#Animation critique
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The cartoony movements of the clock blaring has rlly fun personality in it haha!
You should give that same energy to the character, allowing them to actually move to match that cartoony energy, even if theyre feeling "too sleepy to get up" HAHA
like for example, jolting in place from being startled awake by the noise like 😴 --> 😧 ⁉️
Looks really cool! The background and the oc, however the clock is shaking a bit too much and too fast, that way it becomes a bit confuzing to see, maybe check out the animation timeline and slow it down while adding a few inbetween scenes
The hammer also looks epic
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