Would love some Crit on this :D

[manic sun]

Hi guys this is a current sketch im working on for a while now and i need some other eyes to see it, to know if theres stuff or proportions that should be fixed/changed, ty !! love yall

[feral brook]

her right (your left) shoulder is a bit close considering her head size and how far her left your right shoulder is sitting

i don't see issues with face but if you feel it is off, flipping the canvas may help you pinpoint why