start of a song or intro idk yet? gimme feedback

[vapid wadi]

i start a little bit later into the song

cuz ion have anything for b4 that yet

only a little bit :)

[calm roost]

I feel like maybe u should end it when he says mom im in pain then start lyrics but besides that love the intro

[vast tangle]

agreed with Panda, after "mom im in pain," would be a great start

[versed granite]

great beat just dont make intros longer than 30 seconds bc at that point they just become interludes. Also try to maybe lower the guitar well they are talking and maybe put a filter on it tell the beat drops

also instead of filtering it you can always put a automation and have the guitar gradually get louder and build into the drop

[vapid wadi]

Yeah i know there’s supposed to be more lyrics right after the sirens but i dont have em yet so it would be a 16 bars intro ish

[versed granite]

I would do a little more to just signify that the intro is over

and the verse is starting