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[rotund nexus]

That's gold, thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @maiden umbra (current: #832 - 1)

[vapid pilot]

A very old photo of a victorian spiral staircase in an old mansion.
What do you guys think?

[toxic dome]

Lol np

Oh Alr then

[toxic dome]

Looks good maybe on Lightroom(different adobe software) or on camera raw(in the effects tab) lower the noise and/or sharpness

Unless you want to keep the foggy look

Which then nothing for me to critique on

I would say it’s perfect

[vapid pilot]

i did use LR and PS to do this effect in the first place

yes it was the goal to look old

the raw render looks like this:

There quite a few versions i did

I'm basically just playing around.

[toxic dome]

Oh I see

Just with what you did you pulled off a very good job

However if you want to go farther maybe look into different photos back in the 1930?

I remember if it’s the 1920 or the 1940s

And try to mimic them in a bit

But honestly save it how it is since it’s practically perfect

And then play with it afterwards

[vapid pilot]

different angles and rotations might also help

im gonna fiddle with it more and maybe i finally decide what to do with this personal project

[toxic dome]

Lol alright

[hot dagger]

https://www.instagram.com/p/C1t4oqaNGM3/ my first poster using photoshop, thoughts?

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[neat steppe]

Oh thank you ! 🤩

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @maiden umbra (current: #534 - 2)

[honest phoenix]

any suggestions on this guys?

[inner dome]

how can i make this better?

[wooden whale]

The overall hirearchy of the image is good. I first saw the big header, then the 50% off is really jumping at me. tho, you could sureley work on the shaddow of the shoe. The shape is ok, but make it a bit longer and flat, so it looks like the shoe is floating on a flat surface not like that where the shaddow is at an angle. also make sure the shaddow is fading towards the back of the shoe.

[honest phoenix]

Ohk ohk ,i will fix the shadows....thanku so much

[wooden whale]

no problem good luck😁

[wooden whale]

honestly, that's something you need to figure out. You need to know what elements you want your viewers to see first and last. For example maybe place the date of the event at the bottom with the time of the event. also maybe you could play with the color of the blocks behind the text to increase the visibility of the text. But overall it looks great

[steep quail]

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[wooden whale]

Waiting on some opinions! i like how this piece turned out.

[gentle adder]

any ops?

[rough flicker]

HI @everyone can you give me some suggestion or rate for this yt thumbnail...

[vale kite]

made in 59 minutes

[jolly yew]

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[balmy timber]

Before and After?

[wooden whale]

this was kindof a random project. nothing planned and i had nothing in mind. i just did what i thought in the moment. ani opinions?

[pliant smelt]

Anyone know I can make this look better? I'm trying to make a science theme document and this doesn't really look nice

[wooden whale]

for this type of work, i don't think there is a specific answer to make this better since it's a combination of abstract and something real, related to science. Try looking for inpiration on pinterest, or try looking up abstract objects and make them relate to your project!

[normal spoke]

I would try not to make Lines "cut" limbs, also the head is in b/w but the rest is in color. The "Motion" text suggests fast Motion, but the person is more of a walking type that does not fit as good to the Theme of Motion. maybe concentrate on one Theme Motion OR Free your Head (=mind).

[normal spoke]

I would use a little bit more space between the colored shapes. Also you can try to make different sizes to represent different "Stages" in analytical science, etc.

[wooden whale]

i made the head b/w intentionally to maybe bring more attention to it, but thanks for the tips!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke (current: #24 - 75)

[normal spoke]

Normally when use colorkey the b/w parts are there for less attention. In that picture I get more attention on the hands. They are more prominent in the image. Also the yellow and violet shapes around the head are a bit distracting and not making anything to the image.

[pliant smelt]

Wdym?

[jolly yew]

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[normal spoke]

I hope that makes it a bit more clear.

[pliant smelt]

Ah okay

Thanks 😄

[abstract oxide]

Great piece. As @balmy timber said it would be cool to see the original elements that you used.

[livid basalt]

my recent design. will wait for the feedback guys

[balmy timber]

Idk if the text is necessary but it's good tho

[carmine fox]

Any small changes I should make before posting⁉️ I’m thinking of changing the color and maybe handwriting for dark blue marker

[abstract oxide]

This is generally a good piece. Nicely done.
I feel like a few shadows would really help sell this composition. Compare the shadows around the fingers verses the lack of shadows around the phone and clock.

[vale kite]

all of the elements NOT taking into account the particles

[balmy timber]

Damn, that was really nice, well done.

[vale kite]

thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @balmy timber (current: #834 - 1)

[abstract oxide]

Fantastic compositing

[vale kite]

thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #26 - 67)

[vale kite]

new work

Material

[carmine fox]

Any brush recommendations or something?

[rotund nexus]

I think for some people,it is quite hard to read the blue text

[carmine fox]

I agree, I don’t like it how it is I just don’t know how to keep the graffiti feel but also make it readable

And stay within the color palette

Maybe just a slightly offset white version of the text as a background and then I can do a darker blue?

Cause this is the original coloring I liked but I felt that the dark marker was unreadable and the tan looked weird with the spray brush for some reason

Also wouldn’t mind getting the spray paint part for the cover looking more realistic/look like it’s sprayed on the surface of the magazine cover

[rotund nexus]

Sorry, i meant the dark blue text on the image and background

[rotund nexus]

Try it

[carmine fox]

Word I’ll give it a try

I just got out of wisdom teeth surgery so I’m tryna figure this out while also messed up 😭

[unborn heart]

anyone got some tips to make these splashes look more natural?

first time trying to do water like this

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[toxic dome]

Maybe if you tried to blend the water with the overall color blends of image

I can send a video explaining what I mean along with some other things

However it’s rather long and I would recommend seeing the parts that’ll fit and fix up your image

[unborn heart]

I’d love that.

If you could send a link and maybe time stamp

[toxic dome]

https://youtu.be/g3qe4rDw1XU?si=jpcwyiwvHe35pSoP

Oh time stamp

Uhmm

[unborn heart]

You don’t got to dw

This is huge help alreadg

[toxic dome]

Look at light and contrast that might help

Maybe saturation adjustment

[unborn heart]

I’ll play with it all when I can

[toxic dome]

Definitely matching colors

[unborn heart]

Water is so hard to work with imo. This should make it a bit easier

[toxic dome]

And if you have the time shadows and absorbed light

[unborn heart]

Tempted to just retake the picture but throw real water at it

[toxic dome]

Specifically the absorbed light section

[toxic dome]

LOL

[unborn heart]

My fire one wasn’t nearly as hard

I’d send it but I don’t got it on my phone

[toxic dome]

Oh

That sucks

[unborn heart]

I was rly proud of the lighting

I’ll for sure show it off eventually

Or Ngl may just not add the splashes

Idk tbh

[toxic dome]

NO do the water maybe you can use other waterish textures but itll definitely pop if you mange to make it work out in the end

[unborn heart]

I’m at work rn but when im not I’ll play with it. Hope I saved the version with just the background tho

[unborn heart]

is this better

[abstract oxide]

The water looks much better. Getting rid of that blue has also helped a lot.

[carmine fox]

Thanks for the feedback this actually went a long way lol

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @rotund nexus (current: #391 - 3)

[carmine fox]

Gonna drop the final result in #🎨share-your-work-archive 😁

[pearl mauve]

Unfortunately the file for this got corrupt, but for future reference with something like this that has a lot of similar colours, just wanting feedback in general and also how to make an image like this look less flat :)

[novel comet]

It's ok, but is all looks a bit 'grey'. I'd make darks darker and the whites whiter... and include a tiny secondary colour somewhere:

[novel comet]

Yeh!

[abstract oxide]

Nice. Perhaps a little orange glow on the hat and collar to help unify everything

[abstract oxide]

This is perhaps an example of where less could be more. The size and lighting of the rims makes them jump out more than the car. Is this intentional?

[pearl mauve]

ah yeah nah i see that being the issue, there was something wrong with it but i couldnt tell what but yeah the attention isnt fully on the car

[pearl mauve]

thank you as well, this helps also :)

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #7 - 690)

[obsidian bough]

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[calm bridge]

What chould i change ? 🙂

[normal spoke]

you can try to match the shadows and Lights. Look how the Light is falling on the Player and also on the other objects. Then match the shadows and also look that they look natural. Also try maybe some shadow or other efect on the text that it will look a bit better and more dimensional.

[limpid burrow]

I can’t remove the car somehow, every time I try to delete it the streets gets deleted too

[jolly yew]

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[abstract oxide]

Instead of trying to delete the shadow perhaps try selecting the shadow and raising the brightness (Curves, Levels, etc...)

[wooden whale]

Opinions?

[grim birch]

does this look decent for a thumbnail ? just installed photoshop yesterday, not sure what to think of it

[paper axle]

Too busy

[grim birch]

Do you have any idea how I could keep the text but make it less busy, the info is pretty important

or should i just remove it

[paper axle]

The onky 30 minutes is confusing, is it needed?

If you can remove thst text, the move the gear text up, it'll be easier to read

[grim birch]

i'll try that thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @paper axle (current: #391 - 3)

[toxic dome]

Thank you for always giving feedback to my works.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #26 - 71)

[toxic dome]

I tried creating some car driving trough snowy land.

Original car is this.
I did some distortion, because I think they look better a bit distorted.

[paper axle]

not bad, but if the car was moving, you'd see some motion blur on the sides and wheels

[toxic dome]

I added path blur on ground and spin blur on wheels, I was too thinking about adding some motion blur to down part of a car.
Thank you for feedback.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @paper axle (current: #314 - 4)

[paper axle]

i've had to add motion blur to vehicles to get pika to animate them and what I usually do is select the side of them and then apply the motion blur just to the selected area, making sure that it is bluring in the direction the vehicle would be coming from

[toxic dome]

I see.
I spend a lot of time picking images too.
Maybe, that is the hardest part to create mockup.
Then I get too tired to add details. 😄

I wish I could draw, that would be more interesting and easier.

[paper axle]

maybe you're trying to move too fast? sometimes you need to take your time, work on the project, take a break, come bck to it, tweak details, etc

[toxic dome]

Yes.
I am nervous by nature and want to finish fast.

[paper axle]

but that's the best way to make mistakes. maybe work on multiple projects so you have things to do and can cycle around between them?

[toxic dome]

I will try to make my projects take longer time and do pauses in workflow.

[mighty holly]

Any suggestions on how to perfect this? Ive been told its good but i feel like its not perfect yet

[wooden oak]

You should think a bit more about your lighting and trying to match it up. You've got a highlight on the handle coming from the left side. However, the shadow of the knife is falling to the left. As if there is light coming from the right side. This doesn't make a lot of sense.

Also, if you intend this to be a giant knife leaning on this angle, how is it being held up? I think a portion of the blade would have to be buried in the ground for this object to be "resting" at this angle.

[mighty holly]

Ill take that on board, thank you smmm

Also do you have any recommendations for lighting and shadow tutorials cuz im pretty new to this

[wooden oak]

I don't have anything specific to suggest for this. There are probably many on YouTube. One of the best ways is just by observing. Also, going out and snapping some photos and examining light direction and how it corresponds to the cast shadows.

[wooden oak]

This is just a quick example. I didn't have the layers so I had to crudely mock this up... Perhaps use a Layer Mask to hide some of the blade so it looks like its stuck in the ground. Just a suggestion.

Then use Neural Filters > Harmonization... attempting to better match up the knife with the background.

I hope these things make sense. :)

[mighty holly]

Ahhh yeah that looks much better, thank you for sharing

[abstract oxide]

Thanks mate. I hope it sometimes helps.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @crisp bear (current: #125 - 11)

[abstract oxide]

I like this composition. Your placement of elements and the colour scheme is really nice.
A few notes…

• I’m confused by the diagonal blurring in the lower right. It suggest some strong movement which isn’t seen anywhere else.
• Your gentle transitions work well in some areas but not others such as where you have trees fading away from bottom to top.

[pearl cobalt]

i tried to create a horror image by using different images. what do you think about this. Open for suggestions.

[abstract oxide]

While you have lots of interesting elements, you don’t really have a focal point. Perhaps take the main witch and make her bigger or a little brighter. Some rim lighting from the moon could be cool.

[abstract oxide]

Nice work on that knife image

[toxic dome]

I fixed it in later version, right side corner.
However, I added snow, and more mist, or snow dust behind the car (maybe too much)so maybe that is why trees look half way changing color, or maybe it is rare trees and mountains on right side while not zoomed look like half of a trees are different color.

[abstract oxide]

That’s looking great mate. The out of focus snow. The lights. Very nice.
Something about the shadow under the car feels a little off to me. I’m wondering if it’s not dark enough. The shadows within the tree on the right look dark and contrasty. The shadow under the car feels a little washed out.
But again, the whole thing is looking great.

[past violet]

im making a movie poster for a school summative but im not sure what I should add or remove (I'm doing this on photopea since its the weekend, but will move to photoshop when the weekend is over)

[past violet]

small adjustments

[livid laurel]

I am not done with this and yes, I know there are a lot of mistakes, so can some people give some advice? Thanks!

[toxic dome]

Color matching and saturation is wrong.
Also, kinda weird light source or glow behind the mountains.

You need to have color that will be on everything.
In your case, and mostly used is cyan.

Mountains can not be just 100% black.
They need some mist, a perfect imperfecion is what make art good.

[wooden whale]

it's weird cuz that's a jpeg

[wooden oak]

Try to upload again.

[wooden whale]

not working

[wooden oak]

Maybe Discord is having some issue. Try again later.

[wooden oak]

Due to an on-going Discord incident, images are not loading properly. See: https://discordstatus.com/incidents/fk1j1k37l9mt

[wooden whale]

some gradient abstract bg i tried making. added some texture as well

[tender scaffold]

Floating Oasis ✨

[tender scaffold]

Nice... Oppenheimer like vibes

[wooden whale]

https://andresportofolio.portfoliobox.net

could you take a look at my portofolio and tell me your opinion as a viewer? i really want to know how it interacts with new people

[livid laurel]

I'm trying to replicate a sunrise silhouetting the mountain range but I'm not sure how to do it. Also how do I add mist and do you mean mountain mist or sky mist?

[toxic dome]

Mist or fog, cyanish one.

That is hard project if you're just starting.

[livid laurel]

Yeah I am aware of that. I'm not aiming for perfection, just experimenting

[livid laurel]

How do I make the sunlight more natural?

[toxic dome]

If sun is raising, color of the sky will not be dark.
You would create something that goes from orangish red to yellow, to soft yellow, to white.
The place sun raises would be white, strong white, then it would give that orange redish sky across the vanishing point that would become less powerful as distance goes on.
The best way, as I was recommended, is to watch real images.

Here is the example.

Same image is a good example of mountains mist.

You do not need to go for realism always, but it is also not good to counter it much.

[livid laurel]

how do I recreate the sun rising though?

[toxic dome]

soft brush, soft brush with gradient...

[livid laurel]

K

[toxic dome]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8NQXI_6Rcjw

It can all be done with just a soft brush.

[livid laurel]

Also my milky way looks kinda watery and stuff

[toxic dome]

Put it in screen blend mode.

@livid laurel
If you want milky way, here is what I would do.
I would turn it to fantasy, place big imaginery planet, put some glow on it (like it is some great moon), put big soft glow around it, make it as main source of light that would affect shadows and highlights.
For any mistake in process of highlights and shadows, there is a milky way of stars to blame (easily to get away with mistakes).
I would find image of an blue sky, and darken it to color per wish.
Same for mountains.
So, there is a tip, light and clear images are easy to darken, but you will have hard time lighting dark ones.
Image picking is the most important part in mockups.

Things needed:

• Planet
• Mountains
• Landscape
• Forest (Trees)
• Milky way (screen blend mode)
• Stars brush
• Fog/mist brush

If you need personal help you can DM me, or ask others in #❓ask-a-question , I 'll answer when I read, because am gonna play a game now.
Have fun Photoshoping.

[toxic dome]

Looks nice, but I would be a bit careful with blur and color transitions.

I feel something is missing or something is not right, but can't discover what.

[toxic dome]

I don't understand what it is, but it looks nice

If I add saturation/vibrance it looks like this.
Still not catchy to my eye.

[novel comet]

The saturation is the issue. It's virbrant at the fromt and almost greyscale further back.

[toxic dome]

Thank you. I don't know if the curve of higher shadows or color balance is the problem, will check it for background things.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #7 - 692)

[novel comet]

For a what appears to be a relatively light day (sunlight through the clouds) the headlights are showing a strong beam! @toxic dome

I think it needs a darker sky and background.

I mean if you wanna go silly, chuck in some other sky...

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[toxic dome]

Haha. Nice.
Yes, curves were problem.
I was going for effects that "What is further away is more foggy".
One of new is not that realistic, mountains are too sharp, and they look close, which is not realistic.
Another one is close.
Thank you again for help, it was on point.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #7 - 693)

[toxic dome]

@novel comet I am dumb.
I am trying to have haze effects in night, while everything should be just dark.
It does not work like for daylight (what's further it has more fog).
Either I have to darken all, except the car, guy and dog, or lighten this trees and front trees to make it daylight.

[lucid isle]

Hello
I wonder what can i add to this company profile, they want something more but i dont know how to make it any better,
Ideas?

[novel comet]

Yeah. The logo is missing from most banners there.

Oh wait, what is it? A little booklet?

I think it's a bit empty without much written.

[vale kite]

I didn't even realize what I had done.

[novel comet]

Idea?

[thorn stratus]

Thoughts on how to improve this, going for an eyecatching look on the Instagram explore page for my account

Would it look better if I changed the background color to this shade and the text to the background shade?

[toxic dome]

Theye are examples I followed.

This is my end result.
2 days working on it, but still not there.

[toxic dome]

Show full project with that color.

[novel comet]

Apart from the underline being off centre with the heading, it looks good to me 🙂

[novel comet]

I think the heavy fog in image 2 justifies the strong headlight beams.

I also really like the warm glow of headlights from image 2. 🙂

[toxic dome]

Yes, I think that is image from Photoshop opening.

Hard bite, but I am trying.

[fading raptor]

yo! im new to photoshop and im wondering what would make this picture better?

[final notch]

What can i do to make this look even better (its for a game)

[rotund nexus]

idk what i did xD

[abstract oxide]

Perhaps a few specular highlights

[abstract oxide]

Congrats on getting into Photoshop.
The color balance and contrast are vastly different between all of the photos. I would recommend trying to balance these.

[jolly yew]

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[lime nimbus]

Made this flyer about the lecture, but im stuck on where to pt the following intro, placement size and style etc

any ideas?

[rotund nexus]

Please, feedback

[thorn stratus]

Which is better? Going for a minimalistic but eye catching look for my page

[misty swan]

How is it looking ?

It's the first logo I designed ever in my life

[rotund nexus]

The "Behind" on the second doesn't look centered to me. Perhaps because of the curve on the D

[wooden whale]

Did this art for a friend of mine. Any opinions to improve?

[limpid condor]

blend the horizon with the sky

like put more mist in here

also

everythings look pale

[wooden whale]

Well i kindof went for that low saturated look. if i put more saturation it looks more alive and the points is to be dead 😄

[limpid condor]

i get ya

but still everything looks very hazy and blurry

[wooden whale]

what u suggest?

[limpid condor]

i think

maybe the tree aint it

cuz it doesnt look right

so maybe get rid of it

[wooden whale]

without the tree the composition is too poor

i'm trying to think of something else

[limpid condor]

yeh so maybe for the foreground put some grass

well dunno

me lost

[wooden whale]

After some more retouching i got to this hope you enjoy!

[vale kite]

Oh it looks like something I've been doing recently

It doesn't look so realistic, but I became too lazy to do what is what is

Material

[wooden whale]

honestly it's pretty good. the shadow i'd say shouldn't be so clear since the light source is not so specifit. it's more from all directions

[vale kite]

Try to make a mask for the grass and make a vague border on the horizon and add fog

[cinder inlet]

Did a Call of duty MW2 art black & white glowing lights

[toxic dome]

Interested about feedback on contrast, saturation and color.

[toxic dome]

Ground dominant color is green.
Sky dominant color is blue.
Man dominant color is blue.
You have two color saturated that fighting each other.
That is the biggest problem there.

Also, horizon line does not corespond to man.

[toxic dome]

lookin pretty good... the building on the right side needs to be blended better with the ground, as it looks a bit pasted in there

[toxic dome]

Same thinking.
I tried hard with curves, but still it is contrasty. Thank you.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @worthy igloo (current: #835 - 1)

[toxic dome]

Reds and oranges are over satturated.
Between houses and ground you should put some mist, it is clearly recognizable that it is gradiented.

Looking for critiques! Going for a 90's themed tuner magazine

I did not select bridge well, xd.
Also it should be more desaturated in distance.
But well, fixable...

[toxic dome]

Too much text.

[toxic dome]

You've never seen a 90's tuner magazine have you XD

I did not.

[toxic dome]

love cars and the theme you chose! personally, i'd say the yellow text line in the lower section of the image is too much

[toxic dome]

ty! I was thinking that but at the same time I didn't want the whole section to be black and white XD

[toxic dome]

you have more experience with computers than years I have been alive 😭

It is good if you are going for that then.

[toxic dome]

You will have more in my age.

[toxic dome]

it's absolutely ok that the text down there is only black/white, as the viewer's attention should be on the headline and the Nissan

[toxic dome]

Fair enough, didn't even think about that to be honest

I also have this one

more of a poster look rather than a magazine

[wooden whale]

how does the horizon line not corespond to the man? the perspective seems absolutely fine to me

[toxic dome]

the "RIP" on one of the tombstones is backwards, not too sure what the squiggle of green is, and the lighting on the man doesn't seem right, other than that the horizon line is fine, fog looks good, and the other tombstones are fine. Looks good!

[wooden whale]

Thanks! the RIP is inverted becasue the tombstone is inverted so it looks good. i guess i could have worked on that

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @spare edge (current: #835 - 1)

[toxic dome]

Do you have original man image?

[toxic dome]

I would suggest getting a marque of the "RIP" and try flipping it again and edit the lighting with the brush pen from there!

@wooden whale

if there's so much green light on the tombstone next to the man, there should be green light on the tombstone I circled too

[toxic dome]

Also grass should be green all the way to where light reaching end point is.
But, those are details.

[toxic dome]

^^ this too

[wooden whale]

that doesn't seem right

[wooden whale]

yeah that's definitely not right

[toxic dome]

that's the point he's making XD

Yeah. That why main image is important.

[wooden whale]

i know bro dw 🙂

[toxic dome]

o okay

Manipulating photos is hardest thing in PS.
Perspective is the first thing that needs to match.
I have bought some tutorials for it.
I am not doing it right either.
But, the most important thing is choice of photos.
Second, logic and talent.
Just third is knowing PS.
Lets practice and become better. 🥰

[thorn stratus]

Hello, which one is better and why? I am going for a minimalistic feel with little text but lots of information while staying simple. It has to be eye catching but not very out of place on my page.

[rotund nexus]

the second but with black instead of red. to me the "Behind" doesn't look symmetricle

[toxic dome]

@thorn stratus i prefer the first one, because it really catches without any color gradient irritating

[rotund nexus]

the first one looks cleaner though

[thorn stratus]

I got you guys, do you think if I added his profile on the first one it would be better?

Thanks though for the thought

[toxic dome]

yeah, you can try... idk if it makes a big difference though

[abstract oxide]

If minimalism and simplicity are the goal here then I think the first one

[supple nimbus]

made this!! not sure what to add to make it look better

[abstract oxide]

I really like your colour and contrast choices.
Given the strong contrast I think your figures in the foreground need stronger shadows.

[toxic dome]

Should I open more shadows on right side buildings?

and mountains as well?

I mean open shadows in curves and make them more foggy

[toxic dome]

Centered "Behind the Screens" from first and card from second.
Or just center everything in first one.

[whole cypress]

what font is used here?

[toxic dome]

Don't remember I can check

[pseudo rampart]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/189185247/The-Detail-Chronicles If you like Still life photography, please check my last project 🙂

[toxic dome]

i feel like it needs more contrast, especially the dark corners (to create more depth). also, the light is too bright

[toxic dome]

If we are about details, darken persons foot.

I like the glows, which are my weakest point.

When I watch better, person has more blue color than rest of the photo.

[tender scaffold]

I understand sir

Actually my monitor is not well calibrated (80$ monitor) so I don't know exactly what it's gonna look like until I import the finalised project on my phone (OLED display)

[mystic plover]

like the others said, more contrast, try to retouch the lighting on his head, it feels too directional from the right, and make the middle a touch less hazy and with a bit deeper of all the colors overall

[tender scaffold]

Okay bro gotcha

[thorn stratus]

Thoughts on this? Going for a minimalistic but bold feel. I am trying to make it eye catching and stand out, will take any and all criticism or feedback please

[toxic dome]

this greenish color and the grey background are very similar from the saturation and brightness. it needs more contrast of colors

[rotund nexus]

To me the green colors don't match eachother

[novel comet]

I don't think green on green is a great choice.

[novel comet]

What's it for anyway? a document cover? social media banner?

[jolly yew]

https://www.instagram.com/p/C2P8us3tzks/

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[livid laurel]

How do I make these characters fit into the backdrop so it feels like they're part of it?

[tender scaffold]

How's this

[latent glen]

Add some shadows

[tender scaffold]

Add some shadows, noise and a lut (adjust the opacity of course)

[normal spoke]

I like the mood and the colors. The bird for me is not as dominant as it should be and the glowing is way to much. Also why is the bird at the bottom of a tree? Also where does it come from? From the Storytelling perspective I would place the bird on a branch and place a more red/orange sunset behind the scene.

[abstract oxide]

Is this a composite or AI?
If it's a composite could we see the original assets?

[abstract oxide]

I also agree shadows are needed.
You could try adding some lights that both illuminate parts of the background and the characters.

[tender scaffold]

Yeah I understand, then I should make another composition with bird as the primary character on the branch.
Actually I added the glow to hide the imperfections of selecting the bird

[tender scaffold]

No it's not AI (Photoshop 2020 😅)
Sure here's the original assets

[abstract oxide]

Hey this is fantastic. Really good compositing mate.
I like to check these days as so many people are passing off AI as their own artwork.

[tender scaffold]

Personally I hate AI, previously I used Midjourney for timepass but now I'm bored from all of those stuff

[abstract oxide]

Good to see some people are still using the Photoshop Tools panel 😉

[tender scaffold]

I know that AI saves time, but I'm not a professional and I'm doing it for passion, although I wanna make money with this but still it's my hobby. So I restrain myself from those AI lollipops.

[abstract oxide]

Good to hear. Best of luck going pro.

[livid laurel]

This is my new version, I added some branding text. Now my problem is that this looks like some composition created by a 5-year-old. I need it to look professional enough. Any ideas on how to do this?

[hollow elm]

in my opinion text is very bright

any tips to how to improve this

[normal spoke]

Nice Concept. Maybe try to adjust Light, Shadows and Color. The Mountain in the back is a bit blurry. The Mountain in the front has high contrast and the snake has no shadows. Also maybe put some fog and/or clouds over the snake.

[hollow elm]

TY

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke (current: #24 - 76)

[abstract oxide]

As @normal spoke has already mentioned, a little selective contrast boost will go a long way with this composite.

[hollow elm]

TY

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #26 - 74)

[abstract oxide]

Perhaps simplify the text. I'd start by losing or changing the gradient and seeing if that helps. The colour of the "S" and the glow are nearly identical which serves to make it look blurry.

[abstract oxide]

No worries. Thank you.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @hollow elm (current: #836 - 1)

[novel comet]

I think you want it to look like it's breaking out from the mist and clouds, try something like this, adjust as yoy see fit...

[hollow elm]

Thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #7 - 702)

[wooden whale]

can somone give me a first impresion of my portofolio? i just finished taking it. i'm waiting on some opinions!
https://andresportofolio.framer.ai/

[novel comet]

Lovely effort, but quite a few typo's throughout it.

Here I ChatGPT has re-written your 'about me' section without the typos and dodgy grammar:

Hello, I'm Andres, a graphic designer hailing from Cluj-Napoca, Romania. The rich traditions and cultural tapestry of my homeland have always held a special place in my heart, making me never want to part ways with it. Growing up, I was a highly social individual, always forging new connections.

Creativity has been a constant strength of mine, leading me to the discovery of graphic design. The moment I delved into this realm, I knew it was my lifelong calling. My understanding of the principles of graphic design, coupled with a keen eye for aesthetics, enables me to navigate each project with precision. I am committed to utilizing my creativity to ensure the satisfaction of every client who chooses to avail themselves of my services.

My passion for sports, particularly football (soccer) in my youth, eventually evolved into a deep interest in boxing as I matured. The world of boxing instilled in me a profound sense of discipline, which proved invaluable when I embarked on a self-taught journey into graphic design. The process of immersing myself in various courses and devouring numerous books demanded patience and unwavering discipline. While there is still much for me to grasp, I am dedicated to continuous learning to stay competitive in my field.

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I also think this bright vibrant background is quite distracting:

[wooden whale]

i tried putting something more bright im the background as it's more contrasting witht he font

[wooden whale]

so the ones you sent are basically the right ones? xD btw those i did not use chatgps for. only for the "what i do" section i did

[novel comet]

Yeah. I think so, it focuses a little more on your design instead of football and has no spelling mistakes.

[novel comet]

You clearly like your blues and purples, I'd knock back the background and do something more like this....

I'm also not quite sure what your 'logo/brand' is. You use that 'A' symbol that I like, but then have that big banner on the homepage which seems entirely different.

[livid laurel]

I'm trying to make a sort of neon effect, but Ill try

[wooden whale]

right. that also looks much better. thanks a lot

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #7 - 703)

[novel comet]

You could also turn that 'Mark' you have into more of an actual idenitifiable logo/brand?

(Sorry, just bored at the moment whilst I hide out in the office whilst my kids are falling asleep)

[wooden whale]

that's not a bad concept 😂 thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #7 - 704)

[novel comet]

(oops, typo)

[wooden whale]

could you tell me the font name u used?

[novel comet]

Ummm. Closed it, didn't save it. - probably Helvetica Neue Black.

[wooden whale]

so i kind of really liked ur idea and i went with this. please don't sue me xD

[livid laurel]

I want this to be more realistic as if they were part of the same picture.

[novel comet]

I'm honoured that you followed my approach. no problem!

[wooden whale]

https://andresportofolio.framer.ai
wanna take a look? a lot of improvement has been made thanks to you

[novel comet]

Nice. I'd maybe darken the BG a little more like this since it's a little too distracting:

vs the current look:

[wooden whale]

ohh right! nice obsevation

[novel comet]

but generally, a nice improvement!

[livid laurel]

How do I blend the blue guy into the background image?

[abstract oxide]

My suggestion would be to reduce his overall brightness and add some heavy shadows.

[livid laurel]

How do I add shadows, my current one looks fake.

[toxic dome]

Rock and snake are yellowish, contrasty.
Background is hazed, dusty, foggy, shadowy.
You have idea.
You do not have a good lighting, constrast, saturation, color, haze.
I will soon go on pc, and do quick things to that.

[abstract oxide]

Looks to me like you are successfully adding shadow. The blue guy is definitely looking more at home in this scene. Push the shadows harder and see what you get.

[livid laurel]

Mmk

[livid laurel]

More shadow

Added blur to shadow.

[livid laurel]

How do I make this better

[novel comet]

More like this...

[vapid pilot]

Hello!
Recently I decided to dig deeper into ultra realistic rendering again, so naturally the first step was to recreate an asset and try to match it to reality.

I decided to create a victorian cast iron staircase as a dress piece for this scene. The scene takes place in an old mansion room that is functioning as a private art gallery.

I would love to get feedback on composition, materials and overall look!

[hollow elm]

ty

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @crisp bear (current: #100 - 14)

[wooden oak]

Its a nice image. What is the focal point meant to be for this image? Is it the bust/head sculpture? If so, I think its placement in the composition could be better. In a "Rule of Thirds" scenario, there might be a slightly better placement. However, overall, it has nice qualities...

[vapid pilot]

Thanks for the feedback!

I was already applying the golden ratio, yeah. Was placing the singular Apple as a focal point:

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak (current: #4 - 1604)

[vapid pilot]

But yeah, it is not alligned perfectly.

I might change the assets completely. we have to see

the only constant is the room and the staircase

[wooden oak]

Its not bad at all really. I was just thinking that the main focal point of the image should occupy one of those points. (Probably the lower left one.)

[vapid pilot]

👍 yep

[wooden oak]

Great work on the models / 3d scene. :)

[vapid pilot]

Thanks, it was quite an undertaking in R&D. Turns out a cast iron material and the process behind it is very difficult to replicate correctly. This is the node tree of that material:

[jolly yew]

https://www.instagram.com/p/C2VGWWaNjlM/

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[thorn stratus]

Thoughts on how to improve will take any thoughts or criticisms going for a minimalistic design but still eye catching

[subtle fjord]

Looking for feedback and criticism on my graphic design for the hockey team I shoot for. This is my third ever actual creation.

Micah seems a bit out of place on the bottom image and I really have no idea how I would go about fixing that

[craggy python]

how can i make them the same color or something

[serene prism]

go through each individual person and adjust their tint, color grading and calibration

[hexed lynx]

helo

[serene prism]

can someone give me feedback on what i should do for a logo that has BS?

[serene prism]

not a big fan on how you cut out your players, what i would do is go to your quick selection tool and select subject, i love the layout and your thought for the shadows but the lighting doesnt make sense, maybe spice up the background and don’t manipulate the numbers, just looks a little off, overall i love your thought process and style though, also, camera raw filter! trust me, some simple tweaks and dodge and burn and it adds so much to the design. I love where your going and if this is just your third design i can see you going places.

im just a fellow designer youre probably better than me in your eyes, we all have areas we could improve in

[hexed lynx]

i am making an magzine cover theme crypto what i can add

;-; i dont lnow how can i make magzine cover look like magzine cover can someone suggest

[pearl cobalt]

i created this post. Open for feedback.

i created this yesterday for gemstone product. It's not looking that much good. What should i do?

[normal spoke]

Nice idea with the 3D effect. But you did not put that red/green effect on the Text. I would do it the other way around so that only the face of him is in Focus, all surroundings are sharp and also the Text is in 3D.

[normal spoke]

in that picture you have several Gemstones that are lighted from different angles. you should choose always the same Lighting. Light and shadowy are not consistent in the whole image. shadows on the stons and on the other elements are different. stones seem to "hover" over the table thing. My Tipp: Look at other photographed Stones and analyse how the placement, lighting, Composition, etc. is made and use that for your own.

[wooden whale]

Just finished this. Took me about 2 1/2 hours xD

[vale kite]

What we think about this

[thorny obsidian]

Anything to critique/improve on? Please ping if you wish to respond

Aspiration/Reference
(By the way, had no reference while creating this. For a couple hours. W h y)

[subtle fjord]

What would be the difference in cutting them out with the other tool? And what do you mean by “camera raw filter”?

[serene prism]

theres really good tutorials on retouching players in camera raw on youtube, they’d explain better than me

[subtle fjord]

Are you referring to basically just Lightroom edits? What should I do to make it better? I decreased saturation and exposure a little.

[inner dome]

hey id really appreciate feedback on this WIP . i wanted to go for a clean esports feel. i personally dont think the graphic looks cohesive because of the middle grey rectangle that separates the top from the bottom. are there any suggestions to having a better looking divider? i will change the title, colors, and bottom background later on. any other tips would be much appreciated. thanks

[inner dome]

that looks sick

[toxic dome]

Ground should be maybe dark on that place.
But it is just fast done without detailed checking.

[novel comet]

I think the perspective/angles are off. I think placing them on a plate is never going to work. I'd try something like this:

(vs) original

[toxic dome]

Yeah, gradient divider between dark upper and lighter down grey color.

[abstract oxide]

This is a fantastic piece. Really nicely done. The time lapse was cool to see.
If you are looking for suggestions, I think the reflection in the eyes needs a little yellow.
Congrats on the comp.

[abstract oxide]

Great colour. Great contrast.
I'd like to see the two halves better matched in terms of alignment. Eyes, chin, etc...
The clothing on the left could also use some highlights.

[high citrus]

Recent photos I took

[boreal condor]

Give your opinion about this composition please guys
thank you

[gusty karma]

i think it is really good

[boreal condor]

thanks mate

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @gusty karma (current: #837 - 1)

[tawdry cape]

This is as far as I could go on this one.
Any ideas on improving this one??

[toxic dome]

I am trying to have overal cyanish and yellow-orange tone.
I should add harder tone from the sun probably.
Not satisfied with this.

[regal raft]

Amazing i like it very much

[vale kite]

I m try to fix it

[abstract oxide]

I think this is looking much better in terms of alignment.

[abstract oxide]

Personally I would like to see a little more of the detail you removed in the lower right. As already previously mentioned, a little detail/highlight in the lower left would be nice.

[toxic dome]

Personaly I think I should lower luminosity of red in camera raw, change wizard glow to orange instead purple, and work out left mountain weird shadow.
Is there anything else anyone could recommend?

[novel comet]

I'd go for a stronger contrast on the top half, like this:

[abstract oxide]

Given that the setting sun appears to be your primary light source, I think almost everything, including the mountains and castles, should be in near silhouette.

[toxic dome]

Similar highlight by size?
If thats so, then I should fix left mountain that has much highlight on its side.
Others are pretty similar.
Or you meant on intensivity of highlights?

[toxic dome]

I think i understand.
Lighting should barelly touch surface of every object.
Like a tiny line.

I will try it tomorrow.

Thank you, and yes, my main problem is in highlighting areas, I am battling with it for quite a time for now.
Mostly I skip nice selections etc. just to practice highlights.

[abstract oxide]

Thanks mate. Happy to help. And it sounds like you’ve got what I’m talking about.
For me the biggest issue is the inconsistent lighting. Some objects are flatly lit, others partially lit and others in near silhouette.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @crisp bear (current: #95 - 15)

[vale kite]

looks very good

[toxic dome]

Sweet. Colorize it fully!

[tender scaffold]

Actually I don't have graphics tablet so I don't know will it be good or not

[novel comet]

Not bad. Looks like you know it already, but check out:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sL8I55b6Qpg

[tender scaffold]

Yeah I watched Benny's 1yr old video... Wait checking this out, it will nourish my skill set

[wooden whale]

Could anyone give me a fresh opinion on my new portofolio? I need some fresh eyes to see it thanks!
https://andresportofolio.framer.ai/

[warm estuary]

Any ideas on what to change to make this look a bit more fancy?

[novel comet]

the spelling?

chandelier? wall mounted lighting? A textured door?

The plants look like what you'd see at the entrance to Ikea, not a grand theatre.
Also, the floor looks like it's from a shed, not luxuy theatre.

(Sorry, I was trying to be helpful and not just insulting!)

not great, but I did it in about 7 minutes:

some looks lame, like the lights, but the flooring I think works...

[warm estuary]

oh the marbled floor huh.

[warm estuary]

Ahhh, good point

[warm estuary]

I totally am open for it! Thanks for the tips!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #7 - 710)

[warm estuary]

what do you call those fancy flower pots? Tryna find them onn google but it's pretty hard

[novel comet]

Ummm floor standing vase?

[jolly yew]

https://www.instagram.com/p/C2c0vrrKbJx/

[tawdry cape]

I'm out of ideas for this one. Any suggestion/ideas would be helpful!! 😄

[rotund nexus]

Maybe make the font more intresting

[tawdry cape]

Noted
should i change michael keaton's photo too?
It feels a bit off to me😅
what do you think?

[wooden oak]

Nice layout and presentation. The coffee cup looks like its "floating" somewhat. You might want to adjust the shadow to make it look more attached to the surface.

[wooden oak]

I would make BAT-VERSE one word. BATVERSE. And as rev3rse said, try some other fonts.

[tawdry cape]

Okay noted
thank you for your input😁

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak (current: #4 - 1612)

[tired fossil]

Also place the coffee leaf over the desk in the corner

[toxic dome]

ok sir thanks for your feedback i will fix it

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak (current: #4 - 1613)

[toxic dome]

ok thanks

[wooden whale]

jsut finished this artwork. inspired but with my touches added to it!

[novel comet]

It's all subjective of course, but personally I think it's too busy to consider it a truly minimalistic poster, so instead I'd just go the whole hog and put a really knocked back cityscape in the background, as well as a secondary contrasting colour. Maybe something like this: 👇 (Don't judge, that was 7-8 mins work)

[fiery vine]

Any critiques? Concept album poster.

[wooden whale]

looks a bit blank to me. if it's a poster it should probably contain more elements but that's up to you and your style

[thorny obsidian]

Critique????? Please ping if you wish to respond

[tawdry cape]

Oh man
this looks goood
Thanks a lot!!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #7 - 713)

[rotund nexus]

Way better i think a sharper font would fit way more to the theme

[rotund nexus]

Same as Andress said and maybe add a bit of noise

[formal pebble]

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how can I make my version better

[honest phoenix]

hello guys , please help me what changes should i make in it to make it better

[abstract oxide]

You've done a really good job putting this together.
I would add a very small but dark(ish) shadow directly under the cap and under the plant just near the cap.

[abstract oxide]

You could also try fading out the large shadow so we don't see the end.

[honest phoenix]

Should i also make changes to any of the text ??

[abstract oxide]

Is there any particular reason why you are cropping this? You are losing part of the title and the page text is too close to the edge.

[honest phoenix]

No no ...i just want the text 'fresh' really big and Highlited

[formal pebble]

Cropping the body?

Or what part

[honest phoenix]

And i have to make to product smaller if i want to leave some space at the edge?

Sorry...nl question mark

No*

[abstract oxide]

While I like negative space, your design potentially feels a little empty.
Perhaps you could try a version where the product occupies the entire left half while all the text occupies the right half.

[abstract oxide]

You've chopped off the top, bottom and sides of the original image

[honest phoenix]

Ohkk...i will try that also

[formal pebble]

I coudn't find the original picture I lost it, then I found a chopped version online

[abstract oxide]

Perhaps you can find a cover from a different issue and borrow parts from that.

[formal pebble]

Mhm, what can I improve about mine tho

I feel like I am finished

[abstract oxide]

This is a horribly rushed mockup but a possible idea for another layout.

[novel comet]

This. This is better!

Bigger product image, less bits crammed into edges.
The band along the bottom better contains the contact info instead of letting it float about.
"Order Now" is in a more sensible location when you consider the order that text is read on the page.

[abstract oxide]

Thanks mate

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #7 - 714)

[novel comet]

Comments above already added. - but also, from a commercial point of view, the product info on the tube itself is INSANELY too small.

(Unless that tube is literally a foot long)

[honest phoenix]

Ohkk...i will make improvements to it

[novel comet]

Not Bad. - the bent skewer looks a bit weird, but generally pretty good.

[novel comet]

ENTIRELY subjective, but I think the background is a little too distracting making it a little harder to see the product. I'd do something to make the product stand out a tiny bit more:

[toxic dome]

tahnks for the feedback

[fiery vine]

Omg I love this so much

[vale kite]

I need feedback

[thorny obsidian]

Sank yuuuu ☺️ 😊 Worked very hard on it!

Making more 👍

[shrewd marsh]

i dont know if this looks good, i was trying to fix the upper text "women's fellowship presents" but idk the colour just doesn't seem to just work with the background. I also don't know if i selected the right colours for the other text. though in mind i thought it'd look good, i dont know if i made the right colour choices

[novel comet]

I think you have a LOT of different fonts, and styles, effects, gradients, shadows going on.

What's the purpose? Is it for a social media post? Is this the correct proportions?

@shrewd marsh

[wooden whale]

Could anyone give a professional opinion on this movie poster i jsut made?

[novel comet]

I like most of it, but....

• Text at bottom isn't central
• I don't think you need to STRETCH the L. - I think it would still work at a 'normal' size.

I'm also a tiny bit confused about the proportions. Is that what the yanks calls 'Letter' size? It's not international A4 proportions.

[wooden whale]

oh ur right abt the text
also what do you mean bt proportions?
The L i streched bc when it was normal i felt like the design was focusing to much in only 1 specific point and the rest was really empty

[novel comet]

re: Proportions - I don't design movie posters, so could be completely wrong, but page size looks too short and fat:

as in.... if you printed it, it wouldn't fit in any magazine anywhere, or any poster frame outside a cinema.

(but again, I have little experience in this area so could be wrong @wooden whale )

[wooden whale]

ohh right. Didn't actually think about that this was just a personal project but i'll defo think about that in the future

[wooden whale]

thanks!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #7 - 716)

[wooden whale]

btw should i place the credits on the right side like this? i was thinking that most of the weight in the image is in the left side and maybe this will balance it out. what do u think?

[novel comet]

Definately central.

https://www.studiobinder.com/blog/movie-poster-credits-template/

(FYI - It's called a "billing block"

[wooden whale]

ohh okok ty

[mystic plover]

Any critiques?

[mystic plover]

@thorny obsidian This looks sick, I love the style. Only thing would maybe be increase the texturing in the face a tad to blend it more but still keep it the focus, but it looks super good

[thorny obsidian]

Thanks!! Can't believe people are actually suggesting to add in more detail lol. Usually I get the opposite advised, but now I know my real folks 👍👍

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @mystic plover (current: #837 - 1)

[novel comet]

Depends on it's purpose?

[mystic plover]

It’s a poster for me and my fiancés bedroom, just something that looks cool that we could frame

[wooden whale]

I guess you could blend the planets better to match with the overall feel better

[tender scaffold]

Toddler Deadpool

[novel comet]

Not bad. Since you asked for feedback, I felt it was useless if I just said "yeah great" - so this is constructive...

• "Coming Soon" is partly unreadable
• Is the lightning supposed to be IN the road? - feels like the bottom part of the lightning layer needs to be masked off the road a little?

[tender scaffold]

I think I should make the road darken little bit

[quiet tinsel]

Hii everyone!
Here is my task submission for the design internship position, where I had to Design an intuitive navigation menu for Blinkit app, ensuring seamless user experience across diverse functionalities.

Would be really grateful if you could see and provide any valuable feedback😊.

https://www.behance.net/gallery/189998173/Blinkit-App-Navigation-menu

[novel comet]

I'm impressed. How is this meant to be submitted? As a long, white document or is this how behance displays all documents?

oh, sorry, I've found the 'slides' view now

[toxic dome]

Looking for feedback on this design I made!

[novel comet]

If I'm being picky, I'd suggest you bring in a tiny bit of colour and additional weight for the headings and subheadings. I also think that annotation lines that are seemingly random angles don't look great and prefer 'straight' angled ones that don't cover the screen seem to look a little more considered (see top right).

Even just a tiny coloured bar along the bottom of the pages stops the design looking completely void/empty.

Try and avoid single words on a line where you can (known as Orphans) and add a little spacing between bulletpoints to make it more easily readable.

[toxic dome]

I'm slightly obsessed with brutalism as of right now

[novel comet]

Also, when you only have a little bit to say on a page, maybe find something else to include on the page? e.g....

[boreal condor]

Give your opinion about this composition please guys
thank you

[novel comet]

One obvious thing to me is the window...

[boreal condor]

yeah i cut the window out to make that transperant and added another pic behind that

[boreal condor]

wow

[novel comet]

Just a bit darker with the green behind might help?

[boreal condor]

thanks mate

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #7 - 721)

[novel comet]

You could do that by painting in some green behind and changing the blend mode of the window to multiply

[boreal condor]

i will try that thank you for your suggestion

[wooden whale]

Can i get feedback on this? Like what can i do to this to make it more poster-ish. Maybe some abstract things as well or idk i ran out of ideas

[normal spoke]

Like the idea/concept and approach. maybe try to have some Edge Lighting on the Chain and text so that it pos more out. Also mybe try to give the "Chanied" Text a more "grundy" look by ading some texture or so. For the story in the pickture maybe some hammer that knocks on the cement / wall or chain to try to brack it. Right now the dude looks pretty much chilled with that chain around his neck 😉
Also you can try to add some wall flower or so.

[wooden whale]

Thanks for the ideas

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke (current: #25 - 77)

[normal spoke]

Besides what James said I also would look on how the light falls. On some edges you have the Light, but then they are missing at the same time...

Also for me there is the bouncing light from the right side wall missing.

The guy on the left has light on his right face side, the guy in the middle has no light from the right at all and the guy on the right seem to have Light from the front. That oes not seem to be as consistent as the eye would expect it.

Also the dudes on the front do not seem to have such sharp edges but the corpses in the background hanging from the roof are sharp. Normally things in the back are more out of focus. maybe try to putthe same graininess that are on the dudes also on the window side and the background that it all fits together. The concept itself I like!

[proud cobalt]

Hello

Im a former graphic designer but have been working in the 3D and CG industry for the past 10 years. I have decided to dive back into graphic design and work on a new personal portfolio that hopefully will get back into the field

I have started working on my first project "Totstack". The name is a casual term for a small child or toddler, and "Stack," referring to stacking toys incorporating a playful and child-friendly tone into the name.

I have been following abiconnick who i think is a brilliant designer with a very unique style and has been using her brand guidlines template

this is just a work in program and i would like to know if i still get a chance in the industry haha

[novel comet]

I absolutely love the logo, the assets, the colours, pattern etc, Social posts work well too.

The only thing I'd change is how they're presented.

There's some nice examples showing how others have done this here:
https://venngage.com/blog/brand-guidelines-templates/

[normal spoke]

very detailed concept. I first asked myself why TotStack and not ToddStack but anyway. Designwise it seems pretty clean. The Logo could maybe also get some 3D effect on the edges. The Faced on the squares are pretty generic, but maybe effective. The Design overall feels very formal and generative. maybe try some kind of unique Shape or Image and a slogan that loosens the whole thing up a bit.

[novel comet]

Todstack?

'Tots' is a term for small children. Tots

... oh were you thinking Toddler?

[normal spoke]

Ok, then t may work. Yes I was thinking of Toddler.

[proud cobalt]

Thank you @novel comet I'll take a look at the templates

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #7 - 724)

[novel comet]

yeah. Makes perfect sense. - I'd started to think you'd lost your mind!

[normal spoke]

https://tenor.com/view/crazy-omg-shocked-what-the-gif-25678174

[proud cobalt]

@normal spoke the faces on the squares represents toddlers stacking blocks on top of each other. I actually have another version with the 3d effect but I felt it got too busy

Can you suggest how to make it less formal? I'm trying my best to keep it simple and trust me it's not easy haha

[normal spoke]

The Logo pretty much reminds me of the "Toys R us" Logo 😉 maybe add shadows on Text/shapes, use more vibrant colors with less black mixed in it, rearange Text (not every time left-alligned, mix it up, etc.). For the Logo maybe try to loosen it up to ad some "Gimmick" in it. a stylized children's rattle, pacifier or toy maybe.

[wooden whale]

how do you like the execution? really listened to ur advice

[proud cobalt]

Ok will try to do that. Thank you!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke (current: #22 - 78)

[normal spoke]

getting better. Try maybe some variations on that and decide what you like best.

[wraith lodge]

What do you guys think of the lighting on this and how can I further improve this for it to look as natural as possible?

[boreal condor]

wow thank your for this reply i really need that.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke (current: #22 - 79)

[hexed veldt]

Maybe some Motion blur and some depth of field blur + some snow could push it a bit further.

[abstract oxide]

Nice work.
I would think the ice would be a little reflective. Perhaps a touch of colour to suggest a reflection as opposed to just a shadow.

[thorny obsidian]

Critique? Please ping if you wish to reply

Do I still need to add text/poster graphic h

[toxic dome]

I understand it's a maximalist poster but oml there's SO MUCH going on

[thorny obsidian]

:^)

[toxic dome]

I didn't even know what it was for a good few seconds 😭

it looks cool tho- I feel like if you do text it's either gonna stand out WAYYY too much or it's gonna get buried

[thorny obsidian]

Nah nah not in the photo
not at all at this point

[toxic dome]

ngl tho maximalist is cool asf on a real note

not enough appreciation

[thorny obsidian]

So here's some sense of reference:

Hold on

Ok well nothing is loading, computer is not turning on

[toxic dome]

Those are gorgeous

[thorny obsidian]

I was suggested last time that I should add in more detail since the piece was empty and lacking direction at the same time
Wondering if I should apply the same, but a simplistic focus text outside the art

Since the main is aoowosisjoaowkoo

[thorny obsidian]

HYes 'w'

[toxic dome]

for the first one or for the ones you just sent?

the ones you just sent are like

PERFECT

[thorny obsidian]

internet is going at the rate od 1 turtle

Very first, to see if I should remain consistent to my last one

There we go

[toxic dome]

Ooooooo

Those are all amazing

I don't think it lacks direction at all

[thorny obsidian]

The before definitely did, that was somewhat of the final product

Before and the suggestion:

It was actually a very mindful and interestingly accurate advice, never heard of it like that before

if this internet keeps taking this long to load im just going to start viciously chewing cardboard at this point

Hmmm well I'll experiment when my computer turns back on ;C

Don't know what happened
Started blasting music then the screen went black
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[toxic dome]

Worked on these, ordinary PS things.

[toxic dome]

Color balance in photo number 2 is alright.
You don't have to add anything and you can add non important things like some fog or haze in back elements, birds in sky, darker sky and lighting strike or whatever, but it is good as it is.

[abstract oxide]

I reduced the saturation on the side of the product and I think it looks a little more realistic.

[toxic dome]

Thank you.
I reduced it even more, it was oversaturated.

Even this looks warmer without much saturation.

[abstract oxide]

Hey that’s looking really good.
I think you need to work on the highlights and shadows on the vegetable basket to make it better match the bag.

[abstract oxide]

You might also want to add a touch of noise to your entire images. The large blocks of solid colour and perfect gradients make it feel a little fake.

[toxic dome]

Ty.
I acually added a bag on top with multiply and did some blend if, but it still comes smooth.
Maybe because area of a bag is smooth also on particular place.

[abstract oxide]

There’s lots of ways to generate noise in Photoshop.
You could even find an image of noise, throw it on top of your layers, change the blending mode and lower the opacity.

[toxic dome]

I see.
I will consider that in some next projects.
This one is already sent.
Customers usually do not notice such things. 😃

[abstract oxide]

Excellent. Best of luck with all those future projects.

[tired fossil]

challenge feedback pls

[wooden whale]

i would make the image more dramatic by adding all kinds of effects and elements

[tired fossil]

hmm, thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden whale (current: #158 - 9)

[wooden whale]

For these type of projects you should really give camera raw filter a try. Just play with the sliders untill you like the look! You can also try some of those overlay textures which u can find for free anywhere

[tired fossil]

how do I do that? sorry I'm new to this

[slow jasper]

this banner is pretty bland, well for now, i don't know what else to add to make it more alive, any feedbacks?

[wooden whale]

Oh no problem. So it would be kind of long to explain it here since there are a lot of principles to this. What i strongly recommend you do is you go to skillshare/udemy and take courses. First set of courses should be about software learning itself, so you familiarize yourself with the program bc when photoshop is intimidating to you that's a problem. After you learned the software enough i recommend you take courses on graphic design fundamentals. For these more realistic designs you need to understand perspective, lightning, highlights, blending objects etc. And then there are the basic graphic design fundamentals like contrast, hirearchy, grids, color theory and many more. I guess you can use youtube but skillshare is stupidly cheap for what you can learn from there and it's 100x more professional than yt.

[wooden whale]

For example in ur photo your focal point (the boy) has no contrast compared to the bg making it hard to notice. by adding more effects, highklights and contrast you can make your focal point more visible

[tired fossil]

👍

[slender herald]

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1119055484855537665/1200995995681566750/Peroxide.png?ex=65c835ae&is=65b5c0ae&hm=5114ae60d373d910565f391ada184a5cf165c3ad34b356f2d9c1640e6ac9436a&

feedbasck plz

im new to photo shop

[novel comet]

It's got potential! What's it for?

Is it a facebook banner or something? Where is it being used?

[slow jasper]

yup, a facebook banner

also thanks!

i screenshotted it wrongly thats why it feels kinda off for you if you noticed

The only thing it's missing is emotion

i feel like its soulless 😭

[novel comet]

I'll have a think and get back to you

[slow jasper]

Thanks!!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #7 - 729)

[novel comet]

Have you checked things like canva or Adobe express for inspiration/ideas?

[slow jasper]

nope

im doing that right now though!

[novel comet]

I just tried using a different weight for the bottom part:

Sticking some smokey, perfume/flower/whisps of smoke, etc, and some kind of box to hold it all in.

Or without the box?

One small issue, is that the colour AMBER is orange, not purple?

[slow jasper]

damn thats not what i expected, thats so amazing

[slow jasper]

yup, but the owner of the page is called amber so yeah

[slow jasper]

i think with the box looks much better

[slow jasper]

that look even better

[novel comet]

(I used this as inspiration)

[slow jasper]

where do you get these backgrounds?

[novel comet]

Here's an example of how it was made.

I generated the background in mindjourney,

Here it is:

@slow jasper - Here's the PSD, do with what you wish 🙂

[novel comet]

Baby face is too low resolution, and the blue text is pretty much impossible to read.

in fact the red text is hard to read too

[slow jasper]

Dayum, thank you so much, you really helped me learn a lot of new stuff in the proccess

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #7 - 730)

[novel comet]

I must admit, it doesn't feel like a very feminine font for a perfume store: - I'd consider suggesting something more like this?

(inspired by an old project of mine actually:
....which are Shotgun Shells!

[slow jasper]

oh! you are actually so creative with the references you use

[slow jasper]

that actually gives more of the perfume/feminine vibes just as you said, i might consider changing the font just because of that, the only reason i used that bold font is because the logo uses it

[novel comet]

Well, if they have a logo already, I guess you want some consistency - I'll leave you to decide how to proceed! Good luck.
(P.S. The 2nd font was called "Beyond Infinity")

[slow jasper]

Thanks!, you did a lot for me today i don't think i deserve all of that 😆, but i'll definitely take your advice

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #7 - 731)

[novel comet]

It's honestly fine. I like helping people who are at least trying to learn and complete their projects themselves. - I tend to ignore people that come here and say "Hey I need a logo designed, or "I'll pay 5 bucks for a t-shirt design!"

[slow jasper]

it's my first time around here, i did not know these people existed 💀

[thorny obsidian]

Critique????? I have no clue what the hell I'm doing but i

Please ping if you wish to respond

[thorny obsidian]

Love the detail on this, here's some vibrancy/fogged contrast reference to consider

[old fractal]

I would say add more depth to it.
Also, the far object is, less contrast it would have.
You can use little elements like leaves, particles or rock near camera.
Other thing the image lacks colors. Different colors make image better looking.
Maybe add smoke?
And lighten up castle?
You already did good job. The image still has much more potential.
You can make it lot more interesting.

[warm delta]

It's cool. Sort of 90s, early 2000s, it looks homemade and sort of camp. My only issue is that it's kind of hard to tell what it is, as is often the case with designs like this as a whole. What is this for? Kind of looks like a casette cover.

[old fractal]

Same. It looked nice.
But i also had no idea what is it.

Or what you did.

[thorny obsidian]

Me neither 😂😂

[old fractal]

Answer i was not expecting lol.

[thorny obsidian]

It kind of just rolled out that way, when I wanted to put a more major focus on a border-text situation, to get a break from the cluster a bit

Since this was my first time, I think I'll have a more direct reference if it leans on a poster-feel again

Although I didn't have a reference whilst creating it ii

[wintry orchid]

I made this comic book themed header.
I want this to be perfect so please be brutally honest

left is the villian version and right is the hero version

[wooden whale]

This is a logo i created for a concept brand named "The Golden Hop Brewery & Restaurant" The look of the place is vintage, with a lot of rich old wood. Kindof like an old london pub.
Any opinions?

[abstract oxide]

I think it’s generally really good. Everything is quite balanced and I like the colour scheme.
I feel that the word "golden" should at the very least have a capital G. I would also recommend making “The” small and “Golden” far bigger.

[wooden whale]

okay sure! thanks for the tips

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #22 - 79)

[wooden whale]

also need to take some cpurses in illustrator cuz i get lost really quickly and my workflow there isn't quite the best

[abstract oxide]

No worries. Thank you.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden whale (current: #146 - 10)

[abstract oxide]

Best of luck learning Illustrator

[carmine fox]

How we feel bout this⁉️

[lean kayak]

Feedback?

[slender herald]

images i get from google are so bad

[lean kayak]

I feel you

[slender herald]

like idk how to make them better😭

[lean kayak]

I personally subscribed to envato elements last month

it's been a game changer for me

[slender herald]

thats urs?

[lean kayak]

yeah

[slender herald]

oh damn ur thumbnail looks

so

professional

[lean kayak]

thanks man

[slender herald]

to the point im questioning

thats ur channel too?

[lean kayak]

nah

it's for a client I'm working with

[slender herald]

ohh u design

ahh alright

[lean kayak]

he makes videos on peak performance psychology

[slender herald]

im gonna take a look

i like

videos like that

[lean kayak]

https://www.youtube.com/@SamMartinPeakPerformance

here

[slender herald]

what does it do?

[lean kayak]

it's got stock photos and videos, as well as tons of other resources you can use for your designs

overlays, presets, fonts, etc

[slender herald]

oh damn how much is it

[lean kayak]

its 200 euros per year

100% worth it in my opinion

[slender herald]

oh dam i dont even got 2 euros in my bank

that’s probably endgame stuff

ill find a way to get better quality

@lean kayak how long did u study photoshop for

till u perfected

it

[lean kayak]

ahh

[lean kayak]

I started using photoshop last summer

I've only got around 5 months of experience

[slender herald]

and u got so good to the point

youtubers

are hiring u

why

wow*

[lean kayak]

yuh

[lean kayak]

Does anyone have any feedback?

[shell slate]

Can you give me some feedbacks ? 🥹 I'm a newbie

[tired fossil]

how to add depth to that image?

[old fractal]

There are many different ways to do it.
You can pick one or multiple.

For example, Blur adds depth. You can put focus on subject and add blurr to things which are either too far away from camera, or too close to camera.
For example blurred particle or leaf or a rock.

Other thing is contrast. make sure you set distant objects to a low contrast. they should not be detailed and sharp.
other thing is add some object near camera. and make it dark/shadowy. For nice depth.
It is a whole thing, you can search about it on youtube.
You should always add depth otherwise the composite will look Flat and no environement to image

One nice this in this image is that you added bluish fog to mountains and horizon. that is also depth. The distant things are usually this type of blue colored dull.

[tired fossil]

Thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @old fractal (current: #107 - 13)

[warped holly]

i am needing feed back what i can do differently or at least improve i wanna get better

[carmine fox]

Updated

Deleted the original but if someone could lmk if this looks good I’d preesh it 🙏

[thin warren]

I could do better on the masking. I used AI Generative fill to finish the knee on the bottom

[thin warren]

I like it but I don't understand it

[novel comet]

Yeah, the masking isn't 100%, but the lower the image resolution, the harder it is.

[carmine fox]

Like you don’t understand what it means or the text isn’t readable

[novel comet]

I think the composition choice is a little strange. Also, what's it for? - All busy down in the left and empty on the right,

[carmine fox]

It’s just a graphic design thing for my IG, the 8 is the brand logo and the brand is cult of 8

[novel comet]

Probably doesn't "get it". - Like, it doesn't appeal to me, but that's just a style preference.

[carmine fox]

And then the text on the second pic is supposed to be like security cams, and I tried to edit it to where it looks like it’s glitching

[carmine fox]

That’s fair

[novel comet]

Yeah. I'm absolutely not knocking the technical build. I'm usually pretty quick to point out objective flaws when giving feedback on here and I'm staying quiet on yours 🙂

[carmine fox]

Thanks ❤️

[boreal condor]

hi guys, the left is original photo, and right is edited photo. I am trying to get vegetation on that building. I want your opinion about is it convincing that builiding is spreaded by plants?

[normal spoke]

I had to look twice to realize that there was something on the wall. At first it looked as if only the coloring was adjusted here. I would maybe try to paint a few more branches and bushes. The leaves that are at the top of the roof and on the right edge of the house do not look like they belong to the building. Here the color and sharpness do not seem to match that of the building. So you can still rework it.

[old fractal]

Here is you should learn. Image is not combination of Darkest + Lightest color. It should contain a smooth bridge from dark to light. In images you shared. I see the light which is bright solid color with glow. And shadows which are dull black. Light does not work that way. You should make smooth shading. Different intensity of shadow and light.

If you make something glow. It will have different brightness of light reflected upon things.

[lean kayak]

Looks good bro

[slow jasper]

Yo

what do you guys think would fit as a background for a computer/mobile store banner?

or should i leave it blank like a solid color

[slow jasper]

that kind of inspired me to do the art myself

i will try

[toxic dome]

This is advertisement for job appliance, or how you call it.
My duty was to present white wall color, and try to make it take market place of the region where this shop is present.

First guy is dissapointed by color, it is like entrance, and then solution is "our color". Buy it, you can color more wall, it is eco, not expensive, smells nice etc.

Photoshop and Premiere Pro used.

[inner cave]

A concert poster for a imaginary band - this is for my high school media arts class. Just wondering if anyone sees any areas for improvement, thanks in advance!

[old fractal]

I would say do not use One single color for everything. You can use different color and create better focus on subject. If you were to use only 1 specific color for this paint ad. Then use gradient or different shades atleast..one single solid color carrying whole ad is not much eye catching

[old fractal]

Looks cool to me

[hot dagger]

thoughts?

[old fractal]

Font is too bold for theme. I would feel more relaxed if you use thin font.

And more like..handwriting style? Stylish.

I see you adjusted bottom text. Since its hollow it does not burden much. But you should not use same Font, same Text, and same size twice in a photo. There should be only 1 heading.

It would look better if you delete top Relax heading (in my opinion).

[toxic dome]

How this goess for a bilboard?

[novel comet]

I like most of it, only thing I actively dislike is the TAKE.......................................A..................................... BREAK...................................TO........

Stick it all on one line. If the text needs to be smaller/lighter to fit it in, then so be it!

[slow jasper]

what do yall think about this, a logo for computer and mobile accessories, (MAINLY for mobile)

not finished with it yet, i dont know what else is out there to be added so i came here again

[novel comet]

Consider if this logo will be readable at 25mm.

NOIRSTORE will, but the tagline wont. - Is that an issue?

[novel comet]

I think if you just increased the weight of the tagline, and made sure that NOIR and STORE were the same weight (and font), you'd be good! - It can still work with stroke+none stroke.

[slow jasper]

oh alr

also the phone was representing the U

[slow jasper]

also your idea is pretty good

[novel comet]

A U?!

[slow jasper]

yup

[novel comet]

In that case your logo has bigger problems 🙂

There is no way many people would think the phone represented a U. - I think you'll need to use it elsewhere.

[slow jasper]

thought that a phone would be a closest thing to a U

[slow jasper]

also the nour and store are in the same font 😭

idk if it gave you the illusion that theres one bigger than the other

[novel comet]

They're not the same font. - Look at the R.

...and the O

[slow jasper]

no i mean like

i said "in" the same font

look

this is what i mean

not the same font

[novel comet]

oh, Same text box.

?

[slow jasper]

yes i forgot that word

[slow jasper]

i didin't have the same font for both

[old gale]

Hey

[novel comet]

Cool.

[slow jasper]

wait

[slow jasper]

that one is good actually

[old gale]

Does anyone have cracked photoshop?

Mine isn't working :(

[slow jasper]

???????

just buy it

[old gale]

I had bought it in another pc

And i forgot that account

I also got a new laptop

And i cant buy photoshop again

[slow jasper]

that still does not change the fact that it's your fault

you the one who forgot it

[worldly zealot]

Thoughts?

[slow jasper]

its good but i had to look for a while to realize that its a pen

[novel comet]

@slow jasper - I may as well send these over to you before I delete it 🙂

[slow jasper]

idk if thats just me

[novel comet]

(I glanced and thought it was a rocket)

[slow jasper]

thanks :D

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet (current: #7 - 744)

[slow jasper]

LOL

[novel comet]

You won't get any help asking here in the Official Adobe Photoshop discord server.

[worldly zealot]

Thanks😂 maybe I should give it boosters 🚀

[wooden oak]

The PC doesn't matter. Adobe is a subscription and you can sign in to your Adobe Account from any computer and install the apps.

If you can't remember your password, just contact Adobe Customer Care and they will get your account sorted out.

[slow jasper]

that person person is probably making stuff up as an excuse

[slow jasper]

💀

[thin warren]

What it means

[carmine fox]

Oh word

It’s for a theme I’m doing on my IG with burning stuff and like burning down the system vibes

So it was an intro post to that theme, the goal was mainly for it to look cool but also have kinda super villain vibes

[carmine fox]

Any feedback for the proportions and composition of this? It’s for the first slide of an ig post
I can get the quality and stuff higher but first I wanna see if this layout of things is visually pleasing

[carmine fox]

After coming back and looking at it I think there’s too much weight on the left compared to the right

[old fractal]

LMAOOO🤣🤣🤣🤣

[sharp meadow]

Some movie posters i made. i am a beginner as well btw give me feedback.

[novel comet]

Good start, Nice work. - I see you've been using colours, gradients, masking, effects etc.

The John Wick one is a bit bright, - I think you could darken it a little more:

[sharp meadow]

ok tysm for the feedback

[old fractal]

Thats good work. I will definately use atleast 2 opposite colors. Instead of one in whole poster.

Also try to match contrast of all images.

Make sure what is direction of light when combining images.

[sharp meadow]

yep thanks i will watch some tutorials on lighting and blending images together

[sharp meadow]

yeah its not very good because i used auto contrast 😂

[novel comet]

Also, from a movie-poster perspective I personally think it's better to not repeat the same character multiple times 🙂 - Looks weird! - but this is just personal preference and not related to your photoshop skills.

[old fractal]

You're just beginner so its all good. I can say you are an intermidiate now.

[old fractal]

It's differnt poses bro. I like it though.

[sharp meadow]

for the john wick one i only used him because i was going for a poster based around the character instead of based around the movie but i get your point

[old fractal]

Ye. Its just personal preferance got it. But i prsonally like that style. Different poses and same character looks good..

Try camera raw filter next. Its cool.

[sharp meadow]

i actually did use camera raw filter but i didnt really know what i was doing

[old fractal]

Just keep making.

Its cool.

[sharp meadow]

ok thx

[lean kayak]

Feedback?

the video is a case study on Jonathan James, the guy who hacked nasa for fun

[normal spoke]

From the Thumbnail point of view its very well composed. maybe try to make the text a bit more pop-out by Outline it or make a bright shadow, etc. and/or make a white or greenish Outline around the guy in the middle. The text right now looks a bit flat. Also parts of the text is not visible.

[lean kayak]

Thanks for the feedback bro, appreciate it

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke (current: #22 - 80)

[wooden whale]

Any tips on improving this?

[abstract oxide]

Perhaps rework how the text and subject overlap. For me they obscure too much of each other.

[abstract oxide]

Perhaps a little contrast boost?

[abstract oxide]

There is a lot of green light in this scene. So much so I feel that more of it should be falling on his face. I've probably overdone it but I hope it shows what I'm saying.

[indigo ether]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/190536589/Gripz-Branding-Project-2024

[spice fable]

Hey, this is my first ever attempt to make a serious project in photoshop, i was trying to do a football poster but i wanted first to do one with lol esports player Faker, i would love to receive any feedback (positive or negative) to improve my work

[wooden oak]

Looks really good for a first attempt. Its a lot of red and the elements are somewhat melting together. I might break it up a bit and do some of the text in white so that it stands out against the red and black background. I like the addition of the halftone. Good work. Keep going!

[lean kayak]

That makes sense, but I think the contrast the red face makes with the green background woulf work better for a thumbnail
Thank you tho, appreciate it

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #22 - 82)

[lean kayak]

This looks amazing bro good job

I would actually consider ordering ngl

You've got some great thumbnails as well

[abstract oxide]

No worries. Best of luck with the project.

[lean kayak]

Thanks man

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide (current: #21 - 83)

[abstract oxide]

This is a fantastic piece for a first project. You should be very proud.
If you are looking for suggestions, I think the whole thing could use some brightening and perhaps a contrast boost.
I'm not a fan of his face hidden behind the text.
Keep up the great work.

[indigo ether]

Ty very much 🙏

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @lean kayak (current: #396 - 3)

[spice fable]

Thanks for the feedback, i will add more white in my next one

[lean kayak]

np man

[spice fable]

ty, yeah you are right it looks better, for the face i had no other choice i made a mistake by puting all 3 photos in a dynamic layer very early so i couldnt put the text above the trophy and behind his head at the same time

i will try re doing one and fixing the text

now that I think about it I should have put an additional layer with his head and put the text behind it

[wooden whale]

oh i didn't mean to make it ugly, i wanted to create more depth

[spice fable]

i tried these two options but idk they feel off, the first one misses the R and makes it just "fake" and the second one still has the same problem, any suggestions?

[abstract oxide]

Perhaps you’ve overcomplicated things for yourself.
What if you used just 2, instead of 3, images of Faker?
This would give you more room to move around the portraits without obscuring the title.

[abstract oxide]

I wouldn’t say you’ve made it ugly. It’s just hard for me to see what’s what.

[spice fable]

something like this? it feels a little bit empty on the right

maybe i should add another small image

[vapid pilot]

Quick question, do you guys think the colorgrading is enough or too suddle?

Here is without it:

with:

[normal spoke]

to be honest I do not see much of a difference. It may your choice what you like better.

[vapid pilot]

That's fair