📝project-feedback

[novel comet]

The text alignment is a strange choice.
I don't think you can have 25 pages in a magazine
The black text is too hard to read
The line spacing is a little wonky
I'm not sure what the white border is about
Spacing between some words is incorrect

[near temple]

Thoughts?

[novel comet]

L E T T E R S P A C I N G ... seems a little bit too wide 🙂

Also, there isn't much size different between the names and the headings

...and what order are the names in? They're not alphabetial, or by number?

[warm estuary]

does anyone know how to nicely remove the outer blue color of that masked sakura tree?

usinng the refine edge tool is kind of a labor intensive one

[brazen gull]

Hello, I need help for a student project, I would like to replace the wolf logo by the other wolf but after several test I can not get a beautiful rendering. If possible, I'd like the new wolf to protrude from the frame as well, with white outlines on the outside like on the first logo. Thank you in advance.

[karmic meadow]

Thanks, it's a magazine cover, the spacing was intentional, but should change it

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[sudden stone]

great suggestions, thank you!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @past jay

[abstract oxide]

Thank you and best of luck with the project

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @karmic meadow

[karmic meadow]

@abstract oxide @novel comet would either of you have an opinion on these?

i think getting rid of the dark blue helped but it doesnt look bad with the orange

[sick ore]

Good afternoon everyone, I have made some updates with my token for the card game. The back I have included the rules to leave the front with the visibility of the image. I am leaning into the art deco vibe and would like some help with the color layout. Not sure what I should tweak to make it flow better.

[novel comet]

I like the style you're going for, but it makes the text in the middle almost impossible to read

I think you probably need to pick a solid BG and stick with it

[sick ore]

Ohhh, yeah that is a good idea.

[novel comet]

If you need a hand figuring out how to mask the centre part, let me know 🙂

[toxic dome]

i need some compositional advice for frame 6 and 9

[sick ore]

Gotcha. DM sent!

[carmine fox]

Been working on this idea for my Instagram. Anyone got suggestions for textures for the background and then the torn pics of me? Or any other feedback/ ways to make the foreground pop out more. There’s more to the right but it’s just a random collage of photos

[abstract oxide]

Nice work.
I’m not a fan of the yellow eyes. I think it’s because the tones of the eyes are inverted.
I much prefer the blue/yellow/black version. Personally I would not use a black drop shadow on black text.
Keep the versions coming.

[abstract oxide]

I really like your design. Great work.
You could try adding a little (more) shadow to the top torn out pieces to give a little separation and add a touch of 3D to your collage.

[unreal abyss]

hello, excuse me but i do not understand wht exactly you want to say

here my latest version of the certificate
open for feedback. also, should i keep the blue line under the name (nom prénom) the same length for every certificate or do i adjust it depending on the person's name length?

[queen otter]

Hey i have a question, the inside of the folded menu looks very good, but the outside looks really bad in my opinion
and i don't really know what i should do to make it look good while keeping it somewhat clean

(i'll remove the menu recto and menu verso too)

[carmine fox]

Thanks!

[normal spoke]

I would place some word or slogan or what kind of Restaurant it is. Like "Healthy Food" or " fresh and delicious " or "toujours chaud et frais" depending on the region and some kind of personalised Logo.

[normal spoke]

I like the portal Feeling. The Artwork is beautiful! The Light that is falling on the outside and the inside are different, but the oudside light on the stones may not be consistend with the outside enviroment. Also that "Grid" thing on the edged of the portal looks like its an overlay and not coming out of that portal. Hope that helps.

[normal spoke]

What do you want to know? me personaly I would use a knife for the fight and let the "Boy" sliced to pieces and some spices would fall over him to get the perfect Ketchup. In Frame 7 there would already be some kind of Tomato Mouse. On Frame 8 I would put some emtpy Ketchup bottle like a waiting army for replacement behind the sensei or so. but thats just an idea.

[queen otter]

Alright, i'll try everything you said. Merci

[warm estuary]

Thank you so much!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[trail stag]

It's a older project from me as i tried put a studio picture of my kids into a new environment and make it a bit mystic. What do you all think about this?

[normal spoke]

Nice Scenery. Sadly the Light Sources do not match with the Light/Shadows on the street and on the persons. you maybe go over that again. hope that helps.

[karmic meadow]

@abstract oxide Ay, thanks. I appreciate the feedback.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[karmic meadow]

@queen otter looks good. Inspiring

[queen otter]

Thanks :)

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @karmic meadow

[carmine fox]

Finished my design in #🎨share-your-work-archive but if anyone has feedback on it for future reference it would be much appreciated 😊

[abstract oxide]

I like your right aligning of all of the text. That’s exactly what I was suggesting.

[abstract oxide]

Perhaps remove the blue line under the name altogether.
Or perhaps put the blue line under the title as that size never changes.

[abstract oxide]

I think the clean look you've created looks fantastic. Have you tried just dropping in a couple of tomatoes and a leaf for just a little colour?

[abstract oxide]

The lighting on the kids suggest a light source from the right. However, there is a big shadow directly below them. Try and create a shadow that matches the directions of the other shadows in the scene.

[sullen depot]

I think that’s because they’re standing directly under a light post. They should be top lit.

[normal spoke]

I like the idea with the paper cutouts Collage. The Color Contrast is a cool idea. In some places the Cutout Window Lines and Frames seem to be not matching the underneath Window Lines. That maybe can be fixed. Also I would miss the reference to the pink shorts. The person wears that yellow jacket and jeans. But where does those pink shorts come from (thats more of a storyline and not a designwise issue). Maybe those pink shorts could simply hang on a line at the balcony or so. The Collage overll is pretty cool.

[abstract oxide]

If that's the case then the lighting would need to be adjusted on the kids.

[livid siren]

Preparing Halloween. Feedback more than welcome.

[sullen depot]

Yes I agree

[normal spoke]

Very nice Composing. Like mood. I think not much must be improved. Maybe look for a sharper Fox and adjust the shadows. Also the Shadows of the crow above. The Candles could also be a bit more sharp. There is that waved yellow Lightning like from "The Flash" but at the end of the rays there I assume should something be like a ghost but its not there. The Kidclown seem to come out of the wall. Maybe put something on the left side in the Image. On the right side there is the Fox, big Pumpkin, sceletons, the crow. But on the left side its a bit empty. Overall very nice.

[toxic dome]

This is becoming obsession.

[toxic dome]

For me, fox needs a bit shadow, nearest candles are too transparent, highlight magic way should go behind that stone.

Can you tell me do you have a fog brush, and what is called brush for that cyan way on the sky?

[queen otter]

Thanks ! I'll try doing that

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[verbal void]

todays project, any feedback?

or cool ideas what could i have done, improved?

[normal spoke]

For what should that be? Do I look up through a crowd of people or is it like a breach in a wall? Could be both. maybe try to bring something with a bit more context into the Picture like a bird or Dynamic to the Logo in the back.

[verbal void]

thanks for feedback, bird is great idea

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[verbal void]

as for purpose for now its just ranomd designs which should be cool

but i would like to transition into clothing designer, for my own brand

[verbal void]

yeah it should be people around the camera

[normal spoke]

Then maybe try the Silouettes of the people a bit detailed so it is more clear.

[sly narwhal]

which one do you guys like better because I like the first one better buy my parents said that the face looks deformed and that no one would buy it

[normal spoke]

Well, I also would like the second One better, because I can tell that its a Building. Both are a little to black so that it is very hard to see anything at all. Maybe try not to be so contrasty and put a bit more grey in it. Also if it is really a deformed face I wold not put it on a shirt at all.

[novel comet]

You may be dissapointed with the end result if it was to be printed. - I doubt a printer would be able to get the BLACK as dark as you're expecting. - It would be more likely to come out grey.

Additionally, that would likely be a DTG print and many printers can only print a square that's about 30cm x 30cm, so depending on the size of that hoodie, you might not get the print as large as you're expecting.

[unreal abyss]

thank you😊

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[unreal abyss]

sounds like a good idea!

[sly narwhal]

It’s only black and white so I could screen print high res with one color

[naive cypress]

any suggestions?

btw

the chips are supposed to look healthy

[novel comet]

red and yellow doesn't give me a healthy vibe

gives me a mac donalds fat, sugar vibe

[naive cypress]

lol

ill try a different one

nvm

[novel comet]

I'd be picking greens, light blues, etcx

[mental fossil]

i would maybe also try making it not too bright, think that example is great because its a bit more mellow

[normal spoke]

I'm not sure, but I think a bit more text (in white) and a bit shadow for te "Potato Chips" so that it gets more depth and maybe some more and better looking Chips that shows what flavor it is would be nide.

[naive cypress]

i added mountains to the bttom of the bag but i stopped working on it now

[naive cypress]

i made a starbucks bottle by simply wrapping stuff, any ideas?

[old tulip]

i think the logo looks decent but the text feels a little off

also i was wondering if someone would share their opinion on this

i added the twin snake emblem onto this knight but I cant help but think it feels out of place

what do u think?

[sterile cove]

I think it looks great! You might feel a little 'off' about the snake emblem because of the depth of the purple that is in it...it is much stronger on the lower portion so pulls the eye automatically toward the lower portion of the image rather than as a whole. I am not sure that i am explaining it correctly. But maybe change the purple strength or lift it higher in the emblem so it's not so bottom heavy? Other than that? the snake emblem looks great!

[old tulip]

alright, ill try doing that, thank you so much

[toxic dome]

Hello. I'm still fairly new to a little intermediate on painting digitally but mostly fairly new to painting digitally on Photoshop. (When I went to college I used it for photography mostly). And I want to know if this digital painting is good at all? I have painted before digitally but never on Ps. I've used other programs. Now that I have the chance to be curious and explore Photoshop for digital painting, I'd like some feedback on this work. I really tried shading here and there. I feel like there's something definitely missing on this piece. I didn't want to include a sun because I wanted the artwork to have the weather as overcast with light clouds. What do you guys think of this art piece overall? Thank you.

[naive cypress]

yes, however the ball looks like its just staying on air, add a little shade to it and move it to the right

[toxic dome]

Oh my! I think I may have forgotten to shade that as well... I did a lot of editing yesterday after taking a break from this art piece. Thank you!~

[normal spoke]

I think its a pretty good start! You may look up some Tutorials about digital painting and adding shadows. On the sand, the clouds and the seashells you maybe work a bit more. But I like that style and with more practice it will get better and better. There is much potential!

[toxic dome]

Thank you~

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[abstract oxide]

No worries. Cheers.

[placid moon]

#❓ask-a-question message

Light mode or dark mode?

[warm delta]

Hi! That will entirely depend on what kind of background those buttons will sit on. It may be easier to ask for feedback once your project has come a bit farther along.

[placid moon]

it will be on my discord server xD

[warm delta]

As emojis?

[placid moon]

yep

[warm delta]

In that case, I like the light themed ones more. They contrast nicely against the background, and I'm sure they'll look better on lightmode for users that prefer that. I'm sure the dark outline isn't necessary either, which will let you make them slightly bigger.

[normal spoke]

I would put both on (why not) you never know how the user interacts with you. Mobile, Desktop, etc.

[placid moon]

Its not for the users is for announcements, embeds...

[normal spoke]

Same thing 😉 Have fun.

[lament widget]

Give me some reviews
And tell me how can i make it better☺️

[normal spoke]

Nice Composition! Like the idea very much. For the birds in the Forground I think the shadows on the tortoise are a bit to heavy and to strong. Also there seem to be some glitches above the left bird and the rainbow. The mountain on the right shows some white edges that would look maybe a bit better with some kind of haze or clouds over it. Also the Shadows of the birds are not consistant with the position of the sun and the glow in the tortoise eye. That maybe all very minor details, but perceptive. Hope that helps.

[lament widget]

Thanks for ur help i will fix those

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[normal spoke]

as an additional idea maybe but some kind of castle or tower or so on the mountain and put something like only the top of a mountain on the left side of the image.

[lament widget]

I thought about it but it was too hard for me to make that
Any way i will give it a try

[unreal abyss]

i know i keep coming back with questions for these certificates

but i dont wanna mess up

i want to know the texts at the bottom of the certificates

the line breaks etc

is it good enough?

im asking because its inconsistant

[boreal condor]

i tried this edit. Any advice to improve and your comment on this edit. Thank you guys

[placid moon]

WOW

Thats amazing dude

[lavish sundial]

any advices??

[normal spoke]

Nice Edit. Not sure if there is REALLY much that can be done. Maybe try to make some bigger and smaller sparkles around the Butterfly and also some sprinkle dust falling down or so. Rest looks pretty good. IMHO.

[normal spoke]

Wow, looks nice allready. I think the Pictures work pretty well. maybe try more or less Contrast (not sure which direction) so that ther are more highlights on the face and it gets more depth. If there would be a Forrest Image with a bit less Cloud and haze the back of the head maybe also geth more depth. But all in all its cool.

[lavish sundial]

Thanks

[toxic dome]

"Dairy from outer space"

See how I was the copywriter, designer and, researcher on this project.

in here:
https://www.behance.net/gallery/181018579/Dairy-from-outer-space-social-media

#547473772727238677 #graphicdesign #547473772727238677media #marketing #digitalart

[normal spoke]

Nice work. Love how you wanted to make the Canvas like it is a real canvas. Two tiny details that could be improvd would be that the Signature also maybe have to be like Canvas and not put on top and also the Light. The Cows, the mountains and the bottom of the Astronaut are in yellow light and only the Top of the Astronaut is more blueish? Should IMHO also be more yellow.

[placid moon]

O finally combine both styles

Not to dark but not to light

[normal spoke]

looks Ok.

[boreal condor]

thanks for your comment

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @placid moon

[boreal condor]

thanks for your response i will fix that soon

[normal spoke]

It looks like an oil painting, but the Tree in the back bothers me a little, because its to sharp for the scene and the scene itsels is for my taste a little to blurry overall. The Scene itself looks like its harmonious in itself.

[lament widget]

Can u help me make this better

It was realy hard to make it

And can u tell me how to make those Rock s looks farther

[naive cypress]

add some more shadows tbh

and near the lava planet with rings thing

add some lights

cause the mountains going in the space of it are dark while they should be lighter in my opinion

[placid moon]

Hey guys do you see my pfp pixelated?

Ita good resolution?

[warm delta]

It looks good. Since it's just a profile picture, it doesn't matter all too much if it's pixellated

[warm delta]

Which rocks do you mean! The ones in the space part? To do that, you'll have to use a trick called atmospheric perspective, where an object loses saturation the farther away it is. It's more prevalent on Earth, but you can still see it in space with the space dust. However, you will have to be subtler with it. So if you want something to look farther away, make it smaller and blend it in with the background slightly by perhaps making the color closer to that of the background.

[lament widget]

Thanks i will try

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @warm delta

[median skiff]

Hey folks, so I have never used photoshop before but I wanted something and figured I'd be able to muddle through. I did have a question on it though because in several hours of googling I am not finding any answers. I made this go to into a specific context on a website that I assume is messing with the image and that may be having detrimental effects on it, and I'm wondering what I should do.

https://i.imgur.com/Q1SCt5C.png

it's made to go on

https://next.nexusmods.com/cyberpunk2077/collections/doi2dj

I was trying to ape the markdown font for the body points, but... markdown doesn't seems to have an official font that you can get, only stuff that's close. I wound up going with roboto regular flex and originally weighted it to 400, but moved it to 500. Even so, I notice that both the size of the text is different and it seems "less bright" than the actual written markdown text on the website. It also looks "better" when zoomed to 125% rather than 100% on the website, and that just doesn't make much sense to me. Any ideas for how I can better replicate that, or should I drop it and just find a different font and not try to replicate?

Appreciate any assistance, thank you!

[novel comet]

I think you just have to acknowledge that putting text INTO an image comes with some flaws. - it's not responsive in any way, and won't scale based on browser size.

e.g. - this is now close to unreadable.

Thankfully I imagine a big chunk of the audience on a PC Game MOD website, will be on PC's and viewing with a big old monitor and not a phone/ipad.

the 'live text' on the website (that you called 'markdown'?) - will ALWAYS look better when zoomed in, since fonts are vector based and your image is raster based.

There is 0% chance of you really improving how you've added your text in. If anything, I'd just change how the pictures on the right look.

@median skiff

[median skiff]

i was afraid of that

markdown itself, particularly it's implementation on that website rather than github's... is not good

but yeah, I know it won't look great on mobile, but that's a sacrifice I'm willing to make

i guess I could make the font bigger, but the website is gonna scale any image down some

[median skiff]

that does look nice

[novel comet]

@median skiff Yeah, I guessed your 'editable area' on Nexus Mods is quite limited.

[median skiff]

yeah it's really not great, but wanted to add some sort of pizzaz

but I also have no idea what im doing in photoshop beyond what I can look up

[novel comet]

and yes, literally uploading a larger scale image (e.g. 8000 pixels across) won't really help either, since the site will just scale it back down again.

[median skiff]

makes me miss github

[novel comet]

Personally I think it looks fine though. - Anyone on the site will know how/why you have a 'picture' of text and wouldn't judge because it looks a tiny bit different.

[median skiff]

appreciate it

guess there's just big downsides to text on image

[novel comet]

Well there are more downsides than that. - It's AWFUL for accessibility. - Screenreader software won't understand it, and google and Nexus won't be able to read it, for when it comes search optomisation.

[median skiff]

bright side of bein at the top of the list, it doesn't really matter

but yeah, I do hate the inaccessibility thing

[novel comet]

Again, I assume that people with severe eyesight issues probably aren't playing Cyberpunk anyway

[median skiff]

they wouldn't even let me do like a light image for light mode or dark image for dark mode like i did for our github page

it's just very limited on that website sadly

[novel comet]

I think you'll find that most sites wouldn't offer that option.

[median skiff]

usually you would just do it like

<picture>
  <source media="(prefers-color-scheme: dark)" srcset="https://raw.githubusercontent.com/z9er/CyberpunkTHING/main/resources/images/wabbajack%20readme/color%20change%201.png">
  <img alt="Shows an illustrated sun in light color mode and a moon with stars in dark color mode." src="https://raw.githubusercontent.com/z9er/CyberpunkTHING/main/resources/images/wabbajack%20readme/color%20change%202.png">
</picture>

[novel comet]

I honestly think you've done a a decent job. - I won't bother suggesting how you tweak and adjust your 'edit area' within the Nexus mod page since you're clearly more experienced than me in that area anyway 🙂

[median skiff]

well thank you for your feedback, I am a complete virgin when it comes to photoshop, no idea, thankfully there's a lot of helpful videos and whatnot if you dig around

gradients turned out way easier than I thought they would be, even grabbin them from an image

[novel comet]

Yeah. Definately. The recent photoshop updates changed how the gradient tool works.

[median skiff]

i shamelessly stole the idea from somewhere else and just... made it work

https://imgur.com/dWjX0yi

but I figured that's a lot of what art stuff is

[novel comet]

yeah. it works.

[lime vortex]

I need some font recommendations.. anyone have any idea?

Preferably free ones

[naive cypress]

rockwell extra bold

you can also find that font in microsoft paint

[normal spoke]

I would search for "Game of Thrones Font" and search the Font-Portals for that.

[balmy crag]

Hey everyone!
My name is Thomas, and I'm a student from Belgium!
At school, we were given the assignment to create a movie poster, and the director had to be Tim Burton, so I chose Batman 1989!
The characters are The Joker (my brother, from whom I had to take a photo and manipulate it) and myself twice (once as Batman and once as a crazy victim on TV).

Now the question is, my presentation is next week, do you have any feedback, comments, what's good, what's bad?

Let's work together to make my movie poster the best in the school 😉

Thanks for your attention and time!

[normal spoke]

I think it looks pretty good. To tweek it maybe a bit look at the real Movie Posters, look how the Texts are presented, wher to add maybe some shadows to the Text, etc. Also look if you can add some highlights to the Batman silhouette because he has no "structure". But that are details. Hope it helps.

[balmy crag]

Any recommendation of text font? Or do you think font is good?

Also, shadows on text, is that a good idea? Because if shadows are added, the text will be harder to read from far dont you think?

Also thank you for the batman tip, will do!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[normal spoke]

For the Font Maybe look what font was used for the Batman original posters. Shadow for the Film Title would be Ok I think. Play around with it. Have fun 😉

[coarse flame]

aw

[compact rock]

Hi, is anyone able to somehow manage to make all these prisoners wear different clothes? Maybe also remove the one with glasses in the middle and replace them with someone else? I am willing to pay for this. Please, someone help me.

[celest star]

Hey guys does anyone know, how Behance mark ur project with badge? I think my last work worth for tge Game Design badge but I dont know how those projects are selected. https://www.behance.net/gallery/179751385/Waffentraeger-Projekt-Hyperion-World-of-Tanks

[flat path]

I am trying to make a relgious type card here, but I feel thre perspective, or something of the such, is off. Can someone help finding the numerous issues I have lol

[normal spoke]

I think the Candle seem to float over the table top. Maybe reposition and try to play with the shadow can help.

[flat path]

Do you think the perspectivr looks off? Like with the candle holder?

[normal spoke]

for me it looks Ok. Only that floating thing would bother me a bit, but not much.

[flat path]

How do you think I might be able to fix that?

[jolly yew]

Before and after

[normal spoke]

maybe try to move Candle and/or shadow.

[normal spoke]

Nice work.

[karmic meadow]

does anyone like? made it this morning. The images arent realistic to the menu but it was just for practice/ portfolio

[wet rivet]

nice! super clean/clear.

[karmic meadow]

@wet rivet thanks, ill have to up the res tho

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wet rivet

[normal spoke]

looks good and clean.

[sand furnace]

thanks for the feedback

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[fervent echo]

Hello, i was wondering if someone can help me. I am making this ilustration but all day i cant make de eyes look good, can some one please help me?

[normal spoke]

the pupil should not point to the side but to the front. Likewise, the shadow of the eye appears to be too large and too strong. I assume you did that in the past so maybe look at other such Illustrations how that look like.

[novel comet]

I like it! - but note that affordable has two 'f's 🙂

[drowsy iris]

I've got two posters I made they are for a college club. Just wanted to ask which one looks better and if you would change anything.

[naive cypress]

i added one little detail

it looks bad tho tbh

teh second one looks good

and try adding a cartoon judge's hammer whatever its called

[drowsy iris]

I'll try to add that. Thanks.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @naive cypress

[wooden oak]

Its called a "gavel" :)

[wooden oak]

I think the use of the brigher color in second layout makes the event details (location, day, time) stand out more.

[hoary wren]

any feedback?

[normal spoke]

It looks a bit flatt. I would try at first to use more contrast. also the shadows seem very soft. The Book pages can be seperated with thin lines in between too. Also maybe look like others of those designs. Hope that helps.

[hoary wren]

k

[smoky swift]

Feedback pls

[normal spoke]

Well the Player seem to be floating over the grass and the Light Source seem not bee from the same side. The rest looks pretty good.

[abstract oxide]

I agree with @normal spoke. Adjust the shadow so it touches both feet.

[abstract oxide]

The black glow/shadow reduces the contrast between the black text and the background. Perhaps a white glow/outline could help. Have you tried white text?

[daring agate]

Feedback?

[abstract oxide]

I appreciate that the explosion suggestions the padlock is breaking. However, it feels little odd to me that the "arm" is rotated to the left and not lifting up and/or out.

[normal spoke]

it looks like a very minimalistic design. I also find that the arm is not looks like its rotating. It also can be a brocken coffee mug on the side...

[toxic dome]

For me it is always easier to just draw shadow.
IF you want to do it this way you will have to distort the shadow, one leg shadow should be another leg shadow, as distance goess shadow should be less visible too.

[normal spoke]

I'm not sure what the intention of that Image should be, but the dynamics of the blurring is all over the place. Maybe look to have a little less of that and look out for the sharp spots you missed.

[daring agate]

It looks weird if it’s just lifted

[normal spoke]

Well, some Animals.

[toxic dome]

Hi guys I’m new to Photoshop and I’m trying to make a professional advertisement poster can anyone rate my professional advertisement poster and if I made errors and places were I can improve and fix please tell me you won’t hurt my feelings I just really want it to be professional and look amazing.

[normal spoke]

can you please share the original Picture and not a photo of a screen? It is a bit distracting. From the first looks it could be Ok.

[toxic dome]

Hi yes, sorry

[toxic dome]

Here

[lost reef]

It's not obvious what it means.

Does it contain explosives?

[toxic dome]

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[toxic dome]

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[tranquil dawn]

Hi,I've tried to make product photo manipulation and the work is finished !
But I think it still needs lots of improvement so feedbacks and suggestion would be greatly appreciate ! Thank you ! 🥰

[main gulch]

Does anyone know how I can make a cartoon?

[lime quarry]

add shadow and highlights

[tranquil dawn]

I added it ! Is it too fade 🤔

My intention is shining a light to product and the light will bounce to the deer just a little. Maybe it because my deer is absolutely off …

[lime quarry]

the bottle looks like floating.

[tranquil dawn]

Oh, thanks I’ll fix it !

[sand furnace]

thanks for the feedback

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[somber talon]

i like it so far...try adding some vectors or like a call to action button to fill in those blank spaces. also for the baackground try using a radial gradient instead, looks more professional imo.

[fickle lodge]

Hello everyone im quite new to photoshop and i have it on my ipadand i dont know really how to do a neon light or stroke if you could tell me much appreciated

[normal spoke]

I think it is best when you post your question in #❓ask-a-question and if you have the image itself. So everybody can help. In general you can look up some youtube tutorials like "photoshop neon lights" or so. Have fun.

[toxic dome]

Hi there I did use a radial gradient background 🙂

[toxic dome]

Thank you for your feedback and thank you for responding 🙂

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @somber talon

[somber talon]

No problem!

[torpid crater]

Dave Filoni making the Ahsoka show:

[peak ermine]

Been working on a magazine cover just for fun? What do you think and what should I add/remove ?

[normal spoke]

Looks pretty good. i only would add some minor details like some kind of Bar-Code on the Bottom, some price how much that would cost, etc. so that it feels a bit mir natural as a real magazine cover. The Design is really nice!

[peak ermine]

Oh yeah I completley forgot about that. Thanks bro I appricate it

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[tawdry cape]

If you had to pick one?
and how can I improve?

[steel nimbus]

Can someone help me with somthing

[normal spoke]

I would choose the first one. That green I would not like so much, but the rest looks really nice for me.

[opal fulcrum]

Does this look popping enough to be a thumbnail?

I tried to make stuff stand out as much as possible

But any feedback would be nice

V2

[normal spoke]

looks for a Thumbnail totally Ok. Have fun.

[opal fulcrum]

TYY

[visual copper]

I abosolutely suck at graphic design and are in dire need of tips to help me with this bifold brochure.

These will be on the same page, the one on the right is on the front and back, while left is the inside.

Please no destructive criticism 🙏

[normal spoke]

For the Inside Page I would use the same shadows as on the Frontpage. Also maybe use the Logo on the Inside. Also you could add that Polaroid Style Images also on the Inside. The rest looks fine for me.

[visual copper]

Thanks man.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[opal fulcrum]

kinda cringe thumbnail but my goal was to make it stand out

any improvements i could do?

[tawdry cape]

okay
thanks for the advice😀

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[normal spoke]

I would add some kind of headline, but the rest looks "outstanding".

[opal fulcrum]

Thank you, ill try to see if a title would fit. But I messed around with the filters and added some brightness, contrast and vibration. I quite like the finished version!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[novel comet]

Good start. - So I see you have a outer side and 'inner' side.

[novel comet]

I think that it would help if you used a nice texture for the background...

[novel comet]

Also, don't feel the need to fill the whole thing with text. Feel free to make the top half of the cover clear etc.

[cinder torrent]

Before and after (the light blue is light pollution. This my result after trying to remove the light pollution)

Any feedback/ advice is very much appreciated

I used remove bg to remove the houses, edit out the light pollution and paste back on the image without effecting lighting 2 much

[normal spoke]

Much better.

[cinder torrent]

Thank you!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[tranquil raven]

My first painting in photoshop, or pretty much anywhere for that matter. Found a 120 video long photoshop digital painting course and i just followed along lol, its easy to just copy the tutorial guy but im happy with it anyway. Definitely learned a lot!

[steel radish]

Hello Creatives
I'm excited to introduce my latest Behance project, "Luciole Skincare," which was created in collaboration with two talented individuals. From sketching to developing a visual identity, packaging, and product photography.

I would greatly appreciate your feedback on "Luciole Skincare." Please take a moment to explore the project at behance [ https://www.behance.net/gallery/180488003/Luciole-Skincare-Branding-Packaging ] and share your thoughts. Your insights, suggestions, and constructive criticism mean a lot.

Thank you for your time and input

[normal spoke]

I think the Brand itself looks nice. The Brandname is clean and has a nice sound. For the Presentation of the packaging I would be careful not to obscure the brandname as I saw on some pictures. Also The coloring of some photos is a bit dark and harsh. For skincare I would ise some lighter and softer tones. Rest looks fine.

[normal spoke]

Seem like a good start. have fun and enjoy the journey.

[tranquil raven]

Thanks a lot, lookin forward to it

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[verbal void]

this space graffiti i made for friends ep cover

[normal spoke]

I like it. Cool style. Also good for an Album Cover. Only the signature for me is a bit to dominant or at least I would do it in the same style or put it in a corner.

[steel radish]

thanks a lot for your feedback ^^

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[jolly flame]

How is this so far?

[jolly flame]

changed it to a different pick gradient

[undone mango]

Hey guys, this is my first piece ever on photoshop , I had a few skills I learnt from other things , I just want honest feedback on how I can make this better and progress

I’m sure there are a few things wrong or probably I have too much going on I feel something wrong but can’t tell what it is

[normal spoke]

The more pastell-ish pink I would like. But the "Black" more bright pink for me does not really match. maybe I would change that to more muted pink.

[normal spoke]

For the first time its really good. maybe try the Outline Text - the white lines - a bit stronger so that the Text itself could be read a bit better. Composing ist fine.

[jolly flame]

Will try

[undone mango]

Perfect thanks for the tips! Will keep in mind for my next one

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[jolly flame]

with muted pink

[normal spoke]

Not sure what it is, but it seems always that these two areas do not match the rest of the Image

[jolly flame]

idk what to put for that just left them to fill space

[normal spoke]

That works.

[grave palm]

hey dud! so the image composition is really nice, you understand how to fill the space it's really cool, the stuff you can improve is the cut out, the sides of people are way too horrible, also you can work on the texture, the exposure and the colors of your characters (with camera raw filter typically) its looks too raw rn, hf!

[undone mango]

any tips?

or is this better

[normal spoke]

I like the one with the darker background a little more, but the Person in the front I personally would do not that flat colored and more contrast, mayby less gray and more black and white. The GPS data seem for me a bit confusing. If that has a specific meaning then I would also integrate the violet color and not as sharp as it is, maybe a bit less opacity. The Composing itself is very nice.

[undone mango]

the gps data is related to the artist thats why i put it but maybe change it to the samecolor yeah

yeah think the darker one just looks better

tried going for a. certain style on the first one but it didnt seem to work out how i wanted

so more like this?

im not sure how to make it more black and white i tried adding some contrst

[normal spoke]

looks much better.

[normal spoke]

what me bothers is that overlay that you have going on there. I try to highlight that in yellow. It seem to come from some pattern.

[undone mango]

I think I know where that’s coming from actually think it’s one of my layers

I’ll try remove it and see if that fixes it

I’ll probably actually end up leaving it like that

I think in the future it will be good to look back at these and try and find the things myself that could be improved, have some pieces that aren’t the best and then when I get better start to improve them

usually what I do when I try learn something I leave it come back in a weeks time and try make it better

Thanks for your tips and help 👍

[normal spoke]

That I like 😉

[jolly flame]

ty

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[normal spoke]

maybe try other blend mode for that layer or put that layer below the Person and above the background in between.

[normal spoke]

Every Day a step forward to perfection 😉

[normal spoke]

no problem.

[stone canopy]

Hello to every one's. I am new on adobe premier pro please i need orientation to progresse

[normal spoke]

Please go to https://adobediscord.com/ and join the Adobe Premiere Discord. Here you are on the Adobe Photoshop Discord.

[wooden oak]

You should start with the materials that come with Premiere. There are basic tutorials right inside the app. Also, as Henrik said, you might want to join the Adobe Video Discord. Here is the invite to Adobe Video - https://discord.gg/adobepremiere

[crude loom]

Made this as a practice and for my portfolio. I'd appreciate any feedback and criticism

https://www.behance.net/gallery/182031057/Gourmet-Burger-Concept

[somber talon]

can someone give me their oppinion on my poster pleasse

[normal spoke]

The Poster Design itsel with that rustic paper, text, etc. I like. I'm not sure if that "Poster DesigN" and "11x14" is part of the Design or not.

[normal spoke]

I like that minimalistic design. For the shadows I find those a bit "complicated", because you got them at the yellow halfcircle and the Text but not on the Houses. The rest looks fine for me.

[novel comet]

I agree with Henrick, - a good test of a logo is to see if it still works when it's reduced to about 2cm wide. - Can it still be used/recognised?

Personally I think the text is tad bit too small.

[novel comet]

I'd just re-arrange slightly to something like this:

[somber talon]

no its layout for my instagram posts

[regal raft]

yes it looks much more batter

[regal raft]

thanks james(godtheDJ)

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[regal raft]

yep i got it thanks :>

[knotty tulip]

greetings,ive been workign on a overlay for a bit now and i keep getting stuck on the early stages of it just reworking ideas instead of progressing,any ideas on how to fill the bottom space or maybe give some flare to the borders? im trying to go for a minimalistic floral-ish style but im struggling to find any inspiration
ive been hopping between this colour palette to get a more elegant look or going for earthly,more comfy looking tones but that style from what i experimented was too complex for my skill level,i was struggling to draw assets or patterns for it

[normal spoke]

I would try it on on screen directly if thats possible. Then you see what works best. For that "shrubs" at the bottom maybe try 3 of them and maybe instead of the same color as the Frame around try the green or lighter color. Just play arount what you like best. Also you could try the shrubs with not so much oppacity.

[normal spoke]

Like that style. Compared to your other work I would add some "shapes" or so.

[jolly flame]

okie

[rose shadow]

You guys think this needs more blending?

[wooden oak]

Looks like you're hitting on a "spooky" theme. Its coming along! You might want to use a Layer Mask with a gradient ramp to softly blend between the two images. The dog seems a bit large in comparison to the house. Not sure if that was intentional or not.

[coral pewter]

thats amazing

[fervent plover]

Financial Business Complete Branding: https://www.behance.net/gallery/182157065/Finance-branding-design-Fintech-Logo-Visual-identity

[normal spoke]

The Design and Branding guide is clear. That I like. But the Logo itself give me no Financial vibes. More like a mixture of the PayPal Logo, a Fishing hook and a MakeUp Brand. I looks like it goes more for a kind of luxury Brand for a specific area on the world. But as a Brand on itself I like that.

[boreal condor]

Guys your opinion on this edit

Left is the original pic that i made by cutting out from different pictures

The right pic is trying to make it look cool, give your reviews to improve

[normal spoke]

The added movie posters are very cool. The blue glow on his face I would intensivy it even more and also a little yellow on his head and red on his sword part. Also look out for his back, because its very dark and lost a lot of detail. Also you can try instead of that pitch black sky some dark clouds. Good Composing overall.

[boreal condor]

Thank you i will rectify the mistakes

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[normal spoke]

Please do not think of these as mistakes. These are just points that can be improved or done differently.

[hoary wren]

I made this mail thing to 3D, Ye have some feedback?

[normal spoke]

Looks cool. For what purpose should it be? Maybe some shadow or so would be nice, but thats also depending on how you want to use it.

[hoary wren]

it's for a mod mail bot am makeing

[normal spoke]

maybe the gray a bit darker so that is more clear visle. But all inall cool thing.

[hoary wren]

I added some Shadow under it now I'll make the gray a bit darker

[novel comet]

The '3d' maybe looks slightly wrong? - did you just have two envelope icons, one grey and one white and move them into different positions?

...or you could use the 3D extrusion feature that photoshop still hasn't removed yet 🙂
@hoary wren

Choose: 3D > New 3D Extrusion From Selected Layer

[hoary wren]

yeah i did that

[hoary wren]

K

[dusky cipher]

before and after

what do you guys think?

[nimble abyss]

i like that lens flare

[normal spoke]

I like the lens flares and the idea itself very much. I'm not sure when those blue lightbeams are so bright that the face is so dark. also the lightbeams over the arm would cast more bright light onto it. The rest looks pretty good.

[undone mango]

tips?

i feel like the bottom text ruins it

anyone know how i could add those bits of text in a more appealing way

and any other tips would be great

[undone mango]

or does this look better

[undone mango]

or just nothing there works aswell tbf

[normal spoke]

The Background and the compositing looks fine. I think the shadow under the shoe looks a bit weird. Also most of the time I think the Text is not obscured by objects and is white. Nice job.

[undone mango]

Thanks 🙂

Im struggling with the shadow a bit

Any tips on how to make a good shadow?

[normal spoke]

I would look at other Posters and/or try making those shadows with a shoe and a lamp yourself.

[undone mango]

any tips?

i realise the door at the bottom looks off

how do i blend it more?

[normal spoke]

I would suggest that ther would come more light out of the door, less light out of the front windows compared to the door, because there are smaller. Also the person would cast a shadow behind him. The moon lights up from behind, but on the front side of the roof is also light. Also there is no front door 😉 But the idea looks pretty cool so far. NOW comes the hard retoching part. Have fun.

[undone mango]

Ah I see thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[undone mango]

Yeah the tough bit now

I need to try and go through all my layers and stuff and adjust

Which seems to be a little challenging

[normal spoke]

I would first put a door in it 😉 with GenFill should be easy to find something.

[undone mango]

👍

[normal spoke]

Yes, THATS the hard part. AI does not everything for you. But thats also the fun part where you can tweek, put maybe soma animals or other elements in the scene (old rusty car or bike, a smoking chimney, etc.) and give some look to it.

That I made in the las 6 minutes with Adobe Express as a Demo. IMHO those additions give such an Image more feeling and depth. Hope that helps.

[normal spoke]

The door in my demo is wrong and maybe the black crow could be more blurry, but I thing where that can be going is clear. I only used GenFill. Have fun.

[undone mango]

Oh yeah very nice

Thank you

[calm bridge]

Well first of all i would add a lil bit elements in the background some gradient color or some fog cause it looks to boring. Darken the floor and the house where the light doesn't hit for example the front wall and the back and then add the lightning of the moon of top of the darken roof of the house. The kid does have a wrong lightning as well

[jolly yew]

https://www.instagram.com/p/Cyd6GZqrYbC/?img_index=1

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[icy depot]

My project is on #🎨share-your-work-archive if anyone can provide some feedback

[normal spoke]

I like the bubly text, the shirt and the background. But they do not seem to get together so much. The Shirt and the text getting light from opposite directions. The shirt seem to stand still in the air above that stump. maybe try to extend that rotten Tree branches behind the shirt, make the shirt a little bigger that it stands out a bit more and let the tree branches grow through the text as an idea.

[supple turtle]

**Hello everyone **

Music App Design - MoloMusic

My first UX/UI Case about Music App Design on Behance!
I want to hear your feedback on this app)
https://www.behance.net/gallery/182421531/Mobile-App-Design-MoloMusic

[normal spoke]

This looks pretty nice. Technically nothing complain about. ... But it also looks pretty much also as all the others ... Only slightly different Mockup, slightly different Text, slightly different Design.
But nothing really unique, all similar design Templates. Hope that helps.

https://www.behance.net/gallery/169919965/Vendify-IOT-Solutions-App-for-fridges-UIUX
https://www.behance.net/gallery/180548531/Home-Management-App
https://www.behance.net/gallery/157308459/Dash-Challenges-Case-Study
https://www.behance.net/gallery/173225841/Notes-potepad-and-lists-App-design-UI-UX

[torn remnant]

any suggestions as to how this can be improved outside of adding elements? I have plans to add one more element, but it's dependent on getting the background at least mostly finished

[dusky cipher]

not composited well

everything looks like it has different lighting

Im not sure if having a castle and a galactic background is a good idea since both really dont correlate with eachother.

Since the mushroom forest takes up most of the scene, try matching the rest to it

[icy depot]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5RL3qYYyoZw

any suggestions to improve this video , also looking for partners to either help drawing/designing things or animating

[torn remnant]

So take out the castle completely then?

[dusky cipher]

Either try making it match the background or remove it altogether

[torn remnant]

Alrighty, thanks

[cloud mantle]

hi im making a magazine cover for our street photography magazine, i need some artistic inputs on where i can improve or what i can submit feel free to criticize

[novel comet]

The whites in the image a very grey. - not much contrast...

[cloud mantle]

thank you!

[balmy crag]

First of all, sorry for bad image picture, I am in a hurry 😬

I have to make a combination of max 3 animals all together that has some sort of interaction with a human.

-Now I have made a toad combined with a hippo.

• The person is kneeling and praising food to the animal.

But I noticed a problem, my problem is that the A4 format must be vertical and there is a lot of white space on top and bottom because I cannot increase the size of the 2 objects. (The animal and human must be with in the paper)

Any idea of what to do?

[normal spoke]

I'm not sure what you expect when there are those limitations. if you can not make the 2 objects bigger and yo cannot rotate the canvas r make the canvas smaller there are not much options. you can place some kind of background behind the 2 objects to make it look a bit better. Or you can place another object in the area what is white. Your choice.

[lucid orbit]

Bother simplify this?i didn’t understand the question i might be able to help if it is what i think it is

[novel comet]

Yeah, you need a background in there it kind of looks silly without one

🙂

[novel comet]

Just more of a guide : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F4K-DrhmxMk

[normal spoke]

This looks more Ghost like then the one before. It looks that your style is very surrelaistic. Therefore I would maybe add some swirrly things on the outside of the image.

[sinful jackal]

Hello , I did red riding hood in my style. Can anyone please give me some feedback?

[normal spoke]

i like the scene. good composing. What can be IMHO improved ist the Lighting and Depth of field. The Trees that are almost in line with the wolf are very blurry, but the wolf have sharp eyes etc. that does not match. Also there is the light from the moon behind that maybe cast a little more/better defined shadows. Also the yellow light from the small person in front would cast a little more shadows i guess and also lights the wolf from the front what also gives a bit more dramatic. To give a little more story I would place some "props" like a signpost or another animal on the side.

[sinful jackal]

Thank you very much for the reply. I appreciate it very much much 😁. I agree with you on the lighting and shadows and blur. And for props like signs I did not put because I worry it would disturb the scene somehow. And for animal I was thinking some crows. But my main focus was 2 figures. I learned photoshop in 2 and a half weeks btw.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[icy depot]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5RL3qYYyoZw

Any feedback on this video please :?

Also looking for photoshop designers to help with the drawings so we can produce more videos and expand !

[queen otter]

Hey ! Do you have any ideas to things to put at the bottom of the screen 3 ?

[wary moat]

@icy depot I’m interested what do you need help with your channel

[acoustic dagger]

I really adore the imagery of Little Red Riding Hood overall! However, I feel like some of the elements are becoming a bit too flat. If you're looking to add more depth to the image, and draw focus on your main subjects, I'd highly recommend diving into the Camera Raw settings. They're so much fun. I took a jab at editing the myself and I think it might help give you some ideas. Here's what was applied to get the following result: (1) Camera Raw > Edit = Auto; Detail = Noise Reduction 38; Effects = Vinyette -100; (2) Image > Auto Tone/Contrast; (3) Adjustments Landscape Pop

[normal spoke]

As stated on the menu I would put some salads and/or beverages there.

[queen otter]

i tried it and it looks like this, but i couldnt find a drink that would fit the perspective

[sinful jackal]

Thank you ,the idea is great, i could try to do that as well but not as dark because i find that the edges are too dark near the frame borders. And usually the principles are that there should be almost no black, but rather only tones of black on top of colors. My goal is to keep it as a realistic scene.But again thank you for the suggestion 😁

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @acoustic dagger

[acoustic dagger]

Best of luck with the project @cerulean quest

[novel comet]

I'd look for a chalkboard background that already has 'more stuff' in the image

[queen otter]

???

[novel comet]

I dunno... maybe something like this?
https://www.shutterstock.com/image-photo/herbs-on-stone-cutting-board-450816124

[queen otter]

i only need to change the third one

if i change the background

i'll need to change it for every screen and menu

[abstract oxide]

I think your designs are generally really solid. Nice work.
The symmetry within the background is noticeable. Is the image high enough quality to spread across the entire design? The symmetry within the table also takes me out of believing your composition.
But in general, excellent design and colour choices.

[queen otter]

Thank you ! and no, the image is not high quality enough and for the symmetry of the table, i really think i had no choice

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[warm charm]

Would appreciate some feedback!

Or looking at it again maybe some tips to make the sunflower more like its belongs there 😅

[normal spoke]

Colorkey is allways a bit difficult. Some like it, some not 😉 But technically I would say that the shadow is not as it should be (bigger then the rest, diffus surrounding light). Also seems the sunflower to flow over the street. Some cars in the background also have some color in it. Then what should be the objective focus of the Image. The blurry person, the flower or the Truck on the left. There is to much going on in the Image IMHO.

[warm charm]

Appreciate the honesty, thanks!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[warm charm]

Looks pretty horrible you are right 😂

[normal spoke]

better

[tropic marsh]

tickets for skool event

[warm delta]

Looks great! I don't think this needs any strong feedback. The style and the design are cohesive. One thing you could add is the name of the concert (DEC Concert) to the part of the small part of the ticket. Maybe also what kind of ticket it is, if there are multiple types. VIP, balcony, general admission, earlybird. And I'm not sure how you do it there, but tickets over here are mostly QR instead of barcodes now. Something to think about if you haven't.

[normal spoke]

Looks great. I think technically nice design. Maybeonly add a QR Code and Date/Time and maybe the Band(s) playing on the main slip as Denas already mentioned. Nice work.

[abstract oxide]

Great design. Nice work.

[novel comet]

The extra noise looks a bit strange @toxic dome

Every layer seems to be different

The smallprint under the chattering mouth is a bit too noisy/blurry for my liking

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nice work though generally! good job

[opal fulcrum]

thoughts on any improvements?

[normal spoke]

Looks like a Thumbnail for a youtube video?! I would try not to cover text. That "No" sem to be cluttered for me and I'm not sure for what all that mess in the middle would stand for. Text looks bit flat, but that elements in the midle seem to have some 3D because of shadoes. Maybe do some shadows for the Text and declutte rthe Elements a bit.

[formal bane]

So for school we need to "jungalize" 3 objects one of them being motorbike but I don't have that one on my phone. We needed to use masks etc which I did (obviously you cant see that in the image) but we also had to include at least one design principle. I was trying to play with the direction from my image. Any feedback appreciated. I will post my other 2 as well.

Well I haven't finished the last one yet

here I tried playing with symmetry

Honestly they both could use a quote xd, for the above the quote in the right upper corner for the one below in the middle.

[normal spoke]

Here the bike seem to float. Also the shadow on the right i would "delete" (you know how that goes 😉 ).

[warm delta]

I agree that it looks like it's floating. If you look at the scene as a whole, the lighting is diffuse (overcast weather), so lighting is even and shadows are soft. You've got a super sharp and strong shadow there, something it wouldn't have realistically due to the lighting situations. There would have to be a sharp light source, something that is not present when it's overcast. The bike is also super light in value compared to the rest of the image; with diffuse lighting such as this, all colors are closer to their base color.

[warm delta]

From the angle the photo is taken, the reflection of the headphones would not be visible in the water. Remember to account for the angle of the reflection when adding objects in. If you were to place the headphones farther away from the camera, then you would start seeing a reflection. Reflections have less contrast and are also darker, less clear, and closer to the base color of the water than its real counterpart. These are things you must think about when doing photo compositing, otherwise the result won't have the effect of illusion

[dapper sand]

Let me hear some feedback on my recent project 🙌

Project - https://www.behance.net/gallery/153982571/Google-Maps-Visual-Identity

[restive spoke]

I had to check google maps to make sure this wasnt the actual logo because I absolutely thought it'd be something of this quality! To nit-pick I'd like a bit more space around the Pin, and in the wording you very nicely explained what each element represents - but what do they mean together? connecting people with place? Might help to reference the subtle 'person' in the logo, clean!!

[mighty dragon]

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[opal fulcrum]

Yeah its for a youtube video. ty

[mighty dragon]

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[normal spoke]

you can put there some Texture like Granite, Paper, etc. or some greek Ornaments, etc.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[dapper sand]

Appreciate it mate, and thanks for the feedback will take this notes 🙌❤️

[mighty dragon]

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[formal bane]

You mean the shadow that's not part of the bike but completely at the right side of the image?

[formal bane]

I found the schadows difficult, so if I do it with more oppacity it should be good?

[formal bane]

Then I better remove the reflection, I kinda like the possition of the headphone

[queen sphinx]

hi guys
im new to ps
and we were tasked to make a cover magazine about the current wars for our project
but this is what i just have done
can someone criticize it
and also suggest things?
like what should i add

[plain vapor]

What do yall think about the text?

i want to try make the text white and add a black stroke, than keep "IDENTITY", "YOU" and "BILLIONAIRE" coloured but im not sure how to do this 😦

Also how do i lock layers?

[plain vapor]

add a stroke to the guy holding the gun cos its not that clear, also cant really tell whats going on in the background

i feel like you should add a couple real dead bodies to show the sadness of war

[queen sphinx]

oke thanks for the feedbackk

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @plain vapor

[queen sphinx]

bro our teacher actually made us do our first and final project when he just taught us 1 time and it was only about the magnetic lasso tool and healing tool 💀

[plain vapor]

No problemo

[formal bane]

something like this for the shadow from the motorbike?

[jolly yew]

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[normal spoke]

it looks a bit flat. no shadows, no 3D or other elements. Text ist flat. Only one color as background. May I suggest that you look at other such thumbnails and look how those are constructed. That will help instead of posting every few hours one minor changed detail.

[plain vapor]

Oh I haven't sent the final thing yet but I added shadows and also dollar bills falling in the background, also changed the background to a gradient and yeah

Also changed the frame to a one with a better facial expression, so it looks more welcoming

I'll send it in a bit

[normal spoke]

sounds promissing. Have fun.

[carmine breach]

Little personal project I wanted to share for a FiveM themed Shop, any feedback is appreciated. (Fixed spelling mistake and adjusted some more blending options)

[novel comet]

Since everything is the same size, I don't really know what the main heading is meant to be

[carmine breach]

Yea, I was fighting around with the sizing. I didn't want the main heading to take up 1/4th of the poster, so I tried keeping it in the top, but I could Enlarge it, and shrinkg the 2nd line

[novel comet]

I'd do something like this.... @carmine breach

[normal spoke]

For me the poster does not say what the name of the Business is. That it is now open is relatively clear, not worth mentioning on a poster or flyer. That it is a "Auto repair shop" should be written somewhere. Also the colored shadows look a bit distracting. The Design overall gives me some cool 80th vibes. Like that.

If the Name of the shop is "Drive By" then it would be Ok IMHO.

[novel comet]

More focus on the car/image, - make 'Drive By' far more of a big extravagant heading (assuming that's the business name)

I kinda went with that sort of tube lighting style for the 'now open', like you'd see outside a bar.

Also notice that I stuck to just one or two colours for the fonts. - instead of 3 or 4.

[carmine breach]

That is the name of it, Context around it:
The character who owns the shop is named Gomer (redneck, car lover, criminal and mechanic) - the shop is called "Drive By" with a bit of a racing theme. He's current iconic car is based off the Porsche GT2.
It's meant to be a car shop/mechanic/race shop. I'm still figuring out the whole Neon type so that bit is cool.

Will do a bit more working around on it.

[novel comet]

It also means that you don't need to DULL DOWN the top/bottom of the image and by making it black and white.

[carmine breach]

Appreciate the feedback peeps!

[carmine breach]

Alright, I went back and kind of went with your design in mind James: Messed around a little bit.

[normal spoke]

looks much cleaner.

[carmine breach]

I'm still messing with the fonts a little, but I've applied a LUT and a gradient mask over the cars paint layer to mess around with it more, the latest iteration:
I feel the LUT is a bit too dark so I'm still moving around with the opacities and coloring

I'd love to know how the Neon effect is done though, and kind of put that on the car a bit, to give it more of a racar/ricer styling, in a Need for Speed Underground 2 vibe.

[novel comet]

I prefer the brighter option

[novel comet]

just google 'neon glow photoshop'

[carmine breach]

Went with a different LUT and was able to do a decent Neon effect I think! (For reasons that number is a GAME NUMBER, not someones number)

[livid basalt]

my recent design

[lavish pier]

giving rate

[queen sphinx]

can someone tell me if it became worse

and any suggestions on how can i improbe

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[thorn scarab]

good or bad?

[queen sphinx]

does this look like a magazine cover about war?

[formal bane]

The yellow text is hard to read tho

[normal spoke]

Well, its a nice Background. The drops on the bottle seem to be a little awkward at the bottom and the Light/shadow on the Orange on the table a bit other then the rest, but all in all it seems fine.

[normal spoke]

Sorry, but no. Magazine Covers only have ONE Key Message, no mixups. Also the Images won't fit. Try to look at actual magazine covers then it will get clear.

[warm delta]

That's much better, though the bike stands out a lot as it's very bright compared to the scenery. If you zoom in, you can see that the shadows and dark parts of the bike, are gray. If you look at the rest of the image, it's very saturated. So you'll have to saturate the shadows and darken it overall. What is this for, if you don't mind me asking?

[formal bane]

it's for a school assignment, we need to make slides with "jungalized" object. we had to use at least one design principle in all our slides. also had to use a none destructive workflow (using masks etc) which I did. and also had to use layer comps. this is what I submited, not to happy with the car. but ye I have also other homework. but if you have some small things that I should tweak that I can do.

I can send the psd file if wanted

also they need to be ready to use for a site...

I am kinda happy with the first slide, very happy with the second slide. a little disapointed with the third slide..

I guess for the brightnes of the motorbike they can think I played around (or tried to) with the design principle contrast xd

this is for tmwr btw, so today is the last day for me if I wanna do some more tweaking

[heady arch]

today's result of my livestream tutorial. What do you think? What can i improve to get better?

[normal spoke]

There is always room for improvement, but I do not see much here 😉 Looks good. maybe try a bit sharper mountain-pyramid, but all in all good!

[heady arch]

Thank you so much ❤️ I will try your Advice :3

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[karmic meadow]

what do you guys think? any advice?

[warm delta]

It's a great concept! However I'm having issues reading the juice text. With the tiny spacing between letters, all the lines blend together and become unreadable due to the texture in the picture. Especially due to the water texture in the background. You could spread the letters a bit farther apart, and maybe add a low-opacity pure color overlay on top so it's not just an image for text. This would increase readability (and therefore accessibility). The green text in sonoma orange is also low contrast in spots, especially in the middle where the water texture is darker. Focus on making all text readable, it's important to have enough contrast.

[karmic meadow]

i agree thanks ill change it

[normal spoke]

I agree with Denas. For a better readability maybe try to put some Oranges in the background and make the letters so more readable. But I like the concept.

[karmic meadow]

hows this? im trying to change the water to like orange splashes, but Idk

[normal spoke]

Looks better and yeah the water should maybe orange. I like the straw thing. Maybe you can try to make that Orange bigger so that it wraps around the corner and its really big.

[karmic meadow]

which orange?

the one in the middle?

im assuming the middle

ok

hows this?

[karmic meadow]

done

[normal spoke]

much better!

[marble lotus]

just finshed this artwork to build up my portfollio

[normal spoke]

The Collage seems a bit of, because on top you have a colored photo with some small Text, then a "12" then another Text and a ready made b/w Collage. you maybe try only one good quote with a bit smaller Fontsize that better fits the overall Collage.

[formal bane]

ended up submitting these for my assignment

[novel comet]

Why are there two V's in Driver?

[cedar osprey]

how can i add a shadow to the players face?

[cedar osprey]

this is the original pic, i want to put a shadow like the one in the player face

[normal spoke]

Its more about where the Light come from. The Light comes more from the sides and not so much from the front. So you will not have much light on the front of the Face and more on the side. I would darken the Front-left side of his Face a bit.

[digital hound]

thoughts?

[toxic dome]

Any feedback

[normal spoke]

The colors are a bit to yellow. The Text and the Logo are not in Contrast as the should be. Also the Hands and the Burger thing and not as visible as they would look good. The idea and the overall Combo I like. Maybe try to play around with the colors and not laying the Gradient over all pieces.

[normal spoke]

I would try to make the piece in the middle white, because the Logo on Top seem to be made for a white background. The Line "in organising" is IMHO unnecessary. Rest seems Ok. Maybe a Photo or explanatory Image what "Induction" is meaning would also be helpfull as an Eyecatcher.

[digital hound]

uhh can you rephrase that please

[normal spoke]

you have some yello gradient layed over the hole pic. That takes away some clarity for the "Message" and the Text. The hands atdn tha "explodinG" Burger Thing is also behind many layers of elements so they not very present. Look at actual MCD ads and you will see that all elements are clearly visible.

[cinder heath]

what can i improve

[normal spoke]

yI would say fit the Frame. There is much space left without any info. The Text "Pandabuy" and "Finds" has a outer glow. The "part1" and the arrows do not. So it is harder to see what has to be done here. The Panda itself seem to be from Shapes and they do not match exactly so there is also improvement. All in all its a good start.

[cinder heath]

yeah idk what to do with the space and wdym "yI would say fit the Frame". and should i add glow to everything then? well the panda is an easy fix

[flat axle]

Thoughts on the thumbnail for my first video? Any feedback?

[novel comet]

Hideously bright, oversaturated and seemingly aimed at kids and procrastinators....

PERFECT for youtube 🙂

@flat axle

[flat axle]

Haha true! Thats the goal at the end of the day 😂

[novel comet]

Indeed. - I'm glad you didn't take offence!

[flat axle]

Of course not! Thats the YouTube game, exaggerated thumbnails for the clicks! 😉

[normal spoke]

I'm not sure for what kind of video that should be. If its for Toy cars then it would be Ok. For some kind of Racing game not so much. For some kind of movie also not (to childish). Without Text also not very helpfull. As a starter totally Ok.

[flat axle]

The video is Top 10 Most Insane F1 Moments, its mostly a Formula 1 video about the sport, and its a compilation of f1 stories and moments. Its nothing formal, I just want the thumbnail to be something attractive

There was also this one

[normal spoke]

I'm not sure the title and the picture match but OK

[flat axle]

I mean if its insane F1 moments, and the thumbnail are police chasing a Formula 1 driver, I would think that makes sense when paired together

[normal spoke]

The second one gives me more F1 vibes, but I do not get the Police cars in the back and the overall look. The Look is for me more as some kids play and I do not get the "wow, that has something to do with Racing".

[jagged oasis]

It's fine for a thumbnail for your first video and it does kind of relate to the title

[jagged oasis]

Personally, this looks better

[normal spoke]

For me when there was a cow or an ice cream car or something insanely stupid on the Racetrack THAT would be insane. Some Policecar gives me more the "oh, thats from the ast action movie I saw" vibe.

But again for the first video it is more than Ok. Totally fine!

[flat axle]

I see what you mean yes, I agree that the message may not be so clear

[flat axle]

Yeah I get where you're coming from. Thanks for the feedback, I will definitely take that into consideration! 👍🏼

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[flat axle]

Thanks 🙏🏼

[flat axle]

Interesting, I'll keep that in mind. Appreciate it!

[hoary wren]

this suddenly came up in my head and I made it, y'all have any feedback?

[next tendon]

Bro write some text on your thumbnail

[tropic marsh]

i have a school project where we need to photograph social issues. I want people to focus on the trash

this is the original photo

[flat axle]

I am not sure, I think the thumbnail is pretty self-explanatory when paired with the title

[novel comet]

Are you allowed to intentionally 'photoshop' it?
I'd maybe try blurring and desaturating the background to help make the trash stand out...

Also, I think it looks good when you intentionally set your camera to focus on the foreground and let it blur the background out. Then get up much closer to the subject - in your case... the rubbish!

[tropic marsh]

actually i cant get it closer to the subject because the place has a bad reputation of thiefs😅

bring your phone out and its gone

but i will try ur suggestion tho

[novel comet]

Focus on that!

You'll either get a A*....

or a complete FAIL

(Nothing inbetween)

[tropic marsh]

im definitely getting excused💯

[lusty slate]

working on it, what do y'all think ?

[normal spoke]

you got much white space. you can use it. Not sure why you would need a shirt for yourself that has only your discord handle on it, but Ok. I would place some kind of website or discord chanel on it to.

[normal spoke]

Nice idea. maybe work on the Light. The Light that falls on the sofa has a different direction as this on the hand. Also maybe try to put something more as a hand in the pic. Normaly the scene would say that someone wants to go into "the other side" but the hand says more like "grad an apple" or so.

[lusty slate]

thanks for the advice!! I'm still working on the lights to match the sofa and left the idea of the hand

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[normal spoke]

That on itself works, too. No question.

[spiral flicker]

ive never had a customer request this before, but its stuff for her website

https://gyazo.com/53a4d6648e74c4b08c3707a2330dd588

this shows what layout could look like with 4 font choices and button shapes

gonna get her color palate and stuff tomorrow

[civic dagger]

Itsf for a friend

[next tendon]

Is it ok

[normal spoke]

nice composition. Maybe you can try to get the Pepperoni and the Tomato Slice with the same Light direction as the other Photos. Also try to make the text a bit mor visible with e.g. some Outline, lighter shadow, embossing, other 3D effect.

[next tendon]

@normal spoke thanks bro I will definately work on it.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[livid basalt]

my recent redesign

[fading geyser]

can someone suggest on what i should add to this design of an ad for non alcohol heineken

[normal spoke]

that depends a little on the Target Group. I would maybe go with some kind of "0%" Theme. Or if it should be a bit more graphical put someone behind a Steeringwheel in a car with that bottle in the hand, but that also canbe controversial. Maybe only some Elements that represents that it can be used every time of day or so.

[fading geyser]

thank you!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[tropic marsh]

the original photos

[cerulean quiver]

Need feedback for this yt thumbnail (wikipedia race)

[warm delta]

Looking at this, I wouldn't understand that it's for a video about wiki race. Personally, I'm a big fan of spelling out very literally what's going on, especially if it's not clear like here. For a poster advertising an event, I would write something like "concert" or "art exhibit" in big letters so there is no misunderstanding about what is being advertised. So here I would add text saying "wikipedia race" or something that conveys the meaning clearly.

[cerulean quiver]

awesome thanks bro

[livid basalt]

I designed this thumbnail for my client recently and its doing amazing.
It Got 3.3k views in just 11 hours.

Just Imagine How much views will it get in a week 🥳

[azure halo]

Does anyone have an idea how I could improve this flyer front for my school gala? It's not completely finished but I'm out of ideas :)

[normal spoke]

I assume that the Name of the school, the date, the Place and such will also find its way to the Flyer?! Maybe you could put some more hearts, one or two dancing couples, some flowsers, etc. in the same style onto the Flyer.

[azure halo]

yeah, it's basically a gala which is completely arranged by stud. location will be under the date and perspective transformed like the date when the actual location is confirmed :)

Thanks for the flowers and dancing couples idea, I'm going to look into it and see if it fits!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[lyric raven]

how can I improve this? I know its basic and needs some help, I just dont know how to improve it

[lyric raven]

made some progress on it. still would like some feedback though 😄

[abstract oxide]

I think the design is looking great. Nice work. If you are going for an aged look, I don't think you should darken the blacks as much as you have. I think a faded look may be more suitable.

[abstract oxide]

Nice design mate. While I like the flat look, some shadows from the poles could add a little depth.

[lyric raven]

thanks for the feedback!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[spice rover]

which one do u guys think it's best? 1 (top left) or 3 (bottom) ?

[azure halo]

Thanks! I'll try it out!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[livid basalt]

my recent work

[normal spoke]

The new Design overall seem to be much lighter and cleaner. Maybe the Text could pop out a bit more (maybe some Outline or 3D Effect) and only a Face and many alcoholic drinks transports not the message well. Maybe here some more drunk guy or mor eyecatching thing. But the new style i like.

[blissful galleon]

Any feed back?

[wet rivet]

Would move Rebel down to be closer/right above the date, I find it disrupts the subject a bit

[blissful galleon]

Ok

[abstract oxide]

Thank you. I hope it helps.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @lyric raven

[livid basalt]

My recent design. feedback will be appreciated

[raw wadi]

I might have had the shades on the "after guy" if we're aiming for cool 🙂

[pure tapir]

I’m very new to photoshop texturing and just finished a project but wanting to improve my skill at texturing. Any tips? I have no knowledge besides what you see there. Thanks

[jolly yew]

https://www.instagram.com/p/CzEvq5qtGGB/?img_index=1

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[livid basalt]

i redesigned this thumbnail. feedback please

[livid basalt]

got it

[novel comet]

(I don't think I can bring myself to look at another clickbait looking thumbnail on this channel)

leaves

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[blissful galleon]

Captain Nigeria

Any thoughts?

[normal spoke]

Looks good so far. maybe try a different sky that is not so gray an a bit better explosion. Also the Front of that Hero is a bit dark that there is not much detail. The Compositing looks good.

[normal spoke]

I found that Thumbnail a bit strange. First there is "Netflix" in the Title, but no Netflix Logo?! When that would e a reaction video then I would expect that as a clue. Also on the first TN there are all 4 Politicians (I assume) in color. On the secod there are 3 in b/w and One in color. You would interpret something different into the context and thus distort the whole thing, which would not be good style. Also the 5th Person is missing. So sadly that TN looks very manipulative and for that I will give no advice, because personally I do not like those content.

[livid basalt]

My recent work

[austere wind]

Cliché

[normal spoke]

Hopefully that annoying watermark thing is not in the final version 😉 But the TN overall is getting better.

[lusty lantern]

Could I get an opinion with suggestions for improvement ?

Before :

[jolly yew]

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[normal spoke]

In my opinion its way to dark and I first did not get that there is a fish in the sky. Also the reflexion in the lake makes no sense (to harsch, to sharp dn to bright). Try to look at others of those Images for e.g. "Light reflections on a Lake" as a search term will tell you a bit mor how that would look like. Hope that helps.

[normal spoke]

Here I do not know what that eagles and lamps would represent. The Person in the middle with the Text would make sense.

[lusty lantern]

Thanks for your answer. Is it better ?

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[normal spoke]

Its getting a bit better. The rest will come with practize, practize, practize. Have fun!

[jolly yew]

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[livid basalt]

My recent redesign ....................Title: 3 Unknown Benefits of Nutritional Yeast

[fallen junco]

needing some idea for what more i can put here before i start to fix everything

[normal spoke]

I fond both confusing. To much Text, the Outline around the person in the first Image would benefit the person in the second one, the yellow grains look more like rice then yeast, the words that can not be read are irrelevant so the can also be replaced... would have no point. From the photographical Standpoint the second portrait is more clearer and sharper.

[normal spoke]

both Images that you have posted are more illustrational and art related. Therefore feedback is hard, because it would only get the emotional perspective and not so much the technical side of that image.
For me personally both images are way to blurry, no strong lines, all seem to be a bit mushed together. There is no real Focuspoint what makes the image in itself "interresting". From the art perspective those maybe seem interesting to look at.

[sand furnace]

Thanks for your feedback

[sand furnace]

Idk why I like this kind of painting. Do I have to continue this?

[normal spoke]

Nobody can tell you if you should continue this or not. Its your art and you should be Ok with it. I only can tell you from a technical and Photoshop way that would not be pleasing or interestingly enough. BUt from the Art perspective thats a total other question.

In general, the images appear very centered and unspectacular. They are simply shades of colors. It may be that this blur can have a deeper meaning from an artistic point of view, but it is not immediately apparent to the viewer. If necessary, just take a look at some basics about image structure, composition, rule of thirds, contrast, sharpness, etc. The images all appear quite spherical, but then there is a lack of substance that is lost due to this blurring. What is the main motif? What story does the picture tell? It will be far too long to go on here. That's why I simply recommend watching some YouTube videos or books on the subject of painting and image design. That will definitely help.

[sand furnace]

I’m trying to follow the expressionism style.

[wooden whale]

Hi! Made this to advertise my graphic design based server!

Anyone got any sugestions on what i can do to this image to make it more atractive?

[normal spoke]

Maybe take a look at the Text blurring they seem to be inconsistent. "Anything is " is sharp, the rest got different blurring.

[wooden whale]

yeah that makes sense.. but i'm talking more about the side details like something arounf the text

i ran out of ideas

[normal spoke]

The Design itself is more centered so something on the side wold be distracting. If you want more "Things" like eyecactchers there I would redesign all of it, make it brighter and maybe put some examples in there. Like little "Screenshots" of a Photoshop screen or someone working on a Photoshop File or something like that.

[wooden whale]

yea that seems like a good idea thanks a lot for the sugestions!

[livid basalt]

My recent work

[livid basalt]

got it man. your words matter

[lyric raven]

how can I fix the rough edges of the apple?

[torpid oyster]

any suggestion?

I still don't feel satisfied

[normal spoke]

you could smooth the edges with a soft selection edge.

[normal spoke]

I would put some more contrast on the middle character taht it came out a bit better. Thes rest seems Ok for me.

[normal spoke]

I'm not sure for whatpurpose the Image should be but I would use a gradient from orange to a little darker yellow, because there is a bit mor contrast to the white in the dollar sign. Hope that helps.

[hoary wren]

if you know roblox, it's obviously for a game pass

[toxic dome]

Hello guys. Creating a picture for my girlfriends birthday / our 5 year anniversary. planning to print it on a canvas or poster professionally. Anyways, i really suck at photoshop, and barely have any expierence. I just use to make stupid youtube thumbnails years ago haha. But anyways i managed to create this rough draft, but i still dont like all the flaws withit it.

the concept is a forest (we both like the outdoors) with a split down the middle giving us each our own half to be filled with our hobbies, and passions, etc.

ex. i like winter, so my side is winter based, she likes fall, so hers is fall.

my favourite animal is a grizzly bear, and hers is a cat... So im a bear, and shes a cat..

i love science, and she loves art. so guess what? im a scientist, and shes an artist! haha.

anyways i sent the rough draft, and the flaws about it. I cannot draw for the life of me, so manually going back to edit would always be impossible. Ive been using alot of the adobe AI generator to create the characters, styles, etc.

photo #1 i do not like the random blue lighting that is on the bear. Not sure why its there, not sure if i can remove it..
#2 the hand does not look like a hand. has like 12 fingers, and is demented. not nice to look at..
#4the tail looks messy, and didnt cut out properly. looks badly cut
#5 the text (our anniversary) speaks for it self.. needs to be better

also the bears boots and the snow looks messy probably better to just have it completely covered in snow..

also, last thing. she was born in niagra falls, so she has water falls, i was born in a major city, so i have all the buildings etc. anyways any help, i would be more than grateful. thank you everyone ❤️

[normal spoke]

Looks pretty good so far. You could maybe look at the Lighting angles. In the picture the sun is in the back, but most of the comped images has the Light slightly from the side that looks a bit of. Then you could also look at the squirrel's tail again because it's a bit blurry and doesn't really fit in with the rest of the stuff on the table. But overall it looks good.

[novel comet]

Yeah. Good job. - You can fix most all of those issues without too much problem. - If you can share the PSD here, I'll give you some tips/help.

[raw wadi]

Hi, I've made a few changes:
I got rid of the distracting contrails across the sky
I removed distractions on the grass behind the squirrel
I sharpened and back lit the squirrel tail.
I got rid of the left foreground palm leaves which seemed incongruous
I softened the sun whick looked a bit cartoon style.

[toxic dome]

Yeah, looks much better.
Thanks a lot.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @raw wadi

[toxic dome]

Ty.
I always have problem with shadows.
This "dragon" is the best example of it.
I am trying hard, but still can't get realistic shadow.

[novel comet]

It's probably always worth looking at 'real' shadows first, and see how they compare.

[novel comet]

This image for example is a very bright sun, but even so, it doesn't mean the shadow it super 'crisp'. You can see the grass beneath it, and it's not an exact clone of the elephant.

I think in your example above @toxic dome, you just need to turn the shadow opacity down. - Also, I can't tell if the grass on the right hand side of the image is literally a different colour, or if it's just grass that's in shadown.

[livid basalt]

My recent work... Title: Life Is Like A Casino BUT With One Major EXCEPTION.... You Can WIN

[wooden whale]

took me some time.. any advices?

[wooden oak]

It has some visual interest. However, I'm not a fan of the text toward the bottom of the layout. If its important, it doesn't really stand out at all. Also, there should probably be more padding between the baseline and the edge of the canvas. Also, you have a great deal of empty space around the central object that makes the bottle look very small in comparison.

[wooden whale]

Those are good points. Thanks for the advice!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak

[toxic dome]

I 've finished this project too.
I like it personally, what do you think?

[toxic dome]

Front elements should not be blurred.

[wooden whale]

I mean if the object is like too close to the lens and the focus is set on the bottle shouldn't that mean that the really close objects should be blurred?

idk

[wooden whale]

how do you feel about this?

[toxic dome]

Maybe, but it looks bad and hurts eyes.
Avoid it.

[toxic dome]

Looks good, however I would not use so much blur on outer glows for some "job things".
I would keep it as much flat as possible.

[wooden whale]

ur right. looks more proffesional. thanks !

[toxic dome]

What you used to remove left side leaves without damaging other things?

[restive spoke]

Sorry if this has already been addressed - just seen this, but instant reaction is I love the feel - I think in terms of refining it - try some harder brushes, you've got a wonderful base - some hard edges will make everything pop- try a new layer and refine the edges of the cave and the boat - Sky is perfection so would be nice to see the rest of the image contrast with that. Of course do whatever, just think the rock could look more rocky - and water different from the sky - some more textures might help 😊

[restive spoke]

Did you get help with this already? I'll DM ya to check

[toxic dome]

I had a few tips and advice but I haven’t done anything yet. More help is appreciated

[raw wadi]

A simple selection aound the area and GF with the prompt dark back lit pine branches

[sand furnace]

Thanks for your feedback

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @restive spoke

[toxic dome]

Ty.

[wooden whale]

Started working on this canned aplle juice advertisment and i'm kind of stuck. Anybody has any sugestions?

[sand furnace]

The reflection of the sky on the sea seems rather sharp. Is this wrong?

[wooden whale]

nvm i figured it out 🙂

[old fractal]

Great.
Maybe make it Pop a bit.

It seems very shadowy and less interesting if I see as a customer.

If you use bright colors and more reflections.
I will be more likely to buy it.

[bronze pasture]

The text is unclear. if this is an advertisement, the message should be crystal clear. Your can looks small in frame and crouded with the text and the splash next to it. And I'm feeling a weird tension between the three dominant colors in your palette: green, orange and red. The orange and red are too close to each other, or not enough. I would play around with changing your color scheme. Either make the orange more pink or the green more blue, or try varying everything many times until you discover something you weren't expecting. Hope that is helpful.

[normal spoke]

If it sould be an advertisement do not cover Text in any kind. Text not behind objects. text should be clearly readable (no Graphiti where people have to figure out what it could mean 😉 ). Also the corners are a bit to dark and the contrast on the can from the dark green to the dark red is not much. I first thought why are there red round dots on the can. For a first Mockup its good. Have fun.

[jolly yew]

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[wooden whale]

Well the orange liquid is essentially the apple juice so that's why it has that color. and the BG i made green to kind of mach the can but i can for sure chande the color scheme. Thanks a lot for the advice!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @bronze pasture

[wooden whale]

that for sure seems more pleasing visually. Thanks for the advice!

[wooden whale]

Yeah, a lot of people told me that i just figured it out now and i makes a lot of sense. Thans!

[normal spoke]

Tipp: Try to read or look up some Design principles for Print. There are some more infos.

[wooden whale]

what print are you talking about?

[normal spoke]

I'm talking about Print Media like books, Advertisements and Newspapers. The basics and rules of design are often explained better and more understandably in this area. These topics are often neglected in books and workshops for the online area. That's why the teaching material in the area of print media is often better than that on the subject of online media when it comes to the basics of designing advertisements, etc.

[icy slate]

Hi, here is my new conceptual brand identity design; Solaris: Where innovation meets sustainability.
have a look at it.
https://dribbble.com/shots/22996174-SolarisEnergy

https://www.behance.net/gallery/183817995/Solaris

[livid basalt]

My recent redesign...... Title: Kez Reed on the NBA, Sports Marketing and the Juglife Foundation

[sand whale]

image on how introverts in high school act like, do you guys think it conveys the message properly?

[old fractal]

When I first see it without reading text, School bullying comes in my mind first.

If you ask me, I think introvert should not be confused with scared person.
Just make him a alone guy.
And others leaving in a group..leaving him behind.

Make his eyes more heroic and bright but bored by world at same time bored by world.

It's just my personal approach though. Nothing is wrong or right.

[raw wadi]

My main thought is that the image of the building top left, doesn't really tell you anything about the ethos and mission of the company. So in this sense the space is wasted.

[sand whale]

Ty will apply!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @old fractal

[hardy hare]

@wooden whale the text you used on multiple projects is kinda really bad (sorry) but it just doesn’t work imo

[wooden whale]

i deleted all text on most of them and the apple one i am working on currently

[hardy hare]

that looks great

[wooden whale]

thanks!

[sand whale]

ok how do you guys think of this one? do you think it conveys the message of how an introvert would act like in high school?

[raw wadi]

Might I suggest a group talking together and one person sitting quietly alone in the corner or side

[sand whale]

I'll do that concept next, thank you!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @raw wadi

[wooden whale]

I masked this blurred grass using channel mask for the first time😁 The sky is a different image i imported.

[blissful galleon]

I tried to make African Spiderman in an action scene

And give jt that into the spiderverse glitch effecg

Any thoughts?

And js the spidey sense ok?

[sand whale]

3rd try! do you guys think it conveys the message of how introverts can act in high school?

[sand whale]

I took inspiration from your feedback!

[sand whale]

and yours as well!

[normal spoke]

Hmm for me Introverted characters focus more of their attention and energy on their inner lives. In groups, they tend to passively observe rather than act and are often described as quiet, reserved and calm. However, introversion is not the same as shyness. There are shy extraverts and non-shy introverts.

In this picture, however, the introvert seems to have some kind of anger towards the other fun group. This implies an impending catastrophe. Keywords like rampage and shooting would come to mind. What should the aim of the image be? What exactly is it supposed to indicate? A picture often says more than a thousand words and there are just as many possible interpretations.

For example, if instead of "INTROVERTS" above the image you write "INTROVERTS?" as you write, the statement changes slightly. An open question leaves more room for interpretation. If you instead say “INTROVERTS!” write then the mood changes again. You use the exclamation mark to reinforce your point of view.

So should the anger that arises in an introverted young person and the approaching catastrophe be addressed here, or the inner emptiness, being alone, no friends, etc. Maybe those thoughts also can help.

[sand whale]

ty for all the feedback

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[old fractal]

Wow. much better. Amazin.
Maybe his mouth expression is a bit off.
Like.. he looks scared .
He should be nervous right?
Maybe check nervous anime faces and change a bit.
Everything else is perfect.

[exotic totem]

Hey, been working on a t shirt design, I kind of tried making one side of the photo with the original image with a filter on top, and the other side hand drawn, what more should I do with this?

[old fractal]

I guess, It already looks great. Just depends on the color it will be printed on. If it is black then things can get covered up in darkness,
Also just take care of the fact how it will look when printed.

Color and details etc.

[exotic totem]

yeah easy

just trying to look for some ideas if you know what I mean

[exotic totem]

but thanks though

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @old fractal

[proper fable]

What do yall think I can do to keep this visual style while having visual clarity with the text?

Like should I introduce more color?

[old fractal]

It looks great

[proper fable]

Thanks 👍

Any improvents yall think I can do?

[old fractal]

If you want to focus attention to cards only,
then you can make background less bright.

The two corners with design is first thing eye catch.

But case can be different if cards are colored. then its okay.

I like the black and white coloring already.

also, the text Kill Leaders should be more bright if this is title

[proper fable]

The cards are supposed to have art of the kill leaders so that will prob already catch the eyes towards them

[old fractal]

ye

[proper fable]

The placement on kill leader?

Like the 1st

[old fractal]

Its nice. I think the size of dagger should be smaller?

second place dagger

[proper fable]

Actually I might move the knife to the right top corner and have a dark grey box with the placement

[proper fable]

Now that I see it, yeah

[old fractal]

Do you want them to be card like?
You can add reflection lining in that case.

[gaunt rune]

tips

[old fractal]

too much saturated?

[gaunt rune]

you think so?

[old fractal]

ye

but if this is theme, it is okay.

also the highlights on planet seem Dim to me.

[gaunt rune]

o

[raw wadi]

Should the main focus of attention be on the planet or the skull?

[raw wadi]

Ok, I went with color contrast !!

[gaunt rune]

skull

[raw wadi]

Ok, my 10 cents ~ in which pic is the eye drawn to the skull?

[gaunt rune]

what

what do you mean? ;-;

[jolly yew]

https://www.instagram.com/p/CzZLxlAtl9S/?img_index=1

[wooden whale]

did this banner for my discord server. The blue drip on the text i made manually as well but i was wondering if anyone has any sugestions to make this pop a little more? like make poeple want to engage with it you know

[proper fable]

This looks cool

[red kernel]

Hey guys hope yall doing well. i just wanted to ask if anybody knows, wether the text would be to small to see on the menue cards or not

[vapid narwhal]

Thoughts?

[raw wadi]

I think the question here is what size will it be printed at? The extras text is the smallest. Will it be legible for all?

[proper fable]

I like the blue tinted back ground but maybe I’ll do a dif color for the other parts

[raw wadi]

Well it looked like nighttime and that made the color contrast choice 🙂

[proper fable]

Its definitely be a good contrast it just didnt go well with the persona 5 styled visuals

[raw wadi]

Yes, I didnt know the Persona 5 context. Very vivid reds by the look of it 🙂

[proper fable]

Yeah but the blue from the Persona 3 style looks really good

[proper fable]

The P5 and P3 styles kinda interchangeable with eachother while they P4 style of yellow and oranges only fit well with grays instead of black and whites

[old fractal]

sick!

[novel comet]

I think the text size is ok, but the line spacing is way too tight.

EDIT: I just held up an a4 paper to the screen to help view it 'same size' and I've changed my mind. the text is too small.

(Assuming that menu is 210mm high)

If that's a menu, it's presumably 6 pages isn't it? - Don't you have another 3 'sides' to spread out to?

[red kernel]

A3 i think

[red kernel]

hi thank you for the info. i dont have any more space bro idk what to do

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[novel comet]

A3? - like a table mat?
My question would be "why is the logo/title on the right hand side?"

[red kernel]

but i think it looks better in irl becasue the pdf looks a lot better. here is the pdf

[red kernel]

its supposed to be foaldable in 3 different pages just like u said

but its gonna be bigger than a4 i'm sure about that

[novel comet]

Either way, I'd makde the pizza and the 'red flag (in the middle) a bit smaller to give you more space for text

[red kernel]

thanks will do

[livid basalt]

my recent design.

[red kernel]

better?

[normal spoke]

Because thats my native language I would be the "Customer" 😉 Not sure what would be on the Inside of the Flyer, if there would be a Website / QR Code anywhere, but from the Design I would try 1-2 "real" pizza Images so that is also from the far seeable whats on the Menu. There is much unused space left on the Frontpage that could be filled with Pizza-items. The "Logo" (Baba's Pizza) should not be mixed with the Party Pizza in one Logo. Instead of "28" better write "Klein 28cm, groß 33cm" so that it s totally clear what it means. If there is a "Firmen Angebot" it should be explained ;-). The rest is pretty Standard.

[red kernel]

thank you my friend i will improve it now

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[old fractal]

Nice

[livid basalt]

my recent work. Title: 7 Perspective Shifting Stoic Tips From Actors, Writers, and Politicians

[jolly yew]

https://www.instagram.com/p/CzefoCtL5UO/

[old fractal]

And for the depressed too.

I like this art.

[normal spoke]

Uhm, who is Al? Or does it say "pay al(l)"? Ten there is an l missing. But THEN I saw that visa Logo and thought of that other payment system ... well, I thing "Graphiti" Style and some Payment sort of thing does not match so good IMHO. For some kind of Logo-Design not so good. Also there are Styleguide for brands in place that you can look at. https://issuu.com/lukaszkulakowski/docs/pp_masterbrandguidelines_v21_mm/18

[normal spoke]

Uhm, well ... same as before i guess. No Thumbnail text (why?) and the Image itself does not transport your story. All three are the same dude, with the same face. The left one s a Bodybuilder, the middle one is some Singer type and the right one is some nerd student with books. not sure, but as a Thumbnail that would be not "interresting" enough to click on it. And it also will not help when you post tomorrow and the day after that the same kind of pics 😉 Maybe try to screenshot some really relevant Image from within the video, blurr the background and outlne the person, put good explaining catch phrase on it. That would work IMHO way much better.

[lusty lantern]

Does anyone have any suggestions for improvement ?

[old fractal]

Its just personal preference. Its already good enough if you like it this way.

[boreal dock]

can someone give some feedback? other than the hooves not completed I don't think it looks quite right

[wooden oak]

There needs to be a shadow under the horse to make it look like its attached to the ground.

[boreal dock]

there is a slight shadow, but the lighting is so uniform in the scene that when I added a harsher one it looked out of place

but i'm not sure

this is a bit harsher

maybe it's the shadow's actual positioning that's off

[wooden oak]

It needs to be more than just an ellipse with transparency. The shadow would be darker where the hooves touch the ground. I would look at some photo-reference and examine how those sorts of shadows are cast.

[boreal dock]

is that a bit better? not final just an example

[wooden oak]

This is getting better. Yes.

[boreal dock]

and yeah i've been trying to see, but this kind of background in this scenario doesnt seem to be commonplace

[boreal dock]

are there any problems with the lighting and contrast?

[wooden oak]

I think maybe that could be a bit lighter and/or more transparent since the sky is so overcast.

[raw wadi]

To my eyes, what makes it look odd or wrong is the position of the hooves. It looks cross legged. Where did you get the horse image?

[boreal dock]

that's because the first and second to last legs are actually a little bit longer, I cut the image out of grass and so I am adding hooves in afterwards

[raw wadi]

I think you ll find that once you do it ll look more like it fits 🙂

[next oyster]

I agree that this is very nice. However, in my personal opinion - the image is too flat. I've provided some separation between planets, giving some depth to the image.

[boreal dock]

ah yeah I agree

[lusty lantern]

Thanks, it's much better ! How did you do it ?

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @next oyster

[jolly yew]

https://www.instagram.com/p/CzjbfXfrrc5/?img_index=1

[boreal dock]

@wooden oak

the shadows still seem a little off, but its much better

[normal spoke]

same as for the Paypal thing. But the Controller itself looks good.

[lyric raven]

how can I fix that one realllllyyy dark spot on the left side of the apple?

[midnight bough]

use the dodge tool
if your apple is on a separate layer you can isolate it so it doesn’t affect the background
otherwise select the apple or that darker spot and lighten it that way :)

or you can eyedrop the dark red color next to it and just paint over the black spot

[lyric raven]

thanks! that helped a lot! for this art piece, how can I get rid of that green tint on the lemon? (theres 2 layers, these are the 2 layers isolated that make up the lemon) also, theres a weird dark smidge on the left of the lemon that looks out of place, but idk hwo to fix it

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @midnight bough

[midnight bough]

you’re probably getting that greenish tint look because of the yellow you’re using + the black and white. try tweaking the color on the layers. i think it looks fine though!
you can try using the smudge tool to blend out that darker spot

[lyric raven]

does that look better or worse smudge wise?

if the lemon looks fine color wise, ill just leave it

[old fractal]

Use mixer brush tool

[midnight bough]

it looks good, color is good too but if it bothers you, you can try layer filters

[midnight bough]

shadow is much better there :)

[lyric raven]

thanks! adjusted the lit part a bit because I was curious lol

I feel like it looks a lot better now!

now to color the plate, counter, and wall and submit the assignment and move onto the next lol

[midnight bough]

keep posting updates, looks great so far!

[lyric raven]

thanks!

[old fractal]

Use mixer brush tool bro

[lyric raven]

oo I just saw the artifact stuff on the plate because I moved to a different monitor. didnt see that earlier