📝project-feedback

[limpid axle]

It will have a picture of someone btw

[umbral jewel]

Probably not, but, I just wanted to start with something

[limpid axle]

I've just left it like that

[glossy mica]

i would put disnes pluy and search light to the bottom of the side

[novel comet]

For the cover... put searchlight and disney right and the bottom, and make 'WHO' a bit bigger 🙂

[limpid axle]

Here is the whole thing, if that makes it easier

[limpid axle]

I'll try that

[glossy mica]

I think it will look better without search light and disney+ in front

[wet rivet]

I'd also perhaps shorten the paragraph and cute 3-4 lines if possible unless you have to provide that much copy. That's a lot to read for a DVD cover imo

[limpid axle]

I need to have that so no can do

But I agree

[wet rivet]

ahh assignments. gotta love em.

[limpid axle]

I wouldn't know what to cut, so I may just leave it

I don't what to complicate it too much

[limpid axle]

I hate them

It is so annoying

[wet rivet]

Nah enjoy them while you can tbh. Much more limiting on real world stuff

though constraints are helpful

[limpid axle]

More of an exam person lol

[glossy mica]

alright, then with the position you have right now it seems good

[limpid axle]

Ty

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glossy mica

[limpid axle]

Anything I can do w the path?

Might adjust the pictures a bit

[glossy mica]

I would put a texture where you have black color

something like this

[novel comet]

I like your use of the lime green, and I reckon you should bring that through more in the rest of the box/cover...

[glossy mica]

that looks cool yeah

[limpid axle]

OOOOOO

How do I do that?

[limpid axle]

It would work really well with this right???

[novel comet]

Then I picked a green overlay colour, applied it over the top and added a multiply

[limpid axle]

That makes no sense to me but sure 🙂

[glossy mica]

i have the urge to do all by myself for your movie

[novel comet]

Yeah. - Maybe add an outer glow on paint those neon masks to make it look like they're a bit glowy 🙂

[limpid axle]

Hahaha why lol

[limpid axle]

I did increase the exposure, I will try that

[novel comet]

All I'll say is... don't make it too busy.

[limpid axle]

Yeahhhh agreed

[glossy mica]

it is that im pretty bored

[limpid axle]

That's my film poster too

[limpid axle]

Loooool

I mean I could make a copy of each and send them to you?

Don't change them, but make edits of them?

Just little tweaks

[glossy mica]

sure thing, i am bad at explaining in the easiest way what i will change

i can even to the change James recommended

[limpid axle]

Yeah sure, I'll send them at 6PM UK time

I'm going back home soon so I can't really send it now

[glossy mica]

👍

[limpid axle]

Hey, I got the stuff, am I alright to DM you?

[glossy mica]

yes :)

[blissful galleon]

May you please give me feedback in my photos?

[glacial saffron]

those look amazing!! keep up the awesome work!!

[blissful galleon]

Thank you so much

[umbral jewel]

i think its cool

[glossy mica]

interesting quite i'd say haha, looks clean

[silent hedge]

did u get inspired by dbd ?

[limpid axle]

Surprisingly not however love DBD

[silent hedge]

haha gotchu !

[limpid axle]

What gave DBD vibes?

[jolly flame]

dn what to add to this to make it more full

[silent hedge]

The story(lord) of the DLC "Darkness Among Us"

[limpid axle]

Ooo I low-key get it

[glossy mica]

maybe noise

[silent hedge]

Maybe some burn textures

[glossy mica]

that also would make it look better

[jolly flame]

what layer should i add noise to?

[glossy mica]

To the whole project

[silent hedge]

You can make your noises as an overlays to avoid to affect ur layer

[glossy mica]

I's say the top one

[jolly flame]

okie

[silent hedge]

use this color

if u put 130 or 120, u wont keep the same color that you have, it gonna be more " brightness "

with noises

original

if i put 158 (for example)

it gonna be more "brightness"

if I put 94

[glossy mica]

What blending mode was applied for gray layer?

[silent hedge]

it looks like darker

[jolly flame]

like this?

[silent hedge]

so always use 129, it's the middle

Noooo

Go on your layer 3

[jolly flame]

yea

[silent hedge]

put 129 at RGB

And paint it ! (bucket tool)

[glossy mica]

You can also use the shortcut alt+backspace to fill the whole layer

Now filter>noise>add noise

[silent hedge]

Or Filter Gallery>Texture>Noises, both r good !

Yup !

[jolly flame]

change it to overlay?

[silent hedge]

And now you chang ur blending option as overlays

yup !

[glossy mica]

Oh so its overlay, nice

[silent hedge]

https://tenor.com/view/perfection-michael-fassbender-perfectionist-perfect-gif-7910211

[glossy mica]

Much betta

[jolly flame]

tyty

[silent hedge]

well im out, gotta sleep now it's kinda late here, g'night y'all ! 😊

[jolly flame]

ty and gn

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @silent hedge

[glossy mica]

Night

[unreal narwhal]

help me improve ( i dont make them for vid just for fun and practice )

[glossy mica]

I would change the font of accept

[unreal narwhal]

thx

[glossy mica]

Cool stuff

[little tartan]

Honest oponion it took me 5 minutes to make and im lost. Tell me what looks weird, what can be fixed. Coloring? pretend your a judge, be a dick about it

its for my product

[shy raptor]

constructive critisizm is the word you are looking for

and i'd say the colors

the cat looks very clearly photoshoped in

1 because of different lighting

and its the only orange thing there

good contrast

but still

and what makes this graphic not come together is the text

1 they are randomly thrown in with no real composition in mind

2. you have 3 fonts, 2 colors 3 different sizes

wayyyyyyyyyyy too much variation just for 3 words

also this toy is a playmate

but the cat is sitting there bored

that says to me its a bad toy

and does not persuade me to buy this for my pet

have some action in the cat, not just the toy

also here with the y, you could not decide ot go behind the letter or to stay infront of it

dont just make the oppacity 20% and stop there

either fully in the front

or fully in the back

(unless the object is see through witch i dont think your object is)

this green is also not a fun color for a toy

[little tartan]

im a little late let me read

the cat was in there

[shy raptor]

more dull green and army

[little tartan]

I only added text

wait reading

what u suggest

Idk what colors to use

[shy raptor]

color pick from the original design

you could try a color from the cats fur

[little tartan]

here is the original

blue and pink

[shy raptor]

so you started from scratch?

and just added text?

or you made the whole poster?

[little tartan]

Only text

look

it came with that

thats all i can work with

[shy raptor]

can u also post image 3

or you must work on that one?

[little tartan]

not the same product

[shy raptor]

well if you must work on this one, you have space here for text

wont be hard to fit 3 words there

[little tartan]

that looks too bland

its gonna be the first image on the website

[blissful galleon]

Can someone give me feedback

[little tartan]

for what thats bad

[shy raptor]

mmmhhh

maybe somethign like this

but im not crazy about this either

[little tartan]

fr idk

I wanted to spread it apart to at least do something nicer

so idkk

[shy raptor]

you have generetive fill?

[little tartan]

that looks like a book title

i dont

I wish

[shy raptor]

neither do i

but if you did you could expend the image

the base image is not the best

[little tartan]

If i had generative fill I can do so much

[shy raptor]

to try and add text to

[little tartan]

I got free photoshop

I downloaded

somewhere

[shy raptor]

what was your goal?

[little tartan]

someone else review my thing!!!

anyone

i got no ideas at all

[shy raptor]

is this for a class? for work?

[little tartan]

Im getting paid for it

i need some sort of inspiration photo

[shy raptor]

ok well, send me a cut when you'r done

[little tartan]

thats still weirddd

[glossy mica]

You are getting paid for stealing a photo that literally says it can be bought

[little tartan]

they said to edit it

[glossy mica]

well okay then, if you know what you are doing good

[little tartan]

can u tell me what u would do for something like this

[glossy mica]

So this image should be edited to get more views?

[little tartan]

its for the front of a website

[shy raptor]

opten 3 and throwing in teh towel

i wouldnt use this as a base image

[little tartan]

there is no other base idk what to use

"keep your cat board"

[shy raptor]

make one

[little tartan]

lmao

I cant

I dont got the product

and idk how ngl

[shy raptor]

then why did you accept a graphic design job? 😂

[little tartan]

idk cause y not

[shy raptor]

cuz now you're stressed

[little tartan]

yea

[shy raptor]

so, heres what you can do.
go on fiver, find a graphic design that will do it for less then you are getting payed for it, hire them, get it, send to your client & keep the change.

good way to middle man a project

[little tartan]

and if its bad then im screw screw

screwed x2

[shy raptor]

yap

so pick a good designer

[little tartan]

so i cant trust them

im a good designer

i have 3 days experience

[shy raptor]

ok : )

[glossy mica]

Tell me what it needs to be done

i will do it for free because i am bored af

[shy raptor]

make this look good

well, themed will explain it better then i perhaps

[little tartan]

ngl im gonna find another picture

its bad now that i think of it

[shy raptor]

thats what i been telling you

[little tartan]

im gonna go in debt

[shy raptor]

start with purchasing photoshop

[little tartan]

thats too much

[shy raptor]

photoraphy bundle is $10

[glossy mica]

there is also a free trial

[little tartan]

I cant buy subscriptions

[glossy mica]

i said free trial

[little tartan]

I dont have a credit card

[wet rivet]

@little tartan sorry I know that's something most people have issues with. Explore Adobe Express as it's free and can do some basic design and layout https://www.adobe.com/express/

some image editting, too. and pretty easy.

[little tartan]

But i need to edit my thingy and that wont help

its a 500 thing if i get it, he hires me forever

500$$

[glossy mica]

should be then reasonable to get a subscribtion, with getting a job i think you should have a bank card

that works too

@little tartan i done this as of rn

[little tartan]

thats bad ngl

[glossy mica]

👍

[little tartan]

can i pay u like 30 cents to do it for me?

[glossy mica]

I have no other ideas than what i sent above

[little tartan]

oh

i thought u professional

[wooden oak]

Please keep the conversation civil.

If you want to insult people, do it somewhere else.

[glossy mica]

With that attitude you won't be successful.

No professional will do it for free

[little tartan]

plz

[silent hedge]

Nah dude. They can't do that. It's disrespectful

[silent hedge]

XD

in which world are you living ??

[little tartan]

50 cents

Ill instant send it

And no taxing!

I know I know its a very good deal

[silent hedge]

@little tartan then leave the job if you are not able to do it. I think someone would have been happy to get this job, and they would have already finish it. You are not professional at all.

[little tartan]

i am professional, Ill do it for them

its 50 to do it and I do the rest of there store for 450 more

[silent hedge]

Nah move and bear the consequences of your action. You will sleep less stupid ;)) (no offense tho)

[little tartan]

Like them not liking it?

[silent hedge]

I mean, your behavior is unprofessional, you take people for idiots, learn from your mistakes.

[little tartan]

oh, im sorry

[silent hedge]

Really, what is it for ?

[little tartan]

the website

you know the first image of a website

when they go on

[silent hedge]

do you have to make a poster or smth else

[little tartan]

just an image

[silent hedge]

what is the name of the site ?

[little tartan]

yeah its like a long thing

[little tartan]

idk

[silent hedge]

...

[little tartan]

I only know product

[silent hedge]

You must give more information if u want us to help you.

Okay

What the product is about ?

[little tartan]

its a ball

[silent hedge]

When you say first image of a site, you mean the logo before the url right ?

[little tartan]

like

random site i found

like that

[silent hedge]

a ball of what ? Dude do sentences istg, what this ball is made of, is it connected to smth, or is it a simple ball ?

[little tartan]

its a ball

[silent hedge]

No dude, you can't pur that image for a site like that

[little tartan]

pur?

[silent hedge]

It's more IU/UX, you have do go deeper in your idea

[little tartan]

what is IU/UX

[silent hedge]

...

I'm done fr

[little tartan]

I googled it

[silent hedge]

Well, did they ask you do to only one image ?

What informations they gave you ?

[little tartan]

They said they are making a site for this product but are around the pet niche, and its a automatic play ball for cats

and its due today at 9 pm

[silent hedge]

Okay, is an offical picture from the company ?

[little tartan]

i made that

i went to the product and i just added words

[silent hedge]

Dude, it's actually 2am and i am trying to help you so please, DO EFFORTS !

[little tartan]

oh dam

ty baby

[silent hedge]

And "strangely" you have NO any informations, no any shooting, nothing, not even a 3D ball PNG ?

[raven crow]

side note: just followed your twiter, i love your stuff

I'm trying to take this further. I was told the background looks weird, its meant to be less "in your face" as the rest of the stuff

I fear the inner glow on the text is getting lost with the texts insides on "RBX" as well

If you say anything, please tag me

[silent hedge]

Thank you ! Appreciate it ! 🩷✨️

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @raven crow

[silent hedge]

When you say "less in your face" you mean that you don't want our eyes keep focusing on it right ?

(Just to be sure)

[novel comet]

@silent hedge - I just read the car crash of conversation you had above. - Just wanted to say thanks for your efforts in trying.
There just wasn't enough of a brief given to be able to provide anything helpful. - It sounded like "I need to put a heading on this page", but I still have no idea if they wanted this to use as a poster, a social media post, a product image or something else.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @silent hedge

[charred fable]

what can i do for the background here? im out of ideas

[normal spoke]

You can maybe do the same "Flatten Effect" that you put on the Persons in the Forground. You also could try to lay some kind of Background maybe some Explosion or so between the People and the Logos. maybe look at others of those "Gamer Banners" and look how ts done. Hope it helps.

[silent hedge]

I tried but they are not talknative at all so well 😭 can't do more specially if they don't do any effort and I guess it's too late to help them so I'd say another bite the dust- 🤷‍♀️

[fiery prism]

anyone can u give feedback on these

also how to install adoble photoshop

[blazing pine]

You can download and install it from their site.

[shadow agate]

like this, text and pictures interspersed

[novel comet]

I... think the letter spacing is a bit too wide, and I'm not sure I'm a fan of the melting guns? - but I'm not sure of the focus/goal of the image 🙂

[raven crow]

Yeah, I think it’s pretty but it’s still pretty aggressive there

[raven crow]

These are just screenshots for my mobile device so they’re not full quality but I think I fixed it

[candid bronze]

Does the bomb look out of place? I’m trying to make a portfolio for a program I want to apply to that involves like getting rid of nuclear weapons so I was thinking a before (this image) than doing an after image afterwards

[glossy mica]

I would darken the mountains

[candid bronze]

Should I try and harmonize it or would there be an easier method?

[glossy mica]

i would try to select it with magic wand tool

or that you go select>color range>select the color of the mountains and you play with adjustments

[candid bronze]

I figured it out, thanks!

[glossy mica]

great, it looks better

[tepid mango]

Currently working on a project where I'm turning this image into a nighttime version of itself

One of my largest issues is with the bright light that the sun in the original is casting. Does anyone have any advice on how I could soften it or darken it?

[jolly flame]

whats better and wat could i add

[snow condor]

It honestly looks fine for me on my phone. If you want to darken the highlights, mess with the curves with a mask. Also that moon is out of place since the light is coming from the left. It would be better if you just removed it.

[silent hedge]

the first one !

Maybe some clouds ?

[jolly flame]

more clouds?

blurred it abit

[snow condor]

Does it look better to you?

It depends on what style your going for

[silent hedge]

are they brushes or simple clouds pictures ?

But yeah ! It's cool !

[jolly flame]

idk what im going for just expirementing on other design types if that makes any sense

[fiery prism]

idk tbh I just was messing around on pixlr x so

[fiery prism]

how u do dat

in pixlr

im too poor to keep using adoble photoshop

[shadow agate]

Use Add Layer Mask in Photoshop, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aNpO6G72O3w'

[snow condor]

The explosion should be faded since it's far away. Also there should be some glow from the explosion.

[toxic dome]

i think you should make the mountains in the front less faded than they are. the way it is currently set up the explosion should be blue because it’s so far away.

[fiery prism]

bet thx

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @shadow agate

[fiery prism]

made a car into a poster is there an easier way then spending 2 hours on the paint

I used poster effect and then spent ages editing it

also is there an thing you can use that makes the inside transparent

os like a font or smth

but leaves an outline

[snow condor]

Idk what method you used, but I would make my design first, then use a displacement map to put the design on the car.

Something like this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GbJziXVkqrw

[fiery prism]

thx that helps alot imma try to see if you can do that in pixlr bc I can't afford adoble photoshop

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @snow condor

[fiery prism]

if you could help with that than that be legendery

[snow condor]

I don't use pixlr

[fiery prism]

alr

[tepid mango]

Appreciate it! I'll take that into account 👌

Do you think if I adjust the moon to be peaking out behind these leaves it should be fine, or should I get a new background image? @snow condor

[snow condor]

The lighting is still wrong. Id suggest to remove the moon.

[tepid mango]

Do you think the second image with the sky looks better?

[snow condor]

The first one has the better style, but the second one has better composition

But I generally like the second one

[tepid mango]

Here's another angle of the first image background I used

[snow condor]

The clouds are a too saturated and bright

But that might be just me. I don't work with this type of style so idk.

[tepid mango]

I may end up compositing a night sky and then doing my own stylized clouds then for the best effect I think

[snow condor]

👌

[tepid mango]

Last go here with another background for your opinions

[snow condor]

I like the clouds, but the sky is too gray

You could mask out the clouds and add another BG and some stars

[novel comet]

What? - I think your image looks awesome! Clouds look good/fine.

[candid bronze]

Is there a way to match the style to the bomb at the end? I want to get that effect but can’t

[shy raptor]

main difference is that it has a darker outline

and the lines are not straight

[snow condor]

Set a black stroke, brush some black spots, and use the smudge tool to move the lines a bit

[candid bronze]

thanks guys

[candid bronze]

Went a different route on this Photoshop but not sure which is the better version. City versus simplistic?

[shy raptor]

what is this for? whats the goal here?

[candid bronze]

UN program, wanted to make a portfolio around a bomb because the main idea is to have a world without nukes

that sounded terrible but I’m hoping you get what I mean

[shy raptor]

i think by adding in a bomb in your graphic for that kinda goes against your goal

and what does the AD stand for?

[candid bronze]

This was on their website so I went with it 😭

[shy raptor]

oh interesting

so they are turning the bombs into art

in that case

no city bacground

and also bringten up the pink tree more

[candid bronze]

ok alright thx so much

[random pulsar]

Can someone give me some pointers for my banner? {gaming channel}

[rough flower]

@random pulsar that banner is bad

[random pulsar]

??

[random pulsar]

why?

[rough flower]

its terribly made

[random pulsar]

How?

Can i see one of yours?

[rough flower]

i mean look at it

u need to improve it badly

[random pulsar]

let me see one of ur images in ps

[rough flower]

no

[random pulsar]

see

[rough flower]

ur banner is trash, accept the criticism

[random pulsar]

ur just as bad

let me see one of urs

[rough flower]

i would be doing you a disservice by saying its good

i dont make banners

[random pulsar]

let me see any one of ur images

[rough flower]

i could make a better one in 5 mins

[random pulsar]

k do it

[rough flower]

pay me

[random pulsar]

start

[rough flower]

bro its bad accept the criticism

@random pulsar

10000000000000000x better than whatever ur banner was

@random pulsar thoughts?

[random pulsar]

Can someone plz dm me and help me improve?

[rough flower]

@random pulsar ur banner needs to improve by a lot

im just saying, maybe change the text, the shapes, the pasted in images

i mean your youtube banner doesn't even need to be that special, make it simple

[wooden oak]

Please provide "constructive" criticism. Saying something is "bad" doesn't help. If you don't have anything constructive or helpful to say, perhaps don't say anything at all.

[rough flower]

it would be a disservice to him if i lied and said it was good

[wooden oak]

You provide constructive criticism. That's how. If you can't do that then just be silent.

[normal spoke]

First of all, try to look at your project and find out for yourself what bothers you. Where do you think the mistakes are? What would YOU want to improve? It doesn't have to be detailed, but try to look at your picture objectively.
Then you may notice that you have a blue man on the left with a background and a man on the right without a background. That means you should either place the male on the left without a background, i.e. remove the bluish background.

Then the style of the two males should be similar if necessary. On the left is a digitally created body with lots of polygons, a smooth surface, etc., and on the right is a rough graphic block. You should choose a style. Then you chose a background gradient from dark violet to grey. Then an oval field "i epik gamer" which unfortunately I think should be some kind of placeholder at the moment, because that's not good English, but you know that for sure. Then underneath a thick box with a completely different color gradient, etc. You used so many colors that you can't see through them either. Here try to stick to a kind of color palette with 3-5 colors. The people in the picture are more 3 dimensional, but the text is one dimensional. There are various techniques for displaying text in 3D. It's best to just watch a few youtube videos on the subject of image design and image composing. Then build it all up piece by piece.

[toxic dome]

There is a website called vecteezy and you can find a lot of background for your gaming banner. Perhaps, try memphis, dynamic, geometric or just simply type "gaming background" once you enter the website. You can apply the gradient map on the background as well

You can find those backgrounds on the other websites too

[spiral summit]

Im making this logo for my friend in illustrator. He wants it to start off a clothing brand and id like some feedback. He says it feels like something is missing, since im kinda minimalist, im not really sure what I should add there so any feedback is appreciated.

[candid bronze]

I’m not crazy, the two images didn’t blend well together right?

I think the background ended up missing a blending step or two I forgot

[silent hedge]

How to being so negative, they need construtive criticism, you are not helping them by saying "how bad it is". Instead of that sentence, please, help them. Kindly.

Oh well, seems that D. Human said everything 😂

Next time, think about what you are going to say ;))

[silent hedge]

Both image fit really well ! I mean the little girl w that background is really cool !

Now what you need to do is going more deep in your work

Think about shadows, ligths, contrast, and colors curves !

[candid bronze]

I was thinking of maybe changing the color curve on the dress actually

I think the bright green is too contrasting

[echo marlin]

Shadows under the girl

She looks kinda floating

[candid bronze]

alright, I’ll add more.

I did add them under the feet but obviously it’s not noticeable

[echo marlin]

Yeah.

[candid bronze]

Should the whole girl get shadows?

[echo marlin]

Nah i don't think so try adding shadows under her

In the floor

[candid bronze]

alright I gotcha 👍 thanks

[echo marlin]

Np have fun

[rare pasture]

Hello. I just made this in photoshop and I think somethings of. Could someone please help? thanks

[whole night]

the tree casts a shadow to the right while the terrain casts it to the left

[rare pasture]

I dont get it

The darker area is on the right

Oh

I see now

[novel comet]

Also... It would be better if the top right edge had a bit of a 'grassy' edge to it...

..instead of just STRAIGHT

(Google "grass cube render" to see what I mean)

[rare pasture]

Ok Ill do that.

How should i? With a brush?

Because brushes will just do a straight line

[rare pasture]

he left the server

[snow condor]

You can use a grass brush at the ends of the edge to make it more realistic

Search for 'photoshop grass brush' and download them

[rare pasture]

ok

[shell flicker]

Tree looks flat. I understand you probably tried to "face" the tree towards the light source to make it look 3d, but it actually had the opposite effect. Since trees are radially symmetrical (like a cylinder) you don't need to have it "face" anywhere and it can just stay flat on the canvas and look fine.

[modern carbon]

Hey, this is my first Graphic Design ever! I used a PSD for the idea but if I'm honest I did 70% of the work. I want good feebacks pls!!

[shadow agate]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/172085047/BAKAGOAL-Poster-Design?tracking_source=search_projects|sports+poster

[modern carbon]

Yes?

Is it yours?

[shadow agate]

No, just to provide a case reference

[modern carbon]

Oh ty

[shell flicker]

It looks nice! Editing is clean and the colors are nice.
Composition wise - it's a little "empty" in the lower right quadrant. Also it's generally good practice to avoid placing text on top of text so things don't get hard to read.

[modern carbon]

appreciate it!

[blissful galleon]

May i have feedback

[stoic nebula]

i am making a motion comic where i mask out parts of a character and keyframe those parts to create an animation. i just finished coloring it too.

I haven't masked anything out yet, but only colored. so do you guys have any ideas on how I can mask these parts while being sure not to leave any white gaps.

i used gradient maps and gradients to color this by the way

Also, if you guys have any ideas on how i can improve the coloring I would greatly appreciate it

https://streamable.com/wkhlpr

[stoic nebula]

too lazy to update tbh

[jolly flame]

is ther anything else i could add

[normal spoke]

Yes

[jolly flame]

All 3 directions or just down

[normal spoke]

At the Blue Lines you can make the faces a bit wider and under that there is some space where you can ad somthing more.

[normal spoke]

Make the three Face-Lines bigger/wider so that they can be seen a bit better.

[jolly flame]

Oh alright

[normal spoke]

much better in my opinion!

[jolly flame]

ty

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[wooden nymph]

any feedback on this? looks a little boring to me at the moment.

[normal spoke]

What do you want to create exactly? When it would be a CD Cover there would be only the band-name, Title on the Front and the Songs on the back. The Footer should be much smaller and the "i Don't know what..." text is unnecessary . Also the hand, the mouth and those have no purpose. Try the Womans Cutout with the Title and Interpret/Band on the Front and the Rest on the back. Have fun.

[wooden nymph]

this is for merch, back of a t-shirt for a music project

[normal spoke]

Well then you can place the CD-Front anc CD-Back Cover side-by-side. Look at other CD Covers and you will see what te Eyecatchers are. Rule of Thumbs: Less is more. Have fun.

[feral swan]

Really new to photoshop just wondering what else to add? Any suggestions will help

[blissful galleon]

This is the original photo

[candid bronze]

I still don’t feel like the girl is blended in after adding shadows, is it just me? If not, what else can I do?

[silent hedge]

That is sick !!!
Well, your design makes me really think about y2k grain ! I would say to adding a bit gradient like from grey to low white/beige as the backgroud. Maybe duplicate several time the woman to make a movement effect (with an "invert" one), papers & scan line overlays would fit so well on it ! And then adding a noises overlays to make it fluide !

[silent hedge]

https://www.instagram.com/reel/Cpxo8oUAS3E/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y%3D
https://www.pinterest.fr/pin/53832158040513702/
https://www.pinterest.fr/pin/543176405072992989/
https://www.pinterest.fr/pin/16184879900937501/

Instagram

when i see ur poster, this is what it makes me think about

[honest phoenix]

hey guys this is my first design ..definitely its not complete, but also i just dont know what changes should i make into it ,what to add,or should i just leave this project?

[shadow agate]

It is recommended that you use a mind map, set a theme, and write out everything related to the theme (style, weather, light and shadow, elements, etc.). You can go to Behance or Pinterest to find references, or draw sketches, and then look for materials.

[honest phoenix]

Ohk...thanku so much

[normal spoke]

Besides what Rannngooo wrote also try to imagine what the Story behind the picture should be. Right now there is only an astronaut laying on a ground and some wrotten ship. that CAN be an dead astronaut, because a O2 gas tank (<- hint) ist laying also down and there are steps coming from the ship wreck (<- hint) meant to represent the astronaut's disembarking from a spacecraft. you also can put some distant small light in th sky that can represent some Space station from where that astronaut could be.

[sharp pagoda]

What could I change about this

First time using 3D in photoshop

[modern carbon]

ima say the text

but its clean too

[sharp pagoda]

this is the finale one i have gone with

[shy raptor]

have you tried putting the letters in the same perspective as the MC blocks?

[jolly flame]

is this a good title layout

[silent hedge]

yes !!

[silent hedge]

that's cool ! Maybe I would invert the M (flip horizontal)

[jolly flame]

touched it abit

[silent hedge]

try to put 1 or 0.5 for the stoke

also this one is really big

[jolly flame]

sized it down

and changed stroke to 1 (made the spacing better (not on ss))

[silent hedge]

Nice ! This is better 😊

[jolly flame]

ty

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @silent hedge

[wicked frigate]

Music cover art!

[sharp pagoda]

I don’t realy know how to do that

[sharp pagoda]

Yea gonna try that

[civic junco]

Legends! please give me your feedback regarding to my art. I'm new to photobashing so now I'm applying things from what I've learned.

[shy raptor]

this is all photobashing? great mix of images i wouldnt be able to tell, looks like a digital painting

[supple raptor]

hi im a begginer graphic designer for my clothing brand and i need some tips because i have no idea how to do a good fade at the bottom of a design so it doesnt have such a harsh cut off to the tshirt

[civic junco]

Hey bud! Thanks for your feedback and yeah, I mix some images I found from google then modify it.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @shy raptor

[paper mason]

So far, thoughts? Will work on it tomorrow

[shy raptor]

too much blur

add some shadows

& fix perspectve

[rotund swift]

I got rid of the peoples, hows it look? used patch tool and spot healing tool

[hushed bear]

It's a birthday poster design. What do you think of the design?

[paper mason]

Thanks so much for the help! When you mean to fix perspective, how can I do that? Perspective wrap? If not wont the cars look distorted?

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @shy raptor

[livid island]

the sole balloon looks a little out of place, maybe you could add more or just not have balloons

i'd also bring its colour closer to the blue reflections on the jacket so that the whole poster looks more coherent

[normal spoke]

Try to draw some perspective lines. Cars further away are smaller as cars in the Front. you also can lok up "perspective Composings" on youtube, etc.

[normal spoke]

Looks nice. Maybe you can put some more ballons in it. Those can also represent the number "five" if you want or you can put other things in there. Also look at the shadows. I think the ballon has a good one, but the shoes can have some small shadows, too. Hope that helps.

[paper mason]

Yeah, the thing is that the car is so close to the car behind that the difference should be unnoticable. Would you think the perspective issue is with the cars or the track/background?

Here is my updated version so you can take a look:

[fringe fractal]

Can someone help me out with improving a pics quality on ps

[empty kernel]

Second ever logo! (day 2 of illustrator and photoshop) I'll link my first logo that i made yesterday above. For this logo i made the eye on illustrator and then copy-pasted it to photoshop and added the text and stroke around the logo, please rate it 😃

logo yesterday is the lemon one and logo today is the eye

[jolly flame]

tryna make the tyler one almost like the carti one any ideas

[stoic nebula]

hey

[dusk igloo]

The perspective issue definitely is with the cars, it doenst look like the front wheels on the ground compared to the back wheels: they make the cars look like they're titled or rotated wierdly in a way they shouldn't be

[abstract oxide]

Nice composition. I would personally leave a little space between the front car and the right edge of the image. If you wanted to keep the cars at the same size then push them to the left and slightly crop the rear car.

[novel comet]

Yeah, to clarify, I don't think they're talking about a vanishing point specifically. - Like you say, both cars are so close, they would be about the same size. - problem is that the angles generally are wrong. - I mean - what's the angle of the original picture that you took the cars from?

[paper mason]

Ah yeah, I see what you mean. Do you have any suggestions to fix that without having to find a different image, or is it better to just find another image where the wheels line up better? 🤔

[novel comet]

Can you share the original image that the cars came from?

[paper mason]

Thanks, this is my second day learning photoshop and I've learned a lot. Anyways, thanks for the feedback, I will definitely center them a bit more 👍🏼

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[novel comet]

Cars look like their front wheels are 6 ft higher in the air than the back ones...

[paper mason]

Yeah I see what you mean. Yes, they were from some images I found, any suggestions on how I can fix it? 🤔

[paper mason]

Yeah

[paper mason]

True 😂

I tried to use the same angle

[novel comet]

This is more how photoshop estimated the perspective:

[paper mason]

Interesting, so would you reccomend I 'tilt' the background a bit more?

[novel comet]

My version is literally the opposite 'angle' to yours.

High on the RIGHT instead of the left

[paper mason]

Ah yeah, I see that

So would you recommend I do a horizontal flip? (of the background)

[novel comet]

probably also want the line the left side of the track (TOP) to be much thinner than the right side (BOTTOM)

[paper mason]

Ok, I'm doing that right now 👍🏼

[novel comet]

I think you probably need to re-draw it - tracing mine perhaps for a better idea of the angle.

that said, mine is just a guess.

[sullen saddle]

#❓ask-a-question any1 know how to do what i am asking?

[paper mason]

Ok, I will do that 👍🏼

[paper mason]

@novel comet Alright, I tried tracing yours but it feels off for some reason

[novel comet]

Yeah that texture is flat/wrong

also, the grass not be straight either

[paper mason]

What do you mean? 🤔

[shadow agate]

perspective

[paper mason]

Sorry I just started 2 days ago, I hope im not frustrating you, but I dont understand

[paper mason]

Ohhh, you mean Perspective wrap?

[shadow agate]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w5aMceFycN4

[paper mason]

Ah okay, thanks, I'll take a look 👍🏼

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @shadow agate

[whole night]

I usually advise against using the vanishing point as it's not that intuitive and doesn't offer non-destructive workflow. In the discussed case perspective transforming will be enough as only one plane is visible

[paper mason]

Ah okay 👍🏼

The Formula 1 Champions NO ONE Expected!

👆🏼 Made this one, not related to the other one, so tell me what you guys think 🙏🏼

[rotund swift]

I got rid of the people and edited a little bit. I don’t think I did a good job getting rid of them though. Thoughts?

[shadow agate]

The ones in the red frame may need a more natural transition

[abstract oxide]

Wow. You've learned a lot in 2 days. Best of luck with the studies.

[paper mason]

Appreciate it! 👊🏼

[jolly flame]

trying to make the gradient work maybe i just leave it out

[novel comet]

Yeah, I don't like vanishing point either. - Seems insane that you can't place a smart object into a 'vanishing point' properly either. - meaning you can't later 'swap out' a wall/image.

[normal spoke]

I like the Version with the Gradient more. It has more depth.

[north sundial]

https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/1015656273716449370/1129307012392566794/63finl.png?width=507&height=634

wanna know your thought about this design

i just expressed my self and my problems with it

https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/1015656273716449370/1129307846698352701/63-233.png?width=507&height=634

[jolly flame]

gonna touch it up (fix colours etc)

[valid hazel]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/174908831/Concert-Merchandise-Mobile-App-UI-UX-design

what do u guys think of this? any feedback?

[steel radish]

Hi Adobe Community 🙌 ,

I'm excited to share with you one of my academic projects, SIMLESS Event identity branding

If possible, could you spare a moment to provide feedback on the project? I would greatly appreciate your thoughts on the design choices I made and any areas where I could improve.

Thank you for your time and continued support
Project Link : https://www.behance.net/gallery/161160037/Brand-Identity-SIMLESS-Event

[novel comet]

I love it. - Nice set of colours, the logo is clear with nice use of weights, - The abstract backgrounds work well.

[silent hedge]

This is...

https://tenor.com/view/perfection-michael-fassbender-perfectionist-perfect-gif-7910211

GodtheDJ said everything !

[abstract oxide]

I think you've created a fantastic brand. Congratulations.

I'm struggling to nitpick but there's a few minor issues with the flags...

1. The content doesn't follow the distortions of the flags. This is only really noticeable in the left flag.
2. The content sits at different vertical positions on the different flags. Is this intentional?
3. Aliasing of the logo outer circle. Perhaps create larger and then downsize.

Again, fantastic work.

[distant wigeon]

What’s the problem? As i guess this poster is lack of red colour, am i right?

[steel radish]

Well received; thanks a lot for this feedback ❤️

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[abstract oxide]

Are you looking for general feedback? Can you elaborate on the "lack of red colour" comment?

[distant wigeon]

Yeah, I just don’t know: why doesn’t it look exiting… I guess I should add more red colours

And maybe there’s bad composition

[abstract oxide]

A simple Curves adjustment layer that increases the contrast adds a lot of punch

[distant wigeon]

And it’s good?

I think looks better

Or u think in other way

[normal spoke]

i think the red colour is not so much the problem. Its more that there is much going on that is a bit to much. The boy is looking down very calm, has 3 Arms. That Flash on Top looks unrealistic. The one right Hand is blurry, but it would be better if it had a Motion blurr in the up-down direction. The Blending in Front with the Text looks a bit flat. Maybe there would a 3D Effect on the Text help.

[distant wigeon]

Okay, i see, but wb calm face and the 3rd hand it’s don’t touch me bc it’s just a photo and i like multiply some photos in one… i agree with u I’ll try change it, delete the hand and make 3d effect. What about flash light: should I add lightings on the weapon? Or is it too small? I’m 4 beauty)

[normal spoke]

I would say just try different Lights and differnet positions. Try also to find reference Images in Films, etc. make screenshots, look how they look, etc.

[distant wigeon]

Okay, i heard u 👌

[boreal condor]

do you guys feel the girl really blend with the background. please share your feedback

[silent hedge]

yeah ! It really does ! But maybe try to fix the color of the girl, like more warm

[boreal condor]

Ok

[normal spoke]

The Composition looks really nice. The thing is that the Light in the street come from the left and on the girl they come from the right. That looks a bit of. But all in all it looks very good.

[silent rose]

I feel like something is off but I don't know what

[abstract oxide]

The layout of the red lasers feels almost grid like. Perhaps make them a little more random.

[boreal condor]

Yeah after I made full edit I noticed that mistake thanks for pointing out

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @normal spoke

[meager garden]

my first ever custom pfp, i have no experience and i kinda wanted to blend the green logo on top of the engine, but i didnt know how.

these were my base pictures:

[novel comet]

Looks a little dark.

[novel comet]

I assume you used the hue slider to change the colour. - and then made it darker with the slider beneath.

instead of making ALL of it darker, use the colour picker to pick out JUST the red shades... - that means you can darken the purple but leave the eyes, lights and teeth nice and bright.

[meager garden]

Thank you

[dense finch]

How do you record your photoshop like this?

[novel comet]

I use some free software called ShareX

[boreal condor]

any suggestions to improve want some feedbacks about this edited pic

[shy raptor]

astrounaut a bit too orange. pro a shade between the all white and the orange you currently have would be best

play around

[boreal condor]

today i also learned about shadows too check this out too

[boreal condor]

yeah need to play some more to figure out to blend

[shy raptor]

oh nice job on the shadows here, looks great

[boreal condor]

thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @shy raptor

[abstract oxide]

Nice composition. Looking at the shadows on the sand and grass suggests that the sun is quite high in the sky. I would change the length and shape of the shadow under the astronaut.

[silent hedge]

so great !

[jolly flame]

what can i add

[abstract oxide]

Great design. I like the elements and the hue and saturation choices are cool. I appreciate that the photo placement may be very deliberate but have you explored raising the image vertically? That way the text would not be covering her face.

[jolly flame]

Vertically how?

[jolly flame]

?

[boreal condor]

thanks for your feedback i will sort it out

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[boreal condor]

thanks

[abstract oxide]

Yeah that looks cool. Nice adjustment with the text.
Another thing you could experiment with is taking the lower text, making it black and sticking it on the right over the sheet.

[abstract oxide]

Thanks mate. Keen to see your update.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @boreal condor

[boreal condor]

corrected shadow and changed some colorlookup.

[novel comet]

Looking good.

Why? It does the job as it is 🙂 - It looks like a horrifically corny, brightly coloured youtube thumbnail. - Just as 'realistic' as any other clickbait looking thumbnail. - I assume that was the intention anyway?

(I'm not knocking the skill/project!) 🙂

nice work 🙂

[runic lagoon]

wow jesus christ - came here for legitamate advice, not to be labelled as "horriffic". what a welcoming community

[novel comet]

hey, I'm really sorry for that comment.

I didn't mean to offend.

[runic lagoon]

and yes, it's to be used as a thumbnail so a level of exaggeration is expected

you literally gave no input on the things I was looking for feedback on. not sure how I could've taken it any other way

[novel comet]

Yeah, of course. - I personally dislike the exaggeration on thumbnails, just a pet peeve of mine. - I was just in the process of giving some more constructive feedback, I promise!

[novel comet]

I can't see the image any more, but from memory, I was going to say that you might be able to use photoshops neural filters to make it look like the man is looking at the monkey instead of off screen. - same goes for the monkey looking at the screen.

[runic lagoon]

haven’t used that before. will look into it

[novel comet]

Also, the table that the monkey looked a little bright, maybe add a bit of shadow on it? - but then again, it's a thumbnail, and they're infamous for being bright, over the top, over-saturated images anyway

[runic lagoon]

sure, I’ll see if that helps it

I have to find the line between fake looking and believable while still being easily recognizable from a distance

hence the contrasting colors

[novel comet]

Colours are good.

[runic lagoon]

right now I agree that it’s too fake that’s why im here 😭

[novel comet]

I noticed how the outfit worn by the bloke was so bright. - He looks like he should be working on a childrens TV show. - which again, was the entire point 🙂

One thing a lot of people get wrong is by having the different components added into an image all at different qualities and resolutions - I didn't get chance to look at yours very closely, but they looked ok from memory.

[runic lagoon]

i’m just trying to avoid it looking like it was all stitched together (which it was) and non-cohesive looking

[runic lagoon]

yeah fs. not sure what to do when I can’t really enhance quality though — should I add compression to higher quality parts?

i’m not at my computer rn but I’ll resend it

[novel comet]

I think it was ok anyway, but if in doubt, I'd make the higher res things lower to match the lower res ones.

[runic lagoon]

any tips on how to lower quality?

[novel comet]

There is also another neural filter called colour harmonisation you could try out

[runic lagoon]

I have 2022, are the neural filters available in that version

[novel comet]

Um, quickest way is to probably rasterise the object, shrink it a bit, finish transforming it, and then enlarge it again.

[runic lagoon]

ok yeah that’s what I usually do

[novel comet]

Yeah I think so.

[runic lagoon]

where do I find those?

[novel comet]

Filter > Neural Filters

(Alt + Cntrl + F)

[runic lagoon]

hmm doesnt seem to be here for me

[whole night]

Harmonization. The first one in the beta section

[runic lagoon]

ahh

[boreal condor]

I tried to blend this guy. Any suggestions to improve guys??

its hard to make his foot to blend any ideas

??

[shy raptor]

perspective is off

it'll be near impossible to properly blend that specific astrounaut in that specific bacground

also

astronaut in subway is odd to see, so makes it less believable but funny & interesting

[jade inlet]

Yes, for the perspective, you could try puppet warp, but…
And the lighting and shadows need to bf tweaked as well.

[silent hedge]

what is this ?

the shoe ?

[abstract oxide]

Very nice work. The piece definitely feels more cohesive now.

[boreal condor]

thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[boreal condor]

that was in that part of astronut shoe which was in that photo

[haughty frost]

umm gonna ask anime questions again XD hope people don’t mind me

umm it’s not finished, I was thinking maybe I should put the light source behind rather than in front

I was thinking to make it more hmm like this with the light source on the back and tbh the background is probably too 2D I don’t even know how to edit it anymore

I have more reference but idk, maybe I’m just very confused with backgrounds

Tbh the shirt doesn’t even make sense and many things but I kinda gave up on those >_< i thought I might change the light source so I didn’t continue the uh line art and the color (cuz sometimes I shade it to help me with the line art better)

[jolly flame]

Scraped the old layout i had for this, what you thinkin?

[boreal condor]

i tried to blend this gar with this background. What you guys are thinking is this car really blends with this background??

[wooden oak]

Its a good start. The shadow colors on the car need to be adjusted. They are too bright compared to the shadows in the background plate. Also, the shadow under the front of the car also needs some work.

[boreal condor]

thanks for your feedback i will work on this this is my 5th attempt to blend something with something

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak

[paper mason]

Any feedback appreciated 🙏🏼

[boreal condor]

i think this is for youtube video looks great honestly i love it

[silent hedge]

love it your draw style tho ! Well, actually idk if the background you want will fit with the charater, or maybe not in blue

But do you mean that you want that style for the sea or.. ?

[paper mason]

Yeah its for YouTube, and thanks, I also liked how it turned out 🙏🏼

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @boreal condor

[novel comet]

I originally thought that was Jeff Dunham with a new haircut.

[paper mason]

Lol, they are pretty similar 😂

[haughty frost]

ohh maybe not in blue yeah XD that blue i got no clue how to do it. I was thinking of something easier with like light coming from behind the character instead of from the top front. Maybe like this reference, the blue ones were the sea themed that has light from behind that I find very pretty

These don’t have umm sea I like the vibe, i think the blue is harder to do than regular I don’t think I’ll be able to do that

With some help I wanted to try for something like this as well as the uh shadow overlay, the thing that makes the character merge into the background idk if it’s okay or not

[silent hedge]

that Lumine tho 😍

Maybe try to find tutorials about sea landscape ?

[haughty frost]

That lumine is by void_0 on pixiv, oh yeah I’ve never thought of that :0 I’ll do that

[silent hedge]

Haha

Genshin need to do more skins tho

Idk if you know drawross, but they do pretty great tutorials, you should check his channel out !

[idle zodiac]

what you guys think?

its for a signing i made for Coritiba in football manager, tried to make kind of like a signing post for social media

[slim whale]

hey! anyone that would love to discuss and give advice to my color selection of fonts i used in my cover art?

[slim whale]

im talking about the text on the phone, im not sure what colors to use for the text and glow

[idle zodiac]

i think a green-ish yellow could go well

[normal spoke]

I think there can be two ways you can go the route and stick with the purple Lighting or you can ad something as bolovo said and use green-ish light as an accent. In both cases you should try to make the front of the phone brighter so that the buttons and Text gets more recognized. Have fun!

[paper mason]

Any feedback appreciated 🙏🏼

[pale garden]

magzine design any feedback

[toxic dome]

feedback?

[lofty mortar]

Hi all. I'm a beginner and I would like to get feedback on this. I feel it's lacking something but can't figure it out. What do you guys think?

[shy raptor]

watermark/10

[shy raptor]

this is good for starting out, i'd recommend using less variety of fonts

[toxic dome]

?

[shy raptor]

leave the "first" font and make the other two the same

[shy raptor]

watermarks are too distracting, noone will steal your work

[toxic dome]

well, anyways

[normal spoke]

The Font is not so good for this kind of work. You would use something with a bit more surface. The red scratches are Ok, but also not as dominant as they could be. The "Teenage" and "Heritage" Font should be the same. That "enzo"-Watermark thingy is Otdated, boring and Useless, because You always would have the Original Images to proof your work 😉 But as a Startingpoint not bad.

[normal spoke]

I like the Background, the "First" Part. But after that I do not get why there would be different Fonts and whatfor the notes should be. Maybe try little less, all the Same Fonts and some more faded Objects in the Background. Have fun.

[toxic dome]

Yes but I do not want it to get stolen-

I got asked to do that font

But thanks for ur feedback

🫶

[normal spoke]

Sorry, to say that but nobody would "steel" those Text and IF somebody REALLY would want that they could. Delete that grey areas and fill it wth black is a matter of seconds. As I said: You have the Original Files and always can proof that the Original is yours. Have fun.

[paper mason]

Any feedback appreciated 🙏🏼

[toxic dome]

Any feedback regarding the design? What improvements should i make

[abstract oxide]

You've created a really strong look. Great work.
I suspect a real world client would want the JOIN NOW button to be bigger and more obvious.
You have a few spelling and grammar issues.
Again, great design and a solid series of graphics.

[delicate kite]

Thanks for giving me valuable feedback. Next project I will fix the problem.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[abstract oxide]

Thanks mate. Keep up the great work.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @delicate kite

[feral cloud]

I am a beginner designer and this Is my design

[novel comet]

What's it for?

Is that "AC" thing part of the design or are you worried someone will steal your design and it's a watermark?

[feral cloud]

Yes it is just a watermark of my logo, sorry for now I will remove for the future posts.

[tepid ravine]

hey im a up and coming star and im looking for a pro editor who can make me a quick gif

[novel comet]

Oh lord, you don't need to apologise 🙂 - I just wanted to check it wasn't part of the design.

Maybe just knock the opacity back a bit more next time since it's quite distracting

[feral cloud]

Okay, thanks I accept it. 🙂

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[normal spoke]

Ok, the Watermark thing is settled 😉 For the Design itself I would change the second Image from the right (the coffee beans) into something with color as the rest or making all in that white/green-ish outline. The "AC"-Logo in the stlized fork in the middle would be for me way to prominent, but the design without the distracting AC-Pattern seem to look pretty solid. Nice.

[wooden bluff]

This is for my trumpet section's hoodie. Thoughts?

[abstract oxide]

This is a great design. Really nice work.
I checked the numbers in your image and noticed that...

• Your colours aren't solid and have some very slight variation.
• The white is more a very bright grey. Is this intentional?

[wooden bluff]

Thanks, and yeah it's jpegged and i didn't really mean to make it darker

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[abstract oxide]

Thank you. In case you don't know a solid black and white can be important for numerous reasons including having those colours drop away when using blending modes like Multiply and Screen.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden bluff

[abstract oxide]

Hello again. Another excellent set of designs. A few thoughts... I think your text that's written in cursive is too thin and hard to read. As I mentioned on one of your other recent projects I think your "call to action", which includes the BOOK NOW button, needs to be larger. While I'm a big fan of negative space in design, I think some of elements could be enlarged. Keep those great designs coming.

[normal spoke]

In Case that should be printed on Hoodies i would try to simplify the Design overall a little bit, because those little details are not so good for printing on canvas and pretty hard to do. The Design itself I like!

[tall kraken]

Hi guys

[solid onyx]

New sketch, trying out new subject matters:
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/5vZNez

[tall kraken]

i need help with colour of the buildings at the front

it is not complete i have to complete the background and smoke from the factory animate that and the lantern and mist like particle effect

theme:polution (protest art)

[boreal condor]

Tried to blend the car. Feedback needed about does this car really blends??

[paper mason]

The Race That Made Senna a LEGEND

I am struggling with this one, something is missing but I dont know what... please help a brotha out 🙏🏼

[tall kraken]

No the top right( hood) is too dark, pay attention to the lighting in the background

[tall kraken]

U blurred the outline of the car

[paper mason]

What do you mean? 🤔

I did?

[tall kraken]

Did U paste the image into the background

Reduce exposure, and use curves to make lighting better

If U want U can add noise for some texture

[paper mason]

Yeah

[paper mason]

Ah okay 👍🏼

[tall kraken]

U blurred the outline of the car with the background too much

[paper mason]

I'll definitely check that out 👍🏼

[tall kraken]

Consider using camera raw to fix lighting and add highlights to the car

[paper mason]

I dont know what you mean by "blurred the outline of the car with the background too much", like is the border too rough or too soft? I never adjusted the border for that image

[tall kraken]

Hmm too bright

Like I said

Did u add smoke?

[paper mason]

Nope

Thats spray, since it was raining, the car brought up water too look like that

[tall kraken]

Ok, so just fix the lighting and add highlights

[paper mason]

this is the original image

[paper mason]

Are you sure? I dont want to make it to look to dark since this is a YouTube thumbnail and its supposed to be attractive. The bright white adds a bit of contrast and I like how that turned out

[silent hedge]

This is pretty cool but proportion are not that good, try to make the car a bit little

[novel comet]

(If it's a youtube thumbnail, it's going to generally be tiny on the screen anyway. - I wouldn't panic about how blurry the edge is. - It's going to be compressed down to a single pixel anyway)

Also, not particularly relevant for a youtube thumbnail, but if you've got edges that feel a bit too bright, a neat trick is just to add a a darker inner glow effect.

[paper mason]

Yeah, I agree, but at the same time I want to become better at photoshop in the process so any feedback is appreciated

[paper mason]

That looks great, I'll try it out right now 👍🏼

[paper mason]

@novel comet I tested it and it does look better with the inner glow, just that the top part also has the inner glow and it makes it look very dark

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[tall kraken]

umm

where is the glow

[tall kraken]

love the colour tone here

[paper mason]

The inner glow, you can kind of see it like a border on the edge

[paper mason]

Yeah it definitely does have a better tone, but for a YouTube thumbnail it needs to be attractive

[tall kraken]

yea barely

[paper mason]

To me it is very noticeable, does it work?

[tall kraken]

no

[paper mason]

Am I supposed to make it bigger?

That will make the top part look even darker

[tall kraken]

idk

try

[paper mason]

OK

[boreal condor]

trying to manipulate this dog , teach me if im doing anything wrong im new for this please

[shut crag]

Can anyone using Firefly message me please?

[normal spoke]

For Firefly questions you can take a look at the Firefly Discord Chanel. Because here are no Links allowed you go to the Firefly website and on the top right corner is the Link to the Discord. Have fun.

[normal spoke]

I think it looks good so far.

[glacial verge]

Hi! I need feedback and help on graphic design I'm doing. Can anyone help out a bit?

I am a novice/intermediate graphic design student and I make playing mats for a card game.
Currently I have lower competition but fear if I don't improve my stuff will get overshadowed quickly.

This is one of my designs, it's very simple and my only concern is that it doesn't feel like it has enough DEPTH and could feel a bit flat. The colors also might not work well with each other and it might feel a bit UN-COHERENT.

If anybody has just some general rules of thumb or advice please let me know

This is one of my competitors designs, it feels a lot more COHERENT and DEEP.

1. they used a technique where they overlayed color over the images to make them fit better and I'd love to learn how to do that .

2. They include a lot of outlines but my issue with them is that when I try to incorporate them they sometimes come out jagged. Is this something I can fix by upscaling images or something I need to do by not using the quick select tool when selecting my subject

[wooden oak]

discord.gg/adobefirefly is the link. That should be allowed. :)

discord.gg/adobefirefly

[wooden oak]

You can try using Color Overlay, either by using Layer Styles or using a Color Layer set to various Blending Modes. Regarding the outlines, upscaling probably isn't the issue. Its about creating "cleaner" lines. Generally, vector shapes produce nice, sharp, clean lines. And they respond better to Layer Style > Strokes than "pixelated" shapes.

[glacial verge]

Could you link a tutorial on how to do these?

So if I wanted to outline an object, I'd go to Layer style and strokes ?

[wooden oak]

Not really sure about "tutorials" specifically for a Color Overlay. You basically just add a Color Layer (or Gradient Layer) and change the Blending Mode. (Tip: try "Overlay" or "Color" modes).

If you want to put an editable stroke on a raster object, you could dbl-click on the Layer. View the Layer Styles, choose "Stroke" and modify the settings.

[glacial verge]

Did this ! Thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak

[glacial verge]

So if you see in the background of my competitor, the images are in color, while mine are in black and white. For me I just put them all in a folder and used multiply to make a gradient be there instead of white

Is there any way I could make it so the images aren't black without having to stop using multiply?

[wooden oak]

Try a "Gradient Map" adjustment layer which maps colors in the gradient ramp to the luminance values in the image. That might be what the other guy is doing.

[glacial verge]

Thank you very much

Having a bit of trouble with it

But I'm gonna try to get a hang of it

[steel radish]

Hi Adobe community 👋 ,

I'm excited to share with you my latest visual identity project **elFounder brand identity **

If possible, could you spare a moment to provide feedback on the project? I would greatly appreciate your thoughts on the design choices I made and any areas where I could improve.

Thank you for your time and continued support
Project Link : https://www.behance.net/gallery/176346605/Brand-Identity-elFounder

[paper mason]

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The Worst Formula 1 Crashes Explained...

Also if anyone has feedback on the BOTTOM one, I would really appreciate it 🙏🏼

[wooden oak]

Can you please type in the standard font size? Stop trying to make these posts larger than they need to be.

[glacial verge]

Tbh I like the bottom one more just because the colors just pop out a lot more as well as having a lot more contrast.
I'm guessing this a YouTube thumbnail and I'd consider this great :)
One thing I'd change about the bottom one is the shadows on the driver might look a bit too dark for me

[paper mason]

Okay will do, sorry about that

[paper mason]

Ah okay, Yeah this is a YouTube thumbnail 👍🏼

Will definitely look into that, thanks!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @glacial verge

[glacial verge]

Hi so I'm looking for feedback for my design but Discord is not letting me send the image because it's deeming it as explicit content. I would love to get some feedback on it but can't post it in the server.
(It's not explicit it's just anime women in bikinis)

Basically these are gaming mats and I think I've significantly improved the design

What I'm looking to achieve is an effect so my design does not come out as flat

||https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/701860998809649225/1135304866835726416/NamiSummerSAMPLE.png||

So this was the first iteration, recieved well but I wanted to make it even better

||https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/701860998809649225/1135304867557150750/NamiSummer2SAMPLE.png||

And this is the second iteration

Basically wanted to make the panels in the front POP out more from the background

And wanted everything to have a better flow

Basically wanted everything to feel more coherent

Still thinking about color overlays and stuff to make it fit all together better

Any ideas?

[normal spoke]

IMHO it looks Ok.

[jade mountain]

thoughts?

i feel its kinda boring idk whats wrong with it

except some oversaturated red at the top i forgot to fix

[manic acorn]

My Work 😋

[paper mason]

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The Genius That Revolutionized Formula 1 but at a HUGE Cost...

[novel canyon]

Good?

[abstract oxide]

Can you provide some information about what is the original artwork and what you have changed?

[abstract oxide]

Nice work. Did you build this entirely in Photoshop?
Is the strap supposed to be leather? If so, I think it needs a little texture to break up the solid color.

[blazing oasis]

What are your thoughts on my design?

[outer cosmos]

[lusty slate]

what y'all think of it ?

[toxic dome]

Where’s bro’s head

[lusty slate]

still working on the project

[abstract oxide]

Interesting design. A few ideas to help unify things…

• Tint the person and trophies blue (better match the blue environment)
• Lower the contrast on the trophies (diffuse light source)
• Resize the person to better match the couch

[outer cosmos]

trying to get back into covers and its been a while as u can see

[boreal condor]

tell guys is this car really blend with the background

[delicate kite]

Everybody, Please give me feedback.

[novel comet]

Nice attempt, the shadows/highlights are a bit extreme. shadow on front feels too dark

[boreal condor]

is the perspective is alright??

[novel comet]

I don't know. - I feel like like, the back is maybe raised up too high...? - But I am being picky

(but you can't really change that anyway)

[boreal condor]

the car is not on that background before, i cut that car from another image and place it here thats why im asking that

[novel comet]

yeah of course.

[boreal condor]

also i m trying that all horizon and vanishing point technique

to place that well but always being off

need more training on that

[blazing oasis]

thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @outer cosmos

[boreal condor]

tried another photo manipulation, please tell whether this composite is good or not

[still vigil]

Having a hard time with this shot. Raw file is pretty flat, but the blue in the sky gets pretty grain'ey / noisy when try to dehaze to bring out the mountains. Any recommendations overall on what to do with it?

[wooden oak]

Use Masks (if LR has that functionality) and isolate the various parts. Or use Photoshop. Separate the foreground and background. Then do the Adjustments on each. Use Adjustment Layers and Camera Raw filters.

[still vigil]

Thanks @wooden oak. Will go that route and see what I can do.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wooden oak

[abstract oxide]

Have you tried using the Noise Reduction features within the Detail module?

[abstract oxide]

You've got yourself a pretty good comp there. Nice work.
Some suggestions for improvement...

• Shadows on subject are too heavy compared to background shadows
• Cutout of front tyre looks jagged
• Clouds seem darker around front spokes
• Is that a bench or a chair? Scale of the subject seems a little off

[manic maple]

hey :) was wondering if anyone could give me some feedback!

[boreal condor]

thankyou for this constructive critisim i really need one of those to find where i go wrong i will fix that real soon thanks man

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @abstract oxide

[abstract oxide]

Thanks mate. Happy to help. Looking forward to seeing your changes.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @boreal condor

[outer cosmos]

i need feedback on wat i can do better like particles and lighting

[tranquil dawn]

Hi, I've made product advertisement and I think it needs to refine more.
I would appreciated a feedback. I'll take note and use that info to improve my work next time !

[heady arch]

What I do not like right away are the shadows on the bottles. Much too hard gradient and especially if you look at the light reflections, not even possible, because left and right reflections of the light are. The sticker has an inverted effect - actually, the 'no sugar' should be advertised and to be seen, yes. But all you see is: added. In the worst case, one reads: sugar added. The Mask of the Bottles are not correct - see the cap, there are white lines. Also the Bokeh of the Orange Plants should be corrected. But I like the colors and the background. Has so a bit of a Sicily vibe

[tranquil dawn]

Thank you very much. I need to consider lighting more.
And for No sugar added label I think I would emphasize NO instead I guess 🫡

[heady arch]

for example. Or maybe you change the background color, like to green, so the contrast to white is higher and everyone can read it.

[tranquil dawn]

that would be nice, thanks for the great feedback

[heady arch]

Hope it helps 🙂

[heady arch]

Is there a reference you've been inspired by?

[boreal condor]

Tried another Photo Manipulation, Please tell whether this composite is good or not

[outer cosmos]

no just started adding and adding

[green vale]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/176852353/Thunders-Branding-Identity-Guidelines

[flat axle]

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