My production sounds very amatuer please give me advice on what I can improve

[small ruin]

here is some of my stuff

a few of these are really short because they are just main loops to my stuff

[karmic juniper]

From what I hear you might be needing more high note melodies

I can hear most of your tracks focus on the low and mid range which is good, but you could try to fill more of the space by adding percs and some grainer synths for "texture"

[hollow eagle]

Yeah I agree with @karmic juniper about the high notes. I would say that overall you have a great sound its just missing dynamics

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GLO_57IV6Zc

start this video at 10 minutes

Listen to the way the producer talks about the different moments, and the changes in energy

Overall I think your technical side is great now it just needs emotion and storytelling

[small ruin]

Im definitely gonna work on this stuff. Now that you guys pointed it out I see how empty the high ends are and how full the low ends are.

[small ruin]

Im gonna try and do this. Having those special moments that build up are a huge part that im just now realizing im missing

gotta work on my arrangement

[muted jewel]

need mixing hot hip hop pop lots of loads

stage name benniebillracks5

@small ruin