eh

[coarse halo]

Youve given her a haircut that removes the scruffy nature of her actual hair (possibly due to lack of sleep as staying up for a whole day on a limited time being chased and attacked just to find a book that she needs to please her father) then also given her a bag and a simple jacket and then given her bright wellies (not exactly a proffesional wear compared to her sleek black boots opposed to many other citizens wearing dirty trainers or muddy wellies). I dont understand how the original is bland when she clearly tells a story in her design alone but the redesign doesn't really tell me anything.

[jaunty needle]

What he said

[pseudo zealot]

i clearly stated that this redesign was made before her design AND story was even revealed??

[coarse halo]

at which state cos how much did you see to decide that her design enduced pure hatred cos its so bland

[pseudo zealot]

yeah i still find it bland

[coarse halo]

so youre telling me not to judge your design because you made it before you fully saw the character but you made your mind up about it being bland before you fully saw the character

[lament zephyr]

it's beautiful 🥹
don't listen to anyone here they're wrong

whoever called this thread "eh"

[coarse halo]

What was wrong with my critique on it

At the end of the day im not here just to annoy you its all friendly criticism thats all

[lament zephyr]

It was written without reading the first line of the og message text

[coarse halo]

Yeah but it was then explained how they made up their mind about the design before they fully saw it anyway so doesnt matter

[pseudo zealot]

i still think her og design is bland**
and i dont appreciate any criticism, especially negative, so yea😓

[pseudo zealot]

(and especially if i didnt ask for criticism)

[lament zephyr]

Can't people draw their own versions of the main character based on teasers or what? And also why can't she have her own opinion on the final design?

[coarse halo]

well it is negative criticism i guess i didnt just come in here saying "its trash lol" i gave my reasoning which is fine isnt it

[coarse halo]

Im not stopping them and i couldnt make them stop i dont control them do i?

She can also have her own opinions sure but i dont understand why they find it "bland". They can draw their own versions as much as they like i just wasnt a fan of a few things and thought id mentioning my reasons why instead of saying "hah no lol" or something ya know.

[clever kraken]

She looks beautiful, and I can suggest that if she were like that and had a different storyline, she would be a traveler who came to Raven Brooks to visit where the Golden Apple corporation originated. Judging by the badge, she's probably a fan of this corporation.

[coarse halo]

She does look more like a traveller here so that could work.

Dont know whod be a fan of the golden apple though, everyone likes what amazon sells but no one likes the company ya know.

[pseudo zealot]

omg did you think that this redesign was based on the old story when she got into raven brooks by accident??😳 because guess what! its was made BEFORE the pre-alpha plot
nah it cant be!!!!!!!

[coarse halo]

Well go on then would you explain your opinions on the new design and story of her and maybe what youd change then

[pseudo zealot]

why should i explain my opinion??
god forbid a person that doesnt like ONE characters design just because they find it bland😨

[coarse halo]

god forbid a person just want to engage with an artist and ask questions on their thoughts god i am such a horrible person for that.
But anyway im not engaging any further so have fun with that.

[jaunty needle]

Hoggotron did just share his opinion gang.
He didn't even call your redesign stupid or anything.

I don't even dislike it tbh

[jaunty needle]

I was just kinda screwing around when i said this.

It looks cool.

But you can't not expect someone to give some criticism when you post something on the internet imo

[pseudo zealot]

never needed your engagement then😓

im sorry if i sound rude, but you dont seem to understand
i stated clearly that the design was made BEFORE the pre-alpha plot and even after her design got revealed i still found it bland and uninteresting (like, look at others designs, she's literally a gray mouse compared to them) + nikita never said that you cant critique or dislike his designs
i dont take criticism really well, never did and probably never will because it makes me nervous and insecure as hell because im a overreacting drama queen😓
i hope i answered to all your questions

[pseudo zealot]

ty, ig

[coarse halo]

Yeah its been cool this whole time i just thought id give my thoughts and maybe in return you would explain yours then we would be on the same page. That's literally all i was doing.

Of course you can critique his art as if i disagreed we would not be having this conversation right now.

[obtuse pollen]

HOLY SHMOLEYYY!!!! I LOVE THIS DESIGN AND YOUR ARTSTYLE??!!!! SHAKES YOU VIOLENTLY!!!!!!

Sighs i keep on staring at this i love itt..

[pseudo zealot]

AWW THANK YOUU🥹
glad to hear that you liked it🙏🙏🙏