Dont know how to make it better :( Im very unhappy with it.

[velvet prawn]

I already changed alot of back and mirror. It needs to be good im planning to put it in a contest.

[alpine sphinx]

Hmm maybe try to add some darker filters or effects over it? You can also add a blur and/or darken the shadows!

[pastel dawn]

darker shadows and add more shadows in the tile

[alpine sphinx]

@velvet prawn

[timber umbra]

I think the reflection in the mirror is a bit unaccurate, like in the mirror it looks as if the guy was standing in the center normally but just looking down, while irl he's not the guy is not in the center but a bit more right, and he's face/head is facing the sink. And in the mirror his elbows also look too straight, idk if u get what I mean

I really love your drawing and the lighting tho, it's super cool

[velvet prawn]

Its not the same person , the person in the mirror is a ghost talking to him 🙂

[velvet prawn]

thanks!

[velvet prawn]

Thanks!

[alpine sphinx]

Looks very cool though! I really love the background of the walls and sink and how you shaded the back 🫶

[velvet prawn]

Thank you my guy ^^

[velvet prawn]

Do you think its better now? Anything else to change/add?

[alpine sphinx]

Huge improvement, this looks awesome! If I were to be super nitpicky, I would say darken the highlight on the hand (so it’s not brighter than the highlights on the back. This is just so the eye is guided better to the mirror). Coloring the lineart in the highlight areas (I’m thinking mainly in the left shoulder) might also look good. I would go for a burnt or bright orange, see what you enjoy more ofc!

[velvet prawn]

Thanks!

[alpine sphinx]

Loving the shadows and gradient map(?) you put over it!

[velvet prawn]

Honestly i was strugglinggg. Been a while since i did digital and had forgotten how to use ibispaint. Guess i got lucky? Im really starting to like it 🙂

I was thinking of adding water droplets to the mirror though maybe id would get too busy?

@alpine sphinx also i find the chip on the the edge of the mirror a bit distracting. Do you think i schould remove it?

[alpine sphinx]

Yooo this was on IBIS?? This is so sick! I thought it was procreate

A part of art is to mess around to see what you like and what you can do. I would give it a try and see if it’s smth you’re satisfied with visually. Just to throw out an idea, maybe you can add a fog effect to the mirror? If you wanted to give it more detail at least 🤔

[alpine sphinx]

Personally I enjoyed the chip, but it’s totally up to you!