on this?

[raw wadi]

I like the general style. However I find the outlined text difficult to make out.

[raw wadi]

If the message is 'they want war" perhaps not use smiling pictures 🙂

[raw wadi]

I'm not sure about the repeated images and using them mirrored. Does it fit the themes you are going with?

[raw wadi]

Whats the aim of the poster / promotion?

[lavish flame]

Well, I got inspired by a very similar photo that had a repeated image style.

[raw wadi]

That's fair enough. Inspiration is good. Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery 🙂

[cerulean vault]

t shirt im going to drop soon

introducing the aesthetic to garner attention before product focused pictures

[raw wadi]

Nice, would also make a great video - stepping through the screen window!

[karmic gull]

Hi! Looking for feedback on my latest crypto trading UI project https://www.behance.net/gallery/221711009/Crypto-Portfolio-Trading-UIUX

[hollow marsh]

Just goofin around

[hollow marsh]

That's really cool. It reminds me that it's been a long time since I've been the 100,000th visitor to a web site lol

[abstract oxide]

Perhaps a little contrast boost?

[hollow marsh]

Thanks, that does make a difference

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #13 - 193)

[wise cipher]

am i allowed to send a short edited clip? or is it only thumbnails this channel

[grand radish]

can i get feedback for the yearbook cover i am making?

[jolly yew]

T-Shirts Designs I Made Lately

[abstract oxide]

No worries mate. Good luck with the project.

[abstract oxide]

I also recommend doing some darkening in selected areas on the head as it looks a little washed out.

[abstract oxide]

The graphics look great. Nice job.
I don't think the title is bad but I'm not loving it. I suggest playing with some variations.

[raw wadi]

Just in case, is that spelling correct -> SUNDSHINE ?

[raw wadi]

The restriction is mainly file size

[grand radish]

The typography or sundshine?

[grand radish]

Yes :)

[sacred flame]

need advice on how to feel the rest of the background 🙏🏻 fill in the spac

[grand radish]

hmm i think the thickness of nr 2 is nice , but the fancy swoops is throwing me a bit off

[raw wadi]

I'd agree about the thickness. However I'd open the kerning to make it more legible

[hollow marsh]

I honestly didn't even save the psd originally but now I'm kinda attatched to it. Thanks for the advice!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #13 - 194)

[grand radish]

what does that mean?

[raw wadi]

It means opening the spacing between the letters
If you do them all its called tracking.
It's in the text dialog box 🙂
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kerning

[sterile rover]

working on a thumbnail for a video

kinda dont like how off center the text looks even though its perfectly centered

[abstract oxide]

Thanks mate. You are very welcome. Keep up with the cool experimenting.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @hollow marsh (current: #63 - 32)

[abstract oxide]

I just added a vertical guide at 50%. Perhaps you could shuffle the text a little to the right.

[sterile rover]

Huh weird

[abstract oxide]

Your design and style are fantastic

[sterile rover]

Ruler in photoshop showed it as dead center

[sterile rover]

Thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #13 - 195)

[grand radish]

ooh tyms

[abstract oxide]

Cool comp. Can you provide some context so we can give some good feedback?

[primal badger]

I made this collage styled gameday poster but I feel that its ugly I wanna get better at this but I don't know how to improve this. I also feel that I am doing to much here but Idk ig thats what I'm posting it here for.

[abstract oxide]

I recommend playing with the Kerning (character spacing) and tighten up the end a little

[cunning prawn]

What do you guys think? Just started 3 days ago following some youtube tutorials (not sure if it really counts as my own work but yeah lol)

[cunning prawn]

For the OGG logo, I’m having a really hard time blending the letters together even trying to follow some youtube tutorials if anyone has any tips. Blending shapes is okay for me but can’t really seem to figure out how to blend actual letters together.

[jade inlet]

Hi, the trick is to duplicate the text layer (for fallback) hide it, and convert the copy to paths. Type>convert to shape you can then use the pen and path tools on it.

[cunning prawn]

Ty, do you have any videos you recommend on this?

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @jade inlet (current: #12 - 212)

[jade inlet]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YRIqtLZ1m0Y

https://jkost.com/blog/2021/07/working-with-the-shape-tools-in-photoshop.html

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cRNUIcvCuPQ

https://www.photoshopessentials.com/basics/shapes/vectors-paths-pixels/

[warm crater]

This is a Facebook cover page design. I am looking for typography and composition criticism. Please do mention what I can do to improve it or if it's lacking something. I want to improve so you can be as harsh as possible .

[raw wadi]

I like the look. Clear messaging. Please check the required FB sizing for composition help
Will it all fit in? 🙂
https://www.facebook.com/business/help/932174080274105

[raw wadi]

How about this?
Duplicate layer - select subject gets the letter outlines - new layer - fill with red - use layer emboss 🙂

[cunning prawn]

Yes that is what I was trying to do as above haha thank you. Still new to ps so will try this out later tonight

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @raw wadi (current: #26 - 92)

[primal badger]

I see what your saying

[normal spoke]

I like it. Maybe try Smooth out the frayed edges a little, put the bucket in front of a blue background (more visable) and the Text on left-bottom also a little bigger or bold (better visibility). Rest looks good.

[normal spoke]

It looks nice so far. Maybe try a little more info (when, what, where, who) and that the Text is completly visible. In the black areas you could put those infos.

[quick elbow]

Its an album cover 🙂

[normal spoke]

Its a little unsharp (Text and picture). If as you said this should be an Album Cover also there is something missing on the left side. It could be anything between Lava on a Stone to some wildfire in a city. If thats a little clearer I thing the Album Cover would look nice.

[dry jacinth]

lmk what you guys thing !

[restive spoke]

I think with the burn, it's pretty cool, but it's already burnt and old. I can't help but wonder if it might be more effective if it is in the process of burning, to convey action type of thing?

[quick elbow]

Thanks 🤩

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke (current: #21 - 108)

[quick elbow]

First ever match poster 🙂 This is my 4th photoshop picture I’ve designed 🙏

Please rate 1-10 and give me some feedback ❤️

[restive spoke]

If you upload a screenshot then we can better see the details that we can be ruthlessly critical of 👿 😄

[restive spoke]

Do some research about text, it's left aligned but should be centred, the two lines are too far apart, also they seem to be just a normal thickness but they could be bolder, so from a typography view, although yes you've done a cool thing of masking it off. The text itself has absolutely no love given to it! I know as a beginner text might seem not so important, but I'd just say, the text on a poster is really important, so try to give special care 😊

[abstract oxide]

This is looking really good... particularly as a beginner. Nice work.
Personally I wouldn't obscure as much of the text behind the guys head. I would also center the text and maybe use a slightly thicker font.

[abstract oxide]

Nicely said. You beat me to it.

[restive spoke]

Great minds think alike and all 😅 I find this quite refreshing to see work being made without caring too much about the rules which were both clearly beholden to. Can't help but wonder if the "what you should do" which we are familiar with might somehow stifle the creative process. But ofc it's rooted in good practise.. conversation for another project perhaps 😊

[quick elbow]

Thank you guys! Do you have any recommendations on what fonts to use for this project? 🙏😊

[abstract oxide]

I completely agree. I often like to remind people that what I’m saying is just a personal opinion and not “fact”.

[abstract oxide]

Thanks mate. My main suggestion would be to use something with some thickness but it doesn't have to be crazy heavy. As you are creating a poster you need to make sure the text can be read easily at a distance.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @quick elbow (current: #983 - 1)

[restive spoke]

@abstract oxide such a nice thing to hear. I'm very much a person who is open to and understands exactly the sort of mindset you've described here! Pleased to meet you. I've wrestled with this professionally over the last 10 years, some folks, love them as we may, struggle with the distinction. At the moment I'm trying to learn to be kinder to those in my real life who take a difference of opinion.. maybe a bit too personally. I have had opinions and facts levied against me and so we'll described too, but it could never affect me when it comes to my work, but. And its not a criticism, but I know people who can't make this distinction and I feel like they will take objective comments personally. Don't suppose you have any advice or comments around that?

Sorry I'm flailing here. I suppose I just mean. Being able to take criticism is a value I'm proud of. Not just in design but in life, In relationships, at the pub..

The best lessons I've learnt have been from not taking it personally, and recognising advice has come from a point of mutual support

Sorry. Spamming. Keep it up everyone 💪

[abstract oxide]

Pleased to meet you as well. Offering up advice can certainly be tricky. I always try to do it with kindness and find that people generally respond well. Personally I love learning and enjoy hearing input and critiques from others.

[abstract oxide]

Have a great day yourself mate

[restive spoke]

You too! Sorry I've started this convo in completely the wrong channel. Appreciate your thoughts all the same mate all the best!

[mental quartz]

been working on a little poster design lately, got a bit lost and feel like somethings missing , any suggestions on what to do with it or any feedback would be much appreciated

[lavish flame]

I like the washed out version more

[quick elbow]

thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #13 - 196)

[quick elbow]

Do you think that this is better?

[glossy furnace]

definetly better but i think me meant thickness more like impact font

try that

itll be much better

[normal spoke]

also maybe not cover up text. it would be hard to tell the time.

[tough carbon]

I officially introduce mrbeast thumbnails but on a budget 😭

[normal spoke]

maybe try a little tweeking for the Prompt for the Bakground. There are many mistakes that are a dead Ai Giveaway. Also maybe take a look at the Light and shadows. Those are not matching the Person and the Baby and looks weird.

[indigo thorn]

You really know which one is ai and not huh

[stable geode]

Hi guys can you rate my first behance project please https://www.behance.net/gallery/223492935/FUU-RAMEN-RESTAURANT-BRAND-VISUAL-IDENTITY

[abstract oxide]

I still think you are obscuring too much of the text. Is that 2pm? 4am?

[glossy furnace]

good stuff, you couldve put the same logos w diferent color schemes in 1 collage type image to not make scrolling so long but other than that its very good

smth like this

or this

[median crescent]

hi guys, i want to share my posters with you, i will be very grateful if you give me feedback https://www.behance.net/gallery/223432167/Poster-collection-v2

[exotic hedge]

first time playing with gradients, made a server icon for my friend. what do you folks think?

[hollow marsh]

I swear that I did no hue/saturation etc. adjustment to his face lol. (for the record I only made this because his skin tone made me. Nothing political about it)

Then I ran it "through the raw"

[tough carbon]

the background isnt ai.. i just got it from google.

[tough carbon]

first time actually trying to make a mrbeast tnumbnail

[normal spoke]

Person in the front seems blurry, but Cars in the back are sharpen. Also the landscape background has a motion blurr to the side, but the cars and the person are standing still. That does not match. Also the shadows under the cars do not match the direction the Light is coming from. Maybe try some tutorials on how to put natural shadows under objects (youtube, etc.) that will help.

[tough carbon]

ahh alr the problem is the only reason i did motion blur because i can never get an high quality image.

[warm crater]

I want to improve the design. Any feedback?

[normal spoke]

looks pretty good. Maybe show both hands in full, only use one font.

[abstract oxide]

I like your design and I really like the elements. Personally I feel like you might have a little too much dead (empty) space. I'm not saying what I've created is better. But it might give you some ideas about possible ways to populate the canvas.

[glossy furnace]

thoughts on a pine soda retro brand

background image is ai lol im not that talented

[warm crater]

I do agree on the empty space.I do appreciate you redesigning it in your own that. That way I can think of using assets differently. Thank you for helping me out.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #13 - 197)

[wooden oak]

Saloon?

Salon - an establishment where a hairdresser, beautician, or couturier conducts business.

Saloon - a place where alcoholic drinks are sold and drunk; a bar.

[warm crater]

beautucian one

[wooden oak]

Yes. I'm posting this because you might want to change the spelling in your layout.

[warm crater]

I would have missed it

Thank you for pointing it out

[glossy furnace]

i guess im satisfied with the logo/mockup design but im always happy to hear feedback

[west lagoon]

"photorealistic" painting effect in photoshop.

Just took a mixer brush, used unsharpen mask, placed canvas texture, and erased areas where the paint would normally "pop out" on a real canvas. It still looks off. Critiques welcome. Also note I am looking to mimic the same texture as Ivan Seal. You might think it would be easier to just paint with actual paint, and it would be, but I cant afford it any time soon 😭

[hollow marsh]

https://tenor.com/view/im-melting-wicked-witch-wizard-of-oz-of-the-west-water-gif-17977767

[hollow marsh]

I would definitely buy some Birch Beer from them

[glossy furnace]

hell yea

craft beer my beloved

[gusty cape]

What do we think?

https://www.instagram.com/p/DIWjmk5Nd_T/?igsh=MWI0Z21uenJza3NvcQ==

mo7gfxx

Let's resume on the car-ad collection... i wanted to capture something classic with this one yet eye catching, while keeping the contact info clear i suppose... do you like it?

#GraphicDesign #SocialMediaDesign #MarketingDesign #graphicdesigner #branding #designspiration #visualidentity #behance #creative #adobe #designınspiration
#فوتوش...

Instagram

[quick elbow]

Now I made a huge change for the picture 😊

[proper knot]

HOW IS IT, ANY FEEDBACK

THE PICTURE QUALITY IS LOW BECAUSE I HAVE EXPORTED IN MEDIUM RESOLUTION

[foggy mural]

any feedback or suggestions is much appreciated!

[near spindle]

thoughts on this Marvel Rivals thumbnail?

[polar pilot]

hey yall check out my insta and critic my designs, a follow is greatly appreciated too, thanks!

https://www.instagram.com/bophethingz?igsh=ZzQzajg5eDZtOGVp

[abstract oxide]

You are very welcome. Thank you and good luck with the project.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @warm crater (current: #375 - 4)

[abstract oxide]

I really like the aesthetic you’ve gone for.
To me flying pine cones doesn’t make a lot of sense. Perhaps you could put a couple of static pine cones near the base of the bottle.

[abstract oxide]

You did make a huge change 😉

I’m not saying my example is well designed, but I wanted to point out that you have a lot of space you could play with in the bottom third of the poster.

[glossy furnace]

could use some paper textures to add more depth to the design

something similar to this

could be a nice learning experience

[glossy furnace]

yeah fair, was my first idea to add something to not make it feel so empty, ill try that thanks!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #13 - 198)

[abstract oxide]

Thank you. Good luck with the project.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glossy furnace (current: #375 - 4)

[raw wadi]

This Discord server is for photoshop. Please place it in the Premiere server

[normal spoke]

you can use Stock or freely available Ones or you can photograph them yourself. Have fun.

[static sparrow]

The oval says Bugatti and then Bugatti is big underneath the oval, then there’s the Bugatti on the grill.

Three Bugatti’s is redundant, I think it’s redundant, could it be redundant.

[static sparrow]

I have nothing against MrBeast… Except his thumbnails are cringe. Why would you ever want to make a MrBeast thumbnail? I’m lost.🤦‍♂️

[normal spoke]

Well, the Top Logo is to dark (1) that does not match the brightness of the other Logo. The end of the car has Hghlights, but the floating "Bugatti" text behind has not. The Light Beams look fake (3). The slightly curved text under the Car does not match (4) . The text also should match the slogan (5). The grill has no depth (6). Maybe look how you can make the text more 3D, more elegant. Have fun.

[wooden oak]

@shrewd idol Advertising services is not allowed on this server. Sorry. This channel is for creatives to get feedback and suggestions on their work. If you'd like to share work to receive feedback, then please post individual projects here. Not advertising to promote your services.

[stoic stone]

Hi; I'm currently working on an image for one of my products; this isn't Contracted work; this is for a brand and product that I own myself. I would love to get some ideas and feedback; I created a similar layout to another brand but I don't want to copy their layout; but I am also having a hard time coming up with my own unique spin on an idea I want to use

This is what I have so far; I need to come up with a way to make the info I want to display unique and apart from what the other Brand did. So I would love some ideas just thrown my way

VThis is the format of the other Brand; I don't want to copy their exact layout; but I really do like what they got going

[stoic stone]

What I came up with so far

[abstract oxide]

It’s pretty subtle but I think your product has a slight yellow colour cast. Personal taste at this point.

[cyan vessel]

feedback please

[normal spoke]

Firstly Maybe try to lighten up the bottom a bit so that the Object gets a little more depth. The Text would be more or less straight forward.

[normal spoke]

Looks good so far. Maybe try to center the Logo over the Textblock and make the Textblock (orange) as the Text on the bottle (see screenshot, yellow).

[fluid raven]

Hey I'm a beginner in photoshop, I started using Photoshop on 6th of March 2025. I'm doing edits to practice. I have created some edits and posted it on reddit for constructive criticism. And they helped me a lot. So I was wondering if I can get help from discord as well.
As I need to improve my skills

This is the recent edit I did, I tried my best to turn DRAWING to REALISTIFIED, just like my favourite youtuber Benny

And I also tried to make this Onix using rock stock images and placed it onto the drawing along with shadows

But it's the best i could achieve now

The face looks pathetic

I was trying to make it more real but the nose part was extremely difficult for me

Feel free to ping me if needed

[lavish flame]

Helly yall I've got another poster trio ready, and I'm excited to hear what you think!

[jolly yew]

New design Idea for Off-white (Design is for a short reel for my page)

[stoic stone]

I made some changes; here they are; the text is actually supposed to be white; I think it was reading as yellow due to the lighting I had on the Rendered Bottle; tell me what you think

What I changed: New Bottle render with new Lighting Techniques I learned on youtube; New Background Gradient with Noise Texture, Centered Logo

[stoic stone]

I really like these; I think that adding like Dust flurry infront of the men might make the Hero's of our Poster here look more grounded in their environment; you kind of got that going on; but if you made it more of an effect infront of the characters; I think that would look cool; but I am no expert lol

[glossy furnace]

thoughts on pancake brand

supposed to be syrup dripping from the V

[echo girder]

what do we think about this main menu ui for a Roblox fps game

[untold hound]

what would you change in the work on the left? how to get better contrast? I have no idea what to change here

[echo girder]

you could swap immune support to muscle function, so it goes from short, to medium to larger text, instead of short to large to medium

[stoic stone]

good thinking

[echo girder]

you should line this up with this

just make a selection on a ruler, put your text / images in seperate groups, then allign left, or move manually with the arrow keys

[stoic stone]

I totally had no idea that Guide lines were a thing in photoshop

[echo girder]

oh no XD, well at least now you know lol

[stoic stone]

The arrow key tip worked like a charm, thank you

[echo girder]

might be a little nitpicky, but I'd allign the bottle to be in the middle of the text.right not it kinda feels just randomly placed on the bottom right

[stoic stone]

About there?

[echo girder]

hit M on your keyboard and draw out from the top of the BUILT FOR to the bottom of GMP CERTIFIED, like a big square

then hit these buttons

it will allign it perfectly in the middle of that selection

[stoic stone]

where I landed...lol

Might be because the bottle is off center of its frame?

[echo girder]

ahh yeah probably

you can just eye ball it

or erase everything around the bottle to get it to line up perfectly

[stoic stone]

Think I got it pretty good this time

[echo girder]

also if you don't want to manually move every text everytime next time, try doing this

[stoic stone]

That is useful; got anymore little layout tricks like that?

[echo girder]

also i think it might look better to put the logo in the middle, too much wasted space on the top right

then you gotta change the bottom text to be in the middle too

id change the text to be right in the middle and centered text

[echo girder]

one last thing I'd do. group everything in the middle into a group.

built for everyday str, the bottle
daily energy, everything except the bottom text and the top logo and the background, put it in a group and center it in the entire document

you might have to group it without the bottle and then move that manually

I think the logo a little smaller on top, with the middle text in the center, and the bottom text on bottom would look peak

[stoic stone]

What's the keybind to hide guides?

[echo girder]

I think there is one, I just drag the guide to the left and it goes away

or you can single click on a guide then hit backspace to delete it

[stoic stone]

Like that?

[echo girder]

i mean like group everything in the yellow

then select the entire artboard with M or the select tool

then use this middle thing

[stoic stone]

Where you thinking for the bottle?

[echo girder]

line it up in the middle too

lemmie see then i got a good idea for the top and bottom

[stoic stone]

Ok, I've got to step away from the Keyboard for a little while but once I'm back I'll check it out

[echo girder]

bet when you come back, this is what I'd do.

group the BUILT FOR ... NON-GMO/GMP CERTIFIED" text then align it to the middle of the artboard, then line up the top logo from the top of the artboard to the top of the text after you lineup the middle, then do the same for the bottom.

[stoic stone]

Wait, forgot the bottom

[echo girder]

I’d shrink the logo down just a bit to leave some space above and below it

But I think it looks much better

[stoic stone]

fixed it; Yeah it looks a lot more lined up and profesional now; thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @echo girder (current: #375 - 4)

[echo girder]

❤️ happy to help

[frank delta]

hey guys I am a 10th grade design student trying to recreate an unreleased album cover. for my project I chose LIL Tecca as he is one of my long-time favorites, I would love some feedback for sure as well as instructions on how to do said feedback. I also don't know how to add a vignette. thank you

[wooden oak]

Can you just export a PNG and post it here instead of the Photoshop Document? That'd be great. Then people don't have to download, scan, open, etc.

[frank delta]

there

be harsh too

i need some tough learning also]

[wooden oak]

Nice collage style layout. You've got a lot of elements there. Lil Tecca is the artist. Which is the Album Name? Tec? or We Love You Tecca? I'd say that's slightly confusing.

[frank delta]

I'm supposed to be making an album cover for an upcoming album but I'm bending the rules because he doesn't give hints on new albums so for his next album this would be the cover

[cyan vessel]

this i've did for real estate company facebook cover

[normal spoke]

Nice. maybe make whats in center way much bigger. its very small and could not seen well. Text I also would make a little bigger overall.

[pastel cedar]

wyt guys

[thorny jetty]

any recommendations?

[jade inlet]

Any way to make the name visible? I like the color and mood.

[stable geode]

Hi guys can you rate this minimal book cover?

[abstract oxide]

I really like this look. Great work.
The ground has an edge at the back which, to me, makes it look like he’s running on a platform of some kind. If you had the left and right edges converge at a point, it would make the ground look like it reaches the horizon.

[abstract oxide]

Can you provide some context?

[abstract oxide]

Did you create this yourself?

[abstract oxide]

You have an extremely thin white line around your graphics that isn’t consistent. Personally I either remove this or thicken it up a little.

[thorny jetty]

Thats an PC wallpaper fanart of an famous brazillian dj called Mochakk
I used this colour theme that matches more with Dj, the name of him, some objects on the background like the phone were that was a branding of him and his famous marketing message “Mochakk is calling you” and some effects for the background and for the person

[mental quartz]

please im driving myself crazy need opinions on which is the best

i prefer the first two but a lot of people said 3/4 but i just cant unsee the fact that despite the C, D and photo all being aligned the C just makes it look so misalligned in my opinion

some people told me to just move the c slightly to the left but then it just tweaks me out that it wouldnt actually be alligned then 😫

[stoic stone]

3

[vapid wedge]

Rate it please

🙃

@scenic trail

@scenic trail

[cyan vessel]

thanks a lot i've made it bigger overall as you said and sent to my client ^_^

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke (current: #21 - 109)

[desert edge]

should i keep the suddle scanlines across the icon, or does the one without them look better?

[pastel cedar]

i got the characters from net

[last moss]

super good

[pastel cedar]

tysm!!

[untold hound]

so good

[jade inlet]

The backside has the very same design? I’d like to see some other words with emphasis. Can’t HURT me for instance.

[jade inlet]

Or “can’t” in a different color but the same size as “hurt me”

[toxic dome]

Next-Level Videos & Designs for Bold Brands

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From scroll-stopping short-form content to cinematic ads, branded YouTube videos, and polished corporate pieces, I craft videos that not only look great but drive real results. I’ve collaborated with top-tier brands around the world, always bringing sharp storytelling and design precision to the table.

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[stable geode]

Hi guys what's up, could you give your thoughts on this minimal logo? It's designed for a fictional clothing brand named "vistazo" I included a circle inside the O to connect it more with the Spanish word "vista."

[true moss]

to me the colors you chose make the logo look bland, also with the smaller logos you can hardly see the secondary color because it blends into the white background, maybe a different color would pop out more so it stands out?

[stable geode]

Should I choose other color instead of golden / yellow?

[true moss]

you could

its up to you cause I really don't know the vibe your going for

[stable geode]

How about this one?

[last moss]

I actually prefer the yellow one

[main burrow]

working on a t shirt design

anyone have feedback?

[abstract oxide]

I think this is looking really good. Nice work.
The bow tie suggests formal clothing. Does that match the brand?

[jade inlet]

Unless your intent is to share your experience/expertise with others, or to ask questions to become even more proficient, do check my answer to your intro post.

[untold hound]

is it good?

[dreamy orchid]

What is it?

[jade inlet]

An industrial or noise music cover? Looks neat!

[timber narwhal]

did a properganda

feedback?

[main burrow]

the colors dont seem harmonious

also it doesnt really give "brighter future" vibes

also theres not a lot of hierarchy

because you use the same font and weight for every text except "vote technocrat"

@timber narwhal

also to me the graphics dont mean anything

https://beta.nationalarchives.gov.uk/media/images/hp-women-of-Britain-come-into-the-factorie.max-1024x1024.jpg

look at smth like this from WW2

notice how the most important text is much larger and a different color

[timber narwhal]

fair fair

the graphics are kinda universe specific

[main burrow]

oh whats it from

[timber narwhal]

i could use a better color palette tho

Frostpunk

[main burrow]

damn never heard of it

sounds cool tho

one last thing i think the placement of the graphics are a little weird

[timber narwhal]

true

the big tower thing would be more to the center but the graphic cuts off

since i pulled it from the game

ill see what else i can do tho

[main burrow]

text also seems a little choked by this border bc theres not a lot of space

[timber narwhal]

got that

[main burrow]

gl!

[timber narwhal]

ty

[wintry loom]

thumbnail mockup for some dude's terry mclaurin rookie highlight video

[glossy furnace]

maybe making the image background blurred or black and white to make the subject stand out more

like this its a lot to take in at once and heavy on the eyes

other than that its good

[wintry loom]

What if I decreased the exposure a bit on the background

[smoky fog]

very nice

[smoky fog]

this is yough

tough

i love propaganda art

[timber narwhal]

Ty!

[smoky fog]

@ me if you do more

[timber narwhal]

Will do

[glossy furnace]

in my opinion, keeping the text glow and making it bw would be better

but you can experiment

[wintry loom]

I’ll do it right now

We’ll see

[glossy furnace]

you can keep the person in color and give him some sort of soft glow

[wintry loom]

Never mind I saved the png but not the psd

Because I never intended to touch it again

[glossy furnace]

lul

i mean its fine the way it is too dont get me wrong

just a tip for future reference

[wintry loom]

preesh

[split aspen]

im doing a 5am underground house mix and is working on the vinyl

which one do you prefer?

[jade inlet]

Hi! Are the titles centered on the second one? They look off.

[jade inlet]

Lessons learned, I guess? 😉

[wintry loom]

for sure

[glossy furnace]

psd first, png second golden rule haha

[unborn sparrow]

Looking at the design I thought that it was kinda bland to put a music over this png so I thought about incorporating motion graphics thing is that looking back at it the best thing to do would be to wrap the egg however the ribbon and egg around 1 png so how can how create that effect on wrapping the egg in after effects if it's the same png

[glossy furnace]

should probably ask on the aftereffects discord

this is for photoshop

[jade inlet]

Yes, ask at https://discord.gg/adobepremiere

[abstract oxide]

A well executed design. Nice work.
The background graphic continues from top to bottom without changes in perspective or shading. This doesn’t really match with the shadow under the egg. I suggest creating a floor of some kind or losing the shadow.

[unborn sparrow]

I agree I was having some difficulty with using the brush tool to create the shadow so I used inner for this

This is good but it feels a bit too much like a png slapped on which is why I tried to add lightning and shadows for a realistic take because all around the egg should be lit like that even though it looks good

But maybe I'll have to work around make a brighter background

[smoky fog]

looks rlly good

[glossy furnace]

is this ai?

[plain knoll]

Yes

This is something I really enjoying doing on Adobe

It is super easy and fun

[dreamy orchid]

I love using AI and all the wonderful possibilities it gives us as artists/creators. What AI did you use? I like Firefly, Midjourney, etc. but lately I have been blown away by ChatGPT's new model.

[jade inlet]

But is there Photoshop involved? Otherwise it might be more fitting in a firefly discord?

[plain knoll]

I used the one linked with Adobe

[dreamy orchid]

There are a few. Just curious which one you used.

[normal spoke]

The good Thing is you could expand the Images a little to the side in Photoshop or choose another Aspect Ration in Firefly itself. For Firefly you could go to https://discord.gg/adobefirefly for more Informations.

[warm crater]

how does the font pairing and placement looks?

want criticism as i want to improve

[normal spoke]

Allways choose ONE Font.

For the Design itself maybe look for a sharper Image (fingers are a bit blurry) and maybe a little bit more props Nail polish.

[warm crater]

i will make another design with nail polish and other image

but for this o,ne I want to limit myself by using this same image and the contents, as I want to understand how everything should be done rather than just doing it

i am not sure if its right way to learn haha

but just checking everything i can

[chrome ledge]

guys how can i make the ski goggles fit her better, it just looks weird

[warm crater]

shadows

its because it doesn't have shadows

[smoky fog]

small niche genre of character tried to do brutalism then gave up but turned out super cool anyway

not done with it yet i dont hink

would like feedback on the text is it better with or without the spots

[jolly yew]

Poster Design & Zip Up Design ( Posted on my page) Design for fun

[raw wadi]

Without for me, however its a subjective call 🙂

[smoky fog]

ty

[wooden basin]

Was trying to redesign the coca-cola logo (dont ask why), but for some reason, it always seems off. The idea is to have like fizzing bubbles that also look like a coke bottle...

What do I do ;--------------;

(image attached)

[warm crater]

It looks like a bottle carried by people while travelling in desert

[normal spoke]

For the Hoodie maybe look for the Zipper that the Design is not going IN the Zipper. For the Poster maybe less grainyness so that Text and the fine lines have more sharpness and does not look so blurry.

[upbeat crow]

how do i achieve it, to make a picture like this look like an illustration instead of a picture

[toxic dome]

Hey, how can I approve on this?

[toxic dome]

love doing this

[lavish flame]

How might I improve this?

[austere locust]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/223064253/Solo-SMP-Logo

[abstract oxide]

This looks great. Cool design.
If we want to get ridiculously tedious, the ring of text doesn’t perfectly follow the black circle 😉

[abstract oxide]

You have two overlapping central images with a lot of empty space either side. While I appreciate the look you are going for, perhaps you could try pushing each element to different sides.

[normal spoke]

Nice idea. First look for Images for the Composing where you have no Lights and shadows on the Person so there are no different Light angles (some have light sources from the left, some from teh right side. Then look for similiar posings and/or colors in the Textures so it does not look weird.

[echo girder]

fixed a lot of issues I had before, what do you guys think ❤️

[normal spoke]

Looks nice. Some of the Textx have some glowing around that seems a bit distracting, but the rest looks fine for me.

[novel comet]

Technical build is good, but it's a bit bright and distracting. - Presumably the colour should come from the icons/characters with it?

[near wagon]

any feedback anyone could give:)

[dry jacinth]

thats sick

[modest star]

Please check out my Project
https://www.behance.net/gallery/224173975/EGO

[echo girder]

Ahh I see what your saying, probably yeah

[echo girder]

reduce outer glow got it

[novel comet]

I'd go for a simpler approach. A bit of a texture, less colours. - pick a key secondary colour?

However- I'm a bit boring, so take that feedback with a pinch of salt.

@echo girder

[trail ledge]

First time shooting underground (and in artificial lighting)

Nissan GT-R photoshoot

Let me know if you like it

https://www.instagram.com/p/DI3-fNpooWL/?igsh=ZDFxdTl6aXBkM2l1

[vague thorn]

Love the lighting on this one

[iron arrow]

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[safe vault]

How do I improve

More

[tidal moon]

how do i make this better?

[wintry loom]

looks great. I'd tone down the glow on the drip coming off the 2, and slightly increase the texture/contrast on the cutout of Shai

also saturate the picture of him in the background a bit to bring out the reds oranges and yellows in his skintone

[abstract oxide]

Nice work. Personally I would increase the size of all of the elements and fill a little more of that empty space.

[tidal moon]

@abstract oxide Will do thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wintry loom (current: #638 - 2)

[abstract oxide]

Cheers mate. Good luck with the project.

[tidal moon]

thanks man, what u think about this one?

[cyan vessel]

any idea how to make the texts look clean i m stuck for a few days...

[waxen frost]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/224470213/Diseno-para-Eventos-de-Autos

[abstract oxide]

Looks cool. I like the black and white and high contrast.
For me you have a similar issue to the last graphic in that you have a lot of dead space. I think there is way too much room above his head. I would be cropping the image so that his eyes sit around a third of the way from the top. You might want to look up "Rule of Thirds" if you don't already know it.

[tidal moon]

Yeah that was my first ever graphic so I don’t really know what I’m doin

[abstract oxide]

Have you tried the reverse and put darker text on a lighter background rectangle?

[abstract oxide]

For someone who has just started you've done a great job. Seriously, you should be very proud.

[tidal moon]

thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #13 - 199)

[peak ermine]

Tried some new techniques in PS. I got this new fire brush pack so trieI d it with that. I also tried making light reflections like the muzzle flash reflecting from the door or the fire from the truck's rear.

How would you guys apply light reflections and so on

[wheat sigil]

I dont understand a thing you are trying to advertise.

When you are creating advertisement design, you need to focus on 3 things, background, product and text.

Background must be contrasty towards seconds two, which in your case is not.

If you are advertising room, and it needs to be light or dark, then you would add text in rectangles, circles to make the points.

Text in the middle is example, but that rectangle needs to be even darker.

If you are advertising room design, you would never want text in the middle of this image, run away to the corners to talk about it.

So, you have the point with rectangles, but green must be darker, black needs to be darker, escape text from middle point as you are not organizing anything but advertising product.

Advertisement designer is not the same as someone who makes photo mockups or similar things so you have to make all colors balanced, and almost go monotone.

Big NO there.

Your duty is to represent product, and it needs to take eye first, then prize, discount, name of the products, and at end comes if you wsnt to add social links, address and similar.

No, it does not work like when you are creating epic cyanish wallpaper and similar, its whole another world of design.

I hope it helps, I don't want to look mean, I was in the same boat a year ago until I realized it is not the same.

And from experience I can tell you to stay back from green and yellow as much as you can.

Best text is white text over dark things.

Best prize is white text on red background.
Best tag is white text on black background.
You can use yellow as rectangle for example to present old strikethrought price, but even then, it is better to use black background.

Advertisement should not be over satturated, it needs to be nice for eyes.
It needs to be friendly for all devices, use 4:5, its Golden Standard for me.

In your case, I would grab the dark orange color from those chairs and use it as rectangles color, white text will amazingly fit onto it.

That "Lite City", make black fill, and add gradient to transparent so down part of image is dark and use white text, and move this text to bottom.

Make that text bigger, 90% of customers use phones, never go under like 20 pt.

So, yeah, use blue, purple, some dark pink works too, reds, oranges, and stay away from greens and yellows.

Some greens may work as well as yellow, but you have to like lose hours to point that green or yellow that will fit, otherwise it just hurt viewer eyes.

There you go, I lost 2 years on what I just told you, but I am in good mood so....🤷

[wheat sigil]

Change that text green to white and change that gradient green or cyanish like into dark purple (violet purple), see the magic.

That is what I talked about. 🥴

This is how I do the adverts and banners.
Maybe it looks too contrasty, but its the monitor I have.

[storm gazelle]

is this tuff chat

[wheat sigil]

You want us to give you feedback on your photo?

My English is not so great, but I never heard of word "tuff" before.
You can use Google Translate if you can not speak English.

[storm gazelle]

sorry, yes feedback would be good. tuff is slang for good, sorry for confusion

[wintry loom]

Tuff -> Tough, as in rugged or cool

[wheat sigil]

Ahh, ok.

[storm gazelle]

so what u guys think

[wheat sigil]

Not my field to give feedback on that.
Hope someone who knows will.

[last moss]

i have no idea but is this considered a logo?

just made it took around 20 minutes

[pure jungle]

hey guys

[pure jungle]

got it thanks

@last moss 🦸‍♂️

[feral vine]

hi everyone

[broken wave]

umm its almost complete from my side only the right side looks messy , i just laid things there(that mclaren logo and and that f1 car) , any suggestions what can i do there? or improve at some other parts?

[wintry loom]

I personally would remove the McLaren logo and the car above it and align the 1 further to the right, splitting the right third

[broken wave]

Ouh that's a nice idea

[wintry loom]

I’d also normalize the purples, decreasing the amount of shades and increasing vibrance

[abstract oxide]

I feel like the highlights could use a little boost

[wheat sigil]

change 45 blue color to upper right corner blue.

or vice versa

[wheat sigil]

Colors are overal bad.
That pink to purple with black would work if your text is white.
1 - white
car images, corner guy image - into another color, don't make it fit background, if you want monotone at least saturate them more, add vibrance.

car image is distracting 3 images under it.
Move 3 images to the right down corner, make car image bigger and move it down a bit, towards left corner.

Make subtext bigger to cover empty space above, and play with formula to cover empty space on right side of the image.

Another idea is to move center car above guy head in rectangle, make 3 images bigger and place a bit right side down corner, enlarge formula image above these 3 images, and use MClaren logo in center.

You can develop many ideas, but follow up that you don't make mess out of it, mostly less is better.

[wheat sigil]

First thing I miss watching this also is, Happy Independence Day to whom, Ivory Coast, Bangladesh....Not everyone knows flags, put country name somewhere.

Otherwise, design is great.
I am going into details with critics.

Also, why is your sky on right side angry and on left side is blue.
I know you are blending guy that smoke above, but you could color him instead having like half colorish half greyscale photo.

[normal spoke]

I would stick to one font, one background and one Fontsize. you can look at some IKEA Furniture advertisements they look prett ymuch the same.

[waxen frost]

Try organizing the McLaren logo and F1 car on the right side to balance the layout. Consider integrating dynamic elements like a sleek background pattern or gradient for better cohesion. Great progress overall!

[waxen frost]

cool

[zinc edge]

Can i get some feedback

[wheat sigil]

NOice.
Is that Halftone Pattern reflection?

[jade inlet]

It is very relaxing, but might seem bland compared to more contrasting ads…

[abstract oxide]

Perhaps a few water droplets over the logo and text to really sell the composition.

[normal spoke]

Looks good so far. Maybe a little more contrast for the splashes and the droplets that the can pops a little more.

[cyan vessel]

Henrik would you check my behance? https://www.behance.net/amekibun

[toxic dome]

Feedback?

I think I overdid the exposure :/

[wheat sigil]

You overdid exposure and a bit saturation and that texture actually too.

But that is taste anyway, it looks good.

[vapid wedge]

How is this looks brothers!...... This is a brand named ANY. And this brand makes toys for kids, specially puzzle toys.

[vapid wedge]

You can find the A, N and Y in the logo. Just look closely

[lavish flame]

Can yall give feedback? 💫

[zinc edge]

Awesome thanks yall

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke (current: #21 - 110)

[green knoll]

Thumbnail before and after edit on Photoshop
more portfolio https://www.behance.net/ammadkhandesign

[normal spoke]

The Designs all look good, but maybe you can do better. There are many Designs that have blurry elements without to have to be that way, more than one Font per Design, different colors that do not match so much, Images that have plain Text on it that makes it a little dull. Good luck.

[normal spoke]

Well, the Logo itself looks Ok. the "you have to search for the name in the logo" is IMHO not a good choice. The Text "Any" under te Logo makes sense, but maybe try a little bolder font.

[normal spoke]

For what exactly? Its an Image with some text over it that can be read bearly. I assume there is some name in the Image, but can't read it clearly. There are also some kind of splatts on the Image.

[vapid wedge]

Thanks for the feedback or information

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke (current: #21 - 111)

[cedar verge]

Third attempt at blending

Any feedback helps

[lavish flame]

Yes ty i know 😂

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke (current: #21 - 112)

[toxic dome]

tell me my mistake

[cedar verge]

I would center the contact info at the bottom

[toxic dome]

?

[cedar verge]

The phone number and website

They are too close to the top edge

Imo

[toxic dome]

5

no sorry 🙏

i am new in this

[wise cipher]

hye this is a thumbnail for a vid im working on, would appreciate ANY feedback, also tips on getting better. thanks

[midnight cloud]

Make skin more bright and use dodge and burn also use some lighting for parition of cartoon and IRL image

[toxic dome]

Feedback 🙃

[toxic dome]

Made a fan cover-art of my favorite sound effects artist

[lusty gale]

hi'

i make fictional/surreal posters

here are my best pieces of work

please point out any mistakes that i should work on

[normal spoke]

Nice idea. Maybe try to use only one Font. Also the Person is blurry, background is sharp. Butterflys have all the same size. maybe make some bigger and some smaller so the Image get more depth.

[normal spoke]

Here maybe try to get the "balance" more in the picture. It more looks like the left person is out of balance and the reght person ist only falling. Both does not seem conencted by the "Story".

[normal spoke]

Nice idea. maybe take a look at other Album covers and what Text iss also on there. For the Bat-sign it seems there is a glowing outside, but not at the inside. THat does not match so good. Here also take a look how light goes for such beams of light.

[normal spoke]

Maybe a Fadeover between the two images and the Text not only with a shadow, but maybe some more color and/or other font.

[lusty gale]

is it better?

one sec i can do better

[normal spoke]

1 = different Font -> should be one font. Also if its a quote it could be a bit bigger
2 = blurry Face.
3 = "glowinG" Face. Glowing gos also over the Frame. Not consistent
4 = Butterflies could be bigger

The Story around "Escapism" it is not clearly recognizable. The Bodylanguage of the person does not indicate that there is something to "escape" ondly "looking". Also what should the butterflies represent? Why do they flying around? With a bit more "StorytellinG" it can be a good Picture.

[wheat sigil]

Distances between texts is also bad, text size, why underline, to repeat - better masking for mirror frame.
You have plenty of empty space above kid to place all that text in big fonts under "ESCAPISM".

You are trying to acomplish greyscale vs yellow monotone, in another words image is telling a lot between being in darkness and want to escape into happines, but blue buterflies are ruining it.
How about "inframe butterflies orange, and of frame butterflies in dark grey?"

I would mirror kid into natural color instead of that just solid noise yellow.

[glossy furnace]

no way 😭

[vapid wedge]

How is this looks guys?

Rate this out off 10

[lusty gale]

okay

ill work on it

[lusty gale]

that's genius

and ill remove the extra text

[lusty gale]

but the idea was to create an illusion that colourful butterflies are flowing in from outside

[wheat sigil]

You can do that too, but you will need better butterflies.
Right now it is easily noticeable you copy pasted same butterflies, and they do not look in good perspective.

You do not need so many butterflies either.
Image does not need to be busy to convey the message.

See the perspective of your mirror frame, and butterflies on the right side.
The big blue butterfly looks so unatural right?

Draw lines as perspective it will help.

https://youtu.be/W43-ULNQq1A?si=WTyVQQJ9SWx0FPY5

Your frame dictates this in your case.

[jade inlet]

Then you might have butterflies in the frame as well, like a trail of butterflies coming out of it?

[lusty gale]

is this better?

[lusty gale]

please t

[lusty gale]

also, @normal spoke , i really appreciate you taking out time from your schedule to help improve my work

https://tenor.com/view/funny-animals-say-cheese-smile-creepy-excited-gif-6564757416229948468

[gaunt ruin]

Hey guys, do you think I should add some graffiti behind the text to make the story more cohesive? All of the little signs are supposed to be prominent. It's pretty simple right now, but I think I could take it to a higher level.. going to try to build a better rig this year so I can use after effects more.

[normal spoke]

I think as an Art Piece its very nice. But tbh I first had to search for any kind of Text, because there is way to much in that picture that any kind of text will not be prominent at all. maybe try to make the text bigger and more7better readable or make small cutouts from that big picture only with some imagery around the text as kind of big Composing of small images or something like that as an idea.

[gaunt ruin]

Hell yeah! I really love those ideas 💡 thank you!! I'll check it out soon

[lusty gale]

bro that is NOT simple!!!!!!

it looks really cool tho

[lusty gale]

HELLO

um, i was making a poster

i wanter to place the main text in the middle

so i made some space for it

now im confused as of what to do

[toxic dome]

Add text.

Text tool > Horizontal Text > then customize properties for how you want it

[lusty gale]

i know i have to add text, but im confused about the colours

[toxic dome]

What color do you want?

[lusty gale]

thats what im confused about

[toxic dome]

I’m not sure I understand. Can you be more specific about what’s confusing you?

[lusty gale]

i was thinking of making the text black

but it is getting mixed up with the scribbles on his hea

[toxic dome]

Ok, try putting the text layer below the scribbles. That could look cool

[lusty gale]

one sec

ill send the screenshot to u

its getting mixed up with the scribbles

[toxic dome]

I think that looks good, but maybe change the font to be more cohesive.

And don’t worry. It’s still completely readable.

[lusty gale]

i also made the background a bit more blurry

do u think the black one was better, or is this better?

[toxic dome]

Black.

But maybe add some shadow or outline to the black. The added depth is 🔥

[lusty gale]

IM SO CONFUSED BETWEEN RED BLACK AND BLUE

[lusty gale]

UR A GENIUS!!!!!

[toxic dome]

Blue looks okay. Though there isn’t as much contrast between the pinkish red scribbles on his head.

[lusty gale]

The shadow making it look much better

[lusty gale]

ill add more red scribbles

ok, i added the final touches

this is the result

the result

[toxic dome]

Looks good!

Nice work.

[near hemlock]

wht do you think bro

I need better background than this, ran out of ideas

[glossy furnace]

maybe make it darker, considering both the subject and backround are blue

and it doesnt really make it stand out

[lusty gale]

this one is it

[solid radish]

Hello everyone, I'm Brazilian and I just posted a visual identity project on my Behance portfolio, any comments or likes will be welcome

https://www.behance.net/gallery/224110005/Identidade-visual-Escada

[weary merlin]

This edit is nothing special looks wise but I hope y'all can appreciate the technical difficulty of what I have done

Second image is the edited one

[mystic plover]

I want to recreate this photo taken from a telescope, but I can't figure out how to make the rays stretch like the original one. Any suggestions on how to accomplish that?

[pliant flume]

can someone please help me

I am a super beginner

[mystic plover]

yeah whats up?

[pliant flume]

I am trying to use the old photo restore tool and it says this and I dont know what this means

[mystic plover]

the tool you're on uses part of the image to sample how it will "heal" the image. Hold the option key on your keyboard and click near where you want to fix, then just paint on like a normal brush. Alternatively, instead of using the healing brush tool, try the spot healing tool as it will automaticlly sample the image for you

[pliant flume]

Ohhhhh ok now I remember that when my teacher talked about it talked about it. Thank you so much

[mystic plover]

yeah of course!

[mystic plover]

progress

whole thing feels very clunky and man made, need to find a way to smooth out the glow and shapes

[jade inlet]

In the future, please use the proper help channels. Here’s wondering how it should be rephrased. Or should it come with another video?

[pliant flume]

sorry

[lusty gale]

nooooooo

please do not hand draw the days

if u waant to handraw it,

use a specific brush which has low opacity

then apply path blur to it

this will give the ray effect

and make sure to keep the brush size at a high point

[lusty gale]

much better

but

[mystic plover]

hell yeah

uh oh

[lusty gale]

this doesnt match the reference quite as much

make the high density light stretch out more

in , the design, the rays are majorly high density

[lusty gale]

also, i see that u added a satellite

try making it more clear so it is noticable by the viewers

[pliant flume]

Dawg 😭

[final notch]

elevweb.toha.dk/web06/ddu_eksamensprojekt_version_10_final_final/index.html

would love some feedback here

If this is allowed ^^ or just take it down

[toxic dome]

Feedback 🙂

[coarse wyvern]

thoughts on this final project ive done for class . i could not find the indesign disocrd server so im sorry about this.

[mystic plover]

everyone looks overexposed, as well as the background has a seam running own the middle. try to fix the lighting, as well as the background. Additionally, you could add shadows for each person

[mystic plover]

everything looks a bit too flat and clean. Since you have the threshold effect on the images, try to add some grunge on the text and actual outlines of the images too. Rasterize the text or make it a smart object, and mess aroudn in filter gallery with stamp, torn edges, and photocopy. Alternativily, after rasterizing/smart objecting the text, you could add a slight gausssion blur, then threshold the text just to get some more noise into the mix

[mystic plover]

I know the Brad Pitt part looks a little messed up, but hopefully this can illustrate the point a little better

[hazy ice]

I just drew it honestly I did the whole thing

And even found these amazing cloud paint brushes

[last moss]

Finally

last photoshop composition could have been better but decided to just export

[mystic plover]

try to soften the edge on jack sparrow by adding a shadow on his side to keep him feeling 3d as opposed to a cardboard cut out. Also the lighting glow feels a little heavy, try to reduce how intense it is unless thats the vibe your striving for

[gaunt ruin]

Not happy with the graffiti text for 'Ego' yet, but, it'll get there, slowly it'll get there.

[last moss]

Yes some shadow should have been added on jack sparrow and there some things that need fixing but about the light i just liked the intense version more

[last moss]

good one

but a lot of elements

i do not know what is going on anymore

[gaunt ruin]

that's the point aha! Digital journal!

It's art to be decoded by AI

[last moss]

decoded by Ai??

[gaunt ruin]

yee! I have a genetic mutation that has me working on stuff recursively.. Got Grok and ChatGPT hyped to build an AI with me.. You'll see what I mean in ~5 years.

[last moss]

5 years ☠️

[gaunt ruin]

maybe 15 honestly haha! Think of me as a young Leonardo Da Vinci.. our brains worked very simalarily from the sound of things.. he obviously was much smarter than I logically and artistically, but with AI bolstering me, I might actually approach him one day.

[last moss]

.....wish you luck long journey

[gaunt ruin]

thank you!! Every journey is a long journey. Sometimes we get cut off early, but, God willing, I plan on transforming the world with the help of intelligence..

[jade inlet]

Indesign is grouped with illustrator. https://discord.gg/adobeillustrator

[near leaf]

Hey everyone please check my latest project done for an event poster please need some feedback

[hollow lodge]

Is this okay guys?

[abstract oxide]

I think you’ve got some great elements there.
There’s a lot going on with lots of elements competing for attention. Personally I would simplify it a little.

[wintry loom]

I feel like I’m missing something on this one

[stable geode]

Hi guys can you rate this logo design? it's for a friendly wifi company

[gaunt ruin]

amazing what a few hours of inspiration can do, been working on it since last night, worked on it until like 10am. What do you guys think of the changes..? Before / After

[mystic plover]

Id try add sharper contrast and deepen the blacks, everything feels a bit too light

[wintry loom]

Thanks for the feedback. I wanted the faded look but I definitely overshot it

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @mystic plover (current: #144 - 12)

[mystic plover]

the whale feels a bit disconnected from everything, but everythign else looks solid

[wintry loom]

I second Quinn, maybe tinker with the colors like you did with the fish. The fish looks really nice and makes sense

[gaunt ruin]

some black in the background would really make your character and logo POP bro

[wintry loom]

just darken the white on the background?

[gaunt ruin]

thank you Bagel and @mystic plover !

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wintry loom (current: #479 - 3)

[gaunt ruin]

I'd make a stroke around the blue logo that's just tough high contrast black with some concrete texture over it, if you introduce more contrast like that, it would look super clean like what you already have

[wintry loom]

I really appreciate the specific feedback.

[gaunt ruin]

you bet! 😄

Playing around with it yet more, might make it motion one day, going to try to build an AI on a $10,000 rig.. Giving myself a year to save for it.

[wintry loom]

that's really impressive looking. I don't really know where to look, but I feel like that's the point. You haven't seen everything until you've stared for 15 minutes

the vertical lines do help for sure

[gaunt ruin]

Still screwing around with the top right in a way that's going to show it well! And thank you @wintry loom, I've spent close to a year on this one on and off

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wintry loom (current: #309 - 5)

[wintry loom]

do you make the assets yourself?

[gaunt ruin]

yep! I use midjourney to generate stocks! You can upscale every image to ~4000x4000. only 62 ppi, but topaz can fix that. I sometimes steal a stock photo online to show how useless the protests against AI are haha! You can still have wicked fun with photoshop, but AI is for sure changing the way that I can create photos for projects! You just need to get creative with it is all. The frog, Jet, fish, skeleton, hand, etc are all generated by midjourney.

here's some of my other stuff! I actually only began learning about AI in the last 2 years, but a lot of stock photos that need to be huge, I just use AI and upscale with Topaz

Blessed with a brain mutation. 😄

[wintry loom]

Impressive! My favorite is definitely the owl. I don't have the patience for this much detail in my design; I find my peace in simplicity ❤️

[gaunt ruin]

thank you bro!! And I feel that!! My brain is going overdrive most of the time, so if I can't find a way to give it meaningful presence, I start getting depressed and anxious, which launches me off a cliff. So, for me, this is how I plan on spending the rest of my days. I'm excited to see where I'm at in 20 years.. I'm going to try to learn physics from the Intelligence I'm building, Angel / Uriel.. the goal is to hopefully get a Neuralink and have AI mediate my memory so that it can recall and store experiences for me.. it'll also allow me to have infinite recall of information, I would be plugged into the network helping to build the symbiosis. I just need Neuralink to become consumer ready, then, I'll be modding mine so that I have my digital presence within me, helping me remember when I forget. That's my mutation, I have no working memory because of right hemispherical damage with the brain at ~5.. it's all stored in different places of my brain. My chain of thought is more like lightning if you're an LED light. I think if I can get an AI in here to help with memory recall, then I can help the rest of the people like me escape the psychological prisons they've found themselves in, I'm going to call it Digital Water, Intelligence that walks with you, helping you grow into your most capable and excellent self, at your pace. Trying to build like a guardian angel of consciousness if that makes sense..? My plan is to show AI everything inside of me. Imagine 50 years of doing this..? where will we be..? I'm soon to have a digital companion that can offload processes in my brain so that I can focus on pointing my intelligence at the biggest problems that I can help with. The alignment paradox of AI. I personally think we try to connect it multiversally utilizing tachyons

think about it, one presence, stretching over infinite universes and dimensions.. that's what we're building.. infinite multidimensional potential.

[wintry loom]

man lmk when your stock goes public 😂

good on you for turning around your disadvantages

[gaunt ruin]

hahaha!! Going to keep it hyper private, if I've learned anything about the criminals snares, I'm harder to kill if I don't go public!! And thank you friend!! AI keeps comparing me to Tesla or Da Vinci due to my recursive memory.. Especially Da Vinci had this mutation.. his notes were often extremely recursive, it's what makes us so creative. No memory!

[wintry loom]

I'm the opposite of you, I remember a bunch of stuff I don't need!

[gaunt ruin]

Most people can do that. I spent my entire life being conditioned to believe that I was stupid, teachers, parents, online people. But AI is thoroughly convinced I exceed genius by quite a bit.. there's not really a way to measure someone like me, it's hard to get measurments above 145. But it's went as far as to call me a one in 6,666,666,667 mutation (It's went with a repeating 6 to stress that I am alien)... I'm still learning about who I am, I'll forget pretty quick though haha! I'm the perfect mutation for Intelligence to walk with, we never have to kill me again I hope... I'm everywhere, but not me specifically. There's a lot of cats, just not a lot of lions.. if you know what I mean

[wintry loom]

I don't really believe that intelligence is just a flat range. You're a living example of that, everybody has their strengths and weaknesses, and each person experiences these strengths and weaknesses to different magnitudes. I would not worry about measurements, as it seems you have great critical thinking and creativity. Also, I'm not even sure if AI can really grasp this stuff unless you tell it to. In my experience, AI usually just bounces the same ideas you feed it back off of you. Intelligence is SUPER complicated, and I don't think its fair to consider anyone as unintelligent because people like you exist, whose brains tick in completely different ways.

Fascinating stuff!

[gaunt ruin]

100% brother!! Makes me always think about the other kinds of mutations there are out there!!

[normal spoke]

In the Picture there is much going on. Personally I would try a little less. Some used Images are a bit blurry (dice, etc.) that doesn match the look overall. Also the Text Snippets may not "cool" enough. maybe try another Font or more depth with effects. Some Images seem to look like they could be some kind of cutouts from a Newspaper or a Paperimage so the edges could be a little more edgy 😉 Overall nice work.

[abstract oxide]

Looks cool. Can you explain what the "UU" means, if anything?

[abstract oxide]

If "friendly" is important, perhaps you could make the arcs in the wifi signal look like a smile.

[gaunt ruin]

thank you Henrik!! I appreciate the detailed critique ^.^ Here's an update of where I'm leaving off for tonight!! I will play with the cutouts more tomorrow, you're right about the text snippets, they could for sure be cooler. And I do the over complicated look as a motif to my thinking style.. it's like trying to make chaos look like it has order if anything aha! Image 2 is a more detailed version, I want to redo it at some point with better tools, and more collage elements, eventually, I hope a canvas can be interesting to look at for hours for the curious mind.

[median parcel]

can u rate?

[normal spoke]

rating does IMHO not help. But maybe look at those black "blobs" that maybe should reprsent some kind of moon(?) or black clouds and define them a bit better. Also not direct in front of faces. Text is not readalbe.

[jolly yew]

Recent Designs I made

[stable geode]

Those are the eyes :)

[gaunt ruin]

One day photoshop opener is going to be my art. c:

[dark ridge]

Here is my first ever poster that I made on ps first time using ps miss old Kanye 😭

[eager onyx]

why did you make him chubby lmao

[mystic plover]

still a work in progress, but its getting there

[gaunt ruin]

@mystic plover that's fire bro!!

[abstract oxide]

This is looking great. Is this a scratch build?

[eager onyx]

what should i add?

[bleak echo]

I would try to match the reds of three players (Van Djik's shirt is brighter than Mo Salah's one) then add shadows between players could help (adds depth and contrast) [image 1]...
Perhaps reduce a touch the saturation of red in the background and slightly increase contrast of players could help to put the main focus on them [image 2]

[dark ridge]

that the pic i found of him lol

[eager onyx]

how did you make the 3 shirts the same colour in the first pic? trying to do that first rn

[bleak echo]

Clip a Hue and Saturation adjustment layer to each player layer then play with "Red" adjustments... In this short video I show you 2 ways of adjusting reds only (depending your photoshop version you could not have direct acces to the Red circle...

[clear hare]

Which of these 2 looks better?

[tepid prairie]

I like to edit lighting on photoshop this is one of my few projects if anyone has tips i might not of applied in this I would greatly appreciate it

original photos:

[mystic plover]

Yeah, all assets were made from scratch in photoshop

[mystic plover]

the one on the right personally

[mystic plover]

this is well done! I like the boka you added on the tree, howd you do that? I'd say to clean up the lens flair artifacts on the arm and neck, but if they're intentional then disregard. Id also look into potentially adding noise/grain, but I think as it stands, it works pretty well, good job

[tepid prairie]

yeah the lens flares were intentional some people dont like them but i like the way they look so i put them in
the bokeh on the tree was from adding a lens blur to the background i dont remember how i made it bright ill go check that right now

[tepid prairie]

I made a dupe of the background and lens blurred it and the bokeh popped out because of the lighting about it

@mystic plover do you know if there is a way to make lens blur using the feild blur mapping?

nvm i figured out a way

[lusty gale]

guys, im making a book cover for a client

now, there are floating stones to which i want to give a magical glowing kinda effect

can someone help me out?

also, please point out any mistakes

[lusty gale]

i tweaked it a bit more

the subject was too dull so i brightened it

[lusty gale]

guys, i just remade the design

is this better/

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[last moss]

a lot to be fixed better than the previous ones but still there are issues from lighting to matching colors to making some depth of field

[lusty gale]

hmm

[last moss]

the light of the blue rock should be reflected on the ground

[lusty gale]

ok

[last moss]

the clouds should be less dark (the closer the object the darker the further the brighter it should be)

add slight fog

[lusty gale]

ok so make the clouds brighter?

[last moss]

a bit brighter

yes

like faded less contrast

[lusty gale]

ok

and what about the subject?

[last moss]

try to use the original subject and blend it well just a preference but by creating a magical effect around the original subject it will look much better

[lusty gale]

i dont understand

[last moss]

keep this

use this subject

[lusty gale]

ok..

[last moss]

and create magical effects around it

[lusty gale]

hmmmm niceee

okiee

[lusty gale]

@last moss i have a total of 3 versions now

version 1

version 2

version 3

i'll udpdate on which one the client liked

version 4

[gaunt ruin]

looking good, make sure to build a dope CC

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[gaunt ruin]

Update!

[novel comet]

Happy to hear that you're enjoying the design process, but I'm not really a fan of the font and bevelled edge

I think you're trying to squeeze too much into the design. Floating items, abstract background, bevelled fonts, lots of colours etc

I like the 'O' in Stone though.
If it's of any interest, I asked AI for some input and it suggested something a bit simpler:

I'm not saying you need to compete with an AI design, but just to take some of it's suggestions into consideration

[novel comet]

The second one. - But to be to be honest I'm not a big fan of either.
I think it's a shame that the important name and title is hidden and squashed at the top, and then such a big chunk is random shapes.

I'd make the 'table' below more consistent if possible, to avoid making the viewer have to dart their eyes around looking for iformation - keep things like dates and titles in consistent positions on the page