A couple questions for this peice

[timber plume]

-are there any glaring mistakes?
-are the skeletal parts relatively accurate? (Ribcage, skull)
-is the head too big?
(I think ive been staring at it too long)

[languid vessel]

A bit of

[ruby thistle]

Okay lets start with clothes, I want to give you a tip, when you draw clothes like this, start with simple silhouette and less of details to mark how are the clothing work and only after you start making details following your marks

And one very important thing

THE SILHOUETTE MUST BE SIMPLE

and understandable

Trace your line and you will see it

and yeah, head is a little to big, a ribcage is the size of 1.5 of a head

and the spine goes more like this

and you can make the skull better use more references

Well, I think that's all, I like the work and the idea, I hope you will make it better

Gooodluck

[timber plume]

Alr, thank you for this!! I’ll add it all and check again! <3

[timber plume]

Alr, done! How is this?

[ruby thistle]

Much better

But tracing the line isn't the better way to training and understanding of how to draw, but it's your choice

Anyway, good for you, goodluck with your next art