#SOMETHING FEELS OFF

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runic reef
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Help. I cant tell what it is, it just looks wrong.

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rich stratus
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For what can be interpreted that looks ‘wrong’ on this piece could be the line thickness and placement. Although it’s still a wonderful piece all in all 😊! This is just my assumption/advice and if it doesn’t suit what you’re trying to do with the piece, please ignore me lol.

The way I mean line thickness is on the top upper jaw bone/cheek next to the eyes. It’s thicker to a large extent that would be more better suited on the bottom jaw, neck part as that’s where shadow is. The thickness should be thin in lighter/areas where light hits or where there isn’t shadow in the piece. ( Also just a little bit of a light grey on the nose of Freddy would help better define the noses lines from the eyes).

The way I mean placement is by the bow tie being slightly tilted to the left and lowered, the eyes being slightly more left on the face. A slight adjustment to the right.

☺️sorry that this is long but I felt I should be detailed in my response rather than be simple and sound rude like “it’s line thickness around the cheek bone area.” The piece is wonderful even still! Have a great day or night! :3

runic reef
rich stratus
runic reef
rich stratus
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Np

runic reef
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Sorry the bother you if your busy but I wanna ask is it turning out good? (I gonna color in the bright parts, then do the background then the shadows.

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rich stratus
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Turning out great

runic reef
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thank youuu

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oh I tried to like

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do the teeth to be bloody but I decided not to

rich stratus
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I see, well even still it looks wonderful

runic reef
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I still dont know what to do the background tho

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I could do the original office

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or like ontop of a cityline or smth

rich stratus
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Are you aiming for something simple? Or do you want a place as the background?

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You could also do like the stage in fnaf

runic reef
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I am going for a you know

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smth dark

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but still lights flashing

rich stratus
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Okay, for something dark you can probably look at different scenes in the fnaf games too for inspo

runic reef
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I really love the fnaf 1 office

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but like there is way too many things

rich stratus
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I suggest possibly like a teal or dark blue type of shading for the background to differentiate from Freddy’s brown

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runic reef
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let me drive a mockup after I am done with the coloring

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hold on

rich stratus
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K

runic reef
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oh btw one cool little detail about it

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is in the original model for freddy

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there is a handprint

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on his head

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dunno if you saw that in my drawing

rich stratus
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I was kinda wondering what that was! A cool detail 😄

runic reef
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quick question

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would you like it better

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if I made the highlighto n his nose blue instead of gray

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I heard that it looks more lively when you do it like that

rich stratus
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I think it could help

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A colored highlight is sometimes better than a not colored one

runic reef
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Eh I am gonna do the highlights after finishing the background

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and know the final product (well like 85% done)

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I am gonna take a break tho

rich stratus
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Nice 👍

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Taking a break is always a good thing

runic reef
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was making the background layered below the drawing but holy shit this looks horrifying

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rich stratus
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XD

runic reef
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ngl

rich stratus
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That’s why I do background after I do coloring and all that

runic reef
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I am just gonna release it

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without a background

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way too much work

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too many layers

rich stratus
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You can still do that if you want it’s your choice 🙂

runic reef
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anyways

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thanks for helping me sir fancy

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you a great guy