critiques before i start line art? (kny mugen train spoilers)

[gleaming sandal]

wait hiw do i put a spoiler on it

critiques before i start line art? (kny mugen train spoilers)

okk thats good enough

i feel her body is too small but i tried to make it bigger and it looked weird

[errant jacinth]

u dont need to make the body bigger in sense just widen it from below the collar that should help u just need to remember that the beggining of the chest area will always be wider then the face if that helps

[gleaming sandal]

tyy!

[gleaming sandal]

adjusted it so does it look any better?

[errant jacinth]

yeah definitely

[gleaming sandal]

yippee thank you

[prime fractal]

Ah yes much better

[gleaming sandal]

i didn't feel like doing the line art yet so any critiques on the colors?

[prime fractal]

The shadows are a bit too desaturated

Try making them a bit more saturated

Rn it just kind of looks like her skin is wax or smth

[gleaming sandal]

okeyy ty

[prime fractal]

Ur welcome