📝project-feedback

[wet glade]

https://jasperclaus.gumroad.com/

[versed gazelle]

tysm

ur feedback is great

ill keep all this in mind next time

thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @shut garnet

[versed gazelle]

sorry

i just thought of the point thing

[toxic dome]

no worries

i dont think it does anything anyways lol @versed gazelle

[versed gazelle]

lmao

[marble haven]

My first UI/UX capstone was to create my own streaming platform for mobile first which I called “BluFire” not entirely happy with the logo but a logo wasn’t a necessity I just wanted something there.

I have it similar to twitches but I kind of tried to mash some YouTube stuff with twitch and make it look better than the app. I definitely like my discover and home page a lot better than the twitch mobile app

[versed gazelle]

if i were you id add a subtle black glow behind the logo, and maybe add color correction to the shield (or highlights if the fire is glowing)

[midnight socket]

Hey guys this is my art from photoshop Can anyone tell me if there is any mistake that i can fix?

This is johnny depp btw

[versed gazelle]

something about his lips seems a little off

and if you want it to be more realistic, blur or smudge the shadows

but it looks great

amazing

[midnight socket]

thanks!

[midnight socket]

ill try to fix that later

[twin sapphire]

I am open to suggestions

[stiff heron]

tried to make some chrome text which one is the best?
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/480772850790432768/1070125695424024637/TUTaddwaw.jpg

[marble haven]

Bottom one is fire, top one looks more Chrome to me

[versed gazelle]

really good, but it looks like the shadows on the person are a little off, id add subtle ones on the bottom and bottom left

[versed gazelle]

I'd just add a bit more overall

but the text looks good

[wicked tartan]

First time using photo shop

XD very bad

[toxic dome]

unsplash image of bird

everything from usplash besides background which is from pexels

really need adive on colors and perspective

[thick yacht]

#believe

[versed gazelle]

id try and blend the face into the train using the blur/smudge tool

[versed gazelle]

really awesome but maybe blur the edges of the wood the bird is on a very little bit (just because of how intense the depth of field is, it would be more realistic to blur the edges)

[versed gazelle]

looks really really cool, i love this style

try using inner shadow as an inside outline, and try making it white

iwfeel like that'd be awesome

[versed gazelle]

blend mode normal for right now, change the opacity to what looks good, put the distance down to 0 and the choke to max and the size to whatever looks good

[thick yacht]

feel like sticker

[versed gazelle]

u can modify that ofc

just an idea

[thick yacht]

thanks mate

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @versed gazelle

[thick yacht]

appreciate it

bruh can u lend me a thanks @versed gazelle

[versed gazelle]

thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @thick yacht

[thick yacht]

nice

[twin sapphire]

On it. Thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @versed gazelle

[granite oar]

working on a project for class (i am not good at photoshop) and i need some advice and a bit of help to make this look better and not weird looking like it is right now. anything helps!

[wet rivet]

is the figure on its own layer by chance?

[wet rivet]

it might look better if the figure is bigger (but I am not great at getting those things right)

light buildings maybe darker, too.

[limber prairie]

My first photoshop composition made from scratch

[granite oar]

ill give it a shot thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wet rivet

[toxic dome]

ty!! I'll def try this out

[wet rivet]

share your edits when you're ready, would love to see how it turns out

[granite oar]

will do ty!

[tropic marsh]

this is ok?

[versed gazelle]

looks good

[untold fractal]

lil' something i whipped up for a game.

any thoughts on the empty space around the edges? tried to fill some of it with the "INVENTORY" thing but not sure about how it turned out and how it affected the balance of it all.

[versed gazelle]

slick

i love it

id make the boxes a tiny bit bigger

[granite oar]

fixed a bit of it, I fixed some lighting and made the character a bit bigger. still a lot to do but heres a update

[versed gazelle]

add depth of field with a field blur

then itd be perfect

[granite oar]

ill try it out

[versed gazelle]

try making the moon just a little brighter overall

and make the edge glow a lot more, just less opaque

[hollow star]

Ok

[warm delta]

Looks nice. I'm guessing this is for an fps/3rd person shooter? For accessibility, I would suggest adding a bit more contrast on the top tab. Including a "press Esc to close" text would be good.
Might just be me, but I find the order of the buttons at the top confusing. Usually a game would have settings and help next to each other. Are characters cosmetic only? Because if so, that could possibly be implemented into the inventory. By pressing on the character, perhaps. The characters could have names, in which case you could put that underneath the character there.
On the right side you could include weapon stats, such as number values for durability and ammo.
Nice work overall, did you base the design on a specific game's menu?

[royal wave]

could you share how you got the QR code

[toxic dome]

you can either go on a site that creates QR codes (https://www.qr-code-generator.com/) and generate a qr code from there or if you have adobe indesign, you can go to Object > Generate QR Code.

[royal wave]

How to tell what exact colour am I using in photoshop

[toxic dome]

what do you mean by this?

[royal wave]

Like where can I find out the exact hex code of the colour I'm using in photoshop?

[toxic dome]

This is my method, there are other methods to find the hex code you want.

1. Select the eyedropper tool.
2. Select the area of the color you're trying to get.
3. On your left, you should see two colors overlapping one another, the color in fron should be the color you picked.
4. Double the click the color and a window should pop up showing the color values (Hex code, RGB, CMYK and more)

[royal wave]

Thanks! Will check it out now

[wooden oak]

Use the Eyedropper Tool to pick the color. Then click on the color swatch in the toolbar.

[royal wave]

what do you think of this?

[novel comet]

It's all a bit big. Make literally everything (except the circle on the bottom left) a bit smaller.

[toxic dome]

Anything I should add? I had a couple ideas such as adding blur to make it seem like its moving….and maybe some type of person/astronaut figure, but tbh I don’t know.

[umbral canyon]

wow man thats really cool

[royal wave]

Alright

[umbral canyon]

i think if you were to add blur then youd want to make it subtle cus its a really sharp piece and i wouldnt want to muddle that

[novel comet]

Yeah. I don't think blur is needed

[north ravine]

Hi everyone! 👋 I created this new project both as the last one of last year and the first one of this year. I know, it's a little long, but I wasn't sure at all, which images I should upload and which I shouldn't... I hope you like it! 😊 https://www.behance.net/gallery/162672723/Rounded-3D-shapes

[toxic dome]

ty for feedback

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @umbral canyon

[toxic dome]

@umbral canyon

i had been working on it lol....but yeah

motion blur is great!

[toxic dome]

amazing!

i luv these type of picturers for wallpaper lol....so relaxing

[versed gazelle]

?

[tidal fern]

graphic design youtube thumbnail. brief required geometric shapes, bright/high contrast colors, and a person. i'm wondering if i should just make the background dark?

[versed gazelle]

looks great

maybe move master a bit up?

[toxic dome]

hahhaha

idk

easter egg

[versed gazelle]

i love it

[toxic dome]

:>

[thick yacht]

from where did u learn that, i mean yt

[thick yacht]

any changes should i make or add+ or -

[nocturne viper]

I'm working on a minecraft Youtube video, and i want feedback on this thumbnail, would you click on it if it showed on your feed? other than that any other suggestions?

[limber prairie]

I had a Skillshare course, but I do use YouTube a lot especially if I’m looking for specific help

[versed gazelle]

what's the title of the video?

[thick yacht]

obviouslly, title: if u touch money u die

[toxic dome]

not the kind of thumbnail i would go for if that's the title.

The thumbnail shows if you kill this certain mob, you gain money out of it. I would go for a different approach.

[nocturne viper]

Minecraft But If I Die You Get Money...

[granite oar]

i think im done, not sure what to add but if there is anything i should adjust or add lmk pls!

[versed gazelle]

i know this might be a bit late to say but

i think the scale of the tree is a bit off

id make it bigger

[granite oar]

ill try it out I appreciate the feedback

[toxic dome]

this looks real cool...but one question...those weird glares coming from the tree make it seem like the tree haslight

[granite oar]

yeah it was intended i kind of wanted the tree to seem magical in a way

[toxic dome]

ohhh i see, makes sense then, maybe try to make it glow around the tree with blur or use a mask layer

then again its just my opinion cuz those lines look hella solid....

[versed gazelle]

yeah thats what i was thinking too

[granite oar]

ill mess with it a bit and try and see what i can do

also it looks weird bc i have 0 clue how to make beams of light so i kinda used the smudge tool to simulate it lol

[upbeat nova]

would increase contrast of text and make text and person bigger

[nocturne viper]

I'm working on a minecraft Youtube video, and i want feedback on this thumbnail, would you click on it if it showed on your feed? other than that any other suggestions?

[toxic dome]

yep i think just a little more softness around it

overall it would look decent

[toxic dome]

that persons contrast is hella dakr

dark*

[nocturne viper]

true lol

[toxic dome]

unless its skin XD

[nocturne viper]

it is skin

tho

lol

[toxic dome]

()_()....

i would make him brighter just by a little

but not like excessive

[nocturne viper]

yeah

sounds good

anything other than that?

[austere trellis]

anyone wanna do a project for payment

[versed gazelle]

sure

dms

[granite oar]

this is cool as hell i love the colors

[versed gazelle]

amazing colors

and i love the message at the bottom

[granite oar]

i would try to mesh together the letters with the orange shading a bit

like have em connect a bit

[versed gazelle]

ooh or maybe mess with the threshold adjustment

[toxic dome]

The biggest problem we have here is the top text of the headline, what’s it reading??

[versed gazelle]

palm angels

[toxic dome]

People who are colorblind will have a hard time reading because of the low contrast between the text and the image

[versed gazelle]

well theres a very low chance of that happening

[toxic dome]

Oh ok, let the people have a hard time reading 👍

[novel comet]

To be fair... the colours are ok. - this is the worst offender

[wraith kiln]

could u elaborate?

[wraith kiln]

how so?

i'd have to go back into the original layer and tweak it 😵

[versed gazelle]

idk how to explain it

can u dm me the psd

so i can like do it and explain it

[wraith kiln]

sure

[versed gazelle]

bc idk if itd even look good just throwing stuff out there

[wraith kiln]

oh wait i have the psd for what i sent and i have a psd with the angel only

what i sent has a merged layer for the angel so do you want the angel only editable psd

[versed gazelle]

u dont make backups?

[wraith kiln]

i mean i didn't no

backups as in duplicating the layer?

[versed gazelle]

can i edit the text by itself

[versed gazelle]

yes

[wraith kiln]

ah okay

[toxic dome]

it doesn't matter if the site says the colors are okay. I couldn't read "palm" at first glance, it took me 10 seconds to realize it was saying "palm". I'm pretty sure if I ask non-graphic designers their opinions on the design, they will have the same argument that they could not read "palm" at first glance.

[wraith kiln]

i asked one of my friends and he agrees as well... how would i fix it? should i just put the text in front of the angel layer?

[thick yacht]

Cant read the top text

[toxic dome]

Try that or what you can do is just move the text a little bit higher so that we can actually read “palm”

[wraith kiln]

aah okay.. do you have any specific tips in terms of composition so the text doesn’t look odd? or would a general yt video suffice? i get the idea though, thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @shut garnet

[eager arrow]

First time designing packaging

[toxic dome]

i mean there is alot of things i would do

but just make sure your title is good :}

[toxic dome]

looks cool

cuz i know nothing about this product design

[eager arrow]

redesign

[toxic dome]

I don’t know if it’s the mock-up itself thats ruining the design. But if I’m not focusing on the mock-up, the design looks clean.

However, the chocolate peanuts graphics look more like a picture rather than food.
What I mean by this is that it looks like you just slapped a png on the design. I would suggest putting in some subtle shadows to the chocolate and peanuts to give it realism.

The second design looks like an improvement, just the same advice as I mentioned above, add shadows.

May I know where you got the mock-up from?

[eager arrow]

i did add shadows, you may have to look closer

the mockup was originally white and smaller

I needed to tweak it for it to look more like a chocolate bar

[toxic dome]

I’m at 100% brightness, zoomed in on the pic, I still can’t find the shadows. If that’s the case, I would change the background color to a more subtle black (more towards the gray but is still black) or the picture itself

[eager arrow]

this is it without shadows

[toxic dome]

We need another set of eyes

[eager arrow]

hm

[toxic dome]

Can you remove the black background?

[eager arrow]

I think i need to add more shadows

[toxic dome]

Yessir

[eager arrow]

this took around 2 days

[novel comet]

Yeah, I agree. I never could read the words either. - but I don't think the colours are the primary reason for that 🙂

[surreal moat]

any feedback on more SICK THINGS to add?

[royal yarrow]

school project

[wraith kiln]

the lost in was a little hard to see with the transparent bg

[royal yarrow]

alr

[versed gazelle]

those edges are really sharp on the chocolate

[versed gazelle]

better but still the edges

[versed gazelle]

AMERICAN FLAG 🔥🔥🔥🔥🤯🤯🤯

[toxic dome]

I see the idea where you’re going with the “lost in” text, however like what @wraith kiln said, it’s a little hard to read it. I think it’s because you put a linear gradient to a small text (blue to black) so we can’t fully read “lost in”

My suggestion is just keep it simple. No gradient and keep the same colour scheme (match it with the headline “fantasy”) and it should be good

[surreal moat]

Oh right!

[versed gazelle]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/163007893/forza-horizon-5-phonk-album-cover?

[tough locust]

No way ice spice

[eager arrow]

add sigma face

[versed gazelle]

(raw)

[versed gazelle]

is the car reflection on the ground good? i need feedback on that

[tough locust]

Why the angle like that

Looks goofy

[royal yarrow]

you look goofy

[tough locust]

K ice spice

[royal yarrow]

ice spice 🐐

hows this look

ik the bottom bit looks weird 😭

[tough locust]

Good but top text you can’t read

[royal yarrow]

🙄

[tough locust]

Make it lighter and bolder

[tough locust]

You asked how it looked and I responded what’s the issue

[royal yarrow]

what abt the bottom bit

the font looks ugly what should i make it

[tough locust]

The aura bit is a bit awkward to read

[royal yarrow]

y'all is this better

changed chapt 1

tbh i prefer old one

[tough locust]

better

The lost in bit is eh

Maybe do it like this

Yellow bit being the lost in text

[toxic dome]

Keep the same way you had it before (the “lost in” text) but the font style should match with the fantasy text, try that

[tough locust]

Yeah

[royal yarrow]

y'all i need feedback

i need smt else for the left side

[tropic summit]

a short list of combos, if there are any?

[tough locust]

Maybe side view of the controller

[oblique siren]

im new but i like it

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @oblique siren

[oblique siren]

kk, btw are u good with logo design?

its something simple (move this to chat channel)

[hushed compass]

Hi

[plain grotto]

This is NTSW content. Please do not post such content.

[thick yacht]

am looking for feedback

anything to + or -

[hot hazel]

feedback

[lucid current]

making a thumbnail for a instagram video, thoughts?

[lucid current]

small update

[versed gazelle]

before

after
https://www.behance.net/gallery/163047589/car-editing-test?

pretty happy with results

just dont look too hard lmfao

feedback would be appreciated though

[eager arrow]

redesign

[ripe thunder]

Hello! I would be very thankful If somebody could give me some feedback. I want to create a trading card, but all I came up with is just placing the images on a Background. I don't have the time to design a custom Frame etc. What do you think?

[versed gazelle]

!

[strong eagle]

its good but i need to fix the light

[wraith kiln]

it looks really good i like it

i'm no shadows expert but if the sun is back right then shouldn't the shadow be front left for the car?

[versed gazelle]

oh thats right

i didnt even notice that

i can flip the background though because its custom

ty!

[tidal fern]

is this better than the last version?

[wraith kiln]

can or can't?

[versed gazelle]

can

[wraith kiln]

oh greattt

[toxic dome]

Stronger contrast with the text stroke is making the design standout more. I’m not a fan of the bright green colour because it’s not contrasting well with the background

[dusk igloo]

i dont mind the bright green but i'm not a fan of the stroked text

it looks like it's been added on top of somebody else's image later - but with the background & the photo as a hole there aren't many things you can do instead

[tidal fern]

i was wondering about the contrast with the color too. do you think i should change the background to a dark color?

this is the other version

[cinder niche]

hey can someone crop out the gorilla and a no background? (DM me if u can)

[toxic dome]

Ngl I like this version better than the other ones

[tidal fern]

same

[toxic dome]

What you can do is try make the colour a little bit softer (darken the colour a little) or do like you said and make the background a little darker

[tidal fern]

yea the brief was to add bright colored geometric shapes so thats why i was keeping it bright : )

[toxic dome]

Ohhh so I would go with version 2

And you can brighten the blue on the version 2

[toxic dome]

https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/a1a39b89-f8d0-4973-ac48-125e4aaefd0b/dfokzbz-f4cd7da8-ff36-4a8d-a891-e7e001d2fde6.jpg/v1/fill/w_1280,h_1280,q_75,strp/on_the_way_by_meunk3_dfokzbz-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MTI4MCIsInBhdGgiOiJcL2ZcL2ExYTM5Yjg5LWY4ZDAtNDk3My1hYzQ4LTEyNWU0YWFlZmQwYlwvZGZva3piei1mNGNkN2RhOC1mZjM2LTRhOGQtYTg5MS1lN2UwMDFkMmZkZTYuanBnIiwid2lkdGgiOiI8PTEyODAifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.QCpRXKD3WJhy1tAAv19dLZutVMAEdnqYaYVhJjHdL6Y

looks better on devart

but i think working on small coverart like this will improve my photo editing skills

https://www.deviantart.com/meunk3/art/On-The-Way-948282335

appreciate the feedback :}

[signal bluff]

the goal of this project is to make an infographic of an animal, its 1080x1080.

i really like the top text and the giraffe with the tongue out, gonna changethe background for it though.

my main question is how should i format a bunch of text for the bottom left section. I want to use those 3 sentences but its just a large area and i dont know how to fill it

im still gonna go and clean it up and add small details but i just want feedback on how to fill that bottom left section with the text

[novel comet]

The entire point of an infographic, is that there aren't giant blocks of text. - I think you need to break it up more

I'd bring in some icons like this:

or...

Here are some ideas for iconography, thanks to Midjourney :

[signal bluff]

jesus AI is scary

thanks for the feedback though, definitely gonna take the advice. im not sure if infographic was the correct word to use. but im trying to make a design that gives information about the animal in whatever style these would be called. sorta straight to the point and bold

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[toxic dome]

Yes infographic is the right word because you're giving information about a certain subject with a graphic visual.

[toxic dome]

tbh

put the first icon in the second one below

would look better

yep

[rocky ingot]

hi everyone

any feedback ??

[wraith kiln]

maybe more fog on the rose/ closer to the top of the escalator?

[undone merlin]

The guys' faces look like they're in the daytime, but the scene is in the nighttime, so they don't match. You probably want to make them darker and the color temperature cooler. Maybe this video will help. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fgB_oO4xt1A

[novel comet]

Just push their hats on a bit more 🙂 - They're either floating on the tops of their heads or... all 3 people have coneheads....

[toxic dome]

alrigh ty!!

[tough locust]

this is better

[versed gazelle]

thoughts?

[spark isle]

I giggled a bit so i enjoyed it

[round sail]

How do you guys rate my removal? These are both manual. No content-aware fill used.

[toxic dome]

pretty decent

but i think the saddle of the horse

has a black thng to it and it wasn't part of the man

i mean looks great anyway

[hot hazel]

Hello friends give me feedback

[urban hinge]

i think you need to readjust the selection around the people. there is too much white showing around their heads, and the selection around the body is very choppy and wavy. i also think replacing the first letters (H, C, D) to a different font is not working. It looks like you shrank "Happy" and "Day" a little bit which looks awkward. otherwise i think it looks fine

ive been working on a personal logo and looking for any and all feedback on it. my main concern if this is possibly too detailed for use on things such as a business card. looking for any input or criticism whatsoever:

[toxic dome]

notice small white outline

around the people

[toxic dome]

looks good if

it was imprinted on a card

like pushed in

[sinful robin]

Hey! ya'll I was involved on the creation of this holiday campaign for The Workhouse design studio where features our team in a very curious way... Using alter egos! https://www.behance.net/gallery/162946463/Alter-Ego-Campaign have a look!

[wraith kiln]

that little circle to the bottom left of the eye looks a little odd imo.. i think just using a white brush to fill it and deciding for yourself if you think it looks better or worse could work. it looks good though! you thinking of adding colors?

[wraith kiln]

i think the lighting is inconsistent, since the sun is in the middle, i feel for the left hill it should shine on the right side, where it's currently dark, and the right hill is mostly fine, though there might be a bit more light on the darker side as well, and i'd experiment w/ that

[sand furnace]

Thanks for your feedback

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wraith kiln

[wraith kiln]

i think i'd put the sun more to the left if that's what you're going for. also, what's this?

[frank gyro]

Hi everyone.
Kindly Check out this brand project.
And give reviews and your thoughts.
Thank y'all 😁

https://www.behance.net/gallery/163262981/NSS-Corporate-Full-Brand-Guide?share=1

[sand furnace]

https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/600535138429960195/1073159781407273000/1675931198242.jpg

[undone merlin]

I think the angle and perspective of the nostrils is off. It looks like it's facing the camera directly, but the dragon is facing left. The nostril on the far side should be smaller than the one in the front to look more 3D.

[topaz girder]

if you make this as vector art on illustrator you can export at any size so i would recommend doing that
brand logos like that should be made vectors where possible

[toxic dome]

i think he has worked on his logo on illustrator as he sent his message on the illustrator server too

[weak flare]

Work decently done, however, as others have mentioned, gotta work on that light and shadow, dropping over the dunes.

[weak flare]

From personal pov, if the sun is on around 30° above the horizon (somewhat around there on your picture) then it would be more detailed to make the light dropping from the sun to the front of the sand more darker, warmer; the current colour is beige, make it kind of warm yellow/orange). Talking about the shadow on the back of dunes, your sun is pointing directly into you or with an interval of 0-20° to the right. So if you want picture to be detailed, either re-make shadow or move the sun. If you don’t want to work with dunes and leave them how they are, you can probably move the sun. So if the sun is currently facing us at a 0° angle, move it 80° to the left (basically it would disappear from the photo) so it would match the dropping shadow.

[weak flare]

That looks great

Feel free to correct me or give me some feedback based of a message above. I’ve been only using photoshop for around 10.

[sand furnace]

thanks for your feedback. thanks for your efforts

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @weak flare

[sand furnace]

Is this the result you want to get ?

[versed gazelle]

i dont know much about composition but keep the thirds rule in mind

[weak flare]

Not exactly. Dunes need to have higher contrast and colour of orange/warm yellow. The sun should be completely removed from the photo with its not full opacity shadow dropping on dunes with gradient.

[sand furnace]

I think you talking about this color

[sand furnace]

I don't know if I will remove the sun. Maybe I'll try to make the second sandy plateau bigger

[weak flare]

Right, now it’s closer.

[toxic dome]

kindly AB test these thumbnails for me?

or maybe ABC rather

I had a bunch of different variations of this darker theme and the current one up on my channel is actually this, but it's not performing very well

so I thought I'd go for one of either the first or third which are much brighter, but I am curious what you guys think?

I'm not sure what else I could try but if anyone else has CTR suggestions I would be very happy to hear from you!

[shadow path]

Hi, I tried to turn this capture from a livestream into something a little more elegant, any pointers would be greatly appreciated before I share this tomorrow.

Since it was a livestream I couldn't get much detail in the picture so I had to AI Upscale it first. Also since I'm new to this I had to look up a bunch of tutorials as well on how to change colours and add fog and stuff

P.s Apparently my laptop is only 45% of NTSC so I had to colour grade on my phone by using it as a second screen.

[weak flare]

Well, this looks actually pretty good. If you want to make it more detailed, try to soften edges of this woman’s left sleeve. If you zoom in on that sleeve, it is cut in some places. You can also remake the back of her dress by the chair it has something to improve. Overall the picture looks pretty good edited. If only you want to edit some details like the edges I mentioned above, then it would be situationally perfect imo.

[shadow path]

Thank you so much! I didn't expect such a kind review haha

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @weak flare

[toxic dome]

ZA WARUDO! 10/10 jojo's reference

I would say work on messing with blending modes in addition to different brushes and masks to maybe get cleaner smoky effects. I think the background maybe could use that too. As for the stand I feel the perspective is a bit strange but it looks great. I do really like the perspective on the stand user with the shoes having DIO on them, that's a nice touch for a modern DIO. The lighting on his face could maybe be worked on too it looks slightly unnatural

[arctic ivy]

the lighting from the spotlight is done

[toxic dome]

the rim lighting on the left side looks so clean though and I like how you put the head on as well to show it's attached to a different body.

[arctic ivy]

yeah

[toxic dome]

damn you've inspired me to try to do my own stand image I wonder what would fit me though I'll have to think

I drew Josuke's heart and peace sign on my skateboard but I feel like I like the earlier JoJo's more. I'm trying to end the topic at that cuz I'm no longer talking about the project or giving feedback 😅

[frozen coyote]

any pointers anyone?

[tough locust]

Just looks like a picture of space what am i supposed to point to

[soft pulsar]

I have second thought about the E , what do you think 🤔

[toxic dome]

Well the E doesn’t seem to fit with the logotype. However, im wondering if the background is part of the logo?

[soft pulsar]

Thanks for the reply the background no it's not . . I am thinking about three lines E but everyone is usin it now

[toxic dome]

Well I think just going for a simple is E is enough because you already a custom A and a logo. It’s already good like that in my opinion

[soft pulsar]

I guess i am going to use normal e anything alse is too much , thank you ❤️

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @shut garnet

[toxic dome]

what did u do?

[toxic dome]

This is for a small-ish sticker, hence the size of the QR code.
I'm not super happy with the design, the cross blending into the wordmark. See https://theres.life/about for the logo itself.
Any ideas for improvement (or even starting from scratch) is appreciated.

[toxic dome]

Telling us what you did and what images and effects you implemented would help us help you a lot as this looks like you did nothing to the picture since it looks like the real thing

[toxic dome]

started as photomanpulation

to make robot vaccum but ended up painting

vaccum is obviously hat lol

[wraith kiln]

thoughts?

original pic + some newspaper layers

[toxic dome]

cool.

i think this seems to show how much youve mastered layers

i've never attempted something like this so it seems good to me

the colors seem to really show what your trying to acheive and what your trying to portray

anyone

im trying to learn to paint

idk wtf im doing and really need guidence

[frozen coyote]

the image

[frozen coyote]

? i took that photo ? i'm asking for feedback about anything about the image

like colours, sharpness background, stars, anything

[toxic dome]

How did you do that? Its so cool.

[toxic dome]

What do you mean by “took the photo”???? Like you went in space and took a photo with your camera? That’s not using photoshop. I’m asking if you did anything to the photo after you’ve “taken the shot” like did you adjust the lighting, added some effects?

[tidal fern]

brief is youtuber who's planning to give away money to the first person he sees in his local park.

[undone merlin]

Looks cool. I'd try to get more contrast between the subject and the background in some of those areas, though. You got a black part of the chin going into a black part of the background, for example.

[frozen coyote]

not sure if you know much about astrophotography but yes i used a telescope (ganymede 80ed) and camera (ZWO ASI 533mc pro) to take this image. I use another software called pixinsight but a large portion of my process workflow is photoshop based.

everything about the image has been adjusted, that's basically how astro works, so anything you think that could be different lmk, such as colours, brightness, contrast, histogram stretch factor, noise, sharpness, deconvolution. Literally everything

[toxic dome]

If that’s the case, I think it’s fine like that. The fact that you were able to take a shot of space in general is pretty impressive as a whole. Mind you, you got good equipment in order to take a shot like that.

Are you planning to use the picture for printing purposes?

[arctic ivy]

good luck

[toxic dome]

Made this logo randomly. This is about stall that sells food in college yk what i mean. The color scheme is green and white. If possible, How can i make this better?

[upbeat nova]

fork and spoon? ^^

[frozen coyote]

thanks! not sure about the printing, would you have any linters if I was going to print it? Haven't tried that before

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @shut garnet

[toxic dome]

Be careful of the dark areas because it involves lots of ink to process. Printing involves CMYK (Cyan Magenta Yellow Black (Key)) so when you add those 4 colours together, the darker the area will be and more ink will need to be put on the paper. You can check how much CMYK is used in certain areas in Photoshop and Adobe Acrobat Pro.

[novel comet]

The font is too thin and feeble. - Imagine that on a big board outside the store, - You'd barely see the text.

I like the cutlery, but the plastic looking container with the stink/heat line doesn't really give off 'healthy' vibe either. - I'd suggest maybe.....

@toxic dome

[chrome island]

I tried looking for some stylised grass brushes that were from a top-down perspective, but I couldn't find any free ones, so I made some. Let me know what you think by the way. If you've got any tips on drawing better grass brushes or better seamless grass assets, be free to let me know. Also you can have the brushes. 🙂

[novel comet]

What's the overall goal? if you don't mind me asking?

Personally.... I think Seamless Grass textures I think are a better solution than trying to make a brush

[chrome island]

I'm trying to make stylised video game assets, pretty much.

Tileable grass textures for level geometry.

[novel comet]

Try these:
https://www.forgotten-adventures.net/product/map-making/textures/terrain-textures-pack-04/

[chrome island]

That's very much appreciated and these are sure to come in handy in the future, but these aren't the art style I'm looking for for my current project.

[novel comet]

Just one handy trick I thought of.... if you're planning on creating seamless patterns and want to avoid the usual tell-tale pattern repeat

[chrome island]

Actually, for that kind of thing actually I ususally layer the textures on top of each other and then erase the specific parts i want to erase.

[chrome island]

I think Seamless Grass textures I think are a better solution than trying to make a brush

How'd you mean, its better to draw a seamless texture completely from scratch?

[late girder]

Need some feedback to improve this logo

[toxic dome]

Damn that's much better. Ty for the feedback

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[toxic dome]

I seee

[royal wave]

hi guys

im designing a brochure and i need opinion on something

this is the front page

[royal wave]

this is my back page and before i want to put information in there what kind of design should i do from the white part

[toxic dome]

@novel comet Also about the logo I'm trying to add gym element you know to promote foods that are healthy and rich in protein. Is it possible to make the logo like that which promotes food but that gains u muscles

[toxic dome]

First time on photoshop, need tips on shadows. Made everything from scratch PNGs.

My second project, as you can see the zombie dog in the background looks off, how do I go about making the dog look like it belongs here?

[toxic dome]

Felt the darkening was a bit much

[novel comet]

Whilst the darkness of the ship and zombie are probably more realistic, you ultimately want the image to look nice and dramatic, so feel free to up the lighting slightly sometimes.

[novel comet]

Zombie dog is casting no shadow, and its colours don't match the background much, plus there seems to be some light on the tips of his face...

maybe add a darker brown inner glow on the dog face to remove those edge highlights

His legs also CUT OFF in the grass, use a bit of jagged/fur/grass brush on a mask around his feet to make it look like his legs are going into the grass

[novel comet]

Just the same as before - that text is all gigantic. - literally EVERYTHING except the main background image should be waaay smaller.

[royal wave]

Yup im gonna fix that but any ideas with the back Page

[novel comet]

It's not a back page. - You're make a 6 page roll-fold aren't you?

If anything, the 2nd spread is more the 'inside' of the leaflet?

(Sorry, I'm not being &nal about the terminology for the sake of it - just helps to understand what will be going onto there)

[toxic dome]

How can i make this better? I want the logo to remain the same, also suggest me the font too

[wise condor]

It looks great and its easy to understand, or at least get an idea, of what kinda service this company provides. I would suggest making the bowl more symmetric, and maybe tilt the spoon a little so even though the bowl has a wave shape theres equal space at the tip of the handle and the spoon. As for fonts I do prefer san serif, its often cleaner and steals less unwanted attention. I would go for bold kind, so maybe proxima nova or myriad pro with either semibold or bold

[toxic dome]

symmetric as in curved?

[toxic dome]

Thanks for the suggestion though !

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wise condor

[toxic dome]

Giving a brief on what the logo is for and about would help figuring out what the logo needs to be improved on

[tidal fern]

any thoughts or suggestions on this?

[wise condor]

No, the left angle is sharper than the right which is rounded

[wise condor]

I think since its a thumbnail it should be less text, I would also look at the possibility to make the text a little more visually interesting. Play around with colours, font wheight and hierarchy. Remember how tiny this picture is, and people don’t necessarily look at it for that long before deciding if they should look at it more or go to the next video

[tidal fern]

thanks for the feedback. i can't make the text shorter since thats part of the brief but i can definitely play with it more

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wise condor

[toxic dome]

Okay!

[toxic dome]

can someone help me out with the font im confused ☠️

[toxic dome]

find a bold font to balance the weight out of the design

[toxic dome]

logos are preferably to be made in Illustrator or any vector graphic software, not raster software like Photoshop

[toxic dome]

Alr

[toxic dome]

That was made in illustrator

[toxic dome]

Oh ok nvm the comment then :)

[toxic dome]

Awesome! Will do. Thank you for the pointers!!!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[royal wave]

yup that is what im making

[royal wave]

how is this?

updated

[novel comet]

I feel like I'm flogging a dead horse and I wouldn't bother saying anything but since you're still eager for feedback....

I think images over other images makes it look too busy and messy.

You have too many different text styles going on. Italics, black stroke, no stroke...

The subheadings are larger than the main logo.

The star clip art jars against everything else on the page

You have 3 left aligned bullet points and the the text next to them is centrally aligned

https://www.google.com/search?client=ms-android-samsung-rev2&source=univ&q=dl+leaflet+templates&tbm=isch&fir=CoMNXMwG0owYVM%252C6B2TYQlal9nk_M%252C_%253BfF9jFn3B87qQMM%252C6B2TYQlal9nk_M%252C_%253B3D0rEY-BwsC7bM%252ChgsIr_b_urPD6M%252C_%253BllmB3BhAcWV_oM%252CtA4uV6VYj-ix6M%252C_%253BF9a-Buph6eCrUM%252C8WeQAA8swrut8M%252C_%253B98_KH93e5AsFBM%252Cb45DS83GY-6D7M%252C_%253BmrtnKApbvkJIiM%252Cfp23ANf3lMWLrM%252C_%253BaLqoqcJ7_4L86M%252CtA4uV6VYj-ix6M%252C_&usg=AI4_-kTBAJZO9FSKyPrXQraxbvhfVbNa9w&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwj6pKy1h5f9AhWFSEEAHSX0BDsQ7Al6BAgIEEQ&biw=360&bih=675&dpr=3

See link above for some other typical examples

[royal wave]

Ok thanks man

Sorry if i keep messing it up

Still fairly new and learning

[toxic dome]

Project 05, still not sure how to get the lighting right, any pointers?

[upbeat nova]

I guess you can add light, if you dont add a lightsource like a candle or a lamp in the corner for example then you need to work with the light that comes from the windows, try to paint in light maybe

[toxic dome]

Just a random question. Where did you get the background from?

[royal wave]

Online

[toxic dome]

Website?

Sorry for making u specific but i struggle with background mostly ☠️

[royal wave]

Nah just searched in google photos

[toxic dome]

Okay as well as the picture for vr dev stock tradin and others?

[royal wave]

Yup

[toxic dome]

Thank you!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @royal wave

[royal wave]

No prob

[toxic dome]

The design is good though

[wicked frigate]

How can I improve this cover art? (for a underground uk dance track) Just want to make it look more polished and put together sort of

[toxic dome]

how did u even make this??

can someone link me youtube tutorial to make this type of images?

[wooden oak]

I think the text is getting muddled. I would try to make the background a bit darker so the text stands out against the background.

[toxic dome]

Can you tell me how this image was made? Did he pick different images and made this?

[wooden oak]

I don't know. I'd assume the background and the text are separate images/layers.

[wicked frigate]

It an image ripped from pinterest, upcaled, skewed to change the perspective. Then the text is just a nice font with bevel and emboss applied

Simple and effective

[wicked frigate]

Yeah good idea

[wicked frigate]

A lot of art is just picking good things that go together

Applies to music, visuals even cooking

[toxic dome]

any yt tutorial for that or is it something one does it by himself?

[wicked frigate]

I learnt everthing through YT tutorials and applied the techniques I learnt to my own digital art. Search for specific text effects, e.g "chrome text tutorial photoshop" or "glowing text tutorial photoshop"

As for composing an image with the correct elements that compliment eachother, that comes down to your taste and its something that can only really be learnt overtime as your tastes in art and design develop

[toxic dome]

OH ic Thank uu

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wicked frigate

[wooden oak]

Since the text is the focal point, I think this is better, more legible.

[wicked frigate]

Yeah I agree

Anything else you'd suggest, even if its just a creative thing

[wicked frigate]

Have a look on behance for free photoshop assets, you can get a lot of inspiration from there :)

[wooden oak]

You can do some of these types of effects using Layer Styles... (This is like 30 secs. of work.)

[toxic dome]

What should i search?

[wicked frigate]

"free photoshop", "free font" or "free textures" are good places to start

[toxic dome]

I understand thank you so much! I am new to designing. I have no idea bout these things

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wicked frigate

[wicked frigate]

Do you have any other creative hobbies/interests?

[toxic dome]

Thank uu i have lot to learn ☠️

[wicked frigate]

Any way I can remove these artifacts?

[toxic dome]

Like graphics is all i do. I am not a fan of drawing or arts.

[toxic dome]

What is wrong with the picture?

[wicked frigate]

Those random colours are where the brightness is turned down too much kinda

I don't really know how to explain it lol

[toxic dome]

these?

[wicked frigate]

Yeah

I think they're artifacts from my AI upscale too

[wooden oak]

Yeah. This looks like JPEG compression/re-compression artifacts. The only good way would be to trace over them with the Pen Tool and make new shapes. Then apply gradients and paint to make them high-quality.

[wicked frigate]

Aghh

I suck at that lol

[wooden oak]

Well, if you could find a higher quality image to use, then I'd do that. But if you want to use this particular image, then you'll have to invest the time to repair it.

[wicked frigate]

Highest res I could find ://

hmm

[upbeat nova]

I think its pertty dope I maybe would add a dropshadow so the text stands out a bit more

[wicked frigate]

There is one already, its not very obvious its there until i remove it lol

[upbeat nova]

yes just saw it

^^

[wicked frigate]

Yeah I guess its pretty good the way it is haha

[upbeat nova]

xD

[toxic dome]

Project 06, pointers on lighting please.

[toxic dome]

Will definitely give that a go! Thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @upbeat nova

[toxic dome]

Add lights at the rear maybe?

[wicked frigate]

Your probably more skilled at PS than me, but from a viewers perspective the image is a bit dark and the zombies sit in the center where you cant really see them. Obviously depends on the look your going for but yeah some kind of light in the back lighting up the zombies would suit. Perhaps a spotlight like theres a helicopter above?

[wicked frigate]

You need to add a contour or whatever its called to smooth out the bottom of the can. Also the reflection on the wrapper kind of blocks the product name a bit, which (im presuming your doing this for a product) will probably deter people from looking at the photo for too long when they cant even read whats in the center - the brand name. Otherwise, the design of the can looks pretty nice, i'd add maybe a dark shade of pink in some areas to blend the red and salmon colors together.

[wicked frigate]

No idea what you want for feedback as I can't read any context from this image at all lol. All I can say is in terms of composition, the text contrasts way too harshly with the background in my opinion. I'd also zoom in the background image to adhere to the rule of thirds (google it).

[toxic dome]

Haha doubt it! This is my first time using any graphic designer software, I have lots to learn. Inspired by Benny Productions. And yes, you’re right! A helicopter would be a very cool addition.

[toxic dome]

Thank you!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @wicked frigate

[wicked frigate]

Damn your jumping straight in hahaha @toxic dome

[plain grotto]

@toxic dome Please try posting again without the morbid one included. Thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @desert nymph

[toxic dome]

how can i make this better? keeping the logo same

[novel comet]

The fork and dumbbell look nice enough, but the rounded, small font isn't doing it for me...

[toxic dome]

What font should i use? And for the fork and dumbell, can i add like shadow or something?

[novel comet]

No, I wouldn't add a shadow or any effects. Just nice, flat and bold for the icon. 🙂

Just walking into a meeting, will get back to you though @toxic dome

[toxic dome]

Alright!!

[novel comet]

Meeting finished 10 mins ago 🙂

[toxic dome]

brooooo 🔥

[novel comet]

Note that everything feels more 'contained' with less bits sort of just 'sticking out'

[toxic dome]

I see. Tysm!

[novel comet]

The font I used was Helvetica Neue - which is a bit of an expensive/Premium option

Since you likely don't have Helvetica Neue, I'd suggest either:
https://fonts.google.com/specimen/Roboto
or
https://fonts.google.com/specimen/Questrial
as a free alternative.

[toxic dome]

Thank you! Its so helpful

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[toxic dome]

Also can you give me ai file to that logo?

[novel comet]

The icon is a vector smart object in the PSD, so you should be fine... but if not....

[toxic dome]

Thank you for your time, effort and help, it means a lot to me.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[crystal coral]

any tips on how to shade and mix teh star a bit better?

[versed gazelle]

move the prongs closer together for the fork and recenter it all

[toxic dome]

Yeah i noticed that. I fixed it afterwards. Thanks for the feedback though.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @versed gazelle

[versed gazelle]

the length of the shadow is inconsistent and so are the highlights

[crystal coral]

yeah, but that's because i don't know how it would look better, or if that lenth of shadow is okay, so should i leave that lenth and make it simetrical?

[hot hazel]

Original

Remake

[sick grove]

Wallpaper that I made, not final and there's things that I wanna do to improve it but would love feedback

[quick nimbus]

Day 1 of photoshop (same pic)

Think I am doing great

[tired kelp]

can yall let me know if this heavy handed attempt at a restoration of a 35mm slide is okay?

[sage gull]

looks good to me 🙂 cool pic, btw. I hope you’re enlarging it to near life-size. That would be kinda dope. cheers!

[kindred wraith]

not much but looks cool for my spotify playlist cover

[toxic dome]

what font did you use?

[kindred wraith]

race sport

[toxic dome]

Thanks

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @kindred wraith

[verbal laurel]

I was wondering what I should do for editing on this?

[tidal fern]

thoughts on how it looks compared to the last version?

i rly struggled to come up with a good idea for this brief other than this one

[wicked frigate]

imo for a youtube video the background should be something eye catching, maybe a simple pattern or a bright plain color. Text on the right isn't really easy to read. Try playing with the size of certain words/sentences to give/reduce emphasis

[tidal fern]

would you say the first or 2nd version's text is better?

[wicked frigate]

First one is better but the second has better intentions

[tidal fern]

what do you mean by intentions?

[wicked frigate]

Like its good that you changed the fonts/font sizings but it can be done better

[tidal fern]

hmm....ok

thanks

[undone merlin]

If nobody says anything, that means it's perfect, right?

[edgy osprey]

thats nice bro

[copper forge]

words to live by 👍

[drifting wagon]

looking for some feedback on the following, ive used outer glow for the text to make sure its readable but it kind of takes away from the design... any advice?

i guess i could get rid of the heart in the background as its mostly covered over? what do you think?

here is the same with an opacity layer over it and changed color of the outer glow. better?

[novel comet]

They're both ok @drifting wagon, maybe knock the purple/blue back where there's text, making it whiter/brighter to help with readability

[tidal fern]

how is this??

[dusk igloo]

the other one is definitely better - the outside background makes it seem like it properly relates to the video

having a simple purple background isn't that great for the scenario i think

[tidal fern]

lol i'm getting confused cuz the last person who gave feedback said the opposite

[tidal fern]

what about the text? is this version better or the other one?

[dusk igloo]

ohh yeah i just saw that 😅
well, having a simple background like this makes the whole thumbnail look fake, if you had a picture of giving money someone but completely painted over the person to have a silhouette: it makes it seem like you're going to see what you expect

[dusk igloo]

i think there should be more emphasis on "THE FIRST", maybe an outline around this part?
if you want to keep the darker background around the text, then i wouldn't have it as a square - you could apply a stroke or drop shadow and change it so it's a massive blob instead of a simple square

[tidal fern]

so i guess the background of the park was a better choice then

[dusk igloo]

yup

[tidal fern]

thx!

[dusk igloo]

yeah if you look at some examples there is context for the video

[tidal fern]

ah i see

[signal bluff]

im trying to find a better film grain to put on this but how is the composition?

[dusk igloo]

i think it's nice

i'm not sure what look you're going for but it's interesting

[signal bluff]

thanks! the goal is like a vapowaveish "infographic" of a philosopher, gonna make a vid of the design process and talk about the philosopher as the design is being made

[tidal fern]

made these thumbnails as well. the brief was a watercolor painting youtube channel that requires lots of color and shows watercolor's natural vibrant textures. which one do you think looks better and do you have suggestions?

[drifting wagon]

Thank you!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[royal wave]

what do you think about the inside part of the brochure?

[toxic dome]

Which one is better and how i can improve?

[dusk igloo]

i think the right one is better because having the title the way it is on the left it has too much space

[toxic dome]

Thank you for the feedback! I personally like the one on right as well.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @dusk igloo

[toxic dome]

The text is huge! Make it smaller, you'll have more space for you to add more elements to your design

[dusk igloo]

as the other person said, the text is big, it can be hard to read as it's ALL IN CAPITALS AND HAS A BORDER AROUND IT (i'm not mocking you)
i think regular regular might work nicely? i'm not sure as i can't think of any brochures of the top of my head

[midnight orbit]

I wanted to add a hand and Lab Switch in Ps, but ended up with this. Any thoughts?

[sinful root]

Check out my new logo design, symbolizing protection and safety in construction-related work. What do you you think about its design and color scheme? Need suggestions. Thanks

[royal wave]

Thanks to both of you for the advice will make the changes for sure

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @dusk igloo

[sick grove]

i wouldnt put a stroke around the words, it makes it hard to read in my opinion. Also maybe find new colors, i used to have trouble working on brochures when i first started with photoshop/gimp

early mockup for my friends streetwear clothing brand. Please give thoughts or opinions as I'm tryna help him find his brand direction

[sick grove]

#2, wasn't much of a fan of first font

[languid pollen]

Hey folks, I made this Streaming app UI Design. What do you think?

https://dribbble.com/shots/20739633-Streaming-App-UI-Design-Rish-Designs

[undone coral]

that looks nice

[tidal fern]

can someone plz give me feedback on this soon? TIA

[undone coral]

Easily the left one, blends with the picture way better

[tidal fern]

yea thats what i was thinking

[undone coral]

maybe an outline on the text?

[tidal fern]

oh wait you mean the blue one?

[undone coral]

I love putting outlines on text tho so idk

[undone coral]

yeah the blue

[tidal fern]

i thought you meant the pink one lol. my bad

[undone coral]

pink?

[tidal fern]

hmmm....i'll try it but i'm not sure if it will look good

[tidal fern]

well peach i guess

[undone coral]

oh

[midnight orbit]

Your 🍊 or🍑 is the one I like.

But the 🔵 is nice as well

[sick grove]

i like the orange one a lot better, blue is nice too and that guy even mentioned that it blends in but idk if you want the text part to blend in with the subject part for a thumbnail

[bright flame]

Badly need your feedback! It's not done yet, but I feel like I'm going to disappoint my classmates.

[sick grove]

looks dope imo

[novel comet]

Not bad. - If it were me, I'd have a bigger title, use one main character to focus on instead of two, remove the red BG from the header, and use a big red block, with white-out text in the body of the document instead.

[bright flame]

Thank you so much! It looks much better now

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[novel comet]

It's like talking to a brick wall. I've offered suggestions, visuals and fed back a lot, but it still comes back to .... this. - I think you're wasting your breath.

[bright flame]

Did I get it right? Sorry, English isn't my native language. (Also, anyone who see this please give me your feedback)

[pearl mulch]

wow i like it

[toxic dome]

@whole night

[whole night]

It's quite dark, don't you think?

[toxic dome]

yeah bt when you open it in browser it looks better

i should probably do a camera raw filter

[whole night]

Still, you might want to work on the exposure. I was able to bring out a lot in a few clicks

[toxic dome]

but one thing i dont understand is how to apply a camera raw filter on all layers at once

[toxic dome]

yeah but do you have anything that i could improve? (highlites, placements etc

[whole night]

You can flatten the layers to a new layer and apply the filters to it, or if you want to do it nondestructively you can either make all the layers a single smart object or instead of camera raw use adjustment layers

[toxic dome]

oh ok thanks

removed the glow abit

[whole night]

The scaling is slightly broken. People on the mountain look close but because of the scene and angle they feel far away. The house on the right also looks too tiny compared to the rest

You should also remove the stars from where the moon goes darker :p

[toxic dome]

yeah youre right i tried to fix it but i didnt seem to know how

[toxic dome]

oh right

i just think the higlights on the rocks are a bit weird

idk why

[whole night]

I'd try making the people smaller and the hut bigger and see if it works

[hot hazel]

Hello Friends I have make the Tent Menu Card please give me a feedback.

[barren compass]

Nice! But why didn't you align the last three elements? Maybe moving them all further to the right.

[toxic dome]

Working on some thumbnails for a self help YouTuber, would love feedback

[vital portal]

Made a greeting card for my class any input 🙂

[analog sorrel]

fax

naruto #1

it’s good

[cold rivet]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/162959725/BSB30-A-30th-Anniversary-Concept-Album

[steel radish]

Hello community👋
i hope you doing well 😍
I'm excited to share with you my latest social media design project, and as always i need your feedback ❤️
check the full project by following this link :
https://www.behance.net/gallery/164729693/Social-Media-Design-YOTEQI

[teal nimbus]

I think that it would be well worth you working on the layouts of this/these tent-menus. The one on the left is not balanced and needs to be reworked. Currently, you don't appear to have even margins and I think this would benefit from equal margins. The black board would benefit from being oblong in shape without the cutouts top and bottom. I am looking at this from left to right so I would suggest the logo should be on the left and the date they were established on the right The 5 food items at the top need to be rearranged to be within the boundaries of the black board. Lift the words at the bottom and the graphic of the pasta dish so they take up more of the empty black space above them. I am not sure that the tomato and the green food item have any relevance to the rest of the menu.

[versed gazelle]

raw (unedited)

GIVE FEEDBACK TO THE LINK ⚠️
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1rl9s3BloP1FXiyOW02l1O8YKOh-IuPaq/view?usp=share_link
edited

feedback pls

[wicked frigate]

Looks good

Email newsletter header mockup for a music brand (100x700px) Tried to add a little button on the left but can't find anything that looks good and fits!

[versed gazelle]

no look at the drive link

the drive link is the actual art

[lean osprey]

im doing an advert for my school course and i was wondering on ways to improve... constructive criticism wanted

[versed gazelle]

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qaDKO7kmssiUhOirrE3welHJ6oo-JJ59/view?usp=share_link

[barren compass]

HI! I think the conceptual theme is very clear. And the picture was also well processed. However looking at the work as a whole the elements do not seem in harmony with each other. For example the light sources for each image come from a different direction. There are very bright elements and others pastel. The background is very light but the male figure is very dark indeed. They are small things but which I believe overall contribute to not balancing the image well. But it is a personal opinion. I find the job very well done.

[versed gazelle]

im gonna fix this later

[thick bone]

This is one of my freelance project , Let me know if you like it or not. https://www.behance.net/gallery/164923815/Storyboard-for-online-video-campaign-PhonePe

[lean osprey]

this better?

[wicked frigate]

Yeah, the lighting on the person is still completley off though. Make that text on the bottom much bigger too

[barren compass]

Yes. I think it's more harmonious now too. Out of curiosity: Why did you decide to change the name of the perfume and move the caption down? Somehow I think that on the sand, buried by everything else, it is completely lost from view.

[wooden oak]

Yeah. I'd probably make that tagline larger. The "GD" so large there doesn't work well. Consider moving it elsewhere. I'd also probably look at having equal margins around the layout. The model lighting/colors still need some adjustment. He is too bright in that environment and needs to be harmonized a bit better. I'd maybe knock down the light on the clothes and highlight the face. That's my quick assessment.

[barren compass]

I believe this image of Dior is his reference.
It matches the initial pattern. And the decision to have the brand so big and prominent also corresponds.
@lean osprey correct me if I'm wrong.
Then, if you want, we can analyze the differences for which this image works best. Because as I said before, you worked well on all the elements, but they were not very harmonious with each other.

https://www.bandt.com.au/information/uploads/2022/08/how-much-dior-paid-johnny-depp-as-brand-ambassador-when-every-other-brand-left-him2-1024x576-1.jpg

[wicked frigate]

I'd say have the "Don't Let Yourself Be Limited" Even bigger than that

[lean osprey]

yes you are correct

[barren compass]

ok. So let's start by asking you something important: What is the message you want to convey through the image? Initially I thought you had the goal clearly in mind, then you seemed less convinced. The message is important, because then each element supports it, from the choice of colors, the choice of tones, and also the position of the various elements. For example, in both ads there is a naturalistic background, a male figure and a perfume. But, in the Dior commercial, you can see that every element of the scene then leads you to look at the perfume. While in your case the elements, especially the male figure, attract attention.

[lean osprey]

in the brief we were asked to have someone dressed up in a location where they wouldnt normally dress up looking at a product we have adapted... so the message im an trying to convey is to buy the product

we were also asked to create a logo and slogan/tagline

[barren compass]

Then you have to make the product stand out more than any other element.
Maybe even the background doesn't help; in fact, the background has a sharp horizontal line that crosses the perfume and makes the potential customer's gaze slide to the sides of the image. The colors of Dior's advertising are similar, but as you can see the perfume is almost entirely in the sky part, forming an important contrast with it. Furthermore, perfume is always the element with the greatest resolution in Dior advertising. If I can give you some advice, I would tell you to try other combinations. Move items. Try other layouts. Because in my opinion, trying to make it similar but not too much to Dior's advertising goes a little too far from the goal.

[lean osprey]

thank you

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @barren compass

[hollow fog]

Hello, everyone! Nice to meet you ☺️

[fathom idol]

Hello, I'm Gabriel, I'm Brazilian, and I made this album cover as a challenge, I'm new with photoshop and I don't know much about the tools but I tried to do the best I could!

[vapid narwhal]

Any advices?

[wicked frigate]

With these sorts of niche images, you need to describe what your trying to make otherwise nobody can give you useful feedback.

[vapid narwhal]

Well, I'm making an alternative history (What if "put event here" happened) of Tunisia for a video.

[knotty phoenix]

hello, im wondering if theres anything i can do to improve this before i post it. Any feedback?

[lime quarry]

Already pretty good. After done all work. Use camera raw to give a nicer look

[knotty phoenix]

alr

[novel comet]

I'd suggest that you avoid such a condensed font, and change the weight of one so the album name and band name look a bit more different.

[signal bluff]

obviously theres work to be done on how i apply these filters but im mainly looking for critique on the layout of the assets here. its not exactly meant to be an infographic but instead an eye catching thing that conveys info

[versed gazelle]

bored

[barren compass]

Surely, even for the choice of colors, it is something that attracts attention! Just the background of the text is a bit dark. I think if it were slightly clearer it would be perfect.

[signal bluff]

gotcha, thanks for your input!

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @barren compass

[wooden hull]

My little designs, what do you think? I'm not really amazing but I try 😦

[barren compass]

HI!
I think it's a little confusing.
There are many styles in your work, maybe too many styles, and not all of them combine well. This creates some confusion for the viewer.

[wooden hull]

Or I understand, it's that I don't have a specific style hahaha, after all, what I do is because I've only learned to do it

I really like to make banners

[barren compass]

I see!
I think it is not necessary to immediately have a unique style.
However I believe you can choose one for your work presentation. Otherwise try to find something that brings everything together in a harmonious way.
Good luck!

🍀

[wooden hull]

Can you explain a little way to know what my style is?

[barren compass]

Good morning! Style is something very personal. It's about knowing yourself as well as knowing what we like, the trait we love to use, the references. It is something that is "built" over time.
We have to do and do and do more.

[wraith kiln]

ik you sent this a while ago but DANG it looks good

[versed gazelle]

thanks

[arctic inlet]

still very new to photoshop any feedback is good feedback

[fresh stag]

hi ev1! I've redone a project to show I know how to use PS better now. Can y'all give it a look and let me know if it looks good on the 2023 picture? TIA

[wicked frigate]

How can I improve this poster mockup?

[wicked frigate]

That looks almost exactly the same

[pearl mulch]

add a little shadows to posters

maybe you can decide light source

and make some areas darker and lighter

[torpid sage]

Any feedback? This is practically my first photoshop project. Just stock photos and brought the guy into the scene

[winter mortar]

As you can see the light is coming from the shop and is the only light source

Add some highlights on the guy

And on the road

And make his back dark, no lightning coming from behind.

• Keep it up!

[hot hazel]

Hii friends I have make a Pinneapple Juice. Please give me a feedback.

[fresh stag]

I was trying to make the sunglasses look more real than the first pic. I had to use different glasses because i no longer liked the frames. what do you think the second pic needs to make it look more real?

[vivid gyro]

I think you've Improved on making the glasses look more natural, but it would be fun if you tried adding her in a different background.

[vivid gyro]

I like the logo! I think the colors fit nicely as well. However, the background should be a different color than what you have for both of your products so that it sticks out and makes it the center of attention.

[toxic dome]

For the bottle work, did you just slap it on and use warp? Follow this for a better result. https://youtube.com/shorts/WsW3wTkt2m0?feature=share

[vivid gyro]

looks like they used a clipping mask or something.

[torpid sage]

very new to photoshop and I cant find out what is wrong with this and why it looks so off

[toxic dome]

Well to start off the light from the taxi would not be so bright on that banana, and realistically the banana would not be that big. Also there’s some light coming from the left, that should be touching the banana. The exposure is also too low. And of course the shadows are off, I recommend duplicating the layer, turning down exposure of the duplicate, changing opacity until it’s just right and then use perspective warp on the shadow the right way.

[hot hazel]

what want you said that slap it on I didn't understand what did you mean

[plain grotto]

I think they meant saying in very obscure manner that your application to the mockup shall follow form. Thus if the bottle roundish as the bottle is the label would follow the bottle roundness. Label itself is plain straight once wrapped around the bottle will follow the form

[plain grotto]

You can try using those pre built editable mockups https://mockups-design.com/frosted-dropper-bottle-mockup/ once you apply design in 2d to the specific smart object that is meant for you to place your design and save it will update and show on the mockup so you do not have to worry about weather you matched the warp to the mockup

[hot hazel]

Thank you @plain grotto I will next time again create this design I will definitely use to this mockup.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @plain grotto

[fresh stag]

thanks. I'll see what I can find for a background.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @vivid gyro

[warm narwhal]

My first poster on photoshop, I'd like to get some constructive critics

[cold rivet]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/165523793/NFF-Rebrand-Revisited-(2021-23)

[toxic dome]

Well the background is very dark so the lighting on the guy doesn’t make much sense. The ring ropes I assume at the back, does not look like ring ropes. Also if there’s lighting coming from the top then it should be much brighter as I assume those are stadium lights.

[upbeat nova]

tbh I think it looks pretty dope as is, and the lines easily can be recognized as ring ropes, its not ultra realistic maybe but doesnt have to be ig?

[toxic dome]

Here, referenced your work. This is more of what I was talking about. With the Stadium lights being harsher.

Nothing fancy done here, just used basic functions. Easy 15 min poster.

[warm narwhal]

Wow amazing poster, I appreciate the feedback

[peak creek]

Wow it’s amazing

[toxic dome]

Thanks guys

[peak creek]

Please how did you put all this together ?

[toxic dome]

Made it better imo, by rescaling Michael

[toxic dome]

It’s 5 images off of Google. It’s that simple.

[peak creek]

😂I’m a beginner 🤦‍♀️... so I’m kinda clueless

[toxic dome]

opinions on these clothing designs?

[golden creek]

sup

?/10

YO my edit too powerful nvm

[crimson ore]

Fire

[reef pilot]

Those are crazy!🔥

Im kina new into photshop and wondered if anyone could give me feedback or adjustments that could be made into this picture i just made?

[haughty aspen]

I guess I need to explain what I did here cause, no critiques yet. So the piano was taken from adobe stock, the og picture is a white piano and i wanted to change the color, so I did. I then stylized the piano so it has this drawn quality to it. The original image has a book with music on it. So I erased that out and then made my smart layer thing so I can mock up the sheet music I made in illustrator. T

[severe temple]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/164720449/Laboshop

[toxic dome]

ayee much love bro

[toxic dome]

thx bro

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @crimson ore

[frail void]

For that skeleton in purple fire, I wish it had needle in his… hm…. Awesome designs!

[toxic dome]

please review it

[floral mauve]

i thunk the banana looks too blurry in my opinion

[upbeat nova]

borders, paddings and spacing are inconsistent, some elements are too close together I feel (buttons)

[cursive siren]

Any Ideas on how to improve on this?
it's supposed to be a badge icon

[bitter fog]

https://www.behance.net/gallery/165786951/XXVIII-20-(for-me)

[toxic dome]

opinions

[toxic dome]

Without any background information to the design, we can't really give specific feedback to the project. Telling us what the design is about and for would help a lot without us guessing what it is

[toxic dome]

@toxic dome its a scheduling app

[north ravine]

Hi everyone! 👋
I just finished with a new project about my personal experiments within 3D software on Behance. Check it out if you’re interested and let my know your thoughts about it in the comments. I hope you like it! 😊

https://www.behance.net/gallery/165531793/2023-1-personal-3D-explorations

[minor ridge]

I have a project for social media post, we will be going to advertise a learning group community in person, and here is the first post on FB story. Sorry for texting in my languages. Thanks

[lapis fable]

what am i lacking

[toxic dome]

very late but i’d buy

[toxic dome]

what are you trying to achieve? cause it looks sick

[lapis fable]

final version

[lapis fable]

i dont know wether it is good or not

i m just in few days into photoshop

[bitter fog]

good work

[bitter fog]

yuuup

[plain grotto]

Love it so so much!

[toxic dome]

Background lighting, considering how hard the light on the person is, the background should be well lit as well. The position of the light rays are also off. Overall it’s too dark, it’s neither day or night. If you were aiming for an evening then it would be much more orange.

A common mistake that new designers make is they hide their mistakes with dust,mist, smoke or just make it very dark. Don’t be afraid to let those mistakes show, as you progress you will be better at it.

[lapis fable]

in this version decreased exposer and made setting somewhat nightish

btw i m just in few days so yes will improve

[toxic dome]

Anyway to make the text in the right bottom corner fit the image?

[vivid gyro]

Are u talking about the number?

[toxic dome]

text and number

[vivid gyro]

Where did u want to put it.

[lapis fable]

back again if u can give feedback

[granite phoenix]

Created this infographic for a friends book... Input would be great as I haven't really done a lot of infographics...

[tame depot]

One key rule in infographics is to use only one type of "graphic". You can see the pictogram on Longevity is a line art and the cancer one is like a shape. Dont really know the english words for it right now but this is one thing to look at.

Second one probably will be the way how people read. From left to right and top to down. Another one will be the typography. I can see atleast 3-4 different Fonts. You may wanna reduce that to two

[tame depot]

as an example i take some stuff from my class as we did some Infographics. There is now less of the graphical approach as you have with the honeycomb layout. But a different way how this could work.

[granite phoenix]

TYVM for your response. It's actually all the same font, just bold/italics/regular and different sized. maybe if I inversed the graphic for longevity so it looks more like a shape?

[tame depot]

pretty much yeah. You could make the Longevity like the Heard Disease one and make like the hours marks and the clock handles white and the rest green shape

[granite phoenix]

regarding the font it's Bodoni as I wanted something clean and simple but not times new roman, any font suggestions to fix it looking like too much?

[tame depot]

Yeah. Depends on the book of course. Nowadays i see alot of font that use no serifs. Maybe go for them.

[toxic dome]

it looks good and the colouring looks good i was gonna say it looks like an album cover

[steel radish]

Hi Adobe Community 👋 ,

I'm excited to share my latest project, the CREAB branding, with you.

If possible, could you spare a moment to provide feedback on the project? 🙏 I would greatly appreciate your thoughts on the design choices I made and any areas where I could improve.

Thank you for your time and continued support ❤️
**Project Link : ** https://www.behance.net/gallery/165827531/Branding-Design-CREAB

[merry flicker]

how this goofy image lookin

[crimson walrus]

I'm aware of some of the errors, I'll correct them later. I just wanna know what effects I should add to give it a more sophisticated look.

[toxic dome]

opinions?

[reef pilot]

Hey is there anyone who might could help me with a quick photoshop problem? ive tried to use the brush to make this layer come back / be more deleted but it seems i cant use it?

[shrewd marsh]

Hi is anyone online?

Need a quick review

top bit is empty due to an organisation name occupying that space

[daring chasm]

fb?

[versed gazelle]

dont use opacity like that imo

id make it opaque and find a way to make the text stand out over the flowers

[versed gazelle]

make the text brighter and add black glow behind it

[toxic dome]

Lighting is off, the light is coming from the back, not from the Side. The ground, especially around the mountains looks over saturated. The logo isn’t visible enough.

The positioning of the shadow, it should fall infront of him

[flint compass]

Advices on this?

[vivid gyro]

You should pick either or. Have him show his back or have him show his front.

Because the way you have your photo presented, it's covering his name and number. So what's the point of that?

[flint compass]

true

I'll find him with a similar size but front ig

[vivid gyro]

I mean the only other solution would be to find a position or a way you can present both w having his name and number showing.

[flint compass]

Hmmm ok

[flint compass]

except for that r there any problems in the edit?

[lime shore]

Picture shooted on my own studio
Software used :
-Lr for basic Color correction and image correction
-Ps for initial background removal & new background/foreground realisation (solid color with some blured clouds brush ) & skin retouch, Dodge & Burn, hair correction)
-Ae for Glacial/electric Ring creation & general composition (VC Saber and Electrical stock footage from Triune Digital, some particles effects behind and on the front)

• Back to Ps for my secret touch color correction (my style)
• Back to lightroom for final touch (boost the red color of the body clothes & texturing)

[toxic dome]

Lighting should be much darker at the bottom and on the front side of the woman. It should be much brighter around the areas closest to the ring.

[lime shore]

@toxic dome thanks for the feedback ! i already make it on the arms but definitively need some improvements for realistic touch ! 🙂

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @winged zinc

[crude basin]

Please rate this sample advert I made 1-10. Thanks so much!

[prime python]

its 100% a 10/10

however

is the warpage on the board actually there in person or is that an issue with your editing?

[toxic dome]

10/10 it is easy one of the best i have seen

This was my first Youtube miniature, it has a little bit of time, score/10? (its in spanish btw)

[spiral gust]

Since UEFN is coming, I made this IDEA as the start of Billie Eilish "concert" in Fortnite Creative.

The whole Idea came when I was listening to GOLDWING song haha

[vivid gyro]

Is the club logo red??

[flint compass]

yes, the club theme is red

[vivid gyro]

I mean, it's a little hard to read since it's red on red. I only ask because his jersey with the logo is white.

[flint compass]

Hmmm Ok

[novel comet]

Being critical, the kerning is a bit too tight, e.g. the r + n almost look like they say 'm'. - and the white text on the white background is too hard to read.

does anyone include www. in a web address these days?

also.... you've written 'Learn how to ski' and then put a SNOWBOARD in the photo. - I mean the person must really be struggling to learn since they're not even using the right hardware.

(Sorry if it sounds like I'm being mean... - I just figured that constructive feedback is better than saying " yeah, it's great")

[novel comet]

Yeah, I thought the board looked a bit too flat on the ends. - they usually curve up more than that.

EDIT: I've found the original watermarked image. - It's just been warped by @crude basin , probably when they were trying to photoshop out the watermark (No judgement - I assume you're not trying to sell it on)

[cerulean trellis]

use less opacity on the brush and change its color mode!

[stuck schooner]

Hi guys this is one of my first designs please rate it 1-10. Thank you !

[crude basin]

Thanks for the feedback @novel comet @toxic dome @prime python

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @novel comet

[novel comet]

Design and composition is fine/good but isn't the font wrong?

[stuck schooner]

thanks, you mean the composition of the font is wrong, or the whole font doesn't fit / isn't suitable for the design ?

[shy raptor]

Would you like more critical feedback?

[stuck schooner]

yes of course

[shy raptor]

sure,

For a first design project, i think this is great. Looks like you did a lot of exploring and learning on this project.

if you wanted to keep working on this, or take something away from this to use for a future project, here's what I would say. This design is very busy/distracting as far as the colors go and the background. I think making the Pepsi can look like a "hero" is great here but it gets a bit washed out with all the bloom around it. and after that i get a bit lost because there is a lot going on, i start looking at the sun, then i explore the planet underneath, i notice the moon and the satelite with the reflections on its flaps that dont quite fit.

what i am trying to say there is that it distracts from the main point, if you were trying to make an AD for pepsi it gets drowned out by the other very interesting things in the shot.

there are too many colors used here. for future designs i reccomend sticking with less, for example the 3 pepsi colors of red white and blue. get rid of the orange/yellow of the sun

for the text, i think what james was saying by the font is wrong, is that its not a pepsi font. so its not wrong per-say but im sure pepsi has an official font you can find.

and its raining? perhaps it's a meteor shower, or were traveling lightspeed but it does not fit in with the rest of the composition, and it reads like rain to me.

[novel comet]

I meant the thick font weight hasn't been part of the Pepsi branding since about 2008.

[stuck schooner]

@shy raptor @novel comet Thanks guys

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @shy raptor

[shy raptor]

good work, keep it up

[lime shore]

Picture shooted on my own studio
Software used :
-Lr for basic Color correction and image correction
-Ps for initial background removal & new background/foreground realisation (solid color with some blured clouds brush ) & skin retouch, Dodge & Burn, hair correction)
-Ae for electric Ring creation & general composition (VC Saber and Electrical stock footage from Triune Digital, some particles effects behind and on the front adding smoke)

• Back to Ps for my secret touch color correction (my style)
• Back to lightroom for final touch (add texture on hair, adjust imaging correction)

[prime python]

Looks amazing!

[torpid crater]

Hey there, I made this for a school project. :)

[bleak river]

🔥

i love it bro

[torpid crater]

thanks :D

[toxic dome]

opinions?

[worthy heron]

looks great

did you draw it?

[languid pollen]

I made this Rolls Royce Website Design UI Design Concept. What do you think?

https://dribbble.com/shots/20998373-Rolls-Royce-Website-UI-Design-Concept-Rish-Designs

[upbeat nova]

looks nice but incomplete

[torpid crater]

Hey there, thanks :)
I didn't draw it. I photographed most of the elements in the pictures and put them together in photoshop.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @worthy heron

[toxic dome]

opinions?

[prime python]

Wow. I was gonna respond to the other one you posted which look really good once I had read all the messages and then I saw this. This is amazing. I would totally buy that. Keep up the great work!

[toxic dome]

bett much love bro

[toxic dome]

The idea is amazing, but it could be much better on the lighting. And it’s always better to have a visible light source, this makes your lighting pop. Elements like the sky, would be better not empty, it gives the viewer more elements to look at. Makes it more dynamic.

[worthy heron]

DAMN! I really wanna learn how you did that, the final product looks awesome

[novel comet]

Nice work - Needs a bit more shadow though 🙂

[toxic dome]

Critical Feedback

[vivid gyro]

Cool concept. But it would help if blended both of the images into the background.

Or 3

[toxic dome]

Just 3

[toxic dome]

Could you elaborate please

[novel comet]

(I'm not sure what @vivid gyro means either - looks good! 🙂 )

[upper veldt]

The assignment is supposed to be a postcard for the State of california

[gusty flame]

Cool, love it! You could improve the lights and shadows though. Look at the tentakel, which side is bright and which has to be darker? the boy could also be brighter around his silhouette 👤, not his front, just the edges….

[toxic dome]

Thank you for the feedback, glad you loved it. Yes you’re right, the lighting on the tentacles can be done much better. Edge lighting on the boy will be redone as well.

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @gusty flame

[toxic dome]

Thank you!

[toxic dome]

Can someone give me advice for this logo, what should I fix? I am new to making logos. The meaning of this logo is like a building or a house connected to the European Union whose task is to help the community

[tame depot]

try to make the EU stars equally way apart from the House and people

And the house... You described it as "a house connected to the EU whose task is to help the community" So basically like shelter type that helps financially or socially weak people

red cross for example

like this logo, i would make the people holding hand and place a roof on top like in the example here

[prime python]

yeah thats a good idea. it would further the homing idea for sure

[tame depot]

What i can imagine, that this could be linked to some refugee crisis like ukraine or middle east since it has to do with the EU and therefore helping them. I know from my country, some has to leave/share their homes to make place for refugees. This is what i read from this Logo/Description besides helping socially/financially weak community members

[toxic dome]

Yes that's true! Thanks a lot for the advice, it helped me a lot

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @tame depot

[upbeat nova]

probably wont translate good if only shown at small sizes

[manic echo]

Hey guys

Using photoshop right now to make this poster

if anyone is able to help lmk

would appreciate it

[novel comet]

Kinda helps if you post the image you want feedback on 🙂

[upbeat nova]

the different style comes to mind, by that I mean mainly the black outline/stroke should have the same width for all elements

also the colorpalette of the box on the left looks vastly different to the one on the right, the colors are more "vibrant" whereas all the colors on the right are more like pastel

I would probably get rid of the box at the left and make the ather graphic bigger

the text is too close to the edge

the block on the bottom is not centered

[novel comet]

Nice job, but since you're asking for constructive feedback:

The primary header is "Community Drive" which - for a me (In the uk) it doesn't really mean much. - I'd have a different header with more of a call to action. "DONATE to help those in need" etc.

Also, the two illustrations don't match. I'm not a fan of the capital-case lettering.

The title is too close to the edge of the poster.

Also, what's the purpose? I'd it like a bring and buy type event or just a day where you want people to donate? - seems a little weird since in the UK donations are requested 'any time' instead of picking a day?

[tidal fern]

hey, i'm working on a book cover for a romance novel thats set in the 1800s. i would like some feedback on the design. TIA

[upbeat nova]

personally I would probably make the title on the front bigger, the author name smaller, also increase the spacing of the author to the edge, maybe decrease size of the rotated title in the middle, not sure about the left side but front looks cool

author also is not centered I think

actually the title on the front seems also not be centered

[tidal fern]

ok ty for your feedback

[mighty dragon]

Gave +1 Creative Carma to @upbeat nova

[crude basin]

Need feedback on this logo and mockups I made for a local clothing company, thanks very much!

https://www.behance.net/gallery/166906041/CITYKIDS-REBRANDING

[novel comet]

I don't know a single logo in the world that uses the outer-glow effect... except this one 🙂

[crude basin]

Is that a good thing or a bad thing? 😂😂😂

[novel comet]

Lol. I'm not sure. I'd have said it was a BAD thing since it's awful for printers to reliably replicate. - however, I noticed in your document that this was a key 'feature' and not just a random extra thing you added

[crude basin]

Yeah that was I was thinking when making the logo, but we've found a local printing company that has done it before.

I mean... Does it look good to you?

[shy raptor]

Hmm, im not sure how glow will look on print. I'm assuming they will print something at some point. Brochures, t-shirts, pens, mugs. Who knows. I recommend just printing your logo and seeing how that glow appears. I also have never seen a logo with an outer glow. at first i thought this was for a neon company, sign/awning makers. But seeing that it's for clothing you dont need a outter glow. in one of the versions the "c" gets lost compleatly

taking away the glow the logo works just fine

[toxic dome]

https://www.instagram.com/p/CqTGJNQPMsK/?igshid=YmMyMTA2M2Y=

Here the link to my Ui/ux design profile of insta
Please check it out and let me know ur thoughts

designwithaarna

My UI design for NFT Marketplace

• Aarna

Instagram

[toxic dome]

which do yall think looks better

[calm stone]

In my photography class I'm trying to express the theme of boundaries and specifically the boundary between reality and our dreams, does anybody have any ideas on interesting ways I can express this using photoshop?
(ps. is this the correct channel to post a question like this?)