Any help?

[honest sequoia]

I haven't finished, but I feel like something is off idk, someone has a critique?

[brittle sedge]

Maybe add an illusion that there’s more water beyond the water if that makes any sense. It feels pretty flat. Also, the color of the sky, I feel like it should be a bit brighter, especially if they’re outside at the beach; so maybe add gradient. Same with a couple darker shadows on the character if there’s harsh light. Add a couple clouds, but I’m assuming you were already since it’s a wip. I recommend looking up beach art and photography, group photos especially, it gives you a variety of options to use as reference^^ I attached a pic to show what I meant by the illusion of water. Not a pro, but I hope this helped

[honest sequoia]

Thanks! I'll see what I can do

[minor salmon]

I am by no means a good drawer but I feel like adding stuff in the background would help simple stuff like sandcastle on the sand im pretty sure this is chainsaw man but I haven't seen it so idk if thats a exact scene that you decided to draw.

[silk zephyr]

So pretty, but maybe you should blend the guy's back a bit with airbrush, bec it look slightly crusty compared to the other guy