Criticism

[gaunt stream]

Hello, guys! I would really like to receive constructive criticism on my art. I know this is complete bullshit. However, I don't understand how to fix it.

[shell jackal]

The lighting on the second one is really well done. The only thing I can really critique on that is if you gave it a snout instead. The same for the first one

[gaunt stream]

Oh, thank you! But that's how it's supposed to be; his face is round from this angle.

[shell jackal]

Then maybe darker shading to show it

[gaunt stream]

Thank you! ☺️