earnest pike
Does she look unhinged? Like she's very obsessive about a character (she is looking at him) and is downright crazy, I want it to give off a look of "Finally found you, you're mine" to her, does she look like so? Idk if I'm making any sense but yeah, that's it if, also if that helps in the coloring she's going to have blood on her face (second pic is original if it helps)
dreamy island
KROMER!!!
Yeah i think its really good, the line art is very clean. I would personally just make her smile even wider, and when you color, i would add in some very dynamic / sharp shadows
earnest pike
Yeah i think its really good, the line art is very clean. I would personally jus...
And thanks, I was planning on adding a very intense shadow over her eyes, so just the white part can be visible but maybe I'll make it a alternative version cuz Im really liking how the lineart's turning out