Request feedback on my piece for piano

[near minnow]

hey everyone i need good feedback for my job here so i can learn from it
the melody flow and overall phrasing?
what do you think about the dynamic and rhythm

Any ideas for improvements?

[oak wharf]

For the beginning of the piece, do a crescendo in the 1st bar, then decrescendo at the 2nd bar.

Then just make the right hand softer after that part

And phrase the left hand melody, make it stand out a little.

[near minnow]

alright

the problem in musescore when i choose dynamic its affect both clefs

[oak wharf]

I see

[near minnow]

but i will try something

idk how to work with the dynamics in musescore thats not work 🙁

[oak wharf]

Welp i dont work on musescore

[near minnow]

like that?

[near minnow]

https://musescore.com/user/78894775/scores/29293829

[oak wharf]

Yep

[near minnow]

what do you think about that:

[oak wharf]

Mhmm good

[foggy portal]

U could download some free musefonts to make the audio sound better