Writers here, 5 page storyboard of my comic, thoughts?

[errant merlin]

@crisp umbra

[crisp umbra]

excellent

very well done

[errant merlin]

NICE
thanks man

[errant merlin]

Did you catch the metaphor at the end?

It’s subtle

[crisp umbra]

no

[errant merlin]

Look at her hands and the dialogue at the end

[crisp umbra]

i saw that

i didnt know if it was the same person

[errant merlin]

Even if she washes that blood away, her hands are naturally red she will never be clean, whatever she does, the red remains

So she can never metaphorically get rid of that blood or truly come clean

[crisp umbra]

mmmm

yes

excellent

[runic sequoia]

good!

[errant merlin]

Ty

[silent wing]

Hmmm merhinks the first is better in terms of cohesivness and just the right amount of detail and colour distribution

The second is also good, however it feels like it lacks in some kind of contrast

[errant merlin]

First or second

[silent wing]

First

[errant merlin]

Then i am worse then ai

[silent wing]

Oh brother

Can we not use ai to compare our art and not disclose it for the love of god

[errant merlin]

It’s worse then ai still

[silent wing]

I'd like to remark that I denoted the areas that both art is good at, the only thing that was lacking in yours is the contrast in the design and that is easily fixable

Once again - comparing your work to the rip off amalgamation of AI is just very unfair to yourself. Why? Just because you essentially compare yourself to a thief that picks the best of all in the source material and smashes it together. You are human on the other hand and you actively learn, not steal

[errant merlin]

It’s worse, it has no value if it’s beneath ai

[silent wing]

I did not say it's worse, I am repeating, I stated my opinion clearly above.

Human art by default values more than AI

[errant merlin]

No, it’s not
Because it’s worse and the first was better, no matter what, ai is superior here

My shit has no meaning

[silent wing]

Sigh

I am no therapist and I have no right to advocate and argue with you if you have issues in terms of percieving your art value - think what you think and so be it

I stated my truth and opinion and I firmly stand by it. Ai is shit by default and it having a cohesive colour palette is not making anything superior to you.

Stop comparing and try to learn your art, not find reasons to hate it, otherwise you won't progress and feel the pleasure of art. What's the point of doing art if you are hateful when doing it?

[errant merlin]

I think ill start using it, any idea, it can do it better then I do no matter what it’s better then me

[errant merlin]

It does, because ultimately you picked the first