#anything to add or get rid of?

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half narwhal
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(This is my second time putting this image here but first was a heavy wip)

I'm petty happy with it but I need some advice from the pros 😓 colors? Depth? Pls lmk what I can improve!!

Any advice is appreciated 3_

tardy plank
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I think you're doing great! I'm not a pro but I suppose it would look more fun if you add more colours to the bubbles 😄

soft talon
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her hair is too similar a value with the background imo, maybe darkening the sky around her at least a little bit so that she stands out more ^^ also the sunlight is to the side of her so the shadow should be harsher and not as spread out!!

rare crypt
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The line between the arm and torso is a no no

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The shoulder should be rounder that's all

normal grove
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similar to what someone else said, the upper shoulder shouldnt have a line between itself and the rest of the body. I dont have any fancy anatomy references on hand for this, but just keep in mind that they are physically connected