#I need quick crit

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neon wren
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(sorry if my anatomy is ass, I draw worse on paper)

deep moss
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Frost soldier

neon wren
deep moss
neon wren
deep moss
neon wren
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Just a bit

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Ty

deep moss
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Yw ^^

autumn warren
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i did see it as a frosty the first glance

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the red feels a bit too much imo, its fighting the contrast for the face and her overall design

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id say make the red only for the chest cross, make the waist white, and maybe u can adjust all of the red necessary

neon wren
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You came just at the right moment

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Literally perfect timing

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How is it now?

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@autumn warren

autumn warren
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ooh interesting

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great job on the decorations layout

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now in the theme of "frost", im quite doubting if u should use warm (red ish) color for the face

neon wren
autumn warren
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aye

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did a great job tho, v cute design

neon wren
autumn warren
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her hair and acc feels wild, as in wild frost forest

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with the reptile arms as well, might be one with the nature

neon wren
autumn warren
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quite a compelling design id say

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aye

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but yea, id say the detached part is only the waist being silver and the face being warm rn

neon wren
autumn warren
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use the 60 30 10 rule

neon wren
autumn warren
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i feel like its quite the opposite

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she feels wild, with the accessories being sharps and curly

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and the hair direction is all over the place, as if she woke up after a slumber

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the sense im getting from this character is that shes from a pack of wolves, one with nature, friendly with the winter

neon wren
autumn warren
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i think its the blue feathers on the skirt

neon wren
autumn warren
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also the hair as well

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curly can be angelic, yes, but in a way it needs to be neat and tidy

neon wren
autumn warren
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mhmm